Write a composition around characters.

1. Ask for a composition describing the characters

First, write a composition by grasping the characteristics of the characters: Give you a model essay:

My grandfather is over 8 years old, with snow-white hair and wrinkled face, but he is very energetic.

one day, my parents are out, and I can't cook myself, so I want to go out and buy food. Just before I left, grandpa came and said to me, "Come to my place to eat. Grandpa has cooked something for you." I went to play as soon as I finished the Huakao model essay network, but my grandfather didn't do it. His stern appearance made me tremble.

Xu Xiaozhuang

[zk168]' s lunch! "I said happily after entering the room.

"Hehe, then eat more!" Grandpa said and gave me a big bowl of rice. "Eat more vegetables, ah!"

Look at me wolfing down. Grandpa is smiling all the time.

Grandpa is so considerate to me in life, but he is not so amiable in his studies. When he sees me every day, he asks, "Have you finished your homework? Let me check and see. " If you go to play before you finish your homework, grandpa won't do it. His stern appearance makes me tremble.

Xu Xiaozhuang 2. Composition describing characters (not less than 5 words)

My grandmother is a middle school teacher. She has a pair of bright eyes under her dark eyebrows. She is not tall, and her slightly fat body is always so busy. Grandma is a very serious and responsible person in her work, and I admire her very much.

Grandma is over half a year old, and she still cares about her students, no matter what. I remember that one night last winter, the cold wind kept blowing. My grandmother and I just fell asleep when we heard a knock at the door. As soon as the door opened, it turned out to be a student. The student said, "Teacher, one of our classmates is sick, and our teacher is not here. Would you please go and have a look?" Grandma put on her clothes and left without saying anything. It wasn't until 4 o'clock in the morning that grandma dragged herself back. Looking at her purple face with cold, I touched her cold hand and asked, "Grandma, are you cold?" Grandma smiled and said, "What does it matter to be cold if you do something for the students?" Grandma's words remain deeply in my memory.

Grandma cares about her students in every way, but she has no time to take care of her health. Every night, Grandma prepares lessons until late at night. Sometimes I wake up and see them, and say to Grandma lovingly, "Grandma, it's time for you to go to bed." Grandma says, "You have to go to school tomorrow. I don't prepare lessons carefully. How can I give lectures to the students tomorrow?" I didn't want to interrupt my grandmother's thoughts any more, so I nodded helplessly. Looking at her growing white hair, my eyes were moist. I fell asleep unconsciously. In my dream, I saw my grandmother, who was holding flowers in her hand and facing a group of children, with a gratified smile on her face ... In a blink of an eye, I also became a people's teacher and was walking in her footsteps. 3. Composition about a character image

it's a habit for me to sit at my desk and think while reading. I read The Old Man and the Sea by Hemingway, an American writer, which is a book I like very much.

There is no other reason, but I am deeply attracted by the "tough guy image" contained in the book. This is a very pure and simple feeling. Invisible, it projects indomitable courage and perseverance, as if interpreting the eternal belief that life is like iron.

Santiago, the hero of the book, has been at sea for 84 days without catching a fish. However, he is not depressed, sad, and never gives up easily.

Because he has self-confidence and unyielding fighting spirit, in his opinion, there is nothing impossible in the world. However, it often backfires.

It seems that the lucky goddess abandoned him, and the result of nothing lasted for many days. The only partner, the child, also chose to leave him. Santiago, a lonely old fisherman, may be doomed in the end in the face of the vast and impermanent sea.

However, even so, he never gave up the hope of seeking. He resolutely struggled with all kinds of difficulties in this vast and distant field for three days and three nights ... Only an 18-foot-long fish skeleton and a scarred body were dragged home. Secular people think that he has failed, and he has been defeated in a terrible and irreparable way. He is even so dizzy that he pulls back useless fish bones as "trophies".

However, I don't understand that what the old fisherman did is a record of human willpower and a miracle in the history of life. Compared with the old fisherman, how small and cowardly they are! The old man is not afraid of wind and rain, because he is a bow. The greater the pressure, the more full he is, and the stronger the arrow he shoots. The old man never gives up, because he is iron, which weighs heavily in his heart and becomes the cornerstone of faith; The old man is an eagle, flying all over the world. The higher he flies, the farther he can see ... A person who believes in himself will not be swallowed up by violent waves. A person who believes in himself will not be bent by a lonely night as quiet as death; A person who believes in himself, the so-called despair, is nothing more than the crumbs in his hand that blow away with the wind; A person who believes in himself will save himself in failure, straighten himself out in success, sublimate himself in the vicissitudes of the world of mortals, and strengthen himself in an ill-fated fate! The true meaning of this novel, its spiritual connotation is precisely here.

Santiago, an ordinary old fisherman, can surpass others. No matter where he is, whenever he encounters setbacks and hardships, he always silently says to himself, "Pain is nothing to a man", and his tone is very firm.

Even in the face of death, he never frowned and took back his steps. Life is like iron, a very beautiful word, instantly enveloped his life, pierced his blood, and gave birth to the heroic and awe-inspiring heroic nature.

When I closed the book, a classic sentence from Hemingway in The Old Man and the Sea appeared in my mind: "A man is not born to be defeated. You can destroy him as much as you can, but his spirit is invincible." Days, there is always no rain.

Anatomy: The article is relevant to the topic, rich in content and sincere in feelings. Starting with the description of the scenery, the mood of "I" is set off, and then my reading experience is discussed in combination with "The Old Man and the Sea" to reveal the image significance of Santiago.

At last, it ends with the classic sentence in the novel, "A man is not born to be defeated, you can destroy him as much as possible, but his spirit is invincible", and begins with the care of "The sky is always raining", and the full text is closed and the structure is round. The language of this article is sophisticated, the literary talent is flying, the meaning of the sentence is rich, and there are many sentences of vigilance. 4. 2-word composition describing characters

When I was taking a nap, I suddenly found that my mother's shiny black hair was mixed with a harsh white hair, and my heart was violently pulled. My mother was only 36 years old! How can there be white hair? Usually, my mother is very strict with my study. In order to make me master the knowledge of the day, she often finds me some typical questions to strengthen. I didn't do well in the exam. My mother didn't criticize me. She analyzed my mistakes in time and found out the reasons. The teacher reflected that my mother would educate me and let me know the importance of paying attention in class. My mother gave me meticulous care in my life: I had a conflict with my good friend, and when I got home, I made a mistake in front of my mother, but my mother asked me to find faults from myself and let me learn to treat my friends correctly; The exam is not as good as others, and I am not only in a good mood, but also my mother always asks me to find out my own gap and treat my grades correctly. When I was criticized by my teacher, I went home to my mother to complain. My mother helped me find the reason, let me treat my teacher's criticism correctly and encouraged me to cheer up. 5. Articles describing characters

According to the date marked by Balzac himself at the end of the novel, Eugenie Grandet was completed in September 1833.

But Balzac complained in a letter to Madame Hanska on November 2th, 1833 that his Eugenie Grandet was 1 pages short. Can we speculate that the first draft of the novel was completed in September and Balzac was still revising or rewriting it in November?

Balzac is used to revising or rewriting the manuscript on the proof of the printing house, sometimes as many as fifteen or six times. He put together the revised proofs of a work and gave them to his intimate friends as a gift for preservation. He said: "This is evidence of my hard work and patience for perfection."

Eugenie Grandet must have gone through the same twists and turns. It is certain, however, that the novel was finished in December 1833, because Balzac was invited to meet with Mrs. Hanska's family in Geneva that Christmas. Before he left, he wrote to Mr. Hansky, asking him if he could present the manuscripts of two recent books, The Country Doctor and Eugenie Grandet, to Mrs. Hanska for safekeeping.

1833 was a crucial year for Balzac, both in his writing and in his life. In life, he secretly engaged with Mrs. Hanska that Christmas; He discovered a secret in his creation.

In September that year, when the first draft of Eugenie Grandet was completed, he confidently declared to his sister, "I am going to rule the European literary world, and I will not be frustrated! I just need to work hard for another two years, and I can surpass all those who try to bind my hands and feet and hinder my progress! " His self-confidence comes from a huge idea that he has been brewing for a long time: he wants to combine all the works he has written and will write into a "whole building", which he calls "my Madeleine Cathedral." On October 26, 1834, in a letter to Mrs. Hanska, he concretized this idea into a grand plan: his "Madeleine" will be composed of three parts: the first part, "custom research", will comprehensively reflect the current social situation-all kinds of fruits produced by society.

... the second part is' philosophical research' ... to explain the reasons for these feelings and the formation of this life, and to explain the conditions on which society and people depend. ..... After the cause and effect, there must be' analysis and research' ... Because the' fruit' has been listed and the' cause' has been analyzed, it is time to discuss the principles.

... the so-called principle is the author himself. (2) As André Maurois said, Balzac had been exploring in two fields before 1832.

One field is writing philosophical novels, such as The Story of the Donkey's Skin and Louis Lambel, and the other field is Private Life Scenes. Since 1832, he has realized the combination of the two.

Steven Zweig believes that the combination of the two is that he discovered a secret, that is, "if we can observe contemporary life from a proper perspective, we can also write fresh, lively and rich works. What matters is not the theme and layout, but the internal motivation ... The motivation does not lie in the style and structure, but in the description of the characters. "

③ In other words, in the past, there stood an observer of real life between storytellers and thinkers, but now, this observer can load his thoughts and tell stories of people with concrete life. According to Steven Zweig's analysis, Balzac's first success in this respect was Colonel Xabi, and the second success was Eugenie Grandet.

-① See the English version of Balzac by Steven Zweig, published by Viking Publishing House of new york in 1946. (2) quoted from André Maurois's biography of Balzac on page 299, published by People's Literature Publishing House in 1993.

③ See Chapter 1 of the English version of Balzac by Steven Zweig, Balzac Discovers His Secret, published by Viking Publishing House of new york in 1946. Therefore, when Eugenie Grandet was finished, Balzac was entering the mature stage of creation; His idea of "Madeleine Cathedral" is a sign of maturity.

Although it was not the grand plan of his later "Human Comedy", at least the basic framework of "Human Comedy" has begun to take shape. Balzac has since found his real career and his vocation: to describe the social customs of the 19th century truthfully like a historian.

Following this road, he can finally be so proud in ten years: "There are four great men in the world: Napoleon, Ju Weiye and O'Connell, and I will be the fourth. The first man once made a great impact on Europe. He created an army! The second one knows the mystery of the earth! The third becomes the embodiment of a nation! And I will put the whole society in my mind. "

①------① Preface of Human Comedy. Quoted from André Maurois's Biography of Balzac on page 361.

Perhaps Balzac himself didn't realize the important position of Eugenie Grandet in his whole creation. Balzac, who has always regarded himself as a thinker, always thinks that philosophical novels like Louis Lambel are far more valuable than "well-written best-selling books" like Eugenie Grandet (Balzac language). But in fact, most of Balzac's philosophical novels, like the thinkers and artists who painstakingly explore the true meaning of the universe described in the book, are often defeated because of their excessive ambitions.

Steven Zweig once said fairly that Balzac's philosophical novels "did not reach the highest level of art, but only as the result of the highest breathing." (1) "Louis Lambel died halfway, grant the old man can live forever".

② Indeed, Eugenie Grandet is one of Balzac's masterpieces because of its own aesthetic value; Among Balzac's works, there are really few works with simple structure and complete theme like Eugenie Grandet. If we read this novel with the attitude of reading ordinary novels, we may be frightened by the description of the novel which is thirty pages long at the beginning.

But impatient readers must not skip it, because this long description is very important to the whole novel. Balzac took pains to describe the streets, houses, social conditions and human feelings of Somme, and made a detailed historical and social analysis, and made an in-depth introduction to the life experience, family, residence pattern and social relations of Old Grandet, all in order to make the novelist. 6. An interesting composition describing characters

My cousin

I have an innocent, cute, intelligent and lively cousin, who has a pair of big watery eyes, and when he thinks about a problem, his black eyes roll in his eyes. When my cousin laughs, he can show a pair of white and neat little teeth, which is very interesting. I like him very much.

my cousin lives in grandma's house. Once, he told his grandmother that he liked Xiaohua Mall. Grandma loves her cousin and listens to him. He told me to keep an eye on my cousin and go to the street to buy Xiaohua Mall myself. Grandma bought a lively and beautiful Xiaohua Mall. My cousin jumped up with joy when he saw the lively and lovely Xiaohua Mall, so he quickly ran to his grandmother's side, played with the lovely Xiaohua Mall, stroked it gently, and sang beautiful Xiaohua Mall songs in his mouth. Then Xiaohua Mall scratched his cousin's trousers with his claws. Grandpa saw