English composition about myself

I am Zhang Ming from a worker's family. There are altogether six people in my family, my grandparents, my parents, my elder brother and I.

My grandparents are now retired and live in the countryside to enjoy their lives. My father, busy all year around, is a doctor in the Fourth Hospital of our city. My mother is not as busy as my father is; she is an editor of a newspaper. My brother, three years older than me, is now a hardworking university student whose major is Civil Engineering. As for me, I am a senior high school student and I will take the college entrance examination in two years, I hope that I can enter a good university .

This is my family, and we love each other very much.

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Hi ,my name is xx ,I'm a boy ,I 'm 10 years old .I study at xx school .I'm tall ,about 1.68. I like playing basketball.I 'm a member of school team .I'm good at basketball.I like English ,I think it's very interesting! And it's important to learn English .When I grow up ,I want to be a teacher ,beacuse I like children ,they are lovely.

This is me ,What about you ?