The first volume of the fifth grade composition

No matter in school or in society, everyone has written a composition, which can be divided into narrative, explanatory, practical and argumentative according to different genres. What is the composition you have seen? The following are seven compositions I collected from the first volume of grade five for your reference, hoping to help friends in need.

1 The classroom has become an ocean of joy, with some people laughing, some ecstatic and some extremely excited. ...

The game has started. Fei and I played against Lu Chifeng and Gong Daiqing. Everyone took a piece of cardboard, and we were all nervous, just waiting for the teacher to give us an order. I put the cardboard on the ground first and then step on it. Fei Shen Jun then stepped on it and handed me a piece of cardboard. I quickly put the cardboard on the ground and stepped on it. Fei Shen Jun stepped on it again ... At this moment, Fei Shen Jun accidentally stepped on the floor, but his feet were unstable. It turned out that he was eager to win and stepped on the wrong foot, so we were eliminated.

The second time, the teacher told us to get up, and also told Xiaohong and Xiaoming to get up. At the teacher's order, we built the bridge again. Gradually, just at the end of the race, Xiao Ming fell down and lay on his back. We all laughed gloatingly, and Xiao Ming got up awkwardly and threw himself into the "battle" again. Our two teams are neck and neck.

The first volume of the fifth grade composition 2 teaching objectives:

1. Knowing how to write down what you want to tell others with a pen can facilitate the exchange of thoughts and feelings with others.

2. Read the examples carefully and make it clear that the communication with others should be true and the language should be appropriate.

Teaching emphases and difficulties:

Key point: knowing how to write down what you want to tell others with a pen can facilitate the exchange of thoughts and feelings with others.

Difficulties: read the examples carefully and make it clear that communication with people should be true and the language should be appropriate.

Teaching preparation:

courseware

Teaching process:

First of all, the introduction of passion

Students, in the recent chat with some students, the teacher learned that some students have some concerns.

There are some things I want to say to others, which is inconvenient to say in person, but it's hard to hold back. What should I do? Please help us to think. Write down what you want to say, and then try to give it to him for written communication.

Transition: This is a good idea, but how to say it? A classmate from Zhao Jie met us.

The same question. Let's see how she talks and learn from her.

Second, read the examples.

1. Please open the book gently and read this article written by Zhao Jie.

Thinking: What did Zhao Jie say first, then, and finally?

2. Students read the examples carefully and think.

3, communication, according to the students answer the teacher's lens show courseware:

Simply state your mind at the beginning.

Describe and express inner activities in detail.

Finally, express your feelings.

Teacher's summary: Her narrative structure is very clear, which is worth our reference.

4. What did Zhao Jie say in detail in the article? (blackboard writing: the process of things)

5. So, from "getting the paper" to "stuffing the paper into the drawer", what changes have Zhao Jie's inner activities experienced? Draw her inner activities. How do you feel about the courseware presentation of the AC camera ("be elated"-"thump"-"think about it")? (blackboard writing: inner activities)

6. Zhao Jie wrote down the process of things and his inner activities in vivid words, and every word was his inner thoughts. Let us feel true and sincere. Expressing your specific inner activities at that time is also worth our reference.

7. This article comes from the heart, so what did Zhao Jie finally write? (Express your feelings in an all-round way again)

8. Summarize and improve the blackboard writing: Zhao Jie made it clear at the beginning, elaborated in the middle, and finally always said that she "told" her thoughts to the teacher in a true and delicate way. Her inner confession is shocking and fully shows her sincerity in admitting her mistake. I think the teacher will forgive her after reading it.

Third, guide the practice

1. In fact, each of us has a "little secret" in our hearts that we don't want to say easily. These heartfelt words may be for parents, teachers or good friends. Maybe it's to apologize for something, convey the truest greetings, complain about grievances, ask for forgiveness or make some suggestions ... (Show courseware) Let's ask ourselves quietly, who do you want to talk to most and what do you want to say today?

Students make up their own monologues.

3. When you think about it, simply communicate with whom you plan to tell your heart and what to say.

4. Students can directly "say" with a pen (the courseware shows "word supermarket") and students can choose.

Fourth, students practice writing.

1. Students write drafts.

2. Individual guidance of teachers.

3, guide the revision of the first and second drafts. (Put students' works on the physical projection and comment collectively)

Teaching reflection:

Today is an open class at school. This is an exercise that requires students to pour out their hearts. I consider that fifth-grade students can generally write stories, but many students can't express their inner activities and true feelings at the same time. Therefore, before making a "study guide", I will start with examples, so that students can understand the framework of this exercise first, and then understand what psychological activities Zhao Jie students have when writing stories, so that students can understand that they should not only write stories specifically, but also write characters' hearts. The class schedule is reasonable, and students can see that the effect is not bad when they finish half of the exercises in one class. In the discussion of the next class, the teachers affirmed the advantages and put forward good suggestions, such as teachers should be more careful in guiding the revision; Let the students exchange some words describing Zhao Jie's psychological activities when they feel them, which is better than the last one!

My name is Wu Yuke. I am nine years old. I am fat and tall. My family all say that I am a lively, lovely and filial child, but I am a little careless in my studies.

Every time I go to physical education class, I am very happy, because we can play all kinds of games on the physical education class, such as skipping rope, patting the ball and playing table tennis. At home, as soon as I finish my homework, I immediately run out to play with my good friends. I will drag them to play all kinds of games, and I don't care if I sweat. My father often jokes at me and says, "You will be quiet only when you sleep."

Every time I go out to play, I always bring some small gifts back to my family, even a few beautiful small stones. I bought something good, and I will let my parents eat it first. I remember my father's foot was accidentally injured last year. Like a little nurse, I send water to my father for a while and rice to my father for a while. Father said I had grown up.

My greatest weakness is carelessness. I can do many questions in every math exam, but I can't get full marks because of carelessness. My mother often criticizes me for writing too much or too little. However, now I have made up my mind to get rid of this bad habit.

Look, this is me.

There's another patient. She looks miserable and complains all day.

After two days of listening, the former patient told a story to the new patient-

"In a ward of the hospital, I have lived with two patients, and their conditions are very serious. This ward is very narrow and can only accommodate the two of them. This ward has a door and a window. The door leads to the corridor through which you can see the outside world.

With permission, one of the patients can get up and sit for an hour every morning and afternoon. The patient's bed is near the window.

Another patient had to stay in bed day and night. Of course, both patients need rest and treatment. What makes them feel painful is that the disease does not allow them to do anything for recreation, so they can only lie quietly. Just the two of them. They often talk for hours. They talk about their families, their jobs, what they did in the war, and so on.

Every morning and afternoon, when the time comes, I pick up the patient by the window and start sitting up for an hour. At this time, he began to describe to his companions everything he saw outside the window. Gradually, these two hours every day have almost become the whole content of his life with his companions.

Obviously, this window overlooks a park. There is a lake in the park. As usual, flocks of wild ducks and swans are strolling on the lake. Some children in the park are throwing bread to feed these waterfowl, and some are playing with yacht models. The young couple walked arm in arm in the shade of the tree. Flowers are in full bloom in the park, mainly roses, but there are also colorful peony flowers and marigold flowers around. In the corner of the park, there is a tennis court. Sometimes the games there are really wonderful. There are several cricket matches from time to time. Although the skills are not up to the level of the official finals, it is better than nothing. There is also a bowling lawn over there. At the end of the park is a row of shops, and the downtown area is faintly visible behind the shops.

The lying patient listened to all this with relish. Every minute of this moment is a kind of enjoyment for him. The description goes on: how a child almost fell into the lake and how beautiful the girl in summer dress is. Then there is an exciting tennis match. He listened to the vivid description, as if he had witnessed everything happening outside the window.

One afternoon, when he heard the patient by the window say that a cricket player was hitting the ball slowly everywhere, the patient without a window suddenly had an idea: why can he be lucky to see everything outside the window? Why don't you deserve this opportunity? He was ashamed that he had such an idea and tried to stop thinking like this. However, the more he restrained himself, the stronger this idea became. Until a few days later, the idea further became next to the window. Why shouldn't it be me

He was constantly troubled by this idea during the day, and at night, he couldn't sleep all night. As a result, the illness is getting worse every day, and the doctor doesn't know about it.

One night, he stared at the ceiling with his eyes open as usual. At this point, his companion suddenly woke up and began to cough loudly, breathing rapidly and intermittently, and the liquid had filled his lung cavity. He fumbled with his hand for the button of the electric bell. The nurse on duty came as soon as the bell rang.

However, another patient looked at it motionless. I thought, why does he occupy the bed by the window?

A painful cough broke the silence of the night. One by one ... it got stuck ... stopped ... until it finally stopped breathing.

Another patient continued to stare at the ceiling.

The next morning, the medical staff brought the washing water and found that the patient had died. They quietly carried the body out without making a fuss.

After a few days, it seems that it has been opened. The other patient immediately asked if he could move to the bed by the window. The medical staff lifted him up and let him lie comfortably in the hospital bed. Then they left the ward, leaving him lying there quietly.

As soon as the doctor left, the patient was struggling in great pain, with one arm propped up and his mouth panting. He poked his head at the window.

He only saw a bare wall. "

In this way, the patient died

The first lake in Hangzhou is of course the West Lake, which has become a good place for people to travel.

Lotus leaves stand on the clear lake like handfuls of green umbrellas. Lotus is like a beautiful girl, facing the clear lake, as if combing her beautiful hair. The small fish in the lake are playing happily, which brings joy to the West Lake.

I don't know when it began to rain lightly. The small fish in the lake hid in Brother Lotus Leaf's umbrella, and there were clear ripples on the lake, which broke the previous tranquility of the West Lake. This is really "comparing the West Lake to the West Lake, it is always appropriate to go into battle lightly."

After the heavy rain, a beautiful rainbow bridge was set up in the sky, and the West Lake stopped roaring just now and resumed its usual tranquility. The little fish is playing happily again. After the heavy rain, some lotus flowers withered and some were in bud. It adds a beautiful scenery to the West Lake.

There are also many performers on the West Lake. Fish are splashing on the water, and birds are singing like an ensemble. Mountains and rivers are pleasing to the eye.

The West Lake at night has a beautiful view. The withered lotus leaf was illuminated by colorful lights, as if it had regained its vitality. The mountains were dazzled by colorful lights. Look, the green mountains are like a huge emerald, a beautiful shiny glass. The small lights at the foot of the mountain look like countless small round gems. Are projected on the mirror-like West Lake.

The beauty of the West Lake is countless, which makes people linger. I love the beautiful West Lake!

Reading can enrich our knowledge and make us more wise.

People often say: "If you use books, you will hate them less, and if things are difficult, you will understand them." Du Fu, a great poet, also said: "I don't know if I study hard early with black hair, but I regret it when I study late." All these words tell us to cherish time and study hard. If you don't study hard as a child, it will be too late to realize this problem when you grow up.

Reading has many advantages, the most obvious of which is to improve our writing level. Beautiful sentences accumulated during reading can be used in our usual compositions to make our compositions more beautiful. These accumulated sentences can be flexibly used in various types of compositions.

Reading can also make us understand a lot of life truths. Books teach us how to be a man, how to do things, how to face and solve difficulties, and how to succeed.

However, not all books are beneficial. For example, students should pay attention to some comic books with unhealthy contents! And reading should pay attention to the combination of work and rest, don't be too tired, and don't indulge in extracurricular books to affect your study.

Books are necessary for our growth. Books enrich our knowledge and lead us to success. If we leave books, we will accomplish nothing when we grow up. Therefore, reading is beneficial. Let's love reading!

I have a pair of big watery eyes, a small upturned nose, a small mouth that loves to cry and laugh, and I can talk and sing, and I have long black and shiny hair.

I like reading books very much. Sometimes after reading for a few hours, I forget everything. I remember once, I was absorbed in reading Diary of a Laughing Cat-Green Dog Villa. I was deeply attracted by the plot in the story. My mother called me several times and said it was time for dinner, but I didn't hear it. I like reading comic books and science fairy tales; There are also composition books that I read with relish.

I also like keeping small animals. I remember at my grandmother's house, we had a lovely little white rabbit. But before long, it died, and I cried sadly for it. A few months later, my sister brought back two little gray rabbits. Before I saw them, one of them ran away. We decided to take good care of the rest of the little gray rabbits. Please leave it with grandma when we go to school. I go to my grandmother's house every week and play with her kindly. After our careful care, the little gray rabbit has grown up now. How happy I am!

This is me, a caring, kind and caring little girl.