Read fables and write compositions.

Turtle and Eagle A kind-hearted man found a little turtle crawling out of a bunker by the sea. At this time, an eagle came to catch the little turtle. The tourists escorted the baby turtle to the seaside and drove away the eagle. At this time, a group of turtles climbed out of the bunker and fell into the sea. It turns out that this little turtle is a scout. After the good people left, a group of eagles came immediately. According to this, make a discussion and draw up a theme.

First, analyze the material. Personally, I think the material is difficult to understand at first glance, but I can still understand the meaning of the material after careful reading. But in the examination room, the mentality of different candidates is hard to say. 1: The language is not rigorous. The phrase "tourists escort turtles into the sea and drive away eagles" is not properly expressed. Without logical conjunctions, people can't think of pictures after reading them. Do good people send turtles to the seaside to drive away eagles? Or drive the eagle away first, and then send the turtle to the seaside? Or did the eagle see the turtle reach the seaside and leave? Although there is no grammatical error in the sentence, in the tense moment of the college entrance examination, such words can easily disturb the examinee's thinking and make his thinking unclear. "At this time, a group of turtles climbed out of the bunker." At this time, when is it? When the eagle left, or when the tortoise arrived at the sea? It turns out that this little turtle is a scout. What does this word mean here? The previous language did not properly show the role of "detective". Is there no reason? What is originality? "After the good people left, a group of eagles came immediately." When did the good-hearted man leave? When did the eagle come? If a group of turtles crawled out of the bunker and the good-hearted man was ready to leave, why didn't he send more turtles into the sea? After the good people left, a group of eagles came immediately. How did the eagle know that the good man had left? Isn't the first eagle driven away? 2: Logical error. "This little turtle is a scout." But how did he send the signal back to other turtles in the sand hole? Literally, the safe arrival of turtles at sea seems to be a signal, but it is far-fetched. Do they look through binoculars? Later, a flock of eagles came. It can be speculated that the eagle acting alone is actually a scout, so it should not catch turtles, but should forge a safe signal.

In fact, too many language errors and logical errors will make candidates unable to understand the article well and restore the scene at that time, which is unfavorable for understanding the meaning of the article, especially in special circumstances.

Then analyze the material itself. In the materials, the words "good-hearted people" and "scouts" are very important information. To understand the meaning of the material, you can't leave out these two words. Therefore, the meaning of the material is simple and clear, and the "kindness" of tourists has caused problems in the "investigation" of Little Turtle. As a result, the material is not explained, but it is already obvious.

The mistake of a "good man" is that he is too arbitrary. He doesn't know the little turtle's task and is not familiar with the turtle's habits, so this "tragedy" can be said to be irresponsible. He didn't "send the Buddha to the West".

"Little Turtle" didn't do his duty as a scout and didn't analyze the environmental alert.

On the other hand, the eagle is excellent. In fact, whether there is a good man or not, he should let the turtle go and hang the big fish in the long line. Moreover, the arrival of a group of eagles mentioned later shows that they are well prepared and that this eagle has a mission. In this way, the little turtle can't simply complete the task. But if you think so, the logic of the whole article will be problematic and you can't think deeply.

Second, talk about the starting point of the article. From the perspective of a good-hearted person, combined with his practice of "doing bad things with good intentions", you should think twice before you do things. These topics can be discussed. From the perspective of young turtles, sense of responsibility, from the perspective of eagles, lure the enemy deeper, and from the perspective of outsiders, survival of the fittest, survival of the fittest.

How to win by surprise in the college entrance examination? There is an article that can be immediately favored by the marking teacher, and that is to give the teacher another feeling. The words "good-hearted", "original" and "immediately" in the materials can all show the emotional color of the materials. Although the ending is not clear, it should be a "tragedy". Besides, the topic needs to be discussed, so it is unimaginable. But we can expand the angle of thinking and not be bound by the emotional color of matter. Eagles eat turtles, which is necessary for survival and part of the ecological chain, so analyzing the article from the eagle's point of view should be well received. For example, the eagle's task is also very arduous. Even if it's easy for an eagle to eat a turtle, it's still difficult to meet the needs of a group of eagles, so we have to wait for the little turtle to be released. In addition, people's intervention may change this situation. What will happen if that kind-hearted man drives away a flock of eagles? If the eagle dies, as a creature on the earth, what is the big difference from the death of the tortoise? Everyone knows the story of wolves and sheep on the grassland. It is normal for an eagle to catch a turtle. What kind of hands do you put?

Fan Wen: the philosophy of the eagle. Although the turtle in the South Pacific is clever, it is finally buried in the belly of the eagle! Eagle enjoys a high reputation in nature. After careful summary, it is found that it has the following three characteristics, which is called eagle philosophy. One of the eagle philosophies: seeing the facts clearly is the basis for doing anything well. The turtle saw the scout climb into the sea and thought everything was safe, so he climbed out with peace of mind. What happened? Can only suffer from extinction. But the eagle saw thousands of little turtles hidden in the sand, and the result was a bumper harvest! In fact, we should also see the facts clearly in life, otherwise we will regret it all our lives! Didn't Sima Jia feel sorry and angry because of Zhuge Liang's empty plan? Don't we often buy some fakes because of the advertising effect? Therefore, we need to see the facts clearly. Seeing the facts clearly is a kind of wisdom. Eagle's second philosophy: the eagle did not give up hunting because of the appearance of tourists. It's waiting for its chance. The tourist left, its opportunity came, and finally it succeeded! Isn't that what "luring the enemy deep" is like in war? We resisted the small temptation, in order to catch bigger prey, let more enemies enter our encirclement and annihilate them in one fell swoop! Isn't it the same in real life? We waited and waited until the stock rose to a very high price and we didn't sell our stock. Isn't this a kind of wisdom? Many times, we also need to quote but not send! The third philosophy of the eagle: perseverance The eagle did not give up hunting because of the appearance of tourists. It persisted and finally got the desired result. Isn't that what people do? Su Wu has been herding sheep for decades and finally returned to the embrace of the motherland, which is his persistence; Helen? Keller was blind. She didn't give up, fought against all kinds of unfavorable factors, and finally became an idol in the eyes of the disabled because of "If Give me Three Days of Light". This is her perseverance; The foot of Sun Tzu's Art of War has been revised; The Zhouyi played the King of Literature and Zhong You in the Spring and Autumn Period, all of which were their perseverance. After eight years of anti-Japanese war, we finally won, which is also perseverance ... great men are still like this, shouldn't we ordinary people be like this? Perseverance is a kind of wisdom! This is the philosophy of the eagle! With it, the eagle can defend its airspace and dominate one side, unparalleled! By studying the philosophy of the eagle, we can control the wisdom of the eagle, grow a pair of strong wings and fight freely in the sky with a pair of sharp eyes! Comments on this year's college entrance examination composition questions are open-ended, with many angles of cut-in and expansion, which is difficult to examine. Students who are flexible in thinking and good at highlighting their writing personality can always find the best starting point and accurately display their skills. The author of this article is an example. In raw materials, the eagle seems to be less important. If we say "doing bad things with good intentions" and "not breaking the law", it is only a supporting role to help complete the theme. However, the author of this paper finds another way, digs out the factors that accord with the meaning of the problem from the eagle, goes deep into the essence through the phenomenon, and writes a good article with novel views, clear levels, full arguments and great creativity. In his writing, he connected the examples of ancient and modern celebrities with social real life, and explained the three characteristics of eagle philosophy in a simple and clear way. The style of the article is concise, the words are appropriate, and the sentences are clean and tidy. It reads smoothly and comfortably. Being able to write such a leisurely and good article in such a tense environment of college entrance examination shows that the author's writing skills are good. The formulation of "eagle philosophy" is the innovation of this paper, but it also needs to be discussed.