Autumn scenery's fourth grade composition

In study, work and life, everyone must have been exposed to composition. According to the characteristics of writing proposition, composition can be divided into propositional composition and non-propositional composition. I believe many people will find it difficult to write a composition. The following is 10 autumn scenery's composition carefully compiled by me for your reference, hoping to help friends in need.

Autumn scenery's fourth grade composition 1 teaching objectives

1, write the characteristics of autumn in a certain order, and the content should be specific.

2. Attention should be paid to arousing students' thoughts and feelings of loving nature and fully mobilizing students' enthusiasm for writing.

3. Cultivate students' observation and imagination by guiding them to observe, feel and express.

Teaching focus

1, guide students to write this exercise, and be sure to highlight the characteristics of autumn.

2. The statement should be fluent and coherent.

Teaching difficulties

Make students learn to "convey the spirit with form", and use rhetorical devices such as metaphor, personification and exaggeration to express the scenery as a living and emotional thing and write their own inner spirit.

teaching method

Observation method

teaching process

First, stimulate an interesting dialogue and introduce autumn:

Teacher: Students, the teacher said some words and poems. Students can guess which season it is: good years, you need to remember, the most are oranges, oranges, greens (the last half of the sentence indicates that the fruit is ripe), and moon cakes. Can you guess what season it is?

Health: Autumn.

Teacher: Good. Although the cool autumn has passed, it left a deep impression on us. Today, we follow the footsteps of autumn and start a composition about scenery.

Second, new funding.

1, the premise of writing autumn is to observe autumn carefully.

Teacher: We should choose a place we like as an observation point. The scenery of this place will have some obvious seasonal changes in autumn. What places did the students think of?

Health: Tianye Orchard Forest Park

Teacher: Well, these places will have different changes in autumn. The changes that have taken place need us to observe carefully and find its characteristics. How can we observe it to describe its characteristics?

Health: Look, listen, smell and touch.

Teacher: The students' answers are wonderful. The teacher writes on the blackboard (eyes-looking at the body-feeling cold hands-picking fruit mouth-tasting autumn (fruit) feet-stepping on fallen leaves ears-listening (fallen leaves, running water)). At the same time, we can also make a simple observation record, take photos or complete a sketch to find and record the footprints in autumn. When we approach autumn, we will definitely feel the coolness, colorful colors and harvest of autumn.

Master the method of describing autumn scenery.

(1) Learn to observe carefully, be good at discovering things that others have not discovered, and gradually develop the good habit of observing carefully.

The color of autumn-golden yellow

(2) When observing different scenery in a place, we should follow a certain order, such as: from top to bottom or from bottom to top, from far to near or from near to far, from all around to the center or from the center to all around, and so on.

Look! How beautiful are the clusters of maple leaves! At the moment, I can't help but think of Li Bai's poem "Stop and sit in the maple forest late, and the frost leaves are redder than the February flowers". Yes, maple leaves are like our palms and chicken feet. There are many pinion-like edges on the leaves, which makes the unique maple leaves more beautiful!

From a distance, those leaves are clusters, clusters, clusters, like intimate friends whispering. Red is like fire, pink is like chardonnay, yellow is like gold and green is like emerald. They compete with each other and shine in the sun.

(3) Highlight the characteristics of autumn scenery. For example, autumn leaves not only have different shapes, but also show various colors because of temperature changes; In autumn, the fruit of the branches ripens and changes in shape, color, smell and many other aspects.

Example: A Apple tree is covered with red-faced apples, pears in Huang Chengcheng bend the branches, and oranges are covered with green leaves, like small lanterns hanging on the tree.

B The yellow grapefruit hangs on the branch, and the heavy grapefruit bends the branch, just like a little classmate on a swing.

C all the leaves on the persimmon tree have fallen, but the red persimmon still hangs on the branches, like orange lanterns of all sizes, bending the branches.

When I went to Qiu Lai in summer, the grapes were ripe, and a bunch of grapes hung in the cracks of the leaves. They are crystal clear, like carved with crystal and jade. They look like huge purple pearls. All these are water, which makes people water DC.

E the earth put on a golden sweater, and yellow poplar leaves and bright maple leaves fell down, as if several colorful butterflies were flying in the air.

(4) When describing the scenery, you should also write your own feelings and your own imagination.

In autumn night, the golden moon hangs on the starry sky like an endless sky lantern, sprinkling its bright and gentle Yin Hui on the earth, so that the vast night sky is stained with thick moonlight and the whole field appears more pure, quiet and serene.

The sentence with "-"is the author's feeling and imagination.

(5) Pay attention to the accumulation of good words and sentences describing autumn, and use them properly in your own practice, which can also add a lot of color to the article.

Appreciation of the first paragraph

Autumn is a colorful season, autumn is a beautiful season and autumn is a harvest season. In my mind, colorful autumn has already surpassed white winter, green spring and fiery summer! The hot summer passed and the cool autumn came. Do you know the colors of autumn? Please come with me to the stadium!

Appreciation of the ending paragraph

Autumn is a season that I miss. The fallen leaves in the yard and my thoughts piled up in a thick pile, but the full rice made the world in my heart happier. Autumn is a beautiful season, full of fairytale beauty, laughter of tourists and joy of harvest season, which constitutes an ideal picture. Autumn is not as beautiful and fragrant as spring; There are not so many small creatures singing in summer; Not as beautiful as winter. However, it is the most beautiful in my heart. I happily let out a cry: autumn is so beautiful, I love autumn! I ran, and Miss Qiu stroked my head, as if to say to me: You must learn enough knowledge every year and run in the ocean of knowledge.

Think back to where you observed autumn scenery and complete the table in activity 1.

According to the characteristics of autumn scenery, imagine what you think when you see a golden leaf falling with the wind, and what you think when you see the fruitful scene in the orchard in autumn.

Complete activity three.

blackboard-writing design

Observe autumn: eyes-look at the body-feel cold hands-pick fruit mouth-taste autumn (fruit) feet-step on fallen leaves ears-listen (fallen leaves, running water)

Autumn color-golden yellow representative-corn, grass and leaves

Looking for autumn: in the field orchard, forest park campus

Grasp the characteristics and highlight the specific image of rhetoric when describing.

Harvest Autumn: Express your true feelings and praise of love.

1, first of all, from the color of autumn, what is the main color of this season, and what representative things, such as corn, grass and leaves, have turned yellow.

Show pictures such as pear tree, apple tree, grape tree, persimmon tree, etc. Describe each picture in detail, which requires the guidance of the teacher, and observe from what aspects, such as size, color, shape and taste.

2. Then observe the pictures of crops in the field, such as rice, corn and sorghum. Teachers can guide students to describe pictures.

3. Finally, guide how autumn scenery makes you feel.

Third, summary: The main goal of this lesson is to let students master the characteristics of autumn writing in a certain order, and the content should be specific. Attention should be paid to stimulating students' thoughts and feelings of loving nature and fully mobilizing students' enthusiasm for writing.

Four, blackboard writing:

Autumn scenery

Color: golden corn and grass leaves

Orchard: fruity smell (smell)

Pears, apples, grapes and persimmons

Fields: sorghum, rice and corn

Feelings: quiet and beautiful harvest, joy and love.

Autumn scenery Grade Four Composition 2 Autumn is coming! Parks, fields and orchards have also changed!

Walking into the park, the yellow branches and leaves are falling, just like beautiful butterflies dancing in the air, flying freely, and gradually falling to the ground, just like covering Mother Earth with a golden blanket. How beautiful! When people see it, they can't help but sigh: "It's so beautiful!"

In this crisp autumn season, the beautiful osmanthus fairy showed a sweet smile. Continue to emit fragrance. If you walk into the park, you will be attracted by the smell coming from your face. Those small flowers as white as jade in spring have now turned into bright red fruits! Like a little red lantern hanging from a branch, it's beautiful!

However, Juxian is not to be outdone. Look! They have gold, purple, white ... beautiful chrysanthemums in full bloom in their season.

In the field, sorghum raised a red flag and rice bent over with laughter.

In the orchard, a fragrance came to the nose, and the apples showed their red faces. After a shower, a bunch of purple grapes hung on the shelf, shining like beautiful amethyst.

Some farmers' uncles opened the harvester and began to harvest rice. The harvester sang a bumper harvest song with a bang; Some are harvesting corn and breaking off the sticks one by one; Others pick fruits in groups of three or five. What a bumper harvest.

I love colorful autumn! Autumn is so beautiful!

Autumn scenery is very rich in colors, no less than other four seasons.

Spring is a good season for everything to revive. But there is only a little green in the middle of the flower.

Not to mention summer, except green, the whole world is green everywhere.

Winter is also a monotonous season, mostly broken branches and leaves. It's white after snowing, so I can't see anything clearly.

Autumn is like a beautiful girl. Shh, don't think that autumn has nothing but yellow leaves and red leaves. You see, golden osmanthus is coming from branches, leaves, the ground ... from all directions. They are like autumn spirits, decorating autumn. Some leaves are green in the autumn world, waving to you, making you have to pay attention to their existence. Golden rice beckons to you again, as if welcoming you.

Snow-white cotton is also welcoming you. Look, she's hiding there shyly! Look there, Brother Pomegranate is grinning at you! Brother Kiwi is also warmly greeting you. Sister Apple also came to the party. Look, she is blushing. She is probably too shy and embarrassed! Look at that orange, as if to say to you: "little master, come and eat me!" " "All kinds of colorful chrysanthemums are also welcoming the arrival of autumn in various ways. ……

Autumn is a very beautiful season. I like autumn colors, especially autumn.

Autumn scenery cicadas are singing away, and the weather is getting colder. I already know that autumn has come quietly. Rows of geese flew south as if to say goodbye to us. A group of naughty puppies are chasing and fighting in the golden field. The leaves on the tree are scrambling to float to the earth, just like laying a carpet on the earth. It feels good to step on it.

In the orchard, red apples hang on the branches, just like a shy little girl on a swing; Pears in Huang Chengcheng are like a layer of honey; Purple grapes are covered with branches and watery, so it is difficult for people to pick one and taste it; The yellow banana is like a curved boat. ...

In the field, golden rice is like a golden ocean; Sorghum held up the burning torch; The brothers of the radish family are all white bellies, just like running for the belly king. ...

Ah! I love this charming autumn color!

The scenery of autumn and the footsteps of summer are fading away, and a brand-new season-autumn is coming.

In the field, the wheat is ripe and covered with a golden dress. A breeze blew, and the wheat swayed layer by layer like waves on the beach. It's really beautiful.

Although it's autumn, colorful flowers don't want to wither like this. They still stand up and bloom beautiful flowers, adding beauty to nature.

The maple leaf is already red at this time. When the wind blows, the maple leaves the branches and falls resolutely, just like a beautiful butterfly dancing.

Autumn is also a harvest season, and it is also the busiest and happiest season for people all year round. Rice and wheat in the field are also facing harvest. In the orchard, the fruit trees with huge fruits are smiling at their owners, as if to repay people's care!

Autumn is my favorite season, the most beautiful season and the most enjoyable season …

Autumn Scenery Grade Four Composition 6 Autumn is coming! Autumn is coming! The footsteps of autumn are getting closer and closer to us. The weather in autumn is getting cooler and cooler!

The autumn sky hangs high above our heads. The autumn sky is blue, and white clouds float in the sky like strings of marshmallows. There are trees on both sides of the road The leaves on the tree turned yellow. A breeze blew, and the leaves fell to the ground with the breeze, playing like yellow butterflies in the wind. In the field, the rice is ripe and the golden ears are heavy, which makes the farmer's uncle's face show a sweet smile. In the orchard, pears in Huang Chengcheng are covered with branches, and red apples hide in the branches like shy little faces and snicker, bending the branches. Look, there are bumper harvests everywhere!

The cool and pleasant weather in autumn is the best time for us to study. We must seize every minute and study hard. You see, when you walk into the campus, you can hear the sound of reading everywhere, and you can also see the students taking the time to study hard.

The autumn scenery is colorful! The fields in autumn are fruitful. I like beautiful autumn.

Autumn scenery is looking forward to, looking forward to, the leaves are yellow, your footsteps are near, you show people a beautiful scene, and you bring people a harvest scene.

You walked quietly into the garden. Once upon a time, the garden was full of chrysanthemums of different shapes: graceful "willow butterfly dance" and energetic "fairy sword dance" ... how attractive! They are all beautiful, competing with each other and making people happy.

You walked quietly into the orchard. Look! The trees are full of fruits. Look! Persimmon is like lantern, hawthorn is like agate, pear is like gourd, and grape is like pearl. Red, Huang Chengcheng, purple ... So cute! Large and small, countless. You can smell a faint fragrance from a distance, and people can't help but want to pick one and take a bite at once to enjoy the sweet, sour, crispy and delicious food on earth.

There you are, quietly, walking into the field. The reddish-brown sorghum turned red; The golden rice bent with laughter; The corn on the cob is like a strong man with a Grenade pinned to his waist, which is heroic; Cotton opened a smiling face, revealing white tidbits; Golden pod also came to join in the fun and shook the bell of the whole body. At this time, people are in full swing: the sound of "Chen Wenjing" cutting rice; The "rumble" of the threshing machine; The "grinding" sound of tractors full of rice; It reverberates throughout the field. Men and women came and went in the fields, and laughter echoed in the air, forming a touching autumn harvest movement.

You came quietly and walked into the heart of a wanderer. In the harvest year of fallen leaves, wanderers can't go back to their hometown, but they can only miss their hometown in their dreams. When the last yellow flying leaf slowly falls from the treetops, loneliness surges from the bottom of my heart, reminding people of the cheerful harvest scene of the villagers! How homesick you are in this harvest season!

You came quietly, bringing us the joy of harvest, the gestation of life, the eagerness of missing, and the quiet leisure. You, too, are full of energy. Just like our life, you glow with new brilliance every day.

Students of Class 8 in autumn scenery, which season do you like best? I like autumn best. The scenery in autumn is really beautiful.

In autumn, the trees are covered with different colors, and the farmland is like a golden carpet. The autumn wind blows, and the golden wheat fields are undulating like a golden ocean. Chrysanthemums on both sides of the road are in full bloom, purple, pink and white ... Pick one, smell the refreshing flowers and look at the beautiful flowers. I love this beautiful autumn more!

Autumn is still the harvest season. The orchard is full of sweet and delicious fruits, such as oranges like lanterns, persimmons from Huang Chengcheng and my favorite pears. It's really crispy and delicious. The farmer's uncle is full of smiles, harvesting ripe fruits, and there are laughter everywhere! Autumn is really like a beautiful Chinese painting.

Students, do you like this beautiful autumn? Come on! Let's embrace this colorful autumn, this harvest season!

The scenery in autumn is colorful. In autumn, we will have: the dance of plants, the harvest of people ... Let's walk into autumn, feel its beauty and listen to its voice!

Look! The maple forest was covered with colorful carpets, and Miss Maple Leaf and Mr Maple Leaf both changed into red gauze skirts and apricot yellow dresses. At this time, they are no longer frolicking like before, quietly waiting for the arrival of Aunt Houqiu.

Miss Qiu came in a flowered skirt and brought some musicians-autumn wind and autumn rain.

"Hoo, hoo." Accompanied by the sonata of autumn wind, autumn rain also played beautiful dance music: "Tick tock, tick tock."

Maple leaves dance, somersault for a while, turn around for a while, and fly around like butterflies for a while. How beautiful!

"Let's be beautiful!" A proud maple leaf girl said to the rice field next to the maple forest.

Rice people envy maple leaves and put on golden dance skirts and dresses. "Come along!" "Rice said to sorghum, that's it, one is passed on to the other, and everyone dances together, like a colorful ocean.

"Swish, swish" huh? What's that noise? It is neither autumn nor autumn. Ah! It's the farmer's uncle. They are here, too. They played a harvest song, welcome Miss Qiu!

Autumn, a season with wonderful sounds.

August 8 is a colorful season that begins in autumn. Autumn is crisp and cool. As the saying goes, ten autumn rains wear cotton.

You know what else? All the flowers are blooming, all the grass is blooming, and the leaves are gradually turning yellow. They fall into the river and float around like boats, and the leaves fall to the ground like golden carpets.

This year is a bumper harvest autumn! Cotton spits out white buds, corn shows yellow teeth, and even soybeans have round bellies corner by corner. Sesame is black and white, not only delicious, but also nutritious. Red ears bent sorghum. ...

If you walk into the orchard, you will feel the fragrance of fruits and vegetables. Pears, pointed peaches and red apples in Huang Chengcheng all exude their own fragrance, and pomegranate laughs and cracks its mouth, as if to say, "Welcome to taste!" "

Small animals are busy in autumn! Swallows are having a meeting on the wire and twittering, "When shall we go to the south for the winter?" The cicada stopped barking, and the puppy and kitten were busy changing their cotton-padded clothes for the winter.

People on the asphalt road are laughing! Laugh! Happy! Happy! People say, "This year is another bumper year!"