Compositions with full marks in the Chinese language college entrance examination in the past five years, no narratives required

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The only full score essay in Shanghai’s 2008 College Entrance Examination

Them

At the end of the city, there are no bustling streets and shining neon lights; at the end of the city, there are only dilapidated shantytowns with people who have experienced the hardships of life; at the end of the city, There is a group of people like them.

What should I call them? Children of migrant workers? Farmer's children? Or the second generation of migrant workers? No, I don’t want to call them by these cold names. I want to call them by their earthy nicknames, hold their little hands, and get closer to their lives...

They grew up in their hometown. In the green mountains and green waters, pure souls are heading and jointing in the fields. In the wind in the mountains and fields, they ran and looked forward to it. The wind blew from the fields and into the city. For their livelihood and future, they followed their parents to the city and took root at the end of the city. So my eyes, accustomed to green mountains and clear waters, encountered high-rise buildings and busy traffic for the first time. They don't know how to cross the six-lane road, and their little fingers can't count the number of floors in the office building. The prosperous modern civilization has never brought them any happiness, but this time, it left a deep mark on their hearts.

They picked up their schoolbags and carefully integrated into city life. However, in the strange eyes of "city people", I understood for the first time the difference between a household registration and a temporary residence permit. They are all parents’ treasures! But he prematurely took on a burden that did not belong to his age.

When they get home from school, they prepare a simple dinner while their parents are still working at the construction site or market; they wake up at midnight, and in their tearful eyes, the starry sky in the city is not as bright as in their hometown; they quietly make a wish, hoping that they will work tomorrow Children's primary school will not be closed down because they cannot pay the electricity bill...

However, I can see their growth in their growing bodies. I remember when a reporter asked a child from a migrant school if she would return to her hometown after completing her studies, the little girl said without hesitation: Of course, I will definitely go back! At that moment, I almost shed tears for their growth.

I remember their childish declarations during the Spring Festival Gala that year: "Our school is small, but our grades are not bad." !" They gradually matured, said goodbye to yesterday's shyness, and began to welcome the new day.

Although, they are still worried about the small tuition fees; although, the school still cannot pay the water and electricity bills; although, there are still many systems that are not perfect enough... Although there are many "although", but , only one "but" is enough, a lot of attention has turned to them, and they are growing vigorously.

The sun rises from the horizon, lighting up the end of the city and lighting up their lives.

They will eventually become us.

Comments from the marking teacher:

The full score essay has five major advantages. First of all, the essay realistically depicts the living conditions of the children of migrant workers, including the unnatural and unadaptable experience of moving from rural to urban areas. , and then their mentality gradually matures, making people feel that they are a real group; secondly, the text of the composition is very smooth, and it can be seen that the candidates have a certain reading accumulation, but they do not show off, and they appropriately express their emotions and The vision, text and theme match well; thirdly, overall, the essay expresses the author’s sympathy, concern and hope for his peers, and his words are the reflection of the title of the essay; fourthly, the description of this article is very Delicate, "I can't count the number of floors in the office building with my little fingers"; finally, the key point of the article is to write about the changes in the children of migrant workers, "They will eventually become us." The candidates did not complain blindly, but wrote about the changes. and hope.

The 2008 Zhejiang Provincial College Entrance Examination full score essay "Feeling the Countryside"

At first I thought that the countryside was a paradise for fairy tales. It fades away from the glitz of the city and washes away the complexity of the world.

It may be Al on Van Gogh's canvas, with a pure blue sky like a mirror, a sea of ??flowers as gorgeous as oil paint, and the golden sunflowers growing seeds of hope under the nurturing of the sun; it may be the pastoral in Tao Qian's poems, where The story of the fairy couple is being interpreted in the mist, and the slanting sunlight is shining lightly, making it a leisurely stroll.

That is just the countryside in poems and paintings. When we truly enter the countryside and feel the countryside with our hearts, we will find that our countryside is experiencing pain. There is sunshine there too, and the sunshine is not warm but scorching the land with poison. Looking from a distance, the rickety figure on the land spends all his energy on this land day and night, in spring and autumn. He grew up on this land, and his sweat nourished this land; he learned to be strong on this land, and his footsteps solidified this land; he was born in the loess and returned to the loess, from generation to generation, endlessly. . The storm came, and his heart trembled like the swaying crops in the field. His tears crisscrossed his furrowed cheeks, like the water that flooded the field, spreading over his heart layer by layer and immersing his breath. Drought has come, and the crops are shaky like his skinny body. He can't see hope or a good harvest, and his chaotic eyes are dry and empty.

They also have moments of happiness, but this happiness seems so humble. Their greatest happiness is a good harvest. The plump grains are like jewels, and the corners of their eyes smile like crescent moons. The life they long for most is smooth weather, and they only want and only want such an ordinary life.

Will such a countryside disappoint us when we face such a picture? In fact, the countryside becomes more real because of this cruel beauty. When experiencing the countryside, don't always be a leisurely tourist. While appreciating its tranquility and purity, pay more attention to its pain, and give more understanding and compassion to its hard work.

Feel the countryside, feel the beating pulse of farming civilization, feel China’s most profound cry, feel the weight of that land, feel the blood and sweat soaked in that land; feel the simplest persistence and perseverance of Chinese farmers, feel The pain and helplessness experienced by Chinese farmers.

When we look at them with contempt, have we ever thought that it was they who gave us the hope of life with their blood and sweat?

Seeing how Chinese farmers have stood eternity in China’s history in the most humble posture, let us feel the countryside with our hearts!

Fujian College Entrance Examination Essay "Three Realms in Life"

Three people went into the store and each bought juice, coffee and mineral water because they each liked sweet, bitter and Sweet taste and light feeling.

Let us imagine that the three customers are of different ages, namely a young man, a middle-aged man and an old man. Then it should be the young people who like the sweetness, the middle-aged people who enjoy the sweet and bitter taste, and the old people who enjoy the light alcohol. Wouldn’t it be wonderful to apply these three flavors to life?

As we walk in the world, we all go through three stages: youth, middle age and old age. The transformation from youth to middle age and the weathering from middle age to old age are nothing more than the growth and aging of the body. The growth of mind, the gradual change of state of mind.

When I was young, I loved the sweet taste. Young people always like to use beautiful dreams to decorate the world. At this time, we are still simple and immature, burning ourselves in passion. We "young people don't know the taste of sorrow", we can be contentedly "pointing the country and inspiring words", we are wandering in the hope for the future, young and energetic, even though "we were like dirt and thousands of households"! Youth is a state of love for beauty, so many people have already emerged in their youth. The "Prince of Mathematics" Gauss was already famous all over the world when he was young; the young Ding Junhui challenged the world champion; the still immature Lang Lang was elegantly sending people the sweet music... When he was a boy, he did not worry and marched toward life with great vigor. . In middle age, I have known and tasted the taste of sorrow, so I like the feeling of bitterness and sweetness. Life at this point is like a cup of fragrant tea, we discover the sweetness in the bitterness. This is another realm. In middle age, when career and life are mostly at their peak, many of the helplessness in life have been fully understood, and a more mature and steady perspective on the world has emerged. "If you understand the past, you can't criticize it; if you know what's coming, you can pursue it." Middle age is a period of carrying forward the past and opening up the future.

Carrying the young and bearing the old, middle age is another period of responsibility. Only coffee, with its bittersweet taste, can highlight the taste and charm of middle age.

When you reach old age, you may have tasted all the flavors of life. The sweetness of helping each other, the fragrance of dreams, the sorrow and joy of responsibility, the bitterness of falling into trouble, the bitterness of burning bridges when crossing rivers... What did they mix into in the end? But it's a bottle of mineral water. Just like white, it is actually made up of seven colors. The highest state of life is when one's heart returns to peace after going through many storms. The storms of the world cannot make a single ripple in my heart. This is true maturity, watching the ebb and flow of the world, the flowers blooming and withering, with a pair of truly unfazed eyes. Only in such a leisurely state of mind can one taste the light but rich feeling in the clear water.

Life must be like this, drifting away. There is a saying that when a young man sees mountains, he sees them as mountains, and when he sees water, he sees them as water; in middle age, he sees mountains as no more mountains, and when he sees water, he sees them as not water; when he is old, he sees mountains as mountains, and water as water. This is true. Life is a cycle that goes from simplicity to complexity, and then back to calmness and simplicity. What we have to do is to enjoy every taste, feel every state, and in the process, purify the meaning of life.

Comments

Set the three people in the test materials as a young man, a middle-aged man, and an old man in order, and then describe the different "flavors" experienced in the three stages of life. This is the perspective from which the author grasps the material as a whole and conceives ideas.

For new material composition, although it is not mandatory to quote the material at the beginning of the article, the beginning of the article should be close to the material. The first paragraph summarizes the material from the cause and effect relationship, and the second paragraph shows your own idea ("assumption"). In this way, the text is clear and easy for readers to accept.

In terms of content, it is rare that this candidate is a teenager, but he also has some experience of the "taste" of middle-aged and old people; naturally, the author got this from observation and reading. (Yu Faliang)

When I was middle-aged, I had already tasted the taste of sorrow, so I liked the feeling of bitterness and sweetness. Life at this point is like a cup of fragrant tea, we discover the sweetness in the bitterness. This is another realm. In middle age, when career and life are mostly at their peak, many of the helplessness in life have been fully understood, and a more mature and steady spirit has emerged.

Excellent Essay of the 2008 Hubei College Entrance Examination 1: With every gesture

When my grandfather was dying, my grandma spent the whole night chatting with him in a low voice, or looking at him, as if time had stopped.

When I was a child, I loved going to my grandpa’s house. Grandpa knows a lot of interesting things, and grandma’s cooking skills are superb. Whenever my grandpa finished a section of his talk with great joy, both grandson and grandpa would get hungry. So grandpa crept into the kitchen, picked up a few pieces of freshly fried chicken steak while grandma was not around, and hurried back to share it with me, like a child. There were several times when my grandpa was "snatched" by my grandma, and she had no choice but to be beaten by her. Then we obediently set the table and prepared for dinner. At that time, we were so happy.

Sometimes it takes grandma a long time to buy groceries. Grandpa was so anxious that he couldn't sit still and kept looking at the window, hoping to see grandma. But when he learned that grandma had traveled a long way to buy the authentic beef we loved to eat, grandpa smiled again.

However, my grandfather later went to another world that he could never touch again.

The first New Year’s dinner without grandpa was at a hotel. Grandma came, but she was not very happy. It turned out that grandpa’s was missing from the tableware prepared for everyone. But when the waiter brought a chair, grandma refused and thanked her.

Grandma said: "The old man told me in his dream last night that he also wanted to eat something. If you are all filial and remember to order what he wants to eat, he should be happy. However, the old man said that he would like to eat with us. It’s enough for me to squeeze into a chair and sit..." Grandma was a simple person, but her words made me remember them better than any other famous book.

Grandpa and grandma always exude something, something in every gesture that I can’t put into words, but I always want to be close to.

So, even on the Qingming Festival before the college entrance examination, I still insisted on climbing high mountains, visiting my grandpa’s grave, and communicating with him silently.

Grandma is attentive and carefully sets out a small table of exquisite and delicious meals in front of the cemetery. At this time, grandma always cries.

I know that grandma has heard others say that people in the other world really want to eat the food offered, but their throats are only as big as the eye of a needle. Grandma would be very sad when she thinks of grandpa like that. And the paper money that grandma folded was so thick that she couldn't burn it all. If those flying ashes can bring my grandmother's thoughts with me, then I think those are the most beautiful love letters.

The small actions and conversations between grandpa and grandma made me witness their persistence. The corners of my eyes are often moist, perhaps because, after being in the hustle and bustle for a long time, I finally touched a string that has not been plucked in my heart for a long time.

And I always try hard to convey something with every gesture. Is it admiration for love, or gratitude for love?

Comment: This article has a good selection of materials. It selects small actions and small conversations between grandpa and grandma. It may seem trivial and ordinary, but it is very life-like, permeating the emotions of the characters, and describing it very vividly. It captures the mutual affection between the loving elderly couple. The author has careful observation and profound experience of life, so the article is emotional.

Sichuan 2007 College Entrance Examination Full Score Essay: The Definition of an Excellent Life

Every life is like a ring, which is hollow and incomplete, but connected from beginning to end without losing perfection. We choose our own life, our own way of life, poor or rich, live ourselves, live our own lives...

Gu Shuli

"Songs on the Wangsheng Tower"

1. Stories within stories

A young man is trekking on the road of life. During a boat trip, the boat was in danger and he was forced to abandon one of his rucksacks. Among beauty, health, integrity, agility, talent, money, and honor, he finally chose to give up integrity.

So the boat continued to move forward.

2. The heaviness behind the story

When I see such a story, I feel vaguely indescribable sadness. Yes, sad.

For the backpack that is easily given up, and even more for the young people who easily give up "integrity".

In other words, for all those who ignore "integrity". I don’t know if these people think that honesty and trustworthiness have nothing to do with themselves, but I know that a life that refuses integrity is definitely not an excellent life.

3. Life outside the story

Once upon a time, people began to use strong walls to "safely" imprison themselves in a small cement cage. To prevent what? Or is it to hide something? When people cruelly trample on the trust and friendship between people, have you ever thought about what makes people so suspicious and jealous? When people spin around in the reinforced concrete jungle to survive, will they worry that their eyes will one day turn into emotionless metal? When people wear elaborate masks and walk by with fake smiles, do they feel that something is missing in their lives?

Integrity! That abandoned rucksack.

4. Looking at life through stories

I took some time to flip through the newspapers a few days ago. There is news that those with poor personal credit will refuse to register a company, serve as a corporate legal person, or apply for senior management positions within three years.

Okay!

It seems that integrity is not always the forgotten character.

Kundera said in "The Unbearable Lightness of Life": The so-called life is the repeated giving and receiving of honesty, friendliness and trust.

My mother - an ordinary working woman and my idol - told me: Integrity is the foothold of life.

So, today I write here: Integrity is the fulcrum of life and the criterion for my conduct as a human being.

The so-called excellent life means being honest and trustworthy and loving life.

●Expert comments:

This article stands at the height of "life" and uses the method of combining fragments to express the importance of "integrity" to life, citing famous quotes, narrative examples, and examples. The famous sayings echo each other, promote each other's interaction, and successfully complete the "definition of an excellent life". The four subtitles of the article are cleverly named, and there are relatively clever internal connections between the subtitles, making the article seamless and without a sense of separation.

He has his own thinking on the definition of "excellent life", which reflects a certain degree of originality. It is not easy to write such an article in a short period of time.

Sichuan 2007 College Entrance Examination Full Score Essay: I am honest, I am beautiful

Honesty and trustworthiness are the fine traditions of our Chinese nation. For thousands of years, people have valued and respected integrity. The style of integrity is simple and mellow. The longer the history, the brighter the spirit of integrity and the greater China, filling China. She has long been integrated into the blood of our national culture and has become an indispensable and important part of the cultural gene.

However, in recent years, with the impact and cleanup of the market economy, people have found that integrity is fading and "money worship" is growing. "Profit" replaces virtue, integrity gives way to fraud. On the balance of life of many people, the sinking end is "health", "beauty", "agility", "talent", "money", "honor", and only "integrity" This end is raised high. Integrity has become lighter!

Not to mention the intrigues and treachery in the shopping mall; not to mention the hawkers in the market who are short-handed and passing off inferior goods; not to mention the black-heart rice sellers who mix dirty oil with old rice and tap water mixed with old rice. Methanol; Even if the weather is fine one day and you are in a good mood, you accidentally find a bulging wallet on the side of the road: Do you dare to pick it up? Stay! If this happened XX years ago, you would happily hand it to the policeman to win people's praise. But today, on the crowded street, I would say objectively, as soon as your hand touches the bag, Trouble begins.

This is true in the small environment, and there are many examples in the international environment. Look at Uncle Sam on the other side of the ocean. He regards integrity as nothing. If we want to engage in NMD, the Anti-Ballistic Missile Treaty is an obstacle. We tore it up without any discussion.

The trend of integrity will soon cease, and people of insight will sigh with regret.

However, we, the new century, the new youth, are slowly unfurling a flag. We write on the flag, I am honest and I am beautiful!

Adolescence is the golden period of life, the most true, beautiful and pure period in life. Integrity is the virtue that should not be ignored and is the most easily ignored. We need to hold our integrity high so that everyone can see it and be attracted by her warm light.

I have a strong premonition that in a more promising future, integrity will return to the market, to society, and to you and me. She is like a stream of living water, gradually infiltrating and penetrating into people's hearts; she is also like a ray of breeze, blowing across the fields and opening people's hearts. There, at that time, integrity replaces pretense, order replaces disorder, simplicity replaces complexity, warmth replaces indifference, and people bathe in the morning glow of integrity, and all benefit greatly.

So, take action, friends!

I am honest, I am beautiful; I am beautiful, I am proud!

●Expert comments:

The author of this article pays passionate attention to life, and picks up certain phenomena in life just right, and improves them step by step from small to large, from near to far. Expand layer by layer. The language is clean and neat, and the lines are full of strong emotion and heroism. It seems that as long as we pay attention to life enthusiastically and write about life passionately, it is possible to write good articles.

Sichuan 2007 College Entrance Examination Full Score Essay: Walking with Integrity

Someone once asked me, why can I make my business bigger?

——Answer: Nothing but one word——faith.

This is what "Superman Li" said in his heart when facing the microphone of a reporter from "Asia Weekly" in the CEO room of Cheung Kong Holdings. His heartfelt words, with the help of powerful radio waves, spread throughout the world and shocked our hearts.

Perhaps, another sentence that "Superman" did not say is: To be sincere to others is to believe in oneself.

...Once upon a time, I also had a period of time when I was lost.

Letter? I'm ashamed.

————The green mountains under the moon in the forest tonight are incomparable! She looks like a quiet girl like Juanjuan. Although she is bright and beautiful, she is not showy and coquettish. She has low eyebrows and drooped sleeves, and is solemnly decorated. I sat alone on the bluestone outside the forest, holding my head in my hands. I have no words.

I stopped talking and just lowered my head, looking at my results notice through misty eyes. Half a year of vanity and self-deception, half a year of exaltation and impatience, soaked this piece of paper with absurdity.

Suddenly, I remembered a sentence: Whoever is not sincere to fate will not believe in him. On the long road of life, on the arduous and faltering road of struggle, whoever does not leave the footprints of integrity in a down-to-earth manner will never get out of the vicious circle of insignificance and narrowness. The way of learning is free from hypocrisy and deception.

I don’t want to sing about autumn, but I am afraid that the flowers will fade away. People sigh in vain, but water flows forever. I don’t know if I have betrayed myself, or if my integrity is tired of me: before this hurdle in life, I stopped.

What a shame. Like a butterfly with broken wings, it flaps its remaining wings and dances in vain as it falls into the mud. In my mind, the image of my father’s hard work appeared: a tawny plain. On the horizon, one after another, there are earth walls more than a foot thick made of wooden rafters. The poplars, neem, and acacia trees soaring into the sky, with branches as thick as barrels and leaves as small as copper coins, flipped up and down in the wind, like a piece of heavenly music, reaching the ears of their fathers. They were bare-armed, whipping and shouting at the oxen, which were lumped together like mountains and rivers, and pulled the triangular plow. For this group of people who work hard to dig food from the loess soil left by their ancestors for generations, "sincerity and trust" are their lifeline.

If a farmer misses the land for a moment, he will miss the land for a year.

If a person does not believe in a moment, he will not believe in a lifetime.

...Inadvertently, it was as if a finger secretly penetrated into my heart, plucked the string in my heart that had not been touched in the past, and played a series of trills, like Xu Beihong's running music. The horse neighed in the wilderness, trembling like stars on Schubert's piano keys, as if standing on the top of the Himalayas, listening to the wind outside.

It was at this moment that I suddenly understood: --- Walk with integrity on the road of life.

●Expert comments:

This article is good at using poetic language to set off the atmosphere. The material is organized by others reflecting on themselves, by themselves thinking of others, and then by others observing themselves, "torturing" their own souls layer by layer, with a clear context. The article cleverly uses classical poetry and is good at shaping the artistic conception. "If a farmer misses the land for a while, he will miss a year for himself", "If a person does not believe in a moment, he will not believe in a lifetime" and other words are full of philosophy. It seems that improving the cultivation of classical Chinese is very beneficial to improving the writing level.

Sichuan 2007 College Entrance Examination Full Score Essay: Patient Wu Chengcheng’s Medical Report

Name: Wu Chengcheng

Gender: Male or Female

Age: Born in the 1960s or 1970s

Occupation: To be determined

Diagnosis method: combination of Chinese and Western methods

1. Inspection

Facial complexion: Nothing serious, just not blushing. Even after "adding insult to injury", his face did not change color. Eyes: The eyes lack flexibility and can only look sideways or towards "money". His eyes are cunning. Nose: The tip of the nose is turned up, the nostrils become enlarged, and the sense of smell is intermittent. You can only smell the atmosphere of officialdom and nobility, but not the atmosphere of poverty and poverty among the people. Tongue: Deterioration, inaccurate pronunciation, and a tendency for the shape of the tongue to become a spring. When you say "lie" (sāhuǎng), your pronunciation is clear, but when you say "truth" (zhēnhuà), your pronunciation is unclear and your enunciation is unclear.

2. Take the pulse

The pulse is heavy, fast, rapid, tight, slippery, and astringent... It is a typical sign of heart failure caused by palpitations and premature beats after bragging.

3. Perspective

1. The liver and lungs appear dark or even black. 2. There are signs of curvature of the spine, and the condition is characterized by the inability to straighten the waist.

4. Blood sample collection

The patient’s blood color was dark red. Blood molecules have various structures, including "talent", "appearance", "money", and "thinking". Among them, the first three are mostly present, but "faith" is lacking. There are almost no "sincerity" cells and platelets.

5. Gene Identification

After precise instrument testing, the patient’s genes have mutated. It is no longer possible to show which clan he is a descendant of, and the structure of "faithfulness, righteousness, and loyalty" has been destroyed. Although the genetic test cannot determine the ethnic group, his actions have a strong sense of feudal small farmers.

The symptoms include bending down after seeing five pecks of rice (of course, the problem with the spine has been found), intrigues, intrigues, poaching, and adding insult to injury.

6. Treatment methods

1. Blood transfusion: Inject a large amount of "humanistic" oxygen to replace the "money worship" carbon dioxide in the body that is harmful to health. 2. Ask yourself every morning and evening to see if your conscience is there. 3. Read a lot of essays to awaken their awareness of integrity.

7. Doctor’s advice

This case is not the first to be discovered and is very representative. Patients are advised to pay attention and avoid infecting each other.

Doctor (signature)

●Expert comments:

This article is novel in form and highly innovative. The article depicts the characteristics of people who have lost integrity from the outside to the inside through four methods: "inspection", "pulse feeling", "fluoroscopy" and "blood sample collection". It also implicitly reveals the characteristics of "lost integrity" through "gene identification". Reasons, "Treatment Methods" and "Doctor's Advice" put forward the basic methods of restoring integrity. The full text is in-depth and comprehensively explained from three aspects: what is it, why and how to do it. The thinking is clear, the language is witty, and there is no shortage of interesting words. A sentence that makes people think deeply can be regarded as a masterpiece.

Sichuan 2007 College Entrance Examination Full Score Essay: Keeping the Contract of the Soul

I am often moved to tears by the ancient man named Wei Sheng. "Wei Sheng made an appointment with a girl, but she didn't come for three days. When he encountered a flood, Wei Sheng hugged a pillar and died." Wei Sheng was such a lovely and persistent gentleman. For that agreement that may not be important, in order to protect the depths of his heart. He actually used his life to defend the contract he wrote to himself. I saw two shining words in him - integrity.

I often miss the ancient times, which was an era full of charisma. Behind the elegant demeanor of those gentlemen is a human structure supported by honesty, trustworthiness, and persistent beliefs. The strong man who said goodbye to the river and left, didn't he miss his homeland? Doesn't he know the dangers and dangers of going deep into the tiger's den? He went without hesitation, with determination, with loyalty to the king and loyalty to the oath. Didn't Lin Xiangru, who was holding Heshibi and making an impassioned speech in the palace of the King of Qin, not know the insidiousness and greed of the King of Qin? Before he set off, he had already made a promise to return the jade to Zhao! He followed a difficult path of fulfilling his promise and heroically defended the interests of the country and the immortal contract deep in his personal heart.

These are ancient stories. History and time may have polished them a bit and faded them. The hustle and bustle of the city and the bright shadow of neon lights have drowned the brilliance of human nature. We have to lament those lost qualities. sigh.

Those impetuous people who sing "Don't care about eternity, only care about what you once had" may have forgotten that marriage is a happy contract, and it is also a contract of the soul. Only by guarding it with your heart can you obtain the fruits of happiness. .

Those greedy people who think that "they have the right to use it and it will become invalid when it expires" may have forgotten the oath they made under the party's banner. It is a restraint on behavior and a straightforward belief. A person who can abandon his own beliefs will eventually be abandoned by society.

A soul that lacks restraint is empty and free, just like a soul that has lost its home, a tree that has lost its roots, and a river that has lost its source. It can only fall, wither, and live. Dry up...

A voice from the soul is shouting: Keep it - the contract of the soul: integrity!

●Expert comments:

This article makes full use of historical stories, cleverly selects certain phenomena in real life, and skillfully integrates books and life, from ancient times to the present. , using the past to satirize the present, using the present to contrast the past, with a rigorous structure. The penultimate paragraph embodies the author's profound thoughts and the beauty of reason; language such as "keep the contract of the soul" is full of poetic beauty; the use of parallelism to organize paragraphs reflects the beauty of momentum and eloquence. Therefore, how to make full use of the book knowledge and observed real life in composition is an important part of writing training.