A comment describing a poorly written composition

The content before and after 1. is not closely related, and some contents are too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article.

2. The narrative is simple and rough, with only one frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.

3. Inappropriate details and unclear priorities.

4. The content is mostly outlined by lines, and there is no detailed description based on points.

5. Can't keep up with the times, and the content is too old. 6. The center is not clear enough and the concept is not clear enough.

7. The theme is vague, the meaning is vague, and the purpose of writing is not clear.

8. Although there is a central theme, the expression is not strong enough, but it seems empty and powerless.

9. The theme is not serious enough, and there are still dross in thought.

10. The plot develops smoothly and lacks certain ups and downs. 1 1. The plot changes are unremarkable and lack new ideas.

12. The plot is straightforward and there is no suspense, just like keeping a running account.

13. The process is detailed, but the ending is short. The structure is unreasonable, giving people the feeling of anticlimactic.

14. The idea is unreasonable and the content is full of loopholes, which can't reflect the truth of life.

15. The plot fluctuates greatly, the conversion is too fast and it is not coherent enough.

16. The selection of materials is too popular and unrepresentative, and the old themes and ideas are unremarkable.

17. Although the events with certain narrative value in life are selected, the hidden truth of the events cannot be deeply reflected due to the incomplete analysis and mining.

18. The material selection is plain, too old, vulgar, simple and naive, and has no new ideas, so it is difficult to deeply reflect the times and authenticity of life.

19. Failure to reflect the truth through trivial matters, and lack of proficiency in the use of the expression "seeing the big from the small".

20. Lack of multi-angle portrayal of the characters, only a narrow theme is selected, showing the one-sided personality characteristics of the characters.