Portrait description composition of junior high school students

1. Portrait Description Composition 600 words The old fisherman has several years of deep ditches hanging on his face. His deep eyes always like to look forward firmly, and his hands occasionally rub on the beach, but his dry lips still like to say those two words: Go ahead and you will always see the mainland.

(Central idea: I was hit hard but didn't flinch) What a ridiculous dress that woman was wearing: a big, wide, out-of-date coat was forcefully put on those small, narrow tight wool pants. I don't know if it's her own or picked it up. The decoration on her head has long been out of date and the color matching is unreasonable. It's really ridiculous to put your waist in front now and haggle over the twenty cents with the grandmother who sells vegetables. Run away? Or something else? His tattered clothes and big old slippers, with many traces of mud on his face, seemed to see his home. (Central idea: the gap between the rich and the poor in society is widening) Appearance description 1. He is 7 years old, neither tall nor thin, but he looks very energetic. He has short hair, a handsome face with bright black eyes and a high nose like a carrot.

People who have been to his house say that he has good features and is a good-looking boy. My sister is very cute. She has been 3 months.

A few days ago, it was my sister's centenary birthday. My mother drove her little sister to "Love You Baby" and took some photos. My sister has a pair of sparkling eyes, a bulging face and a very small mouth.

She has a pair of lovely ears, and a pair of small hands clenched their fists and swayed from time to time. Look! That meaty little foot like steamed bread is so cute! I love my sister.

My favorite classmate is Geng Hao, a handsome boy. Look! He is not tall, but he looks strong. His arms and legs are like ripe corn cobs. He likes to wear a coat without buttons, and he says, "That will be more imposing."

Geng Hao's head is round, his red face is round, and coincidentally, his shiny black eyes are round. I like his smile best. When he laughed, his black eyes turned into two crescent moons.

His little red mouth likes telling jokes. His jokes always make us laugh until the end, and then the curved crescent moon appears again. My father is the first mate of ocean shipping company.

He is very tall, his yellowish hair is naturally curly, his white square face is embedded with a pair of smart eyes, and his nose is particularly big under his high nose. When I was a child, I often looked at his nostrils and asked, "Dad, why are your nostrils so big?" He always answers with a smile; "Choose a horse with a big nose, because a horse with a big nose runs fast.

Dad was a sprint champion at school when he was a child. Ask your mother. "At this time, my mother and I will look at his big nostrils and laugh.

Dad is thin, of medium build, with a pair of modest eyes, a flat head and a high nose, which looks more energetic. The chiseled lips are covered with whiskers like steel needles.

Dad has a lot of knowledge. He often tells me many amazing and interesting science stories and tries to exercise me in many ways. There is such a little boy in our class. He is not tall, his body is like a small tree, and his limbs are like fresh shoots.

His thin body bears a big head, which really worries people whether his weak body can hold on. His face is very white, and the most striking thing is his big watery eyes, which are wide and round. Sometimes it really reminds people of the Monkey King's critical eyes in The Journey to the West. People say, "The eyes are the windows to the soul."

His big head is full of rich knowledge, which is enviable. He also has a clever little mouth, red, and sings a beautiful song! Do you know him? Want to know who he is? He is Wang Yuxi from our class.

My cousin is five years old this year. Although she is only five years old, sometimes I can't even tell her apart, so I have to give her three points. Cousin is very cute, with two dimples on her chubby face.

Sometimes when we smile at her, she will say, "I know what you are laughing at. You are laughing at my dimples. " With that, he poked her dimples with chubby fingers, looking very proud.

The most attractive thing about my cousin is her eyes. Her black eyes are so big that they almost occupy the whole eyeball. They are dark and seem to have no end in sight. When she asks you for something, she looks at you with pleading eyes, and your heart suddenly softens. She will give you whatever she wants.

My mother works as a teacher in a health school. She has big bright eyes under her bushy eyebrows and a nagging mouth under her straight nose, but she has a caring heart in her chest.

7. Miss Sun is a math teacher in our class. She is of medium height and looks like 35 years old.

An amiable face, always so kind. The eyes seen from those black-rimmed glasses are always so bright and kind.

Her language is always so profound, so wonderful and makes people laugh. 8. The female teacher's surname is Song. Because she is young, she is only 20 years old at most. So we all call her Miss Xiao Song, and some female students call her Big Sister kindly.

Teacher Xiao Song is tall and dressed simply. There are two arch eyebrows on the face of melon seeds, a pair of bright and sharp eyes embedded under the arch eyebrows, and a glib mouth.

Teacher Xiao Song tied two long ponytails and dragged them to his shoulders. 9. Feng Cheng is a classmate in our class.

He is not tall and his eyes are big and bright. In particular, he has two big ears and two thick lips, just like a big clock. To this end, the students gave him a nickname-"Big Clock".

Coincidentally, since the second grade, Feng Cheng has kept the classroom open and locked in the class every day, just like ringing a bell. This nickname is called "Open". 10. My deskmate Zhang Shan is very delicate and watery, but she has a nickname "Zhang Luneng".

1 1. Li became a "two-bar" health Commissioner because he was nosy. Although she is small and short, her voice is very high.

No matter who did something wrong, she will get to the bottom of it and make you apologize. Therefore, I secretly changed her name to "Mera".

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2. My classmate wrote 600 words in junior high school. Pay attention to describing her as a beautiful girl. She is a helpful classmate: she is my good friend-Fan Jiawei.

Fan Jiawei is a beautiful girl. She is slim, tall and dark, but this does not affect her beauty at all, but adds a little beauty.

Her eyes are so beautiful: bright black eyes, like two shiny black pearls, and like a pair of black glass balls immersed in clear water. Any part of the steering track is smart and charming.

Plus a pair of glasses with lavender frame, it looks like a "little doctor". She sometimes uses plain headdress to tie a soft and elegant hair behind her head, and her hair is braided like a "little lady".

Fan Jiawei is a good girl who is ready to help others. Once, Fan Jiawei and I were playing Woodenhead.

Suddenly, a little girl accidentally tripped and fell so hard that she couldn't get up for a while. She was about to help when I stopped her and said, "It's not from our class. Whatever. She can't afford it. Let's keep playing. Don't waste time. "

Unexpectedly, her eyebrows twisted into two earthworms. She said angrily to me, "You don't care about other classes, do you?" She is also a member of our school. Think about it, what it's like to fall like this without anyone to help you! "Say that finish, he walked beside the little girl, helped her up and comforted her a few words. The little girl limped back to the classroom.

My face turned red. What a good classmate! What kind classmates! How selfish I am compared with her! She is a good girl who is helpful, but I ... in an art class, I forgot to bring a marker and couldn't draw.

When she saw it, she lent me the watercolor pen without hesitation, but she was criticized. I walked up to him guiltily and said, "I'm sorry, I shouldn't be so selfish ..." But she said, "It's good to know, and make a good change!" From then on, I got rid of selfishness.

This is my helpful friend. Today is my classmate Ye Hongming's birthday, so I got up early in the morning. After getting up, I prepared a birthday card and a gift for Ye Hongming, then I had breakfast in a hurry and ran to the appointed place with Ye Hongming.

At the appointed place, I found that three students were waiting, but I didn't see the shadow of Ye Hongming. After a while, Ye Hongming came limping. It turned out that he hurt his foot while riding a bike yesterday, so he walked like this.

After all the staff arrived, Ye Hongming started his birthday trip. Ye Hongming will take us to his house to play first.

At his home, we gave Ye Hongming all kinds of birthday presents. Ye Hongming was very happy after receiving the gifts from his classmates.

Ye Hongming turned on the computer and played go-karting with his classmates. Because I'm not interested in driving this computer game, I just read magazines. After playing for about an hour, Ye Hongming's mother took us to eat KFC.

When we arrived at KFC restaurant, we sat down in the place reserved by Ye Hongming's mother. Everyone chose a set meal.

Then most people go to the corner with slides to play cat and mouse. We were tired of playing, and the set meal we just wanted came up, and everyone wolfed it down.

After lunch, Ye Hongming's birthday cake was also served. We all sang a birthday song for him and wished him a happy birthday. Ye Hongming closed his eyes and made a good wish. There is really no room in my stomach, and I have an old Beijing chicken roll to eat, so I packed it.

After eating the cake, KFC restaurant also presented a small gift for everyone. The next activity is that the lame conductor Ye Hongming takes us to Mixiang Lake to play real go-karting.

I didn't expect the staff there to say that some of our classmates didn't reach 1.40 and wouldn't let us play. We argued with him and he scolded us, so we left there in a fit of pique. We changed our plan to go bowling.

Let's go back to Ye Hongming's house to get the bowling cards we need for bowling. In order to save time, we took a taxi to Shenzhen bowling training base this time.

Walking into the stadium, a series of fairways appeared in front of you. This is my first time bowling, and I am a little excited. I picked up a ball to play, but was stopped by the administrator there. Because we didn't change our bowling shoes, we should wear professional shoes to play bowling! We put on our bowling shoes quickly and then divided into two teams. My team has Ye Hongming and Li Tuanzhang, and the other team has two friends, Liu Qianqiang and Ye Hongming. We use a ball for each team.

At first, Ye Hongming and Li Tuanchang always missed. When it was my turn, I learned the posture of others and scored a goal. I ended up knocking over six bowling pins. Slowly, Ye Hongming and Li Tuanzhang can also play six or seven bowling pins, but I can't. I am very angry.

It's my turn again This time, I held my breath and aimed at the target, so I threw a ball with all my strength. As a result, I hit a straight hit. Everyone applauded and cheered for me. I'm so happy, because it's the first time in my life that I hit a straight hit! This is also our best performance today. After bowling for an hour, we were too tired to carry the ball. Everyone got into the taxi home exhausted, and Ye Hongming's birthday ended in joy.

I wonder whose birthday is next time? 2. Travel around the mountains and have a good mood. Study and enrich knowledge.

Participating in activities is even more beneficial. "Debate Competition" is a useful activity.

One Friday morning in the third class, it was sunny and sunny. As soon as the bell rang, the teacher walked into the classroom with a big smile on his face, looked around the classroom and said to the students seriously, "Today, we are going to hold a special debate to discuss' How about inviting students to dinner on their birthday?' "Listen to the teacher, there was a commotion in the classroom.

Someone said without hesitation, "Not good!" Some students looked around and then said slowly, "OK." Some students pondered for a while before reluctantly saying, "Not so good."

The teacher smiled and said, "Well, let's start the debate now. I think that the students who invited their classmates to dinner on their birthdays are active and stand on the podium." Students who think it is not good to invite their classmates to dinner on their birthdays are the opposition, sitting in their seats.

Now, please come on stage. "Few students came to power.

So the wonderful debate began. Positive.

Write a 400-word composition describing my classmate's portrait. Everyone has his own appearance, but everyone's appearance is different. That's how I look.

My forehead is bigger and looks a little shiny. Some people say that this forehead will be smarter. Usually, the facial features are relatively correct, but when you are angry, your eyes will become bigger, as if you can breathe fire. My eyebrows bend down regularly, like two arcs drawn by compasses. My mouth is as red as rouge and my skin is white and smooth. The chin is a little sharp and the ears are not too big. I am of medium build. About 1.60, I wear a pair of glasses, and I do everything carelessly, not seriously or carefully. At that time, at school, I lost something. I was anxious and frowned, but I couldn't find it anywhere. Or my classmates told me that my things have been on my desk, and I scratched my head and smiled shyly. I am careless, but I think my carelessness can be changed. I can actually be a serious and careful person. I must take everything seriously. To this end, I have been working hard for this goal.

This is me, I like myself very much, because I will correct my shortcomings, make up my mistakes and make myself a hardworking person.

4. Write a 600-word composition about classmates' appearance. After entering junior high school, I made a new friend.

She is a girl of medium height with a ponytail. Her big eyes as bright as stars, small nose and mouth are cleverly and evenly distributed on the ruddy goose egg face.

She is lively and cheerful, loves to talk and laugh, and is a very humorous person. She likes telling jokes and always makes us all laugh. Sometimes she laughs before we laugh.

She likes acting and often makes us laugh. She has nothing to do but perform a few plays, which adds a lot of fun to our class. She often hums a ditty and doesn't know what she's talking about. When asked, it turned out to be a "line"! From time to time, she learns to "change her face", sometimes in high spirits, sometimes in a sad face, and imitates it vividly, which makes us laugh. In order to perform tricks better, she often imitates the actors' movements and demeanor and practices them repeatedly. What a serious little actress!

She is a frank person, honest in doing things, straightforward in speaking, quick in speaking and eloquent in speaking. Because of this, I like chatting with her very much. Just say this time today. I chatted with her on the phone and unconsciously lost track of time. She talked about Kan Kan on the phone, and I said a few words from time to time. Although I didn't see her, she seemed to be right in front of me. We had a nice chat. Inadvertently, 5 minutes passed, 10 minutes passed, 20 minutes passed ... until nearly 40 minutes passed, we suddenly realized the passage of time, which ended the call.

I think inseparable is talking about us. No matter what happens at ordinary times, she always calls me; Me, too, that is, the teacher had asked her to go with a classmate of this literary club. When she knew about it, she immediately recommended me to the teacher, and then took me to sign up without hesitation. I won't go in without her.

This is my good friend, like-minded and inseparable. Guess who she is?

5. My classmate's portrait description 600-word composition A successful portrait description of a boy is a key to understanding the character's personality and a window to see through the inner world of the character.

There are many successful examples in middle school Chinese textbooks: A Q's old felt hat, Kong Yiji's tattered gown, Zhao's smooth and shiny big braid, and Xianglinsao's occasional eyes, all of which show their identity, personality and life experience. However, it is difficult for middle school students to learn the essence from it in their writing, and often they can neither "draw its shape" nor "vividly".

Then, how to make a brief outline to make the characters vividly presented to the readers; Meticulous description can show the spirit of the characters incisively and vividly, and achieve both form and spirit. This paper intends to make a superficial attempt from four aspects. First, carefully observe and grasp its "shape" and "there are no two identical leaves in the world". Portrait description of people can't be based on subjective imagination, so that thousands of people have one side and lack individuality.

We should carefully observe the appearance of the characters and grasp the characteristics. Objective things are inherently different and never the same.

However, many students often do not observe carefully when describing portraits, but pick up the wisdom of others and paraphrase what others say at will. Children are sweet dimples, young men are handsome, young women are slim, and old people with white hair are aging.

Is this good? There is no denying that a certain kind of characters have their own innate characteristics: from the age point of view, babies, children, teenagers, young people, middle-aged people and the elderly have their own characteristics; Physiologically, men, women and other age-related physiological characteristics also have their own characteristics; Judging from the identity, occupation, status, situation and race of the characters, they will also show some similar or even identical external characteristics. However, even in the same occupation, gender and age, they will never be exactly the same, and there will always be different external characteristics from others, even between twin brothers.

Therefore, when describing portraits, we must grasp the external characteristics of the characters in order to highlight the personality in * * *. For example, "... the biology teacher came into our classroom.

He is about thirty-four or five years old, chubby, with dark red skin, a Chinese face and a pair of gold-rimmed glasses on his high nose. Eyes through round lenses looked at us kindly.

Hong Zhong lost his voice and said,' I'll teach you biology in senior three ... I hope we can cooperate happily. ..... "This passage closely describes the portrait of the biology teacher's figure, skin color, face shape, nose bridge, glasses and other characteristics, so that the characters are clearly presented to the readers.

Second, it is really difficult to understand and perceive its "spirit" and "draw a dragon and a tiger but not a bone". The description of the biology teacher above captures the external characteristics of the characters.

Seriously, this is the minimum requirement for portrait description. Some people call it "authentic".

In fact, just doing this is not enough. If we make a thorough analysis of this description, we will find that practitioners are basically a kind of "camera" static description, and it is difficult to see their inner character, quality, experience and rich inner world through the external forms of characters.

Painting should draw the "bones" of dragons and tigers. In the third episode of A Dream of Red Mansions, Lin Daiyu enters Jia Fu, the author's description of Wang Xifeng not only depicts the appearance characteristics of the characters, but also reveals their personality characteristics and spiritual world.

The portrait description of Wang Xifeng includes two aspects: clothing and appearance. In terms of clothing, the author tries to explain Wang Xifeng's clothing with pearls and jewels, implying her greed and vulgarity, and reflecting the emptiness of her inner world from the side.

In the aspect of appearance, we focus on her "triangle eyes", "hanging eyebrow", "pink face" and "red lips", which fully shows her subtlety, cunning, good at changing machines and duplicity hidden under her beautiful appearance. Of course, if you want to improve this ability, it is not a matter of time. Usually, we should carefully observe and analyze the characters from the outside to the inside, grasp their personality characteristics and spiritual world, and "externalize" their costumes and expressions.

Third, the use of "rhetoric" to vividly reproduce the appearance of characters must be properly used, especially the use of figurative rhetoric. The above description of Wang Xifeng's portrait is a successful example of rhetorical application.

On the basis of carefully observing and grasping the external characteristics of characters, the application of figurative rhetoric must reasonably imagine and choose appropriate vehicles; Otherwise, the characters will be distorted or even deformed. For example, "... he has a pair of eagle eyes, can see through everything, look for prey, and make his classmates afraid."

He has wolf ears and knows all the gossip in the Jianghu like the back of his hand. Then it will be processed and tempered, which will become the capital for him to brag in class. In addition, he has a strong trunk like a bear, walks majestically and swaggering, and always finds people "one-on-one".

Go out to practice singing before going to bed, and sometimes you can hear his thunderous voice in the middle of the night. I can really write him into Diary of a Madman ... "This passage is very strange in imagination, but the use of metaphor and rhetoric is not appropriate. It is even a bit insane to describe the teacher as a hooligan.

If you add a hat, fancy clothes and a short dagger, won't it become a typical local ruffian? In fact, this teacher is very strong, sharp-eyed, with wide interests, rich knowledge and lively enthusiasm. Trainers seem to be able to capture some features, but the portraits written are seriously inaccurate, losing the foundation of life and characters, and there is also a serious deviation in color sense.

To overcome this situation, we must carefully observe, grasp the internal and external characteristics, reasonably imagine, carefully choose vehicles, and pay attention to the sense of color. If you are sympathetic and praising people, you will often choose something beautiful, precious and colorful as a metaphor; Derogatory, disgusting, often exaggerated, ugly, deformed, derogatory things as a metaphor.

Proper use of figurative rhetoric is an extremely effective way to "draw its shape" and "convey its spirit". Fourth, avoid fussy, "dynamic" portrait description, whether to achieve both form and spirit.

Can't speak words, can't speak.

6. A portrait of about 50 words describes the students, so there are still a few to refer to. "People's hearts are different and they all like each other." Portrait description should be more about the shape of the gods, which are similar in shape and spirit. It is impossible to be one-sided and stereotyped. Some students usually don't pay much attention to observing others. When they write with pens, they are full of words. Beauty is always reluctant to sink fish and fall wild goose. Bad guys can't write without sharp mouths and monkeys ... there are no two identical leaves and no two identical people in the world. To write a living character, * * *, be careful, and write his distinctive personality. Portrait description refers to facial features, posture, manners, clothes, etc. The role. Starting with the description of appearance, we should focus on the theme. Can't be described for simple description. For example, the composition "My Math Teacher" is a tall man with hard and messy hair, as if he had never washed or dressed. He is wearing a wrinkled green military uniform, and the folds on the military uniform form wonderful patterns: triangle, trapezoid, parallelogram and polygon, which seems to tell people that this person is related to mathematics. Yes, he is my math teacher and head teacher. The author captures Mr. Ma's two characteristics: "hard and messy hair" and "wrinkled green military uniform". One is to skillfully point out the characters, and the other is to highlight the image of the characters who are sloppy. In fact, this writing is in strong contrast with his "selfless spirit". Because the teacher will concentrate on his work below, he has no time to freshen up. In addition, we should have a thorough understanding of the characters described. Secondly, we should master and accumulate some related vocabulary. Take "eyes" as an example, there can be "bright eyes", "indifferent eyes", "alert eyes", "dull eyes" and "eyes flashing with wisdom". If you don't accumulate a considerable vocabulary, it is difficult to accurately express what the author sees.

7. My deskmate is a little fat, which is my first impression.

I remember that there is a rule in our school that we eat ordinary meals from Monday to Thursday and eat steamed stuffed buns or jiaozi on Friday. I'm tired of eating vegetables every day, and it's good to change the taste of pasta.

But the only thing I don't understand is why steamed bread can bring him so much fun! It's time for dinner on Friday, and everyone is waiting for the shift leader to beg for food. My deskmate stood upright in her seat. It seems that his chest protrudes much more than his head.

Soon, his name was called, but before I could react, he pushed my chair away and let me make way for him. He flew out without washing his hands, and an arrow squeezed into the crowd with tableware.

I was dumbfounded, because I had never done such a funny action. He skillfully pulled three steamed buns into the plate, then moved them to the seat and tasted the delicious steamed buns with a "slow step".

In fact, eating can grow the body and supplement nutrition. But some behaviors in the class really make me laugh and cry! Boys not only compete, but also eat and have competitions.

Eat buns on Friday, and see who eats more, who eats more, who is the hero! My deskmate will naturally not be left behind. He ate eight steamed buns in front of others, and finally he went to the infirmary. The aunt in the infirmary really smiled after seeing it and had nothing to say. Not only can he eat, but he is also an expert at copying homework.

In art class, he never misses any opportunity to copy. The teacher asked for ideas, but he didn't want to, but he wanted to know how to copy my paintings.

Once, I couldn't bear it anymore. I folded the picture in half and blocked it with my hand. Hey, hey, let's see how he imitates it! Slowly, nothing happened around me.

I looked down and he was peeking at my painting under my arm. He found me looking at him and immediately said sadly, "Sister, I dropped my pen. Please help me pick it up! " "... sometimes, we also have disputes. He hit me and I kicked him.

Finally, when I was angry, I drew a mess on the other person's notebook. What I hate most is that he takes it out on me when he is excited and happy.

For example, last time, when he heard the news of a spring outing, he excitedly tugged at my clothes and patted me on the head. Sometimes I really want to beat him up to help the Japanese. To this end, I specially prepared a "super invincible pin" for him. As soon as he hit me, I took out this pin and stabbed him.

Whenever this happens, his previous prestige will be reduced by half. He doesn't care about other people's things, and he scribbles on his notebook with my eraser. I'll call some good friends after class and use up all his erasing tapes! He is like a friend in my life, which makes me happy all the time. He is also my most hated enemy, which makes me gnash my teeth and hate my guts ... This is my deskmate and my friend who accompanied me through my primary school life.