Rewrite the trip to Shanxi Village into a short story

Rewrite 1

A few days ago, my good friend came to my house as a guest. During the conversation, this friend revealed to me that he wanted to invite me to visit his hometown, and introduced me to the beautiful scenery of his hometown in an emotional way. I happily agreed to his request.

I sent a message to my friend in advance that I would visit him in the near future. On this day, I rode my beloved little donkey on the road, enjoying the scenery while driving. After walking for a long time, I still haven’t seen any sign of Shanxi Village. The little donkey was panting from exhaustion. I felt distressed and came down to lead it forward. At this time, it was already getting late, and we could see that there were still green mountains and steep mountains ahead, with a small stream surrounding the mountains. I suddenly became confused and thought: "How come there are beautiful villages here? Is it possible that my friends are just bragging about it?" I couldn't understand it. Finally, we decided to walk one more mile and return the same way if we still couldn’t see the beautiful Shanxi Village.

As I walked, my eyes lit up. A small mountain village with beautiful scenery appeared in front of me in a place between the mountains and ridges, where the willows were dark green and the flowers were bright. I couldn't wait to move forward. When I was approaching the entrance of Shanxi Village, I saw a person waving to me under the big tree at the entrance of the village. Ah! That's my good friend greeting me. When we arrived at his house, delicacies such as wild game, chicken, duck, and fish were prepared on the table. The taste is particularly delicious. My friend picked up the wine in the glass and said to me: "You came at the right time. It is the time of harvest. The cotton and sorghum I planted are of high quality and the harvest is very good. Although the sorghum wine I brew looks a little turbid, it is very good." Delicious. I also asked my family to put a thick quilt on you and prepare some homemade wine. You must take it with you when you leave." I also picked up the wine glass and said, "Thank you so much! The mountains and rivers are beautiful, rich and beautiful. It seems that my trip is really worth it!" My friend said enthusiastically: "Then you can stay here for a few more days and I will take you for a walk to see the beautiful scenery of our mountain village!" /p>

The next morning, my friend took me to see the scenery. The beautiful scenery of the mountain village is beyond words. I couldn't help but get inspired by poetry, so I wrote the poem "Visiting Shanxi Village" in my essay. Visiting Shanxi Village

Moxiao Farm’s wax wine is thick with wine.

In good years, there are enough chickens and dolphins for visitors.

There is no way out despite the mountains and rivers.

There is another village with hidden flowers and bright flowers.

Xiao Gu followed Chunshe near,

The simple and ancient style of clothing remains.

From now on, if I am allowed to take advantage of the moon, I will knock on the door all the time and night with my stick.

Rewrite 2.

Don’t laugh at the farmers who make turbid wine in the twelfth lunar month. In the year of good harvest, there will be plenty of delicacies to entertain guests. When the mountains and rivers kept repeating themselves, and I was doubting that there was no way out, I suddenly saw the willows green, the flowers bright, and another village appeared in front of me! You played the flute, I beat the drum, we formed a team to celebrate, the Chunshe Festival is approaching , commoner clothes and plain hats, the simple ancient style is still preserved. From today on, if I can take advantage of the moonlight for a leisurely stroll, I, a white-haired old man, will also enjoy the night, leaning on a cane and knocking on the firewood door of my farm friends.

Reference materials

How to rewrite a visit to Shanxi Village into a short story? .First Library Network [Citation time 2017-12-24]