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The article "Flower Cultivation" describes in detail the pains and joys of Grandpa Lao She in flower cultivation, and fully expresses his love for labor. After reading this article, I have a deep understanding of the ups and downs in childbirth.

"If the weather changes suddenly, you have to mobilize the whole family to save flowers and plants, regardless of whether your back hurts or your legs hurt." How can labor be sweet without suffering? There is no happiness without labor, and there is no labor without pain. Isn't Lao She's grandfather's experience a strong proof? Labor is bitter before it is sweet. Shouldn't I also rack my brains and think hard when I write my composition? How sweet it is to see your satisfactory composition after suffering!

"It's not a bad thing to gain more knowledge." How well you speak! However, if you want to acquire knowledge without labor and pain, how can you do it? How can I be happy and sweet? People who can't eat bitterness will never be invited to swim in the ocean of knowledge. I used to study hard and wanted to learn my lessons well, but I couldn't get rid of the habit of playing and sleeping. After the education of teachers and parents, I finally understand the truth of "study hard" Now, I have given up playing too much, seized time to study hard, mastered more and more solid knowledge, and finally tasted the sweetness of learning.

"If you don't work, you can't keep a flower alive. Isn't that the truth? " What a philosophical remark! Grandpa Lao She not only expounded the importance of labor, but also revealed the truth of doing things for people. This sentence will always be my motto: only labor can create a better life. I want to ask, what can I do without work? I can't help but think of the scene of making my own model airplane: in the hot summer, the scorching sun, the burning people and the mosquito "army" are even more annoying, but I still concentrate on assembling, which is quite difficult and the parts slide to both sides; The strength is small, and the adhesion is not good. It is also difficult to glue evenly. I didn't lose heart at my first failure. I will try again. I spread the glue evenly and held it firmly in my hand, never relaxing. One second, two seconds ... one minute, two minutes ... my hands are sweaty. My hands are sour and painful, and I keep pinching them, even if the acute angle of the parts cuts my hands. Finally, an exquisite small plane model was born in my hands. I thought happily: although I suffered some hardships, it was worth it!

After reading the text "Planting Flowers", I deeply realized the true meaning of labor: after tasting bitter, spicy, sour and salty, there will be endless sweetness.

A few years ago, I read this passage: "I started to get the Japanese translation of this book four years ago. I remember that I finished reading it for three days and three nights with tears." Later, when I was translating or reading casually, I felt deeply stimulated and my eyes were wet. These are not tears of sadness, but tears of shame and gratitude. In addition to my education, I am the father of two sons and two daughters at home, and I have been a coach in the field of education for more than ten years. On weekdays, I work as a teacher for my father who is a teacher. After reading this book, it seems that the ugly woman saw the beautiful woman and shed tears. " I've always wanted to read this book, the education of love. It moved Mr. Xia Gaizun very much, and this winter vacation finally realized her wish.

I finished the Education of Love in one breath. Although I didn't shed tears, my heart has admitted that this is a book that washes the soul. It seems that what attracts me is not the high literary value, but the almost perfect love between parents and children, the affection between teachers and students, the friendship between friends and the love of the country reflected in the ordinary and delicate brushwork ... The profound and rich emotional power contained in this loving novel. It's really great. The education of love tells us that the noble love of human nature is the most sincere education, and education sublimates love. Although everyone's life experience is different, you will experience similar emotions that you have experienced from the education of love, but our attitudes and behaviors may be different. Moved me, but also triggered some thoughts about love.

First of all, the topic "Education of Love" made me think, what is love in this pluralistic world? With this in mind, I trudged with this Italian pupil to find an unknown answer. A diary written by a fourth-grade pupil for ten months in a school year contains the love between classmates, brothers and sisters, children and parents, teachers and students, and the love for the motherland, which makes people read it, just like growing up in the arms of love.

Love, like air, is often ignored by us every day because it is invisible, but we can't live without it. In fact, its meaning has been integrated into life. Just like the love of parents, Enrico keeps a diary of reading and writing with his parents, but now many students still have a small lock hanging on their diaries. The simplest things are also the most easily overlooked, just like the deep parent-child love in this broad love, many people can't feel it. Because it is not only for individuals, but also for the dignity and emotion of the whole nation. The book "Education of Love" describes a group of energetic young people who are eager for progress and sunny. Some of them are poor, some are disabled, and of course some are bathed in happiness. They come from different backgrounds and have different personalities, but they all have one thing in common-their deep love for their motherland Italy. Sincere feelings for relatives and friends. What can't be ignored here is the "spiritual words" that the teacher reads to those teenagers every month. These short stories not only cultivated the characters in the book, but also shocked me as a foreign reader by the strong feelings reflected in them. Facing our education, love should be the source of educational strength and the foundation of educational success. Mr Xia Gaizun said in his translation of The Education of Love: "Education has no emotion. Without love, it is like a pond without water. Without water, there can be no pond, and without love, there can be no education. " Love is an endless journey. It will be easy to walk and watch along the way, and every day will be enriched by understanding and learning new things. So, I just want to keep going, even devote myself to enthusiasm, and I don't care how long I can last. At this time, this feeling has been sublimated into a love, a love.

In the education of love, love is compared to many things, which is true and not just these. I don't think there is a clear answer to "what is love", but I know that "love" is infinite, ranging from friendly conversation between classmates to encouragement from teachers to meticulous care from parents to children, even a smile from people who meet by chance ... donating bone marrow, blood and help. "fade" or even "disappear", so I hope more people can feel deep love in simple language. I think this good novel will bring this wonderful feeling to more people.

It is very tired between lips and teeth, and it is difficult to write. The novel of 3 1K is rich in words and vocabulary, but its author tells us a society, a microcosm of its primitive human life.

What the author wants to reflect is a tragic story in the process of social development, economic expansion and human nature change. In short, the author wants to reflect the change of human nature and the unchanging essence of human nature in this era of economic wave impact.

A brand-new labor system shattered the long-standing old system like a typhoon. Therefore, unprecedented changes and progress are accompanied by unprecedented dislocation and contrast, the pursuit of economy and profit, the conflict between life value and human desire, the liberation of personality and moral decay, social progress and human devaluation. These fetishism and human instinct suddenly collided fiercely, which naturally bred the inevitable conflict between debauchery and shameless, nobility and beauty.

Miss hair salon, hotel escort, jobbery, false invoicing, corruption, literati going to sea, rich people jumping off buildings, beggars becoming officials, enterprises going bankrupt, laid-off workers having wallets and mistresses, having no money to go to brothels, young people committing rape in broad daylight, and so on. In this social transformation period, people who deserve to die, who should not get rich, who should not jump off a building, should not take medals as heroes and model workers. Brothers at the turn of life and death shed their blood for a few RMB, and sons have to take their parents to court because they just want food and money to go to school ..... This is the product of a money society and an inevitable cancer of social progress.

Li Xiao, the hero of Between Lips and Teeth, is a tragic figure born in this social change. Gains and losses, repression and struggle, inferiority and self-esteem, and human nature and rationality are contradictory. Where should he go? Whose fate is this? Why did he come here? This is what Li Xiao wanted to think and what the author left us to think.

The author's theme is obvious, his conception is good and his foundation is good. But the overall regret of this article is that it is obvious that the author wrote in a hurry, which led to some failures that should not have happened. Here are a few examples:

The first part is well written. From the beginning, Li Jiao and Li Xiaoxiao left a suspense for readers, and their writing style was quite sophisticated. But the background description in the second section is too long. In the fifth section, how does Xiao's wife produce sexual desire (even underwear to be taken off) as a sign of parting, is it a bit inappropriate to arrange stories and describe the psychology of characters in this way? Look before you leap. The seventh section describes Li Xiao's mentality after his lovelorn love too much, but the purpose of these descriptions is actually superfluous. The eighth section describes the embarrassment of Li Xiao's career after he was down and out, but it doesn't make much sense. Secondly, logically speaking, it should be unreasonable for Li Xiao to want to go out to work, bearing such a large debt (forced to divorce his wife and family breakdown). He is used to a businessman who earns thousands of dollars every day, and he wants to pay his debts wholeheartedly, but he wants to make a comeback in his rational thinking. But these descriptions of characters in such an environment should be a great failure in logical thinking. The sudden dialogue in section 10, the secret love for Li Xiao for many years, the sexual reaction after meeting Li Xiao (although she is a prostitute, she loves him because she loves him, so she can be rational and reserved in the face of Li Jiao), and the sudden change of feelings for Li Xiao all indicate that the author was in a hurry after writing this novel, and did not invest more logical dialectical thinking to deal with the development of characters and stories in the novel, which is the biggest in the novel. If you write in an absurd way, this leap of thinking is unacceptable and untenable.

"There is a garden behind the three pools and the moon. Although it is small, you can climb the flower bed to fold the wintersweet, and look for cicadas on the ground or on the osmanthus tree. The best job is to catch flies and feed ants. There was no sound in silence. However, the students went to the garden for too long and too much, but it didn't work. Mr. Wang shouted in the study:' Where did everyone go? ! '……"

After reading Mr. Lu Xun's "A Hundred Flowers in the Morning, From a Hundred Herbs Garden to a Three Ponds Reflecting the Moon", I enjoyed the innocent feelings revealed from time to time between the lines and couldn't help but see the fascinating natural picture scroll.

"Oil flies sing here and crickets play the piano here. Turning over broken bricks, sometimes I meet centipedes; And Mylabris, if you hold its spine with your fingers, it will clap your hands and spit out a puff of smoke from behind your eyes ... "

I read Lu Xun's essays full of childhood memories, just as I read Lu Xun's childlike interest in loving nature and yearning for freedom. Suddenly, I seemed to see Lu Xun when I was a child. While adults were not looking, I got into the Herb Garden. He was accompanied by insects, picking wild flowers and fruits, and then catching birds with his playmates, but because of his impatience, he never caught much. He often listens to stories told by his nanny's mother, so he is afraid of the red snake in the herb garden. In "Three Tans on the Moon", despite the strict instruction of teacher You Shou, he still can't stand the childishness in the students' hearts. When he was absorbed in reading, he didn't find that his students were doing all kinds of things, some were covering their nails with paper nails with high-quality scripts, while Lu Xun was absorbed in painting. ...

All my feelings are so childish and unforgettable, which may have aroused my inner feelings. I really don't know why I like one of the articles in Morning Flowers and Evening Picks, especially when the author looks at the world from a child's perspective, which makes people feel kind and full of passion.

Mr. Lu Xun showed his passion for nature and yearning for freedom in his articles. He wants to play freely and get in touch with nature. He doesn't want to be controlled by his parents and slaves all day. This is exactly what children have. Once upon a time, I left my childhood and entered a teenager. I am scratching my life every day in this busy study. But I thought I was still a naive child. Sometimes I have sweet childhood dreams. When I recall those childhood trifles, they are still vivid in my mind, and I can't help laughing. My home used to be in the suburbs, and there was a large field nearby. When I was a child, I always went there to enjoy the sunshine in spring, the breeze in autumn, and the rape flowers I always picked. I am immersed in the embrace of nature. When I was a child, I went to my neighbor's house every day after dinner without wiping my mouth. Go to eat tofu with friends and play in the fields together. From time to time, I fell into the mud pit and became a "little clay figurine". I picked all kinds of flowers, but I was afraid that my master would find them, so I hid them in a tree hole. After a while, the flowers will fade, but I am still intoxicated in the unrestrained free space. Now, I made it in the field. Therefore, I can't feel the kindness of nature and lack a lot of freedom, but I still indulge in unrestrained free space. Now because of the building built in the wild, my friends and I are working hard for our future, so I can't feel the kindness of nature and lack a lot of freedom, but I still love nature and yearn for freedom, no matter whether it can be realized now. This may be the similarity between me and young Lu Xun. After reading the article, I have been very moved. My childhood has drifted away, leaving only a few scattered memories. It is better to read "Flowers in the Morning" carefully, experience the childhood dreams of that different era, and love nature and yearn for freedom with Lu Xun.

As soon as Han Han's novel Triple Door came out, it attracted social attention, especially among middle school students. After reading this novel, I was deeply impressed by Han Han's rich knowledge and literary accomplishment beyond the times. However, I think Triple Door is really inferior to his wonderful and impeccable essays "Peeking at a Man in a Cup" and "Bathing in a Cotton Jacket".

Han Han's knowledge should be rich, so there are many things in his novels. But when it comes to the description of social scenes, it seems a little pale. It is typical for him to watch a friend fight in a small restaurant. He used a long paragraph to describe how the two sides threw "fried" at each other, which was both boring and unrealistic. Maybe he wrote it himself in the end, so he quickly turned the pen. Let the protagonist escape from the scene-oh, everything is settled. Han Han mentioned in the preface of Triple Door that he replaced the lack of life experience with knowledge. But I think that kind of experience can never be replaced. Therefore, if you pay attention, you can find that all the plots involving the real society in Han Han's short stories are sporadic and dare not stay.

Han Han's books are full of intelligent language, which makes people laugh, but also makes people think. Unfortunately, this style did not last until the end. In the middle of the novel, Lin Yuxiang entered Nansan No.3 Middle School. Perhaps the author's wisdom has been exhausted. Perhaps this story is too close to his situation at that time, so that he can't read the life in the book from a distance like God. Without the distance, the story that is too close seems to make Han Han unable to display it when writing. Several ambitious figures, such as several classmates who are both sports students with the leading role, are unable to write down anything-grand appearance, but unable to quit.

There are quite a few imitations in Han Han's novels, and they have not yet formed their own style. In a sense, Han Han seemed to be thinking about how to write Fortress Besieged-Han Han wrote Lin Yuxiang, saying that his award-winning composition was turned over from a travel manual, saying that he was embarrassed when he commented on the poem Lying in Mei, saying that he was trying to compete for the president of the literary society ... without mercy, he took the protagonist away bit by bit. Impotence and hypocrisy are coming-simple money style. Even Lin Yuxiang, the protagonist of the novel, is full of the shadow of Fang Hung-chien and has no unique image of his own. To make matters worse, Han Han finally couldn't bear to be mean to the protagonist of the novel, and even made the heroine Susan fall in love with him. The phone call at the end really ruined his style. Even the worst novel with vivid characters will produce this one.