How to use Chinese to make the language concise, coherent and appropriate?

[goal guidance]

(A) the requirements of the examination syllabus for language diseases

In "Language Knowledge and Language Expression", the examination instructions clearly state that "language use is concise, coherent and appropriate".

[Key and Difficult Points]

"Conciseness" means to convey as much information as possible with as few language symbols as possible to achieve the best effect. Simply put, "conciseness" means being able to delete redundant sentences and eliminate ambiguity.

Second, the teaching process

Lesson 65438

Key points and difficulties: fully understand the key points and problem-solving skills of concise language

1. In order to make underlined sentences concise and fluent, and keep the original meaning, some words need to be deleted. Which words must be retained when deleting? Fill in the serial number on the horizontal line. (00)

I remember ① taking the exam ⑨ and ⑨ finishing the Chinese exam ⑩ at the end of 213. I felt quite good and was excited for a long time.

The words that must be kept are:

The following paragraph is repeated. What are the three places that must be deleted without affecting the will?

Today, I went to the department store to buy pens. When I explained my purpose to the clerk who sold pens, she immediately took out three kinds of pens for me to choose from. I didn't find one that satisfied me. The salesgirl in the department store is always enthusiastic, and her service attitude is really good.

Deleted parts:

3. In the brackets below, the group to which the word "de" must be added is (0 1).

In order to implement the strategy of developing the western region and accelerate the local economic development, the state will build ten new projects in the western region. (2) Astronomers discovered 28 planets in a solar system, and inferred their existence through indirect channels. The injection of venture capital can make your purse swell immediately, and you have the strength to fight in the market and seek new development.

Known as the "table tennis dark horse", he has the characteristics of quickness, agility and ruthless grip, which is the biggest obstacle for Eurasian masters to win.

A.①③ B.②④ C.①④ D.②③

There is some repetition in the following paragraph. What three places must be deleted without affecting the original intention? Fill in the serial number of the part to be deleted on the horizontal line below, only three.

The reason why a person (1) will go bad (2) is not only influenced by bad things (3), but more importantly (4) he is not sure about himself (5) he gradually goes bad only because of the influence of bad people (6); If this person can grasp himself (8) and resist (9) various (10) adverse effects (1 1), then (12), will he become bad? Answer:,,.

Analysis: 1, the word that must be kept is 2347 ⑧ 2, and the word that must be deleted is 27 ⑧ 3. The answer is that the word "de" in the sentence is dispensable and the word "de" must be in the sentence. If there is no "de" in the second sentence, the second half of the original sentence will become a subject-predicate phrase and be taken out of context. Fourth, if there is no "de", it will not only change the original next phrase, but also make it feel incomplete. 4. The part to be deleted is (2)(7)(9). Throughout the whole text, we can see the central meaning of this article, that is, "people are bad" because they can't grasp themselves. Around this meaning, the article demonstrates it from both positive and negative aspects with hypothetical complex sentences. In the concrete expression, (1)(2) is semantically repetitive, so (2) should be deleted. The appearance of (7) makes the sentence structure complicated. (9) is duplicate with (10), so (9) should be deleted.

On the coherence of language

First, the test site explanation

[goal guidance]

(A) the requirements of the examination syllabus for language diseases

In "Language Knowledge and Language Expression", the examination instructions clearly state that "language use is concise, coherent and appropriate".

(b) Interpretation of the syllabus

Coherence is the expression of language. Attention should be paid to the arrangement and combination of sentences, the cohesion, cohesion and echo of upper and lower sentences, so as to achieve unified theme, reasonable word order, cohesion and echo of nature. This kind of test questions are mainly used to examine students' thinking order and coherence of language expression, and to test students' reading comprehension, language combination and thinking judgment.

[Key and Difficult Points]

In recent years, there are two main problems about "language coherence":

One is the sentence order arrangement type. The form of examination is given a set of sentences, which are arranged in paragraphs, with coherent idioms and smooth tone.

The second is sentence cohesion. The form of examination is to provide a paragraph of text, leave a blank sentence at its switch or middle or end, and then provide four options, choose one of them to fill in the blanks.

Second, the teaching process

Lesson 65438

Emphasis and difficulty: fully understand the key points of language coherence and problem-solving skills

The skills to solve the problem of "language coherence" are four unifications, namely, unity of sentence pattern, unity of subject, unity of time and space and unity of logic.

(A) the unity of "sentence"

The sentence pattern is unified, that is, the sentence structure is consistent, which is similar to "parallelism sentence" and "antithesis sentence", thus receiving the reading effect of neat form, harmonious syllable, coherent momentum and catchy.

Example: Fill in the following sentences with horizontal lines. Coherent with the context and harmonious syllables are (0 1 NMET).

In late autumn, pine, bamboo and camellia are colorful and beautiful.

① Overlooking trees, elms and maples at the top of the mountain ② Overlooking trees, elms and maples at the top of the mountain.

Analysis: The answer to this question is ②. Look at the phrases behind the horizontal line first, mostly four-word phrases. It is important that the first sentence after the horizontal line "Songzhu Camellia" is the juxtaposition of four plants; At this time, if you look at the options, you can immediately conclude that you can't choose ①, because it destroys the neatness and beauty of the sentence, and the phrase after the comma in ② is only the juxtaposition of "four plants". So I chose 2.

Example: Of the two expressions in brackets in the following sentence, the most appropriate one is (1998 College Entrance Examination).

Lu Dahai-Sifeng's brother and Gui Lu's half-son came in. He is a tall man with (a) thick black eyebrows and (b) thick black eyebrows, and his cheeks are slightly concave. Analysis: the answer to this question is B. Because the phrase "big body" before brackets is a subject-predicate phrase, and the phrase "cheeks are slightly concave" after brackets is also a subject-predicate phrase; And a is an affirmative phrase and b is a subject-predicate phrase.

(B) the unity of the "subject"

The unity of the subject, that is, the unity of the "statement object". It requires the following sentences to be consistent with the objects stated in the previous article to prevent "stealing subjects", which is also a common phenomenon of language barriers.

Example: Fill in the sentences in the horizontal line below. The most appropriate group to connect with the above sentences is (College Entrance Examination in Spring of 2000).

Police officers rushed to the scene in time for reconnaissance, noon 12.

A. The suspect was arrested at home, and all stolen goods and money were also seized. B. Capture the suspect in his house, and collect all stolen goods and money at the same time. C. The suspect was arrested at home, and all the money and stolen goods were recovered. D. capture the suspect in his house and collect all stolen goods and money.

Analysis: The answer to this question is D, which mainly examines the consistency of "subject". The subject of the sentence before the horizontal line is "police officer", so the statement object of the following discourse is also "police officer", and only the statement object of item D is "police officer".

(III) Unification of Time and Space The so-called unification of time and space means the consistency of time order and space order.

Example: Fill in the following sentences with horizontal lines. Coherent with the context and harmonious syllables are (0 1 NMET).

Surrounded by mountains in the distance, we can see rivers and running water in the distance. The tea garden is lush and luxuriant with pine and bamboo.

(1) White clouds, layers of forests; (2) The forest is all green and surrounded by white clouds;

Analysis: The answer to this question is ②. As can be seen from Overlooking the Mountains, the foothold of the hero's line of sight is "mountain". At this time, spatial order either looks down from the top, so the back should be written on the waist or at the foot of the mountain, but there is no such option; Either from the bottom up, and the second item happens to be from the bottom up.

For example, combine the following sentences into a coherent paragraph. (Fill in serial number only) (03 College Entrance Examination)

(1) On the southern slope, the original forest of Chinese fir distributed in strips is continuous, and giant Chinese fir trees are like swords, which are broadcast live to the sky. ② On the Wuhuadian grassland on the north slope, you can see Xinjiang wool sheep and Mercedes-Benz Ili horse. (3) Chinese fir, red deer, deer, brown bear, snow leopard and other wild animals in the crown. (4) After breakfast, continue southward and enter the grassland belt and forest belt of Kashi River and Gongnaisi River. (5) All kinds of forest birds are constantly singing. Analysis: The answer to this question is 42 135. This question mainly examines the temporal and spatial order. ① Write about the beautiful forests on the south slope, and ② write about the grasslands on the north slope. ③ Write about the animals in the forest. (4) after breakfast, continue to go south and enter the grassland and forest areas. ⑤ Write about birds in the forest. Judging from these five sentences, ④ should be the first, followed by grassland belt ②, and then forest belt ①, ③ and ⑤. Who comes first? Obviously, it should be before ③ and after ⑤, because ③ has a "Chinese fir forest that covers the sun".

(4) "Logical consistency" Logical consistency refers to irrationality.

Example: Fill in the sentences at the horizontal lines in the following paragraphs in turn, and the most appropriate connection with the context is (00 College Entrance Examination).

Reading is for your own use. Reading more is not an honor, and reading less is not a shame. , you can form the habit of meditation, thus changing your temperament; For example, roaming in the "ten-mile foreign exchange", although rare, was dazzled and returned empty-handed. If the nouveau riche shows off his property, it will be more expensive. This is academic self-deception and low taste in life.

Read more if you read thoroughly, read less if you read thoroughly, read more without seeking a good solution, and read less without seeking a good solution. Many people in the world read just for window dressing, and many scholars in the world just for window dressing.

A.②③⑤ B.①③⑥ C.②④⑤ D.①④⑥

Analysis: the answer to this question is a. From the first space, ① ② can't be selected, and the second space is followed by a figurative sentence. On the surface, it means that you have seen a lot of things, but you can only return empty-handed for various reasons. Context, its profound meaning is that you read a lot of books, but because you don't know much, you get nothing. So the second space can only be filled in ③. If we look at the first space, we will find that the second sentence is a complex sentence with negative meaning, so the first space is filled with ②. From the perspective of sentence expression, reading is considered as window dressing, and you should choose ⑤.

Example: Of the two expressions in brackets in the following sentence, the most appropriate one is (1998 College Entrance Examination).

Tianshan stretches for thousands of miles. (a) regardless of mountain valleys, grassland lakes, forest streams. (2) No matter mountains and valleys, grassland forests, streams and lakes, there are abundant products everywhere.

Analysis: the answer to this question is B. "Mountain" to "deep valley", "grassland" to "forest", "stream" to "lake".

Example: Fill in the following sentences horizontally, and the proper arrangement is (College Entrance Examination, 1998).

The State Council has long demanded that enterprises along the Huaihe River must stop discharging pollutants into the Huaihe River within a time limit, but the leaders of this factory have turned a deaf ear and delayed pushing the selection committee. A neither conveying instructions from superiors nor purchasing sewage treatment equipment, resulting in more and more serious pollution problems and neglected environmental protection work. B neither purchases sewage treatment equipment nor conveys instructions from superiors, which leads to more and more serious pollution problems and neglected environmental protection work. C. neither conveying instructions from superiors nor purchasing sewage treatment equipment, resulting in neglect of environmental protection work and increasingly serious pollution problems. D. neither purchasing sewage treatment equipment nor conveying instructions from superiors, thus neglecting environmental protection work, and the pollution problem is becoming more and more serious.

Analysis: There are "turning a deaf ear" and "delaying Committee" in front of the horizontal line, "turning a deaf ear" to instructions and "delaying Committee" to measures; As can be seen from the options, "nobody cares" is the reason for "more and more serious". So you should choose C.

second kind

Key and difficult points: using problem-solving methods to solve problems

1. Fill in the line below, and the most appropriate sentence to connect with the context is

The tomb of Yue Fei, a famous anti-gold star in the Southern Song Dynasty, is in Qixialing, West Lake, Hangzhou. The ancient cypress around the tomb is green, and the stone fence is sanitary, solemn and simple. (2) that is, against yue fei's notorious yes-man Qin Gui couple and others.

A.① Lake facing the mountain ② Four cast iron figures are placed on both sides of the tomb door B.① Lake facing the mountain ② Four cast iron figures are placed on both sides of the tomb door.

C.① Mountain thick water jacket ② Four cast iron figures are placed on both sides of the tomb door D.① Mountain thick water jacket ② Four cast iron figures are placed on both sides of the tomb door.

2. The most suitable group to connect the sentences in the following line with the context is

The dark night gradually faded, and a ray of white light appeared on the horizon, flying freely to the distant sea.

1. White gradually expands; 2. White gradually expands; 3. The boundless sea water unfolds before our eyes; 5. Seagulls spread their snow-white wings silently; 6. Seagulls spread their snow-white wings silently; 4. The boundless sea water spread out before our eyes; 5. Seagulls spread their snow-white wings silently; 6. Seagulls spread their snow-white wings silently; 4.

A.①③⑤ B.②④⑥ C.①③⑥ D.②④⑤

3. The most appropriate method related to the context is

I jumped off the kang, picked up the washbasin, filled it with clear water and put it in the middle of the yard. Look at this hook, yo! Naughty boy, play hide-and-seek with me.

A. The moonlight really reflected in the birdbath B. The moonlight really reflected in the birdbath C. The moon really jumped into the birdbath D. The birdbath really jumped into the moon.

4. A can fill in the horizontal line correctly.

But when you get closer, you will find that the Lama Temple is not on the top of the mountain, but still on the grass in Tantan, Pingping.

A. From a distance, there is obviously a small Lama Temple on the top of the mountain. B. Seen from a distance, the Lama Temple on the top of the mountain looks so tall and striking.

C. From a distance, there is a Lama Temple on the top of the mountain. D. Seen from a distance, the Little Lama Temple is indeed located at the top of the mountain.

5. What is the best sentence to fill in the sentence and context on the horizontal line?

We "Four Musketeers" probably eavesdropped on the class of Xie Bingxin, a famous female writer at that time, and Zheng Zhenduo, a professor in yenching university.

A. As a result, Mr. Bing Xin kicked him out with a straight face, but we made friends with Mr. Zheng Zhenduo.

B. As a result, Mr. Zheng Zhenduo made friends with us, and Mr. Bing Xin kicked us out with a straight face.

C. As a result, Mr. Bing Xin kicked us out with a straight face, but Mr. Zheng Zhenduo made friends with us.

D As a result, we made friends with Mr. Zheng Zhenduo, but Mr. Bing Xin kicked us out with a straight face.

6. Fill in the line below. The most appropriate contextual cohesion is

Although the ancient street is narrow, it is straight and simple, with the rhythm of music.

(1) the whole ancient town twists and turns were led down; ② One end of the ancient town passes through its nose in a zigzag way; ③ One end is connected with the ancient street; It was made in a deep alley.

A.④③②① B.①④②③ C.④②①③ D.②①④③

7. It is better to fill in the relationship between horizontal line and context.

Xiao Ming climbed under the bed, hid secretly, dragged it out from under the bed and sent it to the kindergarten.

A. mom looked for him for a long time and finally found him. Dan was finally found by her mother.

C let mom look for it for a long time and finally found it. But mom finally found him.

8. Choose the most suitable item and fill in the line below.

There are two kinds of Qin armies: the central standing army and the local armed forces. , or stationed in the capital, or keep the frontier; The local army is under the command of a captain. It is estimated that there were at least one million troops in the country at that time.

A. The generals appointed by the emperor directly command the Central Standing Army B. The generals appointed by the emperor directly command the Central Standing Army.

C the command of the central standing army is a general directly appointed by the emperor. D. the central standing army is a general directly appointed by the emperor.

9. Fill in the underlined sentences in the following paragraphs in turn. The most appropriate way to relate to the context is

Few works in literary history can simply praise the stability of life, but good works often describe the flight of life on the basis of stability of life. . Many works fail because they don't know how to grasp this foundation.

Most works emphasize life. There are many works that emphasize flying in life. With this foundation, flying in the sky will not be floating foam. Without this foundation, flying in the sky can only be floating foam. It only gives people excitement, not inspiration. It only gives people inspiration, not excitement.

A.①③⑤ B.②④⑤ C.①③⑥ D.②④⑥

Analysis:

1, B.(① "subject" is unified, and the subject is "tomb"; (2) the sentence pattern is unified, "around the tomb" and "on both sides of the tomb door") 2. D.(① and ② are chosen logically, so "Na" is chosen because it is "horizon", and ⑤ and ⑤ are unified according to sentence patterns. The subject is unified, that is, moonlight is better than reflection compared with jumping. ) 4.d. ("Syntax" is unified, that is, "where the temple falls") 5. B. ("logic" is unified, and "syntax" is also unified. Xie Bingxin comes first, and Zheng Zhenduo comes last, so you can only choose A and C. Some people say that if you choose A, you can choose A, but if you choose A sentence, you can only choose B)6, A. ("Logic" is unified, "twists and turns" is "the rhythm of music") 7, B.(①

On the appropriateness of language

First, the test site explanation

[goal guidance]

(A) the requirements of the examination syllabus for language diseases

In "Language Knowledge and Language Expression", the examination instructions clearly state that "language use is concise, coherent and appropriate".

[Key and Difficult Points]

(b) Interpretation of the syllabus

The purpose of learning a language is to use it. The use of language is a process of language transmission, such as conveying thoughts, expressing feelings and exchanging information. The use of language is restricted by context. Context includes internal context and external context.

"Internal context" mainly refers to the context of the article, such as style, sentence pattern, collocation between languages, usage habits and so on.

"External context" refers to various situational conditions in verbal communication, such as the purpose of speaking, the occasion of speaking, the way of expression, the identity, occupation and situation of the speaker, the age, gender, experience, ideological character, hobbies, education level, psychological needs and occupation of the recipient.

"Appropriateness" refers to paying attention to and using various situational conditions in the use of language. That is, it mainly meets the requirements of "external context" and pays attention to mastering the discretion of language use.

Second, the teaching process

Lesson 65438

Emphasis and difficulty: fully understand the key points of language appropriateness and problem-solving skills

(A) the correct use of polite language

Many Chinese words have a certain tendency, and if they are not grasped well, they will make jokes. Noble words can only be used to address each other, while modest words can attract experts to their side.

Some people summarize the words of modesty and respect as "people who live in a small house", that is, address their elders and older peers with "home", such as my father (Yan Ci), my mother (Jia Ci), my uncle and my brother; When others address their small family members, they will be given the name "She", such as my brother, sister and nephew. When addressing other family members, they will be given the name "Ling" to show their respect, such as your mother, your father, your son and your love.

Besides "home", "house" and "order", there are also "small" (such as a little girl, calling her daughter), "clumsy" (such as my humble opinion, calling my own opinion), "cold" (such as my clumsy home) and "stupid".

Common honorifics include "Gui" (such as Gui Geng, calling others' age), "Da" (such as masterpiece, calling the other person's work), "Gao" (high opinion, calling the other person's opinion), "Xian" (such as a good brother, calling someone younger than himself), "Zun" (such as honorific surname, asking the other person's surname) and "Guang" (.

As long as you master the meaning and users of these modest words, such questions as the college entrance examination will be solved.

Exodus: In the following sentences, the correct one is (94).

Your mother asked me to buy this. Just give it to her old man.

B: Your Yuan won the prize in the Children's Art Exhibition this time. Thanks to your careful guidance, our whole family is very grateful.

C. Our family education is very strict, and your father often tells us to be innocent in society.

D. Your son is a good son of Dan Biao's family. His horse is lifelike.

Analysis: the answer to this question is D.

(2) Appropriate selection of commendatory words, derogatory words and neutral words.

Proper selection of commendatory words, derogatory words and neutral words can accurately and rigorously express feelings and attitudes towards things.

It should be noted that the feelings of praise and criticism are not static. In a specific context, that is, when using the rhetorical method of "irony", praise can be transformed into derogatory meaning, and derogatory meaning can be transformed into praise, which is ironic.

Exodus: "In the long struggle, I have always lived a simple life and never had luxury. The total amount of money handled is 4 million yuan; But the money raised for the revolution is used for the revolutionary cause bit by bit. In the eyes of adults in China, this is quite like a miracle, or it is exaggerated. "

Analysis: The "great man" in the sentence was originally a commendatory term. Here, they are not really great men, but satirize the corrupt officials of the Kuomintang and become commendatory words.

(C) the correct use of oral and written language

In order to make the style color appropriate, we must distinguish between oral style and written style. Spoken style includes general conversation style and speech style. Written style includes official document style, scientific style, political style and literary style. If you insist on using some written language in oral articles, it will affect the accuracy of language expression.

(4) Choose words and make sentences accurately according to occasions and objects.

The occasion, that is, the communicative environment, includes time, place, topic, the identity, occupation, status, education, personality, and the relationship between objects (as well as readers and authors). If you don't pay attention to the occasion, object and atmosphere of communication, you will often fail to achieve the purpose of communication and even lead to bad consequences. On the contrary, according to the specific occasions and objects, choosing rational language with rich connotation and wisdom can often get the expected good results.

First, engineer Li and his wife held a family dinner for their good friends in Japan. During the dinner, the Japanese wife said politely, "Mrs. Li is so elegant, like us Japanese women, not like China."

Analysis: Imagine what Mrs. Li should say after listening to the Japanese wife's "very polite" remarks. If we say, "My wife is also very elegant, and your husband is also very elegant, just like us in China, not Japanese." So if you come to "sour" and I go to "spicy", can this family dinner be done? Can friendly relations last? Still "modest" "Madam, I flatter you, how can I compare with you Japanese women!" It's beneath your dignity. So Mrs. Li was shocked and said, "Mrs. Li told a fact that the civilizations of China and China are in the same strain, and Japanese civilization gave birth to Japan." . This sentence is euphemistic, profound and reserved, which is in line with communication occasions, and makes Japanese wife know that her speech is inappropriate. She smiled apologetically, but she was not embarrassed.

(5) Learn to face and report.

Face-to-face statement and asking someone to report are two different expressions, which should be used properly. Face to face, according to the relationship between the two sides, just make the content of the statement clear. This expression is relatively simple.

Asking people to transfer, involving a third person, not only the narrative angle has changed, but also factors such as time, place and generation have changed. This kind of expression is complicated, so we must consider the appropriate expression of the changing factors.

Example: report the contents of the following sentences in two different language environments: A and B. (92 college entrance examination)

Xiao Li said to Xiao Wang, "I won't go to the Chinese group to find Teacher Guo tomorrow morning. Please tell the teacher. Help me ask again, can I go to her house to find her the night after tomorrow? "

(1) In the afternoon, Xiao Wang told this story to Miss Guo's daughter Shanshan at the school gate. Xiao Wang said:

(b) Early the next morning, Xiao Wang went to the language group and told Mr. Guo himself about it. Xiao Wang said:

Analysis: This question examines the ability to correctly convert languages according to different objects and at different times. The change of object causes the change of person and appellation, and the change of time and place also causes the change of language, so we must grasp it well and not make mistakes. Question A is what Xiao Wang said to Mr. Guo's daughter: "(Shanshan) Xiao Li won't come to your mother in the Chinese language group tomorrow morning, you tell him;" He also asked if it was okay to meet her at your house the night after tomorrow. "Question B is what Xiao Wang said to Mr. Guo himself:" Mr. Guo, Xiao Li said he wouldn't come to see you this morning. Can he come to see you at your house tomorrow night? "

second kind

Key and difficult points: using problem-solving methods to solve problems

1, the following four sentences, the appropriate sentence is

A: We are glad to see that you are still so tough at the age of 95. I wish you a long life.

B.today is your birthday. Mother and daughter wish you eternal youth and beauty.

C. since everyone welcomes me to perform, I'm not afraid of making a fool of myself. Sing a song.

D. Xiao Fang, it's nothing to fail in the exam Winning or losing is a common occurrence in military strategists. Cheer up, the victory is yours after all.

When you borrow something from someone, you should use soft tone and proper wording. The best of the following sentences is

A. please lend me your compass. Give me your compass. C.how about I use your compass? Can you lend me your compass?

The following is a note from Zhou Hua to Jin Guanchang of the Museum. Some words in it are inappropriate. Please help him correct them. (95)

Jin Guanchang:

You asked me to come to your place this afternoon to talk about my classmates visiting your library. Because I have something urgent, I decided to reschedule. Where to change it specifically, we will discuss it separately

Hua Zhou

May 18

An inappropriate sentence

correct

The following is the text of a letter written by a middle school student to Mr. Wang Li. There are three inappropriate words, please find out.

I am honored to write to you. You are a great linguist and knowledgeable. You have written so many books, which have deeply influenced us newborn calves. I like reading your books, but it's hard to get them in remote areas. Please do your best to send me a copy of "Common Sense of Ancient Chinese" written by you. ⑦ Please reply. Three inappropriate articles are:

5. Choose an inappropriate word according to the language environment.

The United States is a developed country, but they didn't cancel the luxury goods list until the 1970s, and South Korea still fines people who smoke imported cigarettes. What are the disadvantages of following these methods?

A. luxury B. so far C. what are the disadvantages of following the trend D.

6. In the following example, an inappropriate word is

A. Students write to a teacher who has just recovered from illness, and the final greeting is: I wish you recovery.

B. An elder wrote to my nephew and said, "I hope you can decide this matter."

C. The Education Bureau of a certain region has compiled the Briefing of the Education Bureau of a certain region on Audio-visual Education in Yuxin Middle School, and plans to send it to the Provincial Education Bureau, the regional administrative office, the education bureaus of six counties and cities in the region, and several schools in the region, and use it in turn: newspaper, newspaper, hair and hair.

D. The Youth League Committee of the school plans to carry out an activity in the summer vacation and wrote a request report to the Party Committee of the school. The ending is: no, please indicate.

7. In the mid-term exam, Xiao Ming's grades dropped, which made him sad. The class teacher wants to talk to him. Among the following four statements, the most ideal effect is

A.what's the matter with you? You got this test! What will we do in the future? Is there no hope?

B.you didn't do well in the exam this time. I understand your sadness. But don't lose heart. I believe you will do well in the next exam.

C. it's no use feeling sad because you failed the exam. It's time to find out why. Try to do well in the exam next time!

D. As I expected, you didn't do well in the exam this time. This is called self-inflicted, what are you sad about! If you don't reflect well, it will be worse next time.

8. The following is an invitation letter, which contains several inappropriate language expressions. One of the judgments about inappropriate places is that

(1) Li Zhiwen:

A symposium of alumni representatives will be held at 8: 00 am on February 5, 65438 in the school conference room to discuss the 80th anniversary celebration. We decided to invite you to attend, hoping to get ready and remember to come on time.

I am here to convey

welcome

Chongwen middle school Alumni Association

165438+ October 20th

A.①③④ B.②⑤⑥ C.①④⑥ D.②④⑤

Analysis:

1c (a. "Longevity" is generally only used for children, not for the elderly. B I hope that it is inappropriate for my mother to be "always young and beautiful". D. The word "winning or losing is a matter for parents of soldiers" is too big to be used here. Although please is used in item (a), the tone is still very heavy. B. The "take" used in item is imperative mood. C. the project "how" is provocative. 3 (change "come" to "go", "decide" to "have to" and "consult" to "discuss" 4 135 (① delete "very suitable for you"; ③ "Newborn calf" was changed to "epigenetic, student"; Change "local" to "local") 5C. ("Youyou" is a derogatory term. 6B。 Item 7B(A) is a complete reprimand and accusation, which will not have a good effect; Item c also has a reproachful tone, and the effect is not good; It is impolite to call others by their first names. The word "decision" is impolite. ⑥ Use colloquial style, which does not meet the stylistic requirements of the invitation letter)