I wrote couplets for the small hut - Classroom record of "The Pear Blossoms on the Yi Road"

1. Skim the text and repeat the main idea.

Most students retell the text in the order in which it was written, and one student retells it in narrative form. The teacher guides students to compare the differences between narration and text narration. Many students found the text full of suspense and misunderstandings.

2. Three suspense and two misunderstandings

Find the three suspense and two misunderstandings in the text, and talk about the effect of this arrangement.

3. Draft a couplet and explore the theme

I am going to write a couplet for the door of the small hut, with "Pear blossoms blooming everywhere on the post road" as the top couplet. Please draft it. Xialian and horizontal batch.

Health: True love is everywhere in the world.

Teacher: Yes, the battle is relatively neat. What does "prepared" mean here?

Student: Possessed.

Teacher: True love in the world is available everywhere, but “preparation” is not appropriate. You can change it to another one.

Health: True love is everywhere in the world.

Health: True love is everywhere in the world.

Teacher: It is best not to repeat words in the same position. "Everywhere" in the first line indicates space. How should it be corrected in the second line?

Student: You can write it from the perspective of time. True love in the world exists every year (every day)

Student: True love in the world always exists...

Life: Everyone (everyone) has the spirit of Lei Feng.

Born: Lei Feng’s spirit is passed down from generation to generation.

Horizontal comments written by students: Helping others, Lei Feng spirit, and serving the people.

Post-teaching reflection: At first, two students recited the text in the order in which it came, but the order was not very clear. At this time, a classmate recited the text in a narrational way, which was very smooth. This is something I didn't expect. So I took advantage of the situation and asked students to compare the difference between the writing method of the text and the narration. It naturally leads to the development of the plot and attracts the reader's attention by setting up suspense and causing misunderstandings. The couplet link brought the class to a climax. In the process of writing the couplets, the understanding of the text theme was deepened, and the effect was good.

The fourth class of seventh grade students in 2021 wrote more exciting couplets, with broader ideas and richer content. The horizontal batch includes: Bon voyage,

The lower couplet includes:

Miss Hani comes from time to time

Everyone has virtues in the world

True love in the world appears from time to time

Everyone praises Lei Feng’s spirit

Lei Feng’s spirit exists forever

The hut spirit exists all the time