This is my 200-word composition.

1. Know yourself correctly, show your style and build up your confidence.

2. Reflect on your growth process, discover and appreciate the value of life, and cherish life.

3. Enhance mutual understanding between students and integrate into the collective family.

Training requirements

1. Concentrate, express your personality clearly and concisely, and try to write something new.

2. Choose the right angle to express yourself, or highlight the characteristics of one aspect of the individual, or introduce yourself from multiple angles.

3. The style is not limited, mainly narrative, supplemented by lyrical and argumentative expressions.

4. Express yourself with real life experiences and unique ideas.

Train of thought hint

Title 1: This is me.

Tip 1: This is a self-introduction article, mainly about people. People's personalities vary widely. How to show and introduce yourself to others, we must grasp the main characteristics of our personality, highlight one or several aspects of our personality through several specific and typical examples, and strive to write a three-dimensional and personalized self. Writing should focus on one's own life experiences and achievements at different stages, and write one's own style, but not everything.

I can write my appearance: beautiful me, ugly me, fat me, thin me … I can write my personality and characteristics: naughty me, delicate me, greedy me, enthusiastic me, stubborn me, simple and honest me, honest me, proud me, crying me, laughing me, making a fool of myself, sleeping late. My regret, my tears, my grievances, my crying, my remorse ... can write about my hobbies: I love reading, painting, listening to music, singing, playing football, writing, writing poetry, planting flowers ... can write my story: I am in trouble, I am ugly, I am in pain.

You can draw materials directly from your own life and start with daily life, such as school life, family life or other occasions where friends communicate. You should choose those typical examples that can best show your personality characteristics and best reflect your personality characteristics. Look at me carefully, analyze me mercilessly, describe me realistically and evaluate me objectively.

Tip 2: writing methods should be varied, and materials can be organized in chronological order to highlight their own growth process; You can intercept typical events in different eras by means of fragment combination to highlight your progress in thought, knowledge and understanding. You can also write yourself into a contradictory collection by reverse conception, such as I am not me, which is not only novel in conception, but also innovative in consciousness.

Related material

1. Everyone should realize their importance, and you should also realize that the most important person in this world is yourself. (Maxwell Morse)

People often say that this person or that person has not found himself. But the self will not be discovered by anyone, it should be created (Thomas Sass)

Everyone has a different self and a different self, but in different proportions. (Lawrence)

You should believe that you are a strong person in life. (Hugo)

5. Everyone is an engineer with his own personality (France)

6. What ennobles people is their character. (Lawrence)

7. People who really have qi and blood are neither interested in seeking attention nor afraid of enduring the cold shoulder. (Byron)

8. People should control habits, not habits. A person who can't get rid of his bad habits is worthless. (ostrovsky)

9. In the center of the universe, there is a firm and mysterious note: "I". (Peter Porter)

Example 1

this is me

Yu Wenting

In the sea, I am a grain of sand.

I, hidden in the vast sea of people. I have neither a soft figure nor bright eyes, but I have an enterprising heart, a watery dream and lofty ideals. I firmly believe that I am full of poems and books.

I don't want to go with the flow. In The Road Not Taken, Frost once wrote: "There are two roads in the yellow forest, but unfortunately I can't set foot in them at the same time." "And I chose the less traveled one, which decided my life path from now on." Only when I am integrated with the public can I become a real ordinary person. I don't want to take the vulgar old road of others and live a vulgar life like others. While stealing from others, you also deny yourself.

Me, humorous and tolerant. I never like to see others pull a long face. I think other people's smiles are the most beautiful scenery in the world. So every day I will become a pistachio and bring them joy as much as possible. "The ocean is wider than the earth, the sky is wider than the ocean, and the human mind is wider than the sky." Tolerance makes the narrow mind contain all the rivers, so I treat other people's mistakes with a joke.

I want to be myself. Mr. Qi Baishi once said; "If you learn from me, you will live as if I were dead." If you can't get out of the framework of your predecessors, naturally you won't have your own world. When bubble novels became popular, I felt I was wasting my time. When online games are popular, I feel that I am wasting my youth. Be yourself, see the real me clearly, show 12 confidence and tell yourself: "I am who I am, why should I be like him?" ! "Throw away those artificial flashy carvings, show your trump card, pursue your own personality, be yourself, be the best yourself!

Me, aggressive. I am a small grain of sand, but I am not willing to lag behind and have nothing to do all my life. I would like to be the master of life and an immortal tear. There is a long way to go in Xiu Yuan, and I will go up and down. I am eager to go to the tower of art, the top of culture, the mansion of career, and celebrate the edge of success. I will live up to this era of blooming flowers, leave a solid and steady footprint, and spread beauty and love to the world. ...

This is me, I am in my prime, and I am full of energy.

This is me, humorous and tolerant, unwilling to lag behind.

I am me ── A Chinese Odyssey!

short review

This article has three advantages:

1. Awakening and meaningful poetic beauty: This article exudes a strong scholarly atmosphere and cultural atmosphere between the lines, ingeniously quotes the poems and speeches of celebrities such as Frost, Hugo, Qi Baishi and Qu Yuan, and combines his own thoughts and feelings to inject rich and heavy cultural connotations into the article.

2. The unique rational beauty of eyes: the author can objectively understand himself, correctly analyze himself and be full of rationality everywhere. In terms of content, when writing the unique personality of "I", it not only highlights its own ordinary ── a grain of sand, but also shows people the bright spots in the production of "poetry and books are adaptive", "unwilling to go with the flow" and "humorous tolerance", and a talented and enterprising girl emerges from the paper.

3. The beauty of uniformity and harmony: in writing, the overall structure adopts the method of total-sub-total, which makes the article rigorous; The main part is composed of fragments, and the fragments are spread horizontally. The content of each paragraph is highlighted by the way that the paragraph head indicates the purpose of the paragraph, and the first sentence at the beginning of each paragraph constitutes a parallelism, which makes the article have a harmonious aesthetic feeling. These advantages are worth learning from.

Example 2

Me in the besieged city

Yang Xiaoyu

I recently found that I don't like writing as much as I used to. At first, my passion was decreasing. Days are like running water, and time is still slipping away. Only with the approach of the senior high school entrance examination, my heart began to panic and rush. Learn to use a smile to cover up my inner fatigue, and the mechanized formula in my mind makes me numb. Gradually, I found that I could never find the feeling of writing with my heart. Most of the beautiful words flowing in my pen are just rhetoric, a little more hypocritical and melodramatic, and a little less true and moving.

Yesterday, I watched the 2004 selection ceremony that touched the people of China. My little sister cried like a crybaby, but my thoughts and emotions were calm from beginning to end. I was not moved by Tian's kidney donation for my mother, lamented by the deeds of Ren Changxia, a public servant and cadre, and was once again impressed by the miracle created by Olympic champion Liu Xiang. When I faced the tears of my family with surprised eyes, I was at a loss. Have I changed? The answer is yes.

I remember when I was in the first grade, I also wrote an article entitled "Beautiful Me". The general content is that I am not very beautiful, but I have a kind and grateful heart, a principle of crossing the road, and a childlike simplicity and stubbornness. However, after only two years, everything has changed. I only vaguely remember reading a story at that time. The content is about three people drinking water from a well. One person holds water in a golden cup and jade lamp, one person holds water in a porcelain cup and one person holds water in one hand. After reading it, I swore to myself that I must be the one who drinks water with a golden cup and a jade lamp. So, I study hard. My friend advised me to love life more, but I think life itself is a great helplessness. I am helpless, why time always pity me; I am very helpless. I haven't spent a little time reflecting on what I am doing for two years. Some people say that young people are like this, and they rush to do it when they think of it, but in fact they don't know what they really want and what really suits them. Yes! Just like me, study hard and win everyone's respect and envy for myself. Am I really happy? I study hard, win more money, material and wealth for my future, win a high-quality life, and finally become the person who drinks water with a golden cup and a jade lamp. When everything is realized, so what? Is it worthwhile to exchange your innocent soul for vanity?

Writing here, I shed long-lost tears, and I am glad that the river in my heart has not completely dried up. Although I am floating in the besieged city now and lost my way with my wings, I believe that when God sends me the message of spring again, I will definitely fly out of this high besieged city. At that time, I will definitely be able to write the words in my heart with a pen again. Tell me, a young man like me, when you rush to your dream at the speed of light, should you stop and enjoy the surrounding scenery, or reflect on yourself and wash your heart?

short review

1. The truth is touching. "Mountaineering is full of emotions, and watching the sea is full of emotions." The value of this article lies in the true feelings between the lines. The original burning passion for writing has been reduced; The heart that is easily moved has now become calm. Is the author becoming insensitive, or is he pretending to be detached? No, I think it is a sign of maturity in the process of growing up. After the wind and fire, I accumulated my own thoughts and feelings. You can only see gold when you put on crazy sand, and it is true to brush away prosperity.

2. Reflection is thought-provoking. "Writing here, I shed long-lost tears. I am glad that the river in my heart has not completely dried up. " The author has the courage to dissect himself and sum himself up correctly, just like the body of bamboo. Every time he summed up, he grew taller, not only because of modesty, but also because of profound reflection.

3. The literary talent is impressive. This paper uses rhetorical methods such as rhetorical questions, parallelism and metaphor, which not only increases literary talent, but also makes sentences more meaningful. "Although I am floating in the besieged city now and lost my way with wings, I believe that when God sends me the message of spring again, I will be able to fly out of this high besieged city. At that time, I can re-write the words in my heart with a pen. Tell me, a young man like me, when you run to your ideal at the speed of light, should you stop and enjoy the surrounding scenery, or reflect on yourself and wash your heart? " Such a language is enlightening and philosophical.

Example 3

this is me

Jia

You may know your parents, friends and classmates very well ... you may be able to see everything around you, but what puzzles you most is probably yourself. And that's who I am.

Five years old, naive

"Slow down, don't run so fast, or you will fall!" My mother ran after me and said. But I don't care so much. I spread my arms, waved my little hands, kept running and shouted, "It's snowing! Mom, it's snowing! " Then there was a burst of laughter, and at that moment I seemed to fly in the sky like a snow elf. Suddenly, I fell to the ground and had a close contact with the earth. My mother ran to see if I was hurt. I poked my little head out of the snow, shook it, smacked my lips, and then said, "Mom, the snow is so cold, I thought it was sweet!" " "My mother looked at me in distress situation, and I ran again, holding the snow in circles, leaving a string of happy footprints in the snow ... When I was five years old, I was naive.

Ten years old, timid? Courage?

"Mom, I don't want to attend, I'm afraid!" I begged timidly. "no! I don't even have this courage, how can I do great things in the future! It's just an electronic keyboard competition! " I was rejected. "But have you got the wrong number? Very shameful! " "Then you don't have the wrong number! It's your turn, so many words, try boldly, mom believes you can do it! " This sentence immediately gave me infinite strength, and I got up the courage to perform on the stage. I don't know how I play, but I'm glad I finally did something I couldn't even think about. At the age of ten, I am a little timid, but I don't lack courage.

Fifteen years old, full of dreams

The final exam is coming, and the students are as busy as a bee, but I secretly took a leave-planning my future. I dream of becoming an excellent lawyer in the future, arguing with others in court, fighting to the death, and finally defeating each other and returning home in triumph. But how can I work hard now? Is this the right decision? I still have many questions. I also dream of owning my own manor, planting my favorite flowers and trees and raising my favorite animals in the future ... but how easy is it? Can my dream come true? My mind is like a mess, I can't stop, and I'm still confused! At the age of fifteen, I am full of dreams for the future, but I am very confused!

summary

I don't know myself. I don't know why I am naive and realistic, timid and brave, full of dreams and confused ... However, this is me. Although I don't know myself very well, I know that I am a girl who welcomes the future with her dreams.

short review

This exercise has the following characteristics:

1. Sort out the material in chronological order, intercept the life fragments of five, ten and fifteen years old, and show your personality and growth step by step.

2. Highlight paragraphs with subheadings. With the growth of age, the body and mind develop in depth, from "naive" to "full of fantasy", and are displayed with concrete examples, which not only highlights the personality characteristics of the self, but also records the trajectory of its own growth.

The article is written around the fact that you are a contradictory entity. At the beginning, it says, "What puzzles you most is probably yourself. And that's who I am. The ending not only echoes the beginning, but also uses "but this is me." Although I still don't know myself very well, I know that I am a girl who welcomes the future with her dreams. "To sublimate the theme of the article, so that the content and ideas of the article are integrated.

Synchronous guidance

Theme 1: Footprints of Growth

Writing skills:

1. 12, 13 years old, did you try to look back on this journey of your life? As you get older, your body grows taller, your knowledge becomes richer, your thoughts change, and your personality gradually forms ... What kind of footprints have you left at this starting point of your life?

2. "Footprints of Growth" This is a figurative composition topic. "Footprint" refers to more profound experiences and processes in life. Judging from the requirements of the topic, it is easier to write an unforgettable narrative or essay. It shows us an obvious writing clue: with the growth of age, physical and mental growth. The selection of materials for the main part of the article should be a gradual deepening process, and the difficulty of the "color" of the article lies in the conception and selection of materials. Obviously, writing about the growth of the mind is far more attentive than writing about the growth of the body, and we need to try our best to capture the highlights of our own growth in material selection and add color to the article.

3. This article should take chronology and narration as the main expressions, appropriately express personal feelings and increase the connotation of the article.

4. The number of words in the composition is not less than 600 words.

Topic 2: Appreciate yourself

Writing skills:

1. "Appreciate yourself" means to be good at discovering your own bright spots, being moved by yourself, cheering for yourself, and making your life full of confidence and hope. Some people say: "A person who doesn't appreciate himself is hard to be happy, and will only make himself fall into the quagmire of inferiority. Only a hopeful heart can sail. "

Don't rush to write such an article. List your strengths, strengths, differences and things you are proud of. You can start with your appearance, personality, hobbies, habits and aspirations, and choose one or several materials with the most personal characteristics. This is the process of choosing materials and conception, and it is also the premise of successful writing. After the content and theme are determined, we should consider what form to use to carry the content, which requires choosing the appropriate style and expression to achieve the perfect unity of content and form. The writing process should be realistic and not exaggerated. While appreciating yourself, let others cheer for you.

3. The number of words in the composition is not less than 600 words.