Highlights about the detailed description

The correct use of detail description plays an extremely important role in expressing characters, narrating events and reproducing the environment. It is the basic unit of narrative plot, and there is no art without details. The following is a detailed description I collected, I hope it will be useful to everyone ~

Fragments about detail description 1 1 Teacher Chen teaches carefully. However, it is so approachable and warm to communicate with classmates after school. Teacher Chen is not stingy with his smile at all. When she comes into contact with her, she always gives us a feeling of spring breeze. She likes to laugh. When she hears that classmate tell jokes, she will laugh her head off. When she heard our naive question, she must have doubled up with laughter. Seeing our funny expressions and actions, she will definitely laugh; Seeing that we have made a little progress, she will show a gratified smile? Her laughter, like golden sunshine, has been projected into our hearts.

2. Father, he has slightly white hair, looks very old and has some wrinkles on his forehead. This may be the wrinkles that grow to maintain the burden of our family life. These big eyes are embedded under his crescent-shaped eyebrows, and there is a dark red mouth under his straight nose. My father often wears a brown jacket on top and patched trousers on the bottom. Because my father is a carpenter, he is often scratched by a knife and stained with Japanese glue when he is working. A pair of ordinary cloth shoes constitutes a love scene.

3. About Grandpa Liu, as an ordinary farmer, he is now 70 years old and finally ushered in a sunny night; But he is still an old habit, neither supercilious nor deceitful, and he is an old man with high cultural accomplishment. He has endured all kinds of social pressures that others can't bear, and he has also suffered the hardships of life that others dare not eat. Throughout his life, he has been busy with field production, diligent in writing poems and articles for part-time jobs, and diligent in educating his children. During his farming period, his output rose to the forefront of the country and his cultural literacy was unprecedented. All the children are working outside. Daughter-in-law is a national high school teacher, and grandson is a college student of North China University. They are all very filial, and they will talk to Sixth Master on the phone every other day or two, asking questions about cold and warmth, and living without hesitation.

My elder sister is two years older than me. She looks beautiful, but she is just an ordinary person. Empty vase? Her mouth is not as clever as mine. Every time I quarrel with her, she is told by me? Crying? .

5. Grandpa Liu didn't make a long speech, but he made the characteristics of poetry, the history of the same strain and the complicated relationship clear, vivid and interesting, which made people suddenly enlightened; His knowledge of literature has also benefited me a lot, and I am also gratified. This simple skill comes from his in-depth study of poetry, and it is also his own studious pursuit and hard practice of progress. In the years of life, he is not afraid of fatigue, disease, and that kind of strong will. I believe grandpa Liu's health will recover soon.

6. Grandpa Liu and I are from the same village, ranking the sixth among family members, and my grandfather is the same generation, so we call him Grandpa Liu. Grandpa Liu is honest, good at poetry couplets and often helps people outside the village write various papers and reports. When he meets a dispute between mice and birds in the country, he will make peace with them. After Mr. Liu hit the nail on the head, both sides could only take it orally.

7. Grandpa Liu is my teacher. He often listens to his lectures on poems and papers, society and life. His tone is not high, but his character and wisdom are always refreshing and inspiring. So I was greatly influenced by him in poetry, and I also knew the close relationship between composition and life, just as the ancients said? Be upright and make a noble song? The truth. Grandpa Liu is such a down-to-earth person, with the temperament of a poet and philosopher, caring for others, pursuing sincerity, attaching importance to friendship, it is difficult to distinguish between true and false, and his remarks are repeated? Patriotism does not lag behind others? .

8. My mother is thirty-six years old and has been doing sales in the company. She is neither tall nor short, with a round face and bright eyes. She is very amiable. Every time I sit next to my mother, I feel particularly warm. My mother is the most grateful person in my life, because my mother trained me from an ignorant baby to a knowledgeable pupil, so I was moved by many things my mother did.

9. In life, my father is like a lamp that never goes out, always caring for me everywhere; In my study, I patiently and carefully pointed out the subtle mistakes in my homework. My father wants me to be a studious, curious, law-abiding and caring boy. Once, I found fifty cents at school and went home happily to tell my father that I thought he would say I was lucky and got a big bargain, but my father solemnly said: This happened to my father when he was a child. Don't you want to lose money in a hurry You should give it to your teacher. Fifty cents is a trivial matter, but it can reflect a person's deep personality. . Later, I gave the money to the owner and felt very happy.

10 Talking about his darling? Brother fu? He is always in high spirits. Brother fu? As his only son, he certainly dotes on him. The little guy often snuggles up in his arms and coquetry, not just in the morning? Hello, dad! ? He will also run to the door to meet him after work. He often goes to make up lessons for students. Brother fu? He always cooks and boils water for him at home until he comes back. He said that although there are many unpleasant things in this world, he will be happy as long as his son is around.

1 1. He is also a martial arts expert, isn't he? Jiuyin white bone claw? The heir of. Do not believe you come to my house! Under my dad's neck? Straight flush? Is the best proof. He doesn't mess with anyone except dad. Well, I can't help it. I am very energetic. Dad jumps up and down with his arms in his arms every day, which others can't do (except, of course, people with great strength).

12, facial features, brow full of righteousness, small eyes bright, straight police uniform set off him. I always see this familiar figure when I pass the intersection near the school every day. Every time I see him, I feel respect in my heart. Our school is located in a residential area. When going to school and after school, there is a lot of people flowing. At this time, we can always see him silently and skillfully directing traffic. Whether it is windy or rainy, cold or hot, he always sticks to his post.

13, when my grandmother saw me faint, my heart seemed to stop for a few seconds. Later, the panicked grandmother trudged to the hospital to buy medicine. This dark night is still so cruel, I don't want to give grandma a little starlight to illuminate her night trip. If heaven is sentimental, it is old, but it turns out that heaven is heartless. It can't stand grandma's clumsy steps all the time, making her fall on the road. The cold wind blew mercilessly on her, as if she felt that other things were heartless enough. But grandma was not knocked down by this little difficulty. She propped up her tired body and brought me the medicine. While pushing me, she was still dreaming with medicine and shouting in haste. I opened my sleepy eyes and saw grandma's anxious face. I took medicine and looked at grandma's clothes and found something different. I knew it.

14. In our impression, Mr. Ma is always very busy, not only in charge of managing the youth league branch of the school, but also presiding over the meetings of the school? It is rare to see her when she is free. But even so, she still cares about us, study, discipline and interpersonal communication? When you are free, please let us go to the office to talk about our recent studies and even the little things in our lives. For us? Teacher Ma, who is not in the same class, took pains to teach us how to be a man and how to study. play

15, I used to hold my mother's hand when I was a child. Every time I go shopping with my mother, I hold her hand tightly. Because as long as you follow your mother, you will encounter many interesting things. Every time I go shopping with my mother and see something delicious and novel, I will hold my mother's hand and ask her to buy me this and that. If my mother says no, I will hold her hand tighter, coquetry and look at her with longing and pity, but she can't do anything about me. When I was a child, every time I held my mother's hand, I always felt very safe, warm and full of happiness.

16, in my class, my handwriting is the worst, so the teacher tried to help me to make my handwriting better. Every day, the teacher tirelessly teaches me to write in the classroom and at home, teaching me the skills and methods of writing, the method of holding a pen and the sitting posture of writing, and teaching me hand in hand. With the careful help of my teacher, I got very good grades. So I admire her from the bottom of my heart.

17. In a half-dark room, a little girl is moving a small stool. Look, she really stepped on it to cook. ? Boom? 1, the oil spilled out and dripped on her white and tender skin, burning her skin. Looks like she's scared. First of all, she panicked and staggered down. It probably really hurts! She frowned and flattened her mouth, and tears swirled in her eyes, as if she would fall like a broken pearl at any time. But she seems to have suddenly thought of something, stretched out her little hand and wiped it around her eyes a few times, wiping away her tears. The little body stood up again. She patted the dirt on her body and set foot on the bench again. When she falls, she will get up by herself. Even though she fell and was covered with scars, she stood up again and again.

In my life, the first teacher is my mother. My mother taught me to walk. At first, I always wrestled. I was annoyed with my mother and not with me. Mom saw me fall many times, but she still couldn't bear to teach me, she said; ? Keep an eye on where you want to go, so that you won't fall when you walk. Come and have a try! ? Sure enough, I walked a long way miraculously, and this experience was deeply branded in my heart. My mother taught me to talk, too, and I finally learned to talk by following my mother's mouth.

19. In my study, he is my teacher-my strict father. My father gave me a lot of help in my study. Once, my academic performance declined, and my father gave me lessons every night. At that time, I didn't understand my father until after the final exam. In the process of my father telling me questions, I learned from my father that I should do the questions carefully and read them through, so that I can understand the meaning of the questions and write the correct answers, thus improving my academic performance.

20. This steamed stuffed bun is a foodie. As soon as I saw that someone else had food, I walked up to that person pitifully and said, * * *, you are the best, can you give me something to eat? Listen, I'm starving! ? After that, he sucked his belly in and showed it to the man. If that person still doesn't give it to him, the bun will follow him, even if he goes to the toilet, he will follow his ass until he asks for mercy and gives him something to eat.

About the fragment that describes 2 1 in detail. After a while, a thin, small-headed teacher came to the classroom. He has short and thick black hair on his head and wears a brown and black leather coat. His little feet are set off by bright black shoes, but they support his whole body. There was a sharp and firm look in his black eyes. He went to the podium, introduced himself and asked us to introduce ourselves. After sweeping, the classroom was quiet, and the teacher said to us in loud and clear language. Class? .

2. Hearing is false, but seeing is believing. I'll tell you an episode of reading. Yesterday was the day after my mother and I arrived in Wuhan. My mother sent me to the bookstore on the sixth floor of Wuhan Square to choose books. She was very tired, so she sat on the edge of the cupboard near the corner and waited for me, so I stood and chose slowly. After a few hours, my mother had a good rest, reminded me to go downstairs for dinner, and asked me if I had chosen the book. I pointed at this book and then at that book. I really want to move the bookstore to my home, but I think I'd better take less luggage when I go back to Jianshi. Finally, I chose a book, Saint Mao Xin's Senge. Mom smiled and said:? The older you get, the more sensible you are! ?

I still remember that in the second and third grade, as the monitor of Class One, I wanted to help you type. Just when I was seriously typing letters one by one, you were amused by my cuteness because I was too serious. You said:? Cece, if you fight like this again, it's useless! ? So, as soon as I got home from school, I didn't put down my bag, just? Hey? I ran to ask my father to teach me to type, so a software appeared on our computer? Jinshan typing. With it, my typing posture and speed have been improved, and I have become the only person in my class who can really type.

In another class, the headmaster came to see the teacher. As soon as teacher Zhang went out, he began to sing. Who is visiting? Where is the teacher going? Can I sing loudly? As the monitor, I said to him: Stop singing and be quiet. ? He doesn't care about this. He raised his fist and hit me. I want to fight back after thinking about it. As a monitor, I can't take the lead in beating people. But who knows this? Stupid big guy? Show off to the classmates next to you:? Look, I dare to hit her, but she won't fight back! ? I flew into a rage and punched him. At this time, he wanted to fight back. Mr. Zhang came and our war was finally over.

Mr. Jiang is the most elegant in the class. It can turn students' thoughts into kinetic energy, so that students can have no pressure in class. Teacher Jiang's class is very special, and he can finally sing and laugh in class. Let the students have an epiphany and actively raise their hands to answer questions. As long as a classmate makes rapid progress, he will praise that classmate in a low voice in the voices of other teachers. It can be seen that teacher Jiang's eyes are discerning.

6. Every morning, she makes a mask. Her face will change color, because it is very dark when the mask is not made, and very white when it is finished. One night when I was five years old, I watched a very scary movie. I went to my mother's room the next day and gave me a fright. It turns out that my mother is making a mask.

7. I am eight years old and just entered the third grade. Although I am young, I am a little boastful, aren't I? Listen to me! Recently, the discipline in the class is not very good, and even the headmaster knows about it. We took our class as a negative example and lost many people. I am paying attention! So, I quietly gave the class teacher an idea. Everyone should be a subject monitor for one day to see who performs well, rewards hard work and punishes laziness, and who can be a good teacher's assistant.

On the way home, we met her classmates, and they called her by her nickname as soon as they saw her. My heart trembled when I heard someone calling her by her nickname. She used to fly into a rage when someone called her a nickname. But not this time? Just looked at them coldly, silent, lifeless and calm.

9. I am a little book fan. Last summer vacation, as the captain of the Young Eagles, I organized my partners to go to Xinhua Bookstore to read books. It was raining cats and dogs that day, and my mother said to me, It's raining so hard that my classmates won't go, so rest at home! ? I was anxious, so I said, As a captain, how can I not go to Xinhua Bookstore? Mom couldn't beat me, so she had to take me with her. After the team members arrived, we found a quiet place and read with relish. Laugh when you see something funny. Seeing the sad place, I couldn't help crying. How time flies! It was dark in a blink of an eye, and we reluctantly left the bookstore.

10. I have a friend named Li Ming. His eyes are so small that you always mistake them for closed eyes. His nose is very special, which reminds people who see it of Pinocchio who loves to lie. He is tall and thin. He looks like a sorghum from a distance, thin but tall and straight. He practiced routine boxing, Sanda and other martial arts since he was a child, and won many places in martial arts competitions. He is skilled in martial arts and often does good deeds.

1 1. On the way, grandpa walked slowly for fear that my feet hurt. I put my face on his back, and I felt a gentle temperature flowing. Seeing his rough skin because of working all day, my tears gradually stopped. At this time, I don't know how my feet hurt less. I may see grandpa tired! Then I thought: I want to carry my grandfather when I grow up? ! But I don't know when, I fell asleep on his thick warm shoulder, maybe I was tired of crying.

12. One day, I just woke up and picked up my socks and put them on. I found a hole in my sock. I said to my grandmother. Grandma, these socks are broken. Burn them! ? Grandma said:? It can be mended, and it can be worn after being mended. Why did you throw it away? You can't change this problem. ? I have nothing to say again. A few days later, grandma put on the socks I was going to throw away. She has mended it, and grandma smiled and said to me, Look, isn't this good? I replied:? Yes, you are really frugal. ?

13. At the end of the corridor is a stone boat. Zhou Shi, also known as the Blue Rock Boat, is located on the west side of the northern end of Kunming Lake. It was originally built in 1996, and 1996 was burned by the British and French allied forces. In 2000, according to the meaning of Cixi, the Chinese cabin was changed into a western-style cabin with two wheels on both sides, like a real ship moored in Kunming Lake. The stone boat is 100 meters long, and its hull is all carved from stone. The two-story white wooden building on board is decorated with marbles and the top is decorated with brick carvings, which is exquisite and gorgeous, and it is the treasure of the water architecture in the Summer Palace.

14. When we looked at Mount Tai in the endless street ahead, his burly body appeared and disappeared in the clouds. When I came to the foot of Mount Tai, I looked up and saw the peaks rise and fall. In the distance, the castle peak goes straight into the sky. Nearby, there is a green tree with thousands of gestures. Get on the tour bus, run up the mountain road like a silver snake and meet the stream all the way. The stream glided over the flat stone, which was covered with different shades of moss. When sunlight is refracted by soft water, moss becomes colored moss, and stones become colored stones.

15. In the park, everything is quiet here, but it sounds good. The trees washed away by the rain are particularly green, and the pond is like a concert. The raindrops are singing and dancing, rippling on the lake, as if awakening the dying lotus fairy, and making them join the dance, swaying and cheering for it. Everything is like an ink painting, with hazy beauty. What is it like? The water is bright and sunny, and the mountains are cloudy and rainy. It's an honor.

16. What did you see when you entered a small park? Landscape painting? . First, it is an antique two-story building. There are many round threads on the wall of this house, and some ancient and meaningful ceramics are arranged in an ancient way. My skirt brushed the threshold and a veil hung in front of the door. Look carefully, there seems to be an old man in front of the window sill in the back room. Look carefully, oh, an old man with glasses is lying in a robe, shaking? Squeak? Close your eyes on the creaking couch. Ah, this old man is really thinking seriously. Shh! It seems that he hasn't found me yet. Don't interrupt his train of thought. Out of this room, the little pigeon on the roof? Goo goo? Crying quietly, as if telling the ancient legend of this house. I waved to them: hello! Little pigeon. ? Pigeons flap their wings. Goo goo? Called twice and flew to another roof.

17. On the right of the stone boat is the landmark of the Summer Palace? Foxiangge. It is the center of the whole park building layout. 1996 was destroyed by the British and French allied forces, and was rebuilt in the original site by Guangxu. Now the Buddha Pavilion is tall and magnificent. It is a palace with eight sides, three floors and four eaves. Thousand-handed Guanyin is enshrined in the main hall of Foxiang Pavilion. The head is divided into four layers, each layer has three sides, twelve sides and twenty-four arms, and the petal lotus throne on the ninth floor is stepped. The Buddha statue looks serious and friendly, without fear, which makes people admire the ingenuity of the craftsman.

18. Suzhou's market is not as vast and prosperous as Beijing and Shanghai. Stepping on the first bluestone brick gives the first impression that the air is filled with quiet breath. In the middle of this street is a small bridge with flowing water, and there are two paths less than one meter along the river on both sides. It's not so much a path as an aisle. In the middle of the street in Suzhou is a small bridge with flowing water on both sides. Path? Beside? Path? Is to live in a house. Look at this water, how bright and clear it is! The breeze blew, and the water moved gently, like a thinker, quietly looking at the dark blue sky.

19. Walking inside, you can see a tall chestnut tree, which grows luxuriantly and is as high as four floors. His roots grow very thick. I remember once, I was able to surround this tree with six friends. He is also the symbol of each of our classmates, because he is brave, can overcome the cold and is not afraid of wind and rain; Also very strong, obscure dedication; It also loves to help students and brings shade to students every summer.

20. Autumn in our school is full of colors and smells. Color: The maple leaves in our school are as red as fire, and they are all as red as the faces of drunkards. Each shape is like a small palm, very cute. Xiang: Jingui in our school can be said to be thyme. I really want to fly over and pick one when I smell this fragrance in the classroom! When class was over, many people gathered around the osmanthus tree and enjoyed some beautiful flowers. These flowers are as yellow as gold, and some are as white as silver. How beautiful! Attracted a lot of people.

2 1. The most famous farm in our school is Happy Farm. In autumn, many crops on Happy Farm are ripe. Sorghum smiles red, corn smiles bent, and wheat is golden, like a golden carpet, shining with golden light, which is very dazzling. Cotton is like a small white ball, and the unknown wild flowers on the roadside are colorful, yellow, pink and blue? Like a child's face, swaying in the wind, small and exquisite, very cute. Leaves falling from small trees near Happy Farm dance like butterflies of all colors. Willow branches by the river are like fairy's long hair, floating in the wind, and the wind is like a comb, as if combing this beautiful green hair for the fairy.

22. The river is crystal clear, like transparent blue silk, lying quietly in the embrace of the earth. This little fish is so cute. It keeps spitting bubbles, as if preparing for the bubble-spitting competition. The little turtle is really timid. After swimming for a step, he looked around. Before his eyes, a grass floated up, and then it shrank into its shell. Shrimp dancing, as if to say: Who dares to underestimate me? I am the boss here. ?

23. When you walk into the campus, you can see a big flower bed at a glance. This flower bed is great. Whenever his classmates pass by, he always waves to us. He was still dancing for me when I passed by! What's more, whenever the wind blows, the safflower immediately hides, the green leaves jump out, and the safflower altar immediately becomes a green flower bed. Whenever the red rain falls, those green leaves hide again, and the green flower bed becomes a red flower bed again.

24. Walk into the gate of the Summer Palace, bypass the main hall and come to the famous promenade. The promenade is more than 700 meters, with no end in sight. There are colorful paintings on every beam in the corridor. No two of these paintings are the same. The characters in the painting are all from China's famous classical literature. There are flowers and trees on both sides of the promenade, with lush foliage. Hundreds of years old trees are still full of vitality, and I have opened my arms!

25. The opportunity came, and I approached quietly. It turned out to be a mosquito, staring at it and thinking: dead mosquito, I thought you were a powerful species. You little brat, how dare you disturb this girl's homework? I think you are impatient. Let me give you a ride. I picked up the fly swatter angrily, walked carefully to the mosquito and slapped it hard. Dad? I thought the mosquito was killed, so I happily picked up the fly swatter. Who knows, the mosquito escaped from my palm. I sneer, thinking: little thing, you play hide-and-seek with me. Last time I let you go, this time it's not that simple. I picked up the fly swatter again and started the second battle.

26. Today, as usual, after dinner, I strolled around the community by bike. I was confident in my driving skills, but unexpectedly, the tire slipped. Dong? 1 of, mercilessly fell to the ground. I tried to stand up, but my foot moved, and the pain became more and more severe, like a knife cutting like a needle, eroding every nerve of mine. Look carefully, it's broken! The blood on the right foot slowly flowed out, dyed red, shocking!

27. In science class this afternoon, the science teacher asked me to make a simple anemometer. I prepared the materials when I got home. Materials: cardboard, watering, ceramic flowerpot, square paper, ruler, plasticine, scissors, pencil, a bamboo stick and two straws? The first step is to cut the cardboard into triangles. Step 2, divide the triangle into two parts, cut both ends of the straw, insert one end in the upper part of the triangle and the other end in the lower part of the triangle to make an arrow. Step 3, insert the bamboo stick in the middle of the straw. Step 4, put the flowerpot on the paper and draw two circles along the outside and the inner hole of the flowerpot. Step five, cut off the outer ring and the inner ring, and stick the circle on the bottom of the flowerpot with glue. Step six. Fix it. Step 7, insert the arrow into the straw, and it becomes a simple anemometer.

28. I started fishing. I gripped the fishing rod and threw the fishing line hard. I have been staring at the fishing line, and my body is motionless, for fear of scaring away the fish. Fishing for a long time, sweating all over, thinking: persistence is victory. At this point, the fishing rod moved slightly, and I felt a burst of joy, thinking: I hope it is a fat and big fish. I lifted the pole hard and saw a big fish appear in front of my eyes. I was overjoyed and shouted, I caught a fish. ? Then I carefully took down the big fish, and finally I caught dozens in one breath.

29. At dinner that night, I looked at him with black eyes. He picked up my chopsticks like a confession, put a small piece of tofu in, stood up and fed me carefully. I thought at that time: I have a good memory, and I know that I think he is dirty, so I use my chopsticks. I naturally opened my mouth, but strangely, he poured chopsticks into my mouth. I was shocked and felt that the trend was not good. Suddenly, the tofu fell, and my father was distracted to pick it up. As soon as I saw the chopsticks leave my mouth, I closed my mouth at once. I stared at him and asked him what he wanted to do just now. Dad confessed like a prisoner. After listening, my mother and I suddenly realized and burst into laughter. Dad really pulled out my tooth with all his strength.