Describe details and profile writing

1. Detailed description and profile description of characters

When I was in the third grade, a teacher with a child-like personality came to our class. He is tall and fat, with short hair, a face as dark as a full moon, and a pair of glasses on the bridge of his nose. He speaks in a funny and humorous way. We affectionately call him Mr. Dong. This is my English teacher - Teacher Dong.

I can’t imagine that Teacher Dong is already in his thirties, but he still maintains a child-like lively and cheerful personality, with a bright smile appearing on his face every day.

Once, I went to Teacher Dong’s office to order the "English Weekly". Originally, "English Weekly" was priced at 15 yuan, but I took it as 15.5 yuan and got an extra 5 cents. When we got to the office, the teacher counted the money, opened his eyes wide, took the money and said to me with a smile: "Are these 5 cents for treating me to ice cream?" I realized that I had taken an extra 5 cents, and lowered my head. His head whispered: "Okay!" The teacher smiled again: "I'm teasing you, I'll give it back to you."

In class, Teacher Dong's teaching methods are flexible and changeable, and he likes to let everyone Play games in class, such as dialogue performances, skit performances, quick answers, etc. Among them, dialogue performances are the most popular in class. Whoever speaks well and acts well will be praised by the teacher; whoever pronounces incorrectly will be punished by the teacher. Correct patiently until he reads correctly. This method enhances everyone's interest in learning English, and everyone no longer finds learning English boring. In order to make our English class easier and happier, Teacher Dong used exaggerated and funny movements when teaching vocabulary, which often made us laugh. The atmosphere in the class suddenly became lively, and there was an endless stream of students who raised their hands to speak. , even I, who is usually introverted and doesn’t like to speak in class, couldn’t help but raise my arms high. The most interesting thing is that he often says to us ten-year-old children now: "Stretch out your little hands," which makes us feel so comfortable and makes us feel like everyone is his child.

It is precisely because Teacher Dong has a precious childlike innocence that there is no distance between our teachers and students and that we look forward to every English class.

Don’t regard the most common life described by others as pretentious just because you have no knowledge and have not lived a good life. 2. Write a composition about people using environment description, profile description, and detailed description. Write a 600-word essay

The old man selling sesame dumplings is selling sesame dumplings, and he is selling sesame dumplings..." It was this damn hawking sound that woke me up from my dream. Needless to say, it was now five-thirty, half an hour before I should get up.

Somehow, it was just recently. , here we have an old man selling sesame balls. He starts selling at half past five every day. No matter it is weekdays or weekends; whether it is sunny, windy or rainy, he is the one who makes trouble every day. My sweet dream, I was supposed to get up at six o'clock, but he woke me up at this time. I didn't dare to sleep, and I didn't want to think about it when I got up. I had to toss and turn in bed, wasting half an hour in vain, not to mention how uncomfortable it was. , for this reason, I hated this sesame dumpling seller very much. I felt headache and upset when I heard this hawking sound, and I didn’t know how many times I scolded him viciously in my heart.

However, one day, I became angry with this seller. The view of the old man in Ma Tuan suddenly changed. It was a very sunny Sunday morning. As usual, I was woken up by the hateful shouting. I covered my head tightly with the quilt, not to mention how cruel it was. It’s a rare day off for an old man, and he doesn’t allow anyone to have a good night’s sleep. It’s really abominable! Suddenly, among the shrill cries of sales, there was a clear and sweet cry of a lark, My heart couldn't help but move. I couldn't sleep anyway, so I might as well go out and take a look at the morning scenery, and see what kind of old man he was and what his craftsmanship was. So I opened the quilt and put it on quickly. < /p>

I took some change and walked out of the house. Hey, it was a sunny day. The sky was blue and the sun was shining. My heart suddenly became cheerful. I followed the cries to find the seller. The old man selling Ma Tuan saw an old man surrounded by a large group of children from a distance. I thought to myself, no wonder he came to sell Ma Tuan every day. It turned out that the business was good.

I hurriedly took a few steps and took a closer look. I couldn't help but be a little surprised. I thought the sesame dumpling seller was a dirty, dirty man covered in oil. I didn't expect the old man in front of me. Wearing an old military uniform that has been washed white, it is neat and tidy from top to bottom, looking capable and energetic. I secretly had a good impression, handed over the change in my hand, and said, "Give me two." The old man took the money in one hand, and picked up a pair of chopsticks and a convenience bag in the other hand. , took out two sesame balls and put them in the bag and said gently: "Careful, take it well." I took it, took out one, and took a bite. It was really fragrant and crispy, with an excellent texture and delicious taste. I couldn't help but fall in love with him and looked at him carefully: his weather-beaten face had wrinkles carved by time, his body was strong, and his face was always filled with an amiable smile towards the children. No wonder the children gathered in a big circle, No wonder the children are so willing to eat, no wonder they come to sell them every day... I ate the sesame balls and walked back with great satisfaction... Unexpectedly, I was stopped by the old man after I had just walked a few steps. My heart couldn't help but "knock", thinking about me Didn’t you just pay me? What, you want to blackmail me? The good feeling I had for him that just arose in my heart suddenly disappeared and disappeared. I turned around angrily, just about to explode.

Unexpectedly, the old man took out four and a half yuan from his pocket and handed it to me, saying apologetically: "Little classmate, I was busy just now and didn't have time to ask you for money. I'm really sorry." I was confused, so he quickly said: "You gave me five yuan." I suddenly realized that because I was in a hurry, I mistakenly took five yuan as fifty cents. Looking at the money handed over by the old man, I thought of The thoughts in my head made me blush and turn white. I didn’t know what to do. When the old man saw me like this, he asked with concern: "Little classmate, what’s the matter? Where do you feel uncomfortable?" I was speechless. I really hate it. Myself, how can I look at such an old man who works hard to support himself in such a way? I hurriedly stretched out the money that the old man handed over and said, "Nothing, I bought them all." The old man gave me all the remaining sesame balls and said, "Two more will be given for free.

< p> "I refused to accept anything, but the old man said with a smile: "This is a big loss sale, buy five and get one free." After saying that, he left without looking back... Looking at the old man getting closer and closer. The farther back I saw him, the more I respected him, and I couldn't help but sigh in my heart: The small traders and vendors I usually come into contact with always use substandard goods as good ones, and use less goods as more goods, deceiving customers and people. Where is the integrity between them? Today, this old man taught me a vivid lesson. Integrity is needed in the world, and integrity must be cherished. 3. Write an essay describing people, no less than 600 words (use profile description, environment description, details)

Around each of us, there will always be people who are willing to help others and are responsible People.

We had just finished morning exercises that day. Some students were making noises in the corridor, while others were writing in the classroom. Suddenly, there was a "wow" sound. There was a "pop" sound and a strange smell. What happened? It turned out that classmate Cheng Yuhan was vomiting. The ground was covered in red and green vomit. It was very unappetizing to see it. Some students rushed to tell them. Teacher Zhu, after hearing the news, Teacher Zhu asked Cheng Yuhan with concern and asked: "Who is going to get some sand?" As soon as Teacher Zhu finished speaking, Xu Ziyu stood up from his seat and took three steps together. He ran to the corner to get the broom and dustpan in two steps, and then ran out of the classroom with a "dong dong dong". After a while, Xu Ziyu came to the classroom with a flushed face and "thumping, puffing"

Pour the sand in the dustpan onto the pile of dirty things at once, and use a broom to evenly distribute the sand. The golden sand just turned into brown-black. When the sand was almost absorbed, Xu Ziyu picked it up The broom started sweeping up, and soon, all the sand was swept into the dustpan. I saw Xu Ziyu leaving the classroom with "bang bang bang" steps. What was he going to do now? I'm like Monk Zhang Er. ---- I couldn't figure it out.

I heard the sound of water coming from the bathroom next to the classroom. After the sound, Xu Ziyu appeared in front of us again with a mop. He understood instantly. He bent over and dragged the floor one after another. After a while, the floor was clean.

At this time, there was a burst of applause in the classroom. , everyone cast approving glances at Xu Ziyu, but he sat back down and started doing his homework as if nothing had happened.

This is Xu Ziyu from our class. He has a heart that loves the collective. 4. Compositions that describe people based on events should include detailed descriptions, profile descriptions of appearance, movements, language, psychology, etc.

Describing characters is one of the essential basic writings in primary school compositions. Many parents do not know this. How to help primary school students write character descriptions. In fact, any writing has certain skills. When writing a narrative, characters and events are inseparable. The most critical step is to be able to clearly understand the requirements of the topic. How to write a narrative that describes characters well? So this article is about how to teach primary school students how to write character narrative essays.

Writing a continuation essay related to the characters is not like writing a narrative essay, which requires that the truth and facts must be written completely. Things run through the entire article. Narrative essays about people are dealt with through one event or several things. Describe the characters.

1. Describe a person through an incident

To describe a character through an incident generally means to use an incident to highlight and express a certain quality or personality characteristic of the character. Use the characters' appearance, words, actions, and psychology to describe various aspects. It is necessary to highlight the typical. The so-called typical is something that can fully express the character's thoughts and express the character's good ideological qualities to the fullest.

2. Writing about people through multiple things

Writing about people through several things is to use multiple things to reflect a person’s qualities, but the description of the things should be complete. Write the development of things clearly, such as time, place, people, the cause, process, and results of the event. Characters can also be portrayed through the cross-narration of several events. But it is also necessary to give a detailed and prominent description of the character's appearance, behavior, words, and psychology, so as to highlight the character's quality.

3. How to portray characters

In the narrative process, write about the characters, the most representative characters’ thoughts and feelings, personality characteristics, appearance, language, actions, psychological activities, etc. Description, this is characterizing. 1. Portrait description, described through features such as appearance, expression, clothing, posture, accent, etc. A method of revealing a person's character. The character's appearance is closely related to the character's inner world. Through the description of the appearance, the character image can leave a deep impression on the reader. 2. The verbal description is both a dialogue and a monologue. A dialogue is a conversation between two or more people; a monologue is when a character talks to himself. The activity that a character can best express his innermost feelings is language, which plays an important role in expressing the character's thoughts and character. Personalized language allows people to know whose role it is through the sound.

Have you learned how to teach primary school students how to write characters in compositions? In addition to the above two points, there is also the description of the character's psychology and behavior. In short, it is necessary to learn to grasp the characteristics and express these characteristics clearly in words, so that the characters and character qualities in the article can be left in the readers' hearts. An unforgettable impression. 5. A composition of about 500 words about frontal description and side description

Life is like a piece of paper, and everyone has a glorious page. Whether it is colorful or dull, we are the only ones who can write our lives on this piece of paper.

This piece of paper has had its share of laughter and tears; it has had its ups and downs and its bitterness. However, on the piece of paper that belongs to me, there is her. She is my elementary school teacher. In my impression, she is not a particularly good teacher. Like ordinary teachers, she cares about her students very much, and she devotes herself to them all the time.

When I was a silly girl who just entered the school and didn’t understand anything, she was the one who greeted me. I only remember that day she held my hand and entered the ocean of knowledge. From then on, I was deeply attracted by the boundless ocean. At that time, I still wanted to travel the ocean alone and land on the shore. However, in that small mistake, I almost gave up on this dream. It was her who helped me regain my self-confidence and turned me into a person who would never give up easily no matter what difficulties I encountered in life.

I was in third grade that year, and I couldn’t bear any difficulties in my smooth life journey. However, life is really like a game, there will always be jokes for us.

Just when I was intoxicated with the honor of first place, the second midterm exam left an indelible dark mark on my piece of paper. I can't face the proud and arrogant me. I went blind, and in the days that followed, I started tutoring crazily, but things were not as I expected. My score did not rise all the way, but dropped until I reached 87 points.

Finally she talked to me. She told me that I had to walk step by step and not to be too impatient. It’s like learning to crawl first and then learn to walk. I shook my head. I didn’t quite understand what the teacher said. I asked her, “Teacher, how should I learn to crawl first?” I just remember that she smiled and said, “You should start reviewing from the most basic content. You just It's just that you are too impatient, so you should take it step by step slowly, so that it will be beneficial to you!"

I finally understood that I succeeded according to her method, and I cheered, I jumped. At this time, I discovered that she, who had been silently supporting me from behind, also smiled happily.

Although what happened between me and her was not that touching, I would not be where I am today without her.

Teacher, what a sacred profession! Because of it, we are happy today! 6. When writing about people, mark one place each for detailed description, side description and direct description

Methods of writing about people - personality description, psychology, foil method - Composition website's method of writing about people Source: Original from this site | Author: admin Update time: 2011/1/812:37:291. Personality characteristics: Everyone has their own characteristics. To write about a good person, you must write about his unique personality characteristics.

Different people have different interests, habits and hobbies. If the description is generalized, the person written about it must be "the same person".

Without personality, there is no characteristics, and it is difficult to leave a deep impression on others. To write down its characteristics, you must choose typical ones from the many materials the character has done to express them. On the contrary, if the examples are generalized, the character will lack individual characteristics.

The personality characteristics of a character are expressed through what they do and think. Therefore, it is very important to appropriately describe the character's appearance, movements, language, expression, and psychology. 2. Portrait description is also called appearance description, including the character's appearance, age, expression, figure, posture, clothing, demeanor, voice, etc.

Describe a certain part of these aspects in concrete and vivid language, so that people can form a more realistic and vivid image in their minds after reading it. This is portrait description. Three points should be paid attention to when describing portraits: first, to capture the characteristics; second, to reflect the changes in the characters; third, to highlight the key points, which can focus on describing a certain part.

3. Language description method If the characters in the novel are flesh and blood and lifelike, using language description is also a good method. "Words are the voice of the heart." What a person says is the most direct expression of his thoughts and feelings.

In order to reveal the inner world and personality characteristics of the characters, bring the characters to life and give people a three-dimensional feeling, we must grasp the representative language of the characters and describe them. Well-written language can make readers feel as if they hear their voice and see their person, leaving an unforgettable impression.

So how to write task language well? First of all, the character's language description must be consistent with the character's identity, age, experience, and cultural upbringing. Secondly, the character's language description must be able to show the character's personality, and the language must be personalized.

Thirdly, when writing characters’ language well, we should also pay attention to colloquialism, life-oriented, situational, and give people a sense of true feelings. 4. Action description The thoughts, feelings, character, and hobbies of a legal person are always expressed through specific actions.

Only when we describe people's behaviors in detail can the character's personality be revealed and the characters in our writings become lifelike. On the contrary, if we do not describe the character's performance in a specific situation in detail, but only use language such as "hard-working", "very brave" and "not afraid of difficulties" to write about the person, then the image of this character will be very different. It is difficult to stand up in the eyes of readers.

Three points should be noted when describing actions: 1. It should reflect the character’s ideological quality and personality traits. 2. Write the continuous actions of the characters well.

3. Use appropriate verbs, not only to describe accurately, but also to pursue vividness.

5. Psychological description refers to the description of the character's inner activities and spiritual world. It directly expresses the character's inner reactions of joy, anger, sorrow, and joy, and fully reflects the character's thoughts, feelings, and personality characteristics.

When writing psychological activities, you should pay attention to three aspects: 1. It must be consistent with the age and identity of the characters. People of different ages and identities often have different psychological activities on a certain issue.

Even if people are of the same age and have the same status, due to differences in experiences, hobbies and personalities of each person, they will have different psychological activities when dealing with the same type of events. 2. To reveal the character's inner world, write down the character's thoughts and feelings such as joy, anger, sorrow, love and hatred, and accurately describe the character's emotions.

3. Master psychological activity description techniques such as "direct portrayal", "inner monologue", and "dream hallucination". 6. Expression description method: Expression is the expression and posture, which refers to the heart of a person. 7. An essay about classmates should combine frontal description, profile description, action description, and language description.

My classmate has a flat nose, long ears, short hair, medium height, and It's a shame that you don't listen to his story if you don't come to the Great Wall.

Do you know who he is? He is Li Dongren. Speaking of his advantages, they are like the number of stars in the sky. Now, let me tell you something different! One of his strengths is that he is good at chess, and he can spend his spare time demonstrating his talent.

Once, he and Liu Yingjie were having a "fight" there, and I was watching quietly, haha, I eat, I block, I draw, I defend. Finally, the winner was decided. Li Dongren defeated Liu Yingjie, but there was no pride in Li Dongren's eyes. I also wanted to kill a few soldiers with Li Dongren at the beginning. I suddenly counterattacked, but it didn't work. His one Che Yipao has suppressed all my attacking moves. After that, he casually moved and I had no moves left.

But he did not attack me. He used all his strength and wisdom to attack my chess piece, but he retreated again. I was confused. Then, I took the opportunity to kill him. When I got close to him again, he got angry and suddenly attacked my car, leaving him with no way to escape. He can only resort to the most powerful trick - admit defeat.

After listening to my introduction, do you want to make friends with him? Want to play chess with him? . 8. Composition

My younger brother’s name is Wang Wenhan. He is two and a half years old this year. As soon as he rolls his big eyes, he doesn’t know what weird idea is popping up in his mind.

"Hanhan wants to laugh too" One day at noon, my aunt and I were playing in the living room. I told a joke, which made my aunt laugh, and I couldn't help but laugh too. By this time, Hanhan had already laid down and was about to take a nap.

However, when he heard my aunt and I laughing in the living room, he immediately sat up and said to his aunt who was lying down, "We are not going to sleep anymore!" Then, with his bare feet, he was flying. He ran to the living room and said loudly: "Hanhan wants to laugh too." After saying that, he burst out laughing.

"Scud" My younger brother likes to run. He will run as soon as he lifts his legs. We all call him "Scud". No matter who goes out to play with him, they always trot behind him.

Grandma was old and had no choice but to follow him on a bicycle. According to his aunt's statistics, he can run more than ten kilometers in one night! It’s so much fun when my brother runs! With a flick of his little arm, it felt like wind was blowing under his feet.

My aunt said that except for his nails, every part of his body moved. You see, maybe my brother will be Liu Xiang again in the future! Study hard and ask questions. Even though my brother is so naughty, he actually loves to learn.

One time when we were eating scrambled eggs with tomatoes, he suddenly asked his aunt: "How do you say eggs in English?" Seeing his serious look, we were amused by him. We take him out to play, and he always asks questions.

"What is this?" "What is that?" When he went to Liqun Supermarket, he was already familiar with every product in it. What’s funny is that when his grandma didn’t let him buy random things, he said, “This has preservatives, we won’t buy it!” That tone was firm! Afraid of Aunt My brother is not afraid of anything but his aunt.

Every time when he eats, if he doesn’t eat well, his mother will glare at him, and he will quickly sit up with his back straight, holding the rice in his mouth, and keep saying: "Oh, that’s right! "If his mother is not at home and he is naughty, he will say to his aunt: "Call me sister!" Then he will shout loudly: "Sister! Sister!" It really makes us laugh! This is my younger brother - the smart and lovely Wang Wenhan.