Understand excellent composition

In normal study, work and life, everyone will come into contact with composition to some extent. Composition requires a complete text structure, and endless composition should be avoided. I believe writing a composition is a headache for many people. The following is my excellent composition, for reference only, and I hope it will help everyone.

After the spring breeze, the excellent composition 1 has a poetic association. I walked in the garden, looking for the true meaning and proverbs of life in nature.

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Go out of the garden and walk alone on the path where grass and wild flowers are in full bloom. Stay for a while, close your eyes gently and feel everything around you! A breeze blowing, you can smell the fragrance of flowers and plants, but also mixed with some smell of earth. The leaves are also trembling slightly, which is to feel the comfort of nature!

Towards the field of spring, everything is lush and quiet, as if waiting for something. Occasionally, I heard a bird screaming into the sky, and nothing else! Only the sound of wheat seedlings rubbing against each other after the wind blows. Looking around, the green fields are boundless, and I am the only one here. Suddenly, all the boredom in my mood disappeared. Because people are so small in nature, I should not consider the troubles of ordinary people here at this moment, but should enjoy it to the fullest and enjoy the truth, beauty and happiness endowed by nature.

Now, further on, we come to the valley, and the newly thawed stream seems to be flowing slowly, which is different from summer. Walking along the stream, I found the pond. The water was clear, and the small fish swam around as if whispering something. I really envy their freedom and comfort. I shouted "hello" to the depths of the valley and heard the same echo.

Night soon fell, and the sun tried to let out the last ray of sunshine, but failed to wait for me to go home, so it left me the darkness. I suddenly realized that nature makes the four seasons have spring, summer, autumn and winter, and the sun divides the day into morning, noon and dusk. The same is true of people's life from childhood to old age, but they can't be reborn. How important it is to seize youth and every morning to enrich your life!

Being close to nature makes me feel relaxed, and it also makes me feel something and taste the true meaning of life in nature.

Feeling excellent composition 2 At the moment when I opened my eyes at birth, I saw a kind face at first sight, felt the touch of a pair of warm hands for the first time, and filled my stomach with my mother's milk for the first time, silently and shapelessly.

This is mother's language.

Every mother has never done anything earth-shattering, but they are great and show their love for us in ordinary little things.

When we were young, we only knew how to play, no matter whether we were full or not, because my mother was always with us, afraid that we would fall, slip and hurt ourselves. My mother's love for me was expressed in silent language.

The memory of childhood has been lost in my mind, but it is still fresh now, because many things that we thought we would never remember in our lives are engraved in our hearts in the days when we gradually forget them.

My mother is not tall, but she works harder than my father. No matter at home or outside, she is working hard. She has to make up lessons after school in winter. When it was cold and dark, my mother came to pick me up. While I was making up lessons, he was waiting outside the door. The wind can be heard in the room from time to time, but my mother is speechless.

I used to hate my mother picking me up from school because she was not tall and dressed simply. I'm afraid my classmates will laugh at her for picking me up. I never said a word to her. I thought it would be snowy and slippery, so she wouldn't come again. But when I leave school, I can always see my mother.

Now, I know how ignorant and vain I am. I know my attitude towards my mother. I know that she didn't say anything because she was in pain.

The cold weather didn't stop her from loving me, and the bad attitude didn't reduce her love for me. This is my mother's love for me.

Even though my mother is not tall and looks beautiful, her love is high and beautiful! !

Feeling a good life is like a cup of bitter wine, which is trivial, but if you drink this cup of bitter wine, it is not difficult to find the sweetness and softness contained in it. Those perfect, beautiful and sweet things can't be obtained without overcoming the difficulties of life; The joy after creation cannot be felt without wind and rain. You will find that life is full of many beauties, and these beauties are not external, but internal, and the internal beauty is the real beauty.

I have read a story before: a young man from other places bought a can of drinks that he had never seen before on the train, and repeatedly "studied" it for a long time, but he didn't understand how to open it. At this time, a woman who had just finished drinking water next to her opened another can of the same drink in front of the young people. She smiled at the young man and put the drink on the table. The young man nodded, opened the bottle and painted a gourd ladle. Although the story is not long, it is also beautiful. The woman hinted at the young man with one of her actions. There seems to be a beautiful flower on the woman's head, which reads "Helping others".

I also saw a story on TV: A woman picked some fruits in front of an old woman's fruit stall and went home, only to find that she was "a short slip makes a long regret" and mistakenly gave her fifty dollars and five dollars. Just as she was like "ants on hot bricks-running around", she heard a burst of eager footsteps and knocking at the door. She opened the door and looked listlessly. It turned out to be the old woman selling fruit! I saw that she eagerly put forty-five dollars into the woman's hand and said, "I'm really sorry. I am too old to see clearly at the moment. It took several minutes to figure out what happened. You must be in a hurry! " After a pause, she added, "You can't take less what you need, and you can't take less what you shouldn't, or you will lose the trust of others!" "Say that finish, grandma gradually disappeared in front of women ... Although this grandmother is very ordinary, her heart is very beautiful. I realized her excellent qualities from her words and deeds ... beauty is everywhere in the world. As long as you look carefully, you will find that there is not only external beauty, but also internal beauty, which is the beauty of the soul!

Life is like the sea, with myriad changes, and life is like mountains and rivers. Life is beautiful, as long as you feel it with your heart.

I once saw a story: God called three mortals to himself and asked them to answer why they came into this world. The first man said, "I came to this world to enjoy the happiness that life has given me." The second man said, "I came to this world to bear the pain that life has given me." The third man said, "I came to this world to bear the pain and enjoy the happiness brought by life." Finally, God gave the first two people 50 points, and the third person 100 points. Everyone can see that this story shows that life is intertwined with bitterness and joy. I just don't think so. Life is painful, it is true, but there will be more happiness. The ancients said: "If the sky is to fall on the Sri Lankan people, we must first suffer their minds, work hard on their bones and muscles, starve their bodies and skin, and empty their bodies." The pain that life makes you suffer is a kind of exercise for you. After this storm, you will see a rainbow. At this time, you will find that compared with this rainbow, those storms are so insignificant. Life is beautiful, as long as you feel it with your heart.

But what kind of life do I want? This problem has been bothering me for a long time. Finally found the answer in the vast history. I want to be like Tao Yuanming, "Building a house is in a humanistic environment, and there are no chariots and horses." I want to be like Li Bai. "The son of heaven doesn't get on the boat and claims to be Brewmaster." I want to be Wei, "leaning alone in Mizhu, I play the pipa and hum a song." Isn't it wonderful to live a free and chic life like them?

Life is beautiful, as long as you feel it with your heart. May you and I reach the golden coast in that golden boat.

Feeling excellent composition 5 growth is a song, simple and tortuous, with movement and quietness, joy and sadness; Growth is a process. When we are lucky enough to open our eyes and come into this world, we begin to grow. From ignorance to erudition, from innocence to profundity, we have arranged endless stories.

In the morning, when I woke up, the dew waved to me and told me a wonderful story. At night, when I was sleeping, the stars winked at me and painted a wonderful world for me. Dewdrops and stars awakened my sleeping memories and weaved my colorful childhood dreams. c

I carefully tied my dream to a white kite and flew with me. ...

Kite took me slowly to towards the distant, and my childhood gradually left me. I have ushered in a dream season-flower season.

In the morning, when I wake up, the petals smile at me and listen to me sing a sweet song; At night, when I was sleeping, the moon came to me and listened to me about the beautiful world. Petals, the moon, constitute my beautiful fantasy, weave my youth, that picturesque dream.

I sow the seeds of hope in the green fields. On the criss-crossing road, we often feel that there is no way to go and we are very confused when facing life. We must clearly know that we are the masters of fate and the helmsman of our souls.

Staring at life is brilliant, youth is a beautiful grassland, and the sunshine of life is so brilliant.

After several ups and downs, we finally ushered in the dawn of a poetic dream.

Yesterday, quietly passed away with memories; Today's paddle is in our hands; Tomorrow, it is shining and looking forward to us!

Feel the excellent composition 6 Go to Qiu Lai in the spring of nature, let us cultivate and harvest; The fine weather in nature has given us a rich life; Nature's blue sky and white clouds, green mountains and green waters make us relaxed and happy; Nature is the home on which human beings live. Being kind to it will naturally bring us infinite warmth.

Look at the clouds around Huangshan Mountain, and the products are calm and serene; Visit the beautiful landscape of Guilin and lament the wonders of nature; Standing in the tulip field, I felt the beauty of flowers; Wandering in the Nordic Strait, I know the magnificence of the world. These unrepeatable beauties are great wealth given to us by nature.

Nature's works are everywhere, and even the smallest details can give us a beautiful enjoyment. Get up in the morning, open the window, enter the room with the wind of sunshine, brush your cheeks, give you a leisurely look at the sun from a distance, feel the brightness and warmth of the sun, and start a new day with a good mood. Looking at the bright sunshine shining on the leaves at noon, the leaves are bright green, the green grass drives away the anxiety in the heart, and the cicada's chirping can't destroy this beautiful noon. Open the window at night, experience the cool night wind different from the morning wind, blow away the fatigue of the day and feel a refreshing coolness. Look up at the deep blue sky and experience the beauty of the twinkling stars.

The beauty of nature does not stop there. A tree, a bird, a fish, all have their own unique charm, or tall and straight, or lively, or smart. Even the same species has its own characteristics. Every move of animals is quite individual, and the posture of plants is also different, full of the tension of life.

The misty white fog surrounds the mountains, the hazy sunshine reflects the streams, the towering ginkgo trees are tall and lush, and the songs of birds resound through the valleys. Dear mountain hermits, I finally understand why you don't care about the noise of that city. The scenery here is so intimate and mysterious, and the sound here is so real and imaginative. Amazing nature, what kind of air power do you use to draw such beautiful and unique scenery and write such beautiful and cheerful tunes?

Feeling excellent composition 7 As time goes by, I am on pins and needles.

Looking at the rows of black cars at the school gate, I am very anxious. How I wish he wouldn't come! I can't remember clearly what the teacher said on the platform. In fact, I don't listen at all. I looked out of the window again. Fortunately, he didn't come. I breathed a long sigh of relief ... when the deadly bell rang, I grabbed my schoolbag and ran out of the classroom and plunged into the boundless rain curtain. Rain poured on me quickly from overhead, but I'm glad he didn't come. Looking back at the school gate, the students got into the warm and spacious car one by one, and the sound of motor gradually drowned my thoughts ... "Son!" A thunder woke me up from my dream. This familiar voice ... no! Look inside, here he comes! He has an old umbrella in his hand, an old man's bike. The rust on the bike is as irregular as the wrinkles on his face. He has a smile on his face. Although he is very kind, I feel uncomfortable all over. "Dad is late, sorry, take an umbrella quickly, and Dad will take you home." He said slowly. Car after car passed by me, and I felt that my classmates in the car must be staring at him and his worn-out bike with disdain. My face felt burning pain ... he seemed to know something, took out a worn-out five-dollar bill from his pocket and handed it to me carefully. "I have to leave early. Go home by car. " Say that finish, get on the bus and disappear into the rain with the sound of "creaking, creaking". Where he stood, there were only many raindrops and two cigarette butts still smoking. I know he never smokes ... a stream of heat comes to my mind. Some people say that handstand can prevent tears from flowing out, but my tears are out of control and I am very confused. He is my father! Poverty cannot change the affection between father and son!

I flew forward to catch up with my father and hugged him tightly. Two fiery hearts melted everything. ...

Feeling Excellent Composition 8 Feeling Beautiful Class 7 of Jiaoba Middle School in Wuchuan County, Guizhou Province (2) Gou Linbo Xiaolin, a sophomore, was a lively and cheerful child when he was a child. He was one of the best students in his class when he was in middle school. His friends worship him, and adults praise him, and he feels proud. I always like to go to the mountains to enjoy the beautiful scenery, roll happily on the lawn, bathe in the river and listen to birds singing in the forest. His friends are playing happily, and he himself is very happy. Time flies, and the six-year-old pupil has already lived.

In junior high school, Kobayashi began to indulge, perhaps because of God's arrangement. He made some idle friends, gradually his grades plummeted, and his classmates no longer got along with him. Kobayashi, who has always been admired, began to know that he was left out in the cold. He also wanted to find his former self, but he couldn't. His heart has been taken away by those bad temptations. He thinks he will always be a loser. I'll never find my old confidence again.

On this day, depressed, he came to the mountain again. This time, he had no companions and was alone. Recalling the past, he shed tears sadly. The decline of his grades, the neglect of his classmates and the reproach of his parents made him no longer in the mood to listen to birds and rivers singing to him. He lay quietly on the lawn and fell asleep sadly. After a while, I don't know what happened. He never plays with his friends again. Gradually, he came together with some like-minded people and devoted himself to his study. He adhered to the study plan made by his classmates, got rid of his previous bad habits and improved his grades. In the later days, he became more and more confident in himself. Sure enough, many things happen. His grades are among the best in his class. He won many awards and was admitted to a key high school with excellent results. On this day, confident Kobayashi came to the mountain with his friends. Everything is the same as before, except that everyone was frolicking, and now he is writing down the scenery here with all his heart, and Xiaolin, who has been praised by his friends, is happier. Now he is listening attentively to the singing of birds and the chorus of rivers! Xiao Lin discovered the beauty here again.

There are all kinds of creatures in nature, but they are all very attractive. They are small and big. If you communicate with nature, you can not only relax, but also do your best.

I miss the grass behind my house! At that time, my family had not moved. The grass behind became another home where I could relax when I was a child. Once, I quarreled with my parents because of a trivial matter. I ran to the grass in the back crying. There is also a big tree over there, and I ran to it at once to tell my grievances. At that time, in my eyes, she was an understanding mother, and all the flowers around her were my brothers and sisters. They seem to understand my words and my dissatisfaction. The leaves of the grass are crooked, the flowers hang down, and even the branches of the trees fall off, looking listless. They seem to say: "Your grievance is our grievance, and your happiness is also our happiness;" You cry, we cry, you laugh, we laugh. " Hearing this, I immediately dried my tears and showed a bright smile. At this time, the backbone of the grass stood up again, the flowers smiled again and the branches stood up again. I am very happy and have a good time with them.

Ah! Happy time always passes so fast, and it gets dark before you know it. Mom and dad came to see me. When I left, I said to them, "This is our secret. Don't tell anyone! I will play with you again tomorrow. " My mother looked around and there was no one around. She asked me, "Who are you talking to?" I said, "It's a secret." "Good you naughty boy!" Mom said.

I miss the grass behind my house! Where you can relax and do your best. I love them!

Feel the excellent composition 10 tells you a good news: after several months of hard training, our school choir participated in the chorus competition of primary and secondary schools in the whole region and won the first prize.

That day, we finished dinner early, got on the car rented by the school and set off for Daliang to participate in the competition. We are the first program, and all the students have a little rabbit in their hearts, jumping wildly. It's time for us to go on stage. Everyone took a deep breath and smiled. Maybe the game is so important that the teachers are a little nervous. After we stood in position, the teacher waved and the beautiful sound of the piano resounded through the audience. Our voices are all beautiful and won applause from the audience. The second song "Ideal Wings" is a multi-voice chorus song. We rehearsed for three months in order to sing well. I began to sing, and the beautiful voice and melody calmed the audience. At the end, the melodious lead melody accurately resounded through the audience. I know that the big stones in everyone's hearts have finally been put down.

Later, we watched several programs. The exciting moment has finally arrived. Listen, when the host announced the second and third prizes, we were already very nervous. "Lecong Primary School _ _ _ _ first prize!" Hearing this sentence, we couldn't restrain our excitement and jumped three feet for joy. Looking at the gold medal, I felt deeply in my heart: how much suffering and sweat have we suffered for this first prize? We go out early and come back late every day, and practice our basic skills hard in the music room. Every sound, every word, has been practiced thousands of times. On holidays, people watch TV with the air conditioner on, so we practice the melody again and again at school. However, no matter how hard and tired you are, it is worth it, because today's honor!

When we walked out of the performing arts center, the sky seemed brighter than usual, and the birds seemed to sing more happily!

Looking at the photos we took when we came back in triumph, maybe you will ask, "What did you get besides the first prize?" I think I will definitely tell you: "We also understand a truth: no pains, no gains!" " "

Feel the excellent composition 1 1 When I didn't know what youth was, I heard a lot of words about describing youth, for example, youth is priceless. At that time, I only knew that there were two kinds of priceless, one was worthless and the other could not be measured by value.

When I first entered middle school, I began to sigh with my own personal feelings that youth is priceless and immeasurable. I started my junior high school life with the excitement of youth and wearing a full shirt. Youth is beautiful and full of vitality. Later, I realized that it takes a little effort to become a youthful appearance.

Spring is the season of sowing. If we sow a seed, we will reap a reward. Youth is the season to show you and me. If we radiate a bright spot, we can reap a joy.

Youth is our indomitable capital. A person without youth can never compare with us. Because we have youthful vigor and vitality.

Youth needs courage, self-confidence, hard work and unity. Need love. If youth loses courage, self-confidence, hard work, unity and love, then our world will lose its luster and glory.

On May 4th, 90 years ago, our great patriotic youth launched a great May 4th Movement. They fully demonstrated the great revolutionary spirit and strength of contemporary youth. What's more, we young people who are in a beautiful and peaceful era?

Although we can't go to the revolution and struggle as vigorously as they do, we can use my own revolutionary history to show the vigor and vitality of our young people in the 2 1 century.

Over the past 30 years, great changes have shocked the world. The credit lies in reform. For hundreds of years, all the difficulties disappeared, and China rose from innovation. With the progress of science and technology in China, the economy has developed rapidly. With the rapid integration of China and the world, the country pays more and more attention to the cultivation of our youth. It has created many big stages for us to show the vitality of my young people now, and all kinds of preferential policies are available. Encourage us to take risks.

I hope we young people who are full of vigor and vitality can do our best in this golden age. Make contributions to national construction.

What is life?

Life is the basis of the existence of all things, representing the activity ability of living things. Whether it is a leaf, a flower, a bird or a tree seedling, it is alive.

Life is also a letter. You have written a half letter, so you should continue to write it. Life is still a song, a song that is only sung halfway but not finished. We should keep singing. ...

I thought I had always understood the true meaning of life's pain and refused to change at all. It was not until I saw the birds flying south and the leaves withered by the roadside that I realized that the greatest pain in life is the opposite migration, which is a frequent and helpless reincarnation.

Life, like summer flowers, is an instantaneous flame on the horizon.

Everyone has his own life. You can make use of it to achieve great things, or you can waste it. No one can describe its face, but its footsteps can be heard all over the world. Neither light nor darkness can change its pace.

When the bud blooms warm petals in the spring breeze, when the baby cries loudly in the delivery room to report to the world, he walks quietly, and laughter can't stop him.

When the yellow leaves fall in the cold wind, when the dying old man scans the world around him with nostalgic eyes, he still walks calmly and silently, and sighs can't stop him.

He is generous, you don't have to beg. He always gives you everything that belongs to you.

If you cherish him, he will grow a shade behind you and bear heavy fruits.

If you ignore him, he will turn into a light smoke and disappear without a trace.

Life is precious, no one can predict its length. As long as we grasp him well, a short moment will become eternity!

Let's cherish life and let him compose a magnificent song of life!

Feel the excellent composition 13 Time flies, time flies, I am growing up day by day, and I am also experiencing many things, including crying, laughing and sadness. Life has given me too much insight, and I am learning to change bit by bit.

cry

I still remember thinking that I could get good grades in a mid-term exam. I was full of confidence, but I was extremely disappointed when the test paper was handed out. I looked at the test paper and cried. I'm at a loss. What should I do?

After a while, I just stood there. When the teacher saw me, he leaned down and said, "It's no big deal! I understand how you feel now. You may be too proud to pass the exam. Maybe you thought you should have done well in the exam, but as a result, you failed. Pride will make you fall behind. Think for yourself! "

I thought it over for a while. What the teacher said is right. I was too proud to write it. I always thought I would do well in the exam and overestimated myself. It's okay to cry. This is a lesson that God taught me, which will benefit me all my life.

laugh

A week later, we simulated an exam. I calmed down and thought about it before I started to write. I can't be proud anymore. I have to refuel, and I can't fail the exam again. I thought carefully about every question and finished it in a short time, but I still didn't give up and checked it over and over again. As a result, I won the first place in my class with excellent results.

When my classmates applauded me, I smiled happily.

Therefore, I am no longer timid! No more fear!

I began to face the setbacks in my life with a smile. I will fight bravely and rush, and I will work hard! Because my life is still very long, my future is no longer a dream!

Feel the excellent composition 14 Nature is like an unfathomable bottomless pit, and you never know what its deepest part is.

A few days ago, I made an appointment with some friends to climb the western hills and finally climbed to the top of the mountain. Just as we were about to relax, we suddenly found a golden flower in the gap between two rocks opposite. "What a strong little flower!" My friends and I can't help but admire from the heart. Such a small life can grow on a cliff. I stood there motionless, staring at the flower, and I couldn't help admiring its vigorous vitality again.

I remember when I was in the third grade, my mother enrolled me in Cambridge English class. I went to see it several times before, and I was in a good mood, so I didn't argue with my mother. But gradually, I realized the difficulty of Cambridge English, so I backed out. Not only did she have no spirit in class, but she also cried and asked her mother to refund her money. But my mother didn't appreciate it and said categorically, "No, since you signed up at the beginning, you must finish reading it, otherwise, you will be spurned by others sooner or later!" " After listening to this sentence, I blushed like a persimmon and stood there speechless. A few weeks later, a new classmate came to our class. She has a poor foundation, but she works hard. No matter what topic she doesn't know, she always asks the teacher and never leaves early. I was very moved by his behavior, and I kept silent about the refund.

Our life is also a flower, but where it blooms is entirely our choice.

The reason why the eagle has strong wings is that it has been honed countless times. The reason why the eagle flies high is that it is still moving straight towards its goal even in the wind and rain. The reason why the eagle can hold its head high and stand proudly on the top of the mountain is because it has worked hard, seen the beautiful scenery in front of it and accepted the eyes of the world with peace of mind.

I want to be an eagle when I grow up. Have a broad mind to accommodate the blue sky, don't complain about others, don't complain about others, don't be negative and sad, face a new tomorrow, a new journey and a new growth with full enthusiasm and strong thirst for knowledge, and an optimistic and positive attitude that is more frustrated and more brave!

I want to be an eagle when I grow up. Treat gains and losses with a peaceful heart. When people grow up, they will inevitably lose something I like and love, but so what? As long as we treat today with our heart, I believe tomorrow will be better. If we let go of yesterday, we will fly highest!

I want to be an eagle when I grow up. Bravely challenge yourself to believe in yourself, don't doubt your ability, but try to make yourself stronger; Nothing is impossible, but we should take diligence as our wings; Always believe in one thing, work hard towards the goal, face the new challenging growth with a smile and fly farther!

I think if I can be a bird flying in the sky, I must be an eagle. Even if I work ten times harder than others, even if I suffer ten times more pains and tribulations than others, I will firmly wave my wings, endure the pain and fly upward for the sake of ideals and freedom. ...

In this way, I took "no reason to complain" as the reason for not complaining, followed the eagle's footsteps, followed the eagle's back, imitated the eagle's spirit, and studied harder and harder.

I am an eagle, and the eagle is struggling to fly in the heavy rain with tears.

I am an eagle, and the eagle spreads its wings and flies to the dream spring.

I am an eagle, and the eagle will eventually stand at the peak of the world and look back at her hard and fulfilling growth in the past. ...