Is "devote yourself to passionate years and build a happy campus" a sick sentence?

This is a slogan on campus, which belongs to the slogan. The sentence is concise and clear.

Such slogans are more like poems than poems, and there are omissions in the sentences. For example, let's devote ourselves to the passionate years and write it as passionate years, omitting the words "let's", "arrived" and "left". This slogan is used as a verb, with the word "rang" and the object of "rang" is "we". But it can be omitted here. If you write it, it will be very cumbersome. The second half of the sentence is the same.

To sum up, I don't think it is a sick sentence.