The philosopher Wittgenstein said, "I walk on the ground, not dance in the clouds."

I walk close to the ground instead of dancing in the clouds. I read the following words and write as required.

The philosopher Wittgenstein said, "I walk on the ground, not dance in the clouds." This famous saying expresses the image and has profound implications, which will lead to different associations or feelings.

Combine this famous saying, choose your own angle, your own ideas, your own topic and your own style (except poetry), and write an article of not less than 800 words. (composition for the final exam of the second semester of senior three in 2007 in Haidian District, Beijing)

Examination guidance

This is a famous epigram composition. The philosopher Wittgenstein famously said, "I walk on the ground, but I don't dance in the clouds", in which "ground" and "cloud", "walking" and "dancing" and "sticking" and "not being" are in sharp contrast and have a clear attitude.

The poetry of famous sentences is conducive to mobilizing the emotions of candidates, and the philosophy contained in them promotes the rational thinking of candidates. Metaphorical expression will lead to different understandings, so it is reasonable that the concept of this problem presents a diversified trend.

Grasping the words "paste", "land" and "walk", we can talk about doing things and learning in a down-to-earth way, or persevere and accumulate over time to realize our dreams.

Grasping the word "cloud" and exploring its characteristics can be compared with things with similarities, such as the "cloud" in distant Gao Zhuo, and can be compared with lofty pursuits and ideals; "Cloud" is colorful and can be compared with beautiful feelings and spirits. "Cloud" is ever-changing and can be compared with changeable attitude; "Cloud" is illusory, which can be compared to unstable foundation and so on.

The title requires "self-determination", which means that you can agree with the philosopher Wittgenstein's point of view, or you can dialectically analyze and refute this point of view to the extreme. The establishment of this view depends on the understanding of the metaphorical meaning of philosopher's famous sayings. For example, understanding "dancing in the clouds" as free stretching can praise and advocate this state of life; Understanding "dancing in the clouds" as galloping can explain the attitude of life, or the unrestrained spiritual realm. On the other hand, if we understand "dancing in the clouds" as boasting, we can attack vague, mysterious and useless remarks; Understanding "dancing in the clouds" as getting carried away can criticize the bad phenomenon of arrogance; If we understand "dancing in the clouds" as dreaming of hallucinations, we can analyze the idea of unrealistically imagining the results that attract thousands of people's attention.

Good intentions: down-to-earth can succeed; Dancing in the clouds, failure is also beautiful; It is an excuse for mediocrity to regard dancing in the clouds as heresy; Without the ambition to dance in the clouds, there is no courage to leave the ground; Down-to-earth, heart in the clouds; Walking is not as good as dancing; Dancing in the clouds, gorgeous life. I. Original title

The sage Wittgenstein once said, "I stick to the ground and don't dance in the clouds." This famous saying has a poetic image and profound meaning, which will make readers have many associations or feelings.

Please combine this famous saying, choose an angle, conceive your own ideas, choose your own topic, choose your own style and write an article of not less than 800 words.

Second, the proposition intention

In 2007, the composition of Sichuan college entrance examination has been settled. For the first-line Chinese teachers and students who are about to take the exam, there are many places worthy of reflection, many proposition directions worth grasping and many review strategies worth implementing.

Through marking, I learned that the examinee's composition is not as satisfactory as people think. Many people are old-fashioned, old-fashioned, with long examples, plain language and confused thinking. What's more, they haven't even passed the exam, and there are many digressions. In fact, this year's Sichuan composition, from the perspective of word composition, belongs to "one step in place, one life"? United Airlines? Group, on the surface, the positions of "step" and "fate" can be replaced with each other, but they can't. However, some candidates made mistakes in this respect. They simply deal with the topic and mistakenly think that "one step+one life" = "one life+one step". When writing, I finished writing the two parts of "destiny" and "step", without considering the internal relationship between them at all. As everyone knows, this seemingly juxtaposed phrase also implies the relationship between conditions and results. "One step" is the condition, and "life" is the result. Choosing how to take the first step in life will directly determine your different "life".

Many candidates seem to be younger in concept, and generally say, "People only have to step out of the right place?" One step, it is possible to harvest a brilliant life "or" one careless move, the whole game will be lost ",and few candidates dare to hold the opposite view. Candidates can ask: If you take the right first step, will you be able to reap a brilliant life? The first step in life is wrong, is it doomed to rain all your life? The answer is definitely no, life is full of variables, and the compensation after tomorrow can not be ignored. However, candidates who dare to reflect boldly and beat around the bush are rare.

In 2007, Sichuan composition mainly examined the ability of candidates in two aspects. First, the ability to look at things dialectically; Second, the ability to correct values and outlook on life.

Candidates can only write a "well-founded" personalized composition if they have unique feelings and thoughts about life and real feelings about life. This year's Sichuan college entrance examination composition is vividly reflected in these two aspects. "One step" and "one life" are dialectical relations. Only when Dong understands the core of the theme and quietly explains the relationship between them in his writing can such an article be regarded as a breakthrough in development level and "hard" in thought.

Third, the idea of inspiration

This composition belongs to topic-based composition. What is the main set of questions? In the sentence "I walk on the ground and don't dance in the clouds", who asks the question? After defining this sentence as a famous saying, then candidates should work hard on the connotation of this sentence, ponder it carefully and experience it with heart. Because, some materials, especially fables and famous sayings, often have implicit meaning and strong metaphor or symbolism. If you talk about things, you can only scratch the surface and get a superficial understanding. If we want to understand its deep meaning, we must be good at analogy, grasp the similarities between "thing" and "meaning" and dig deep into its connotation.

"I stick to the ground" can be understood as being calm and pragmatic about my career and life, step by step. "Dancing in the clouds" can be understood as impetuous and reckless to career and life, seemingly illusory and unsupported. Two clauses are connected? Together, we can see the philosopher's point of view: agree with the calm and pragmatic pursuit of life and reject the impetuous and rash choice of life. However, this article can also reverse the thinking, see the analysis in the following section.

Four. Examples of ideas

In terms of ideas, the following four ideas are worth recommending: First, a calm and pragmatic life is the most beautiful. Second, the illusory "dance" is the most terrible. Third, how can we succeed in life without keeping our feet on the ground? Fourth, the "virtual" service is doomed to be empty.

So, can this composition be reversed? Some students are interested in the philosopher Wei? To demonstrate genstein's point of view? Think about innovation in the opposite direction, and keep asking along this line of thinking: Why can we only walk on the ground and not jump in the clouds? Then draw up topics such as "walking on the ground, dancing in the clouds" and "dancing in the clouds" The author believes that such an idea is also possible. These ideas are more innovative than positive ideas and can better reflect the thinking quality of candidates. When they conceived, they had jumped out of the bondage of matter, but stood at a higher level and looked down on matter, and then they came up with this good idea.

But the following ideas are definitely irrelevant and belong to the category of digression. First, the given material is understood as the choice of life, then the topic is defined as "choice" and the topic of "choice of mind" is drawn up. Secondly, understand the given material as an adult's "journey", first walk on the ground and then jump in the air, and draw up the topic of "journey" Thirdly, define "down-to-earth" as an ordinary attitude towards life, define "dancing in the clouds" as the pursuit of great goals in life, and draw up the title of "ordinary and great"

Fifth, the masterpiece shows dancing clouds.

The philosopher Wittgenstein said, "I walk on the ground, not dance in the clouds." We might as well understand this as a choice of attitude towards life. Philosophers like to be practical, and he chooses to walk. I think gorgeous gestures can make life perfect-even if they stay in the clouds.

I thought of a forgotten one, the hero king in ancient Greek mythology. Noble status doomed him to look down on everything, including himself. He fought for his country. He is bloodthirsty, for the sake of light. The only way to end the war is war. Just an ordinary sword, but he took it to the extreme. As the king of kings, he was tired all his life. Never rested until I died. Frowning is a deep sigh, and tilting your head is loneliness. You can't throw away what you are born with. Until the dance stopped in mid-air, slightly raised lips froze in the corners of the mouth, and the background was a long-lost cure.

There is not a trace in the sky, but the birds have flown. The Forgotten Life is not a classic, but it is dazzling.

Equally shocking is the ancient nation-Bohemia. This is a group of dancing souls, wandering souls and pure souls. They are hot-blooded, passionate and "dishonest". They migrated with the wind, lived by the water and settled anywhere in the world. You can say they have no country-they are cosmopolitan. Their dancing bodies and moving steps have become a whirlwind sweeping the world. Despite being ignored, ridiculed and rejected, this is all in the past. Now the thoughts of all mankind have found refuge in Bohemia for the time being. That stems from the most primitive human desire-escape! Escape from the prison you drew for yourself and go dancing outside. Waving their enthusiasm at will. Winding the dance of freedom from this mountain to that river. Snowflakes are falling, and the world is pure white.

"The Glory of Bohemia" takes vagrancy as the carrier, and the whole process is thrilling. Its existence is an eternal miracle of life.

In one's life, one can choose to be down-to-earth and take every step in a down-to-earth manner. Let every footprint leave your feelings of hard work, joy, struggle or anger, and your life will not be in vain. But it could be another way. Wild eyebrows, drawn swords and dissolute passions, put life in the clouds and use strength and skills to reverse every step. The passion of fire and water can also present another style and style of life.

As long as you can dance-what's wrong with standing in the clouds?

Comments: This article dares to hold the opposite view, and makes it clear at the beginning of the article: gorgeous posture can also make life perfect-even if you stay in the clouds, you can quickly cut into the theme. Then, the materials selected in the example are novel, which gives readers a bright feeling and shows the author's broad reading horizon. Finally, at the end of the article, the author asks again, directly cuts into the theme, echoes before and after, and integrates. Seek practicality, avoid impetuousness.

The philosopher Wittgenstein said, "I walk on the ground, not dance in the clouds." Walking on the ground is often calm and peaceful, which is a practical wind; Dancing in the clouds often leads to bruises and impetuousness on the face. From the famous sayings of philosophers, we can see that no matter what we do, we must seek truth from facts and avoid impetuousness.

Only when a person has a down-to-earth and impetuous style can he learn something and gain something.

During the Three Kingdoms period, Guan Ning and Hua Xin studied at the same table, while Guan Ning was able to study steadily and was not disturbed by the outside world, while Hua Xin was impetuous. A powerful man passed by in a luxurious sedan chair, but Ning Guan turned a deaf ear and remained absorbed, while Hua Xin looked envious and ran out to see it at once. You Ning then cut the mat and sat down, breaking up with him. In the end, Guan Ning became a respected university scholar, while Hua Xin was mediocre.

An army will be invincible and invincible only if it has the style of seeking truth and being pragmatic and avoiding impetuousness.

In the early years, Cao Cao led an army to beat Zhang Xiu out of the water. After the victory, Cao Jun was elated and impetuous from the head coach to the soldiers. As a result, when Zhang Xiu was conquered for the second time, he was defeated and defeated again. On the other hand, Zhang Xiu was able to steadily accumulate strength and make plans after his defeat, so he finally won the battle. Cao Cao and Zhang Xiu, one win and one loss, are not the best interpretations of the importance of seeking truth from facts and avoiding impetuousness?

Only when a country has the style of seeking truth from facts and avoiding impetuousness can it develop steadily and prosper.

In the early days of the People's Republic of China, everything was in ruins. Many people want to be quick and quick, so they have the unrealistic goal slogan of "catching up with Britain in three years, being super beautiful in five years and realizing productism in twelve years"; So there was a radical scene of deforestation and steelmaking; So there is such an absurd "fruit" as "a radish weighs a thousand kilograms, but two donkeys can't pull it". As a result, the impetuous "Great Leap Forward" movement not only failed to realize the Great Leap Forward, but made China's economy enter a "great retrogression".

Whether it is an individual, a collective or a country, only by being practical and avoiding impetuousness can we go further. Whenever we are submerged by the wonders of a mirage, have we ever thought that this castle in the air is actually built by human beings in another place with their own hands, brick by brick?

In today's society, impetuous wind prevails, and being able to dance in the clouds has become the goal that everyone pursues. As a result, people who spend money to publish papers, people who mortgage houses and stocks, people who destroy the environment in exchange for GDP data, and so on, emerge one after another. I don't know, the more impetuous, the farther away from success-don't you see that those who sell themselves for a false reputation have become scandals and jokes, those who seek wealth through games have lost everything, and those who are eager for quick success have been severely punished by nature.

As steady as a pine and cypress on the top of Mount Tai. The wind does not move, and the thunder is not shocked. Impetuous qi is like weeds on the wall. When the wind comes, it dries up, and when it rains, it collapses.

Friends, dancing in the clouds, although graceful, are easy to fall; Walking close to the ground, although dull, is steady. Why not be practical, avoid impetuousness, and take your own life path?

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The author agrees with the philosopher's point of view and discusses the importance and necessity of seeking truth from facts and avoiding impetuousness from three angles: individual, collective and country, which is in line with the topic. The positive and negative examples of ancient and modern times are listed for discussion, and the materials are informative and the content is substantial. It can be expounded in connection with the disadvantages of the times, which enhances the pertinence and sense of the times.

In terms of expression, the structure of "total score+juxtaposition" is complete and clear, the positive and negative contrast is sharp, the metaphor is appropriate, and the language is literary, accurate and smooth. Climb high

"I walk on the ground, not dance in the clouds" is a famous saying of the philosopher Wittgenstein, which seems to tell people that only by letting go of themselves can they gain a sense of security. However, I think it is very inappropriate to be afraid to climb high for fear of falling. If everyone has the idea of "climbing high and falling hard", how can individuals progress and society develop?

Ideologically, people should try their best to climb higher.

Someone said, "People should have profound thoughts, otherwise they will become hopeless dry wells." Yes, what a terrible situation it will be if people can't climb the peak of their thoughts! Even if you give him the biggest family business, he will be defeated in a big mess. Liu Chan, the last ruler of Shu, was such a person. He didn't let his thoughts climb to the heights, so he didn't have lofty aspirations, lacked opinions, spoke rashly, didn't know rewards and punishments, and finally ruined Liu Bei's country. Only when people think about problems from a higher ideological level can they think about them thoroughly and see them farther and more accurately than others.

In the realm, people should strive to climb higher.

Wang Anshi wrote, "I am not afraid of clouds covering my eyes, I am at the highest place", and Du Fu wrote, "I will be at the top of Mount Tai, and all other mountains will look short under the sky." , all reflect the poet's transcendental realm. Only when people have a higher realm can they have the calmness of "Mount Tai collapses without fear" in Su Xun, the calmness of "picking chrysanthemums under the hedge and seeing Nanshan leisurely" in Tao Qian, and Li Bai's lofty sentiments of "being a gifted talent, let it be employed"! Another thousand pieces of silver have been spun, and they are all back! "There is Tan Sitong's" A Fair Life ".

In position, people should try to climb as high as possible.

Napoleon said, "A soldier who doesn't want to be a general is not a good soldier." Yes, in social life, everyone should pursue his higher position. Imagine that Lieutenant Eisenhower could never play the role of Commander Eisenhower. If a person is only willing to be the lowest person in society, then he can only play the role of an ordinary person. If people want to make great achievements, they must be promoted to a more important position.

A female teacher once told her students: I dreamed of becoming a great man when I was young, but I found it impossible when I grew up; So, I once again dreamed of becoming a great man's wife, but now I am married, and my husband is an ordinary clerk; Therefore, I continue to dream of becoming a great teacher. Maybe in the future, this dream may not come true. But I still feel gratified and enriched, and there was a burst of applause in the classroom. With courage and strength, strive to pursue a certain height in the world, whether you are the tallest or not, because your soul has reached a tall and straight height when it is advancing to the end!

A thoughtful, ambitious and ambitious person will become an excellent person and a person who can "feel gratified and rich", so let yourself climb higher. Tolstoy said, "I would like to stand on a high place, because I can hear the voice of God there." What about you, my friend?

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The author interprets "down-to-earth" as "keeping yourself low to be stable", and from "not dancing in the clouds" associates with the mentality that some people in social life are afraid to climb high for fear of falling. Taking this as a starting point, he bounced back to the pipa and expounded the reasons for climbing from three aspects in a tit-for-tat manner. His views are original and novel, which is in line with the topic.

The expression also adopts the structure of "total score+juxtaposition", with distinct levels. Quotations are accurate and rich, and the language is warning. title

Read the following text and write as required.

The philosopher Wittgenstein said, "I walk on the ground, not dance in the clouds." This famous saying expresses the image and has profound implications, which will lead to different associations or feelings.

Combine this famous saying, choose your own angle, your own ideas, your own topic and your own style (except poetry), and write an article of not less than 800 words. (composition for the final exam of the second semester of senior three in 2007 in Haidian District, Beijing)