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1. Wang Jie: Wang Jie always eats like a lady, even though he has a steamed stuffed bun in his hand.

Look! Wang Jie gently touched the bottom of the steamed stuffed bun with her three white and round fingers, smiled and talked to the opposite person, nibbling like a chicken pecking rice. It took a long time to wipe out a steamed stuffed bun that was not too big. Perhaps feeling a little thirsty, she slowly picked up the toilet paper put aside, wiped the fingertips of three fingers who had just taken the steamed stuffed bun, then held the rim of the bowl with both hands, cocked her little finger and ring finger, slightly opened her red lips and took a sip slowly.

Feeling my eyes, Wang Jie turned around, gave me a slight smile, and put the bowl back carefully. After eating slowly for a while, she was the last in the class, but she was in no hurry. She took out a new paper towel and wiped her mouth, then slowly left with a plate.

Zhang Hong: If Wang Jie is a lady, then Zhang Hong is a chivalrous woman. Every time Zhang Hong eats, it's like a war. After the second delay, he seems to be "game over".

Although the school steamed bread is not big, it is not small, but the steamed bread in Zhang Hong is half as big as it. The spoon doesn't stop, and the spoon is sent to the mouth. My cheeks are full of food and I tremble from time to time. Besides, the two apples on my cheek look a bit like squirrels eating.

Because you are in a hurry to eat, you will inevitably choke. Zhang Hong is always busy pouring bowls into his mouth with one hand, and punching his chest with the other hand. After a gust of wind swept the clouds away, the plate was clean, leaving only some soup. After eating, Zhang Hong strode away eagerly with a plate.

Grade three: Gopher Head (Wu) (This article comes from the original composition library:).

2. Pay attention to the details, and the narrative is not less than 800 words. A distinctive person, a pair of black cloth shoes, a pair of dark blue flowered trousers, a neat yellow overalls on his upper body, a small yellow hat on his head, and a simple face under the hat ... Have you noticed that these aunts and cleaners are waving brooms and sweeping the dust in the street, whether it is cold or hot? And I saw, in the hot sun and rain and dew, the most beautiful-they are hardworking, simple and selfless ...-Inscription There are some happy people in the world who interpret their most selfless side with other people's smiles. They sweat, bury their leisure, turn it into seeds, grow flowers and give off fragrance, adding a touch of beauty to other people's lives. They are so small, but they are so noble. They are cleaners. During the summer vacation, the sun gave the earth heat without reservation. People are sweating like rain, and the cold drink shop in front of the door has become an ocean. I squeezed in like a weak sardine and finally "grabbed" an ice cream. It's a great sense of accomplishment to carry out holiday team activities these days. Maybe it's a conditioned reflex to see littering everywhere on the ground. I also threw away the packaging bag. I sat on the bench in front of the door, sorting out my activity notes and materials. After a while, all the talents at the entrance of the cold drink shop were used up, leaving plastic packaging bags all over the street. At this time, a 40-year-old aunt, with a dim face and dry hair, was waving a broom. Silently sweep people's littered bags into the cleaning car. "Yi, yi, yi ..." The friction between the broom and the ground pierced my heart like a needle. At this time, my heart was touched and my face caught fire, but I didn't know what to do, so I just stared at the cleaner in a daze. At this moment, a burst of footsteps sounded, and it was a pair of people. When I grow up, I can only sweep the street like this cleaner ... "Aunt cleaner seems to have heard something, bowed her head and said nothing, just waving a broom." Pa ",a cigarette butt fell on the ground that has just been swept. Please don't spit everywhere. Please respect the work of others. "Aunt cleaner stopped her work and politely reminded the spitter. The man gave the cleaner a disdainful look. Please sweep the floor. Don't you just sweep the floor? What's the big deal? Besides, what respect do you want from a cleaner? Joke! "Looking at aunt far of figure, my in the mind is very bad. Cleaners are human beings and have self-esteem. Why humiliate them like this? Day after day, year after year, they silently contributed in that humble position. In summer, when we are still enjoying the cool at home, they stick to their posts in the hot summer. They never seem to be afraid of the warmth of the sun and the pungent smell of garbage. In the sun, the sweat on their faces was crystal clear. In winter, when we are still enjoying the warmth of home, they pick up each piece with their frozen hands in the cold. The heart is kind. It doesn't take much to learn to respect them. A grateful smile and an approving look will bring them great comfort. Sitting in the car and walking on the roadside every day, you can see them wearing orange clothes, waving mops and brooms in the street, wiping off the dirt on the street, and making Binhai New Area clean, tidy and radiant. Every citizen will clean up the dirt and debris left on the ground at the first time, leaving a clean and bright road. When the weather is not beautiful, it is also the busiest time for them to work. Mud stains, rain, snow and water left on the ground are cleaned over and over again. The cleaners we see in our daily life are all grandparents. They are old, but they have made great contributions to the cleanliness of cities and streets with the spirit of being young. We need more study and admiration. They have paid so much, but they have become a role that is often overlooked. Here, I want to impress your heart with my words: the city belongs to all of us, and our home will be more beautiful only if we all join hands with the cleaning staff to maintain our home; Our life will be better! They are beauticians in the city and also beauticians in the mind; It is a laborer who creates a beautiful home and a living Lei Feng in real life! The sunshine hung on the cleaner's aunt, making her face red. Ah, I suddenly found that she was so tall and beautiful.

3. Composition describing the details of the characters, 800 words of my father.

My black hair is mixed with a few white hairs. My face is a little black, but my eyes are bright. That's my father.

Dad is forty years old, but he is still childlike.

When I learned to play yo-yo by accident in the fourth grade, I bought one and finished my homework and went home to play.

At this time, my father saw that I was having such a good time and even wanted to give it a try. He said to me, "Son, lend your father a play." So, I handed the yo-yo to my father. Dad couldn't play at first, and the ball was always out of control. He didn't learn it after a long time. Dad looked worried, so I said to him, "Wait until the yo-yo slides to the bottom, and then pull it up." Dad tried several times and learned several tricks such as "sleeping" and "walking the dog"!

The more dad plays, the more addicted he becomes. The more he played, the more interested he became, and he didn't want to put it down for a while. Mom looked at dad's playful look and said, "It's 40 years old, and my son is almost 12 years old, but he still looks like an old urchin!" !

""Ha ha ... "There was a burst of happy laughter at home.

Dad not only has a childlike innocence, but also takes his work seriously.

A few days ago, my father installed a computer in his office, which contained many games!

I really want to have fun. It happened that my dad was going to the office today, so I quickly asked my dad for permission. Unexpectedly, he said to me sternly, "How did you learn to take advantage of the public at an early age?" I ran into my room angrily, slammed the door hard and shouted at my father's back: "stubborn old man!" "

"I didn't expect my father to never come back after he left, so I had to go to bed.

I woke up in the middle of the night and went to the toilet. I saw the light in the study on. It turned out that my father was writing materials, and the wastebasket beside the desk was full of sweat. He found me, looked at my bloodshot eyes and said, "Hurry to sleep, there will be a class tomorrow." I know my father's stubborn temper, so I have to say, "Dad, go to sleep quickly." I went to bed.

However, I can't sleep for a long time. The moon, walking in the sky, the stars, blinking naughtily, while my father is still writing that material.

I'm proud that I have a conscientious "child's play" father.

4. With "details" as the topic, 800 words of the same composition "Details" by two authors: anonymous article source: unknown hits: 28 Update time: April 22, 2006, the first beauty flashed in the details.

-Inscription 1 She turned around, smiled gently, and turned away again. A small detail, like a butterfly's transparent and delicate wings gently flapping my eyes.

The corner of her eyes bent downward was full of the light that was about to flow out, and I remembered that expression for a moment. It was a gentle and restrained look, reminiscent of the slightly wet wind in the south of the Yangtze River, the mottled dream in the morning, and a bowl of millet porridge with lotus leaf fragrance.

Not fancy, not publicity, sweet eyes, let people write it down. Yes, details, a casual expression, an imperceptible look, and people who know how to appreciate them will become treasures when dug up.

I closed my eyes, and my eyes flooded again at that moment, accompanied by lingering wind and meticulous carving. All gentle, moist and beautiful intentions are laid out with this detail.

It is "three feet of rain with green willows and one flute with cherry red"; It is "flowers wither, red apricots are small, swallows fly, and green water people go around"; It's "the rain hits the windowsill wet" ... the blue wall is like the thin outline of a pencil. The freshly dyed wax cloth hung in the air and made a heavy sound. The copper hoop cinnabar barrel pours water like a waterfall, and the strong tea sprinkled with chrysanthemums emits overlapping water vapor. All this flowed in her eyes at that moment, quietly, and stopped the carefree air with time and space.

Is it Jiangnan? Is it tap water? Gentle? Is it meticulous? There is no need to answer more and no one will answer. Such details are white flowers blooming in lush green leaves, emitting gentle fragrance, and he is only waiting to be picked by a willing heart.

The second CD rotates and rustles, like a green bug flapping its wings. Music immediately flowed out, turned into smoke and spread everywhere.

This is dvorak's scherzo in G major. Too many people say that it is as beautiful as the main theme of silk. Now I close my eyes, give ear slightly and breathe slowly ... A small detail, like tiny and clear dust in the sunshine through the skylight in the afternoon, brushed my ears and touched me warmly and gently.

This is a short triplet after the first theme. They performed with fluent violin timbre, with happy and fresh smiles, dancing in the sun like the blonde hair of an Irish girl.

I wonder what kind of mood dvorak felt when he wrote this string of imperceptible notes. It must be a touch of love, as if the sun were shining, the clouds were clear and the transparent wind was blowing on the mint-colored grass. Only you know the happiness in your heart.

Yes, the details, I seem to see dvorak's knowing smile, and people with a heart have noticed the excavation, which is just a tacit but unexpected pleasure. I think of some colorful bubbles rising slowly, a delicate flower blooming in lingering air, a sky touched by birds, a lingering wind, a group of swimming fish ... all these are brought by the series of small triplets.

Such details are the silver scraps falling from the center of the church ceiling with the light, which are small but shining, and they are only waiting for you. Three women's cheongsam styles are diverse, which outline the elegant and euphemistic lines of women. It is a landscape that women walk step by step.

But I caught such a detail: the small slit on the skirt of cheongsam. This design, whether intentional or not, whether anyone pays attention to it or not, has really become a pearl in the crown of cheongsam.

In the twenties and thirties, an open and closed border, women wearing cheongsam was everyone's first memory of that era, and cheongsam became the symbol of that era. This is a bridge, connecting the formality and rigidity of standard-bearer clothing and the unknown open era in the future.

The women in the boudoir came out, cautious, shy and hesitant, like a cordate telosma, opening alone at night. The separation of cheongsam just reflects this ambiguous feeling in details.

Women are walking, and the smooth skin on their calves is hidden from time to time, which is another kind of amorous feelings that they want to talk about and rest, but they do not lose Shenhua's introverted solemnity. All the women in Zhang Ailing's novels are wearing cheongsam. They run between war and peace, between joy and sorrow, and between stories of every year.

Such a detail is a tear on a cloud, and he is waiting for your gentle care and sigh. The four details are a flash of subway, a smooth and clear rain, a bird flapping its wings, and an eyebrow expression in the corner of a stranger's eye ... It needs people to touch, appreciate and feel with meticulous patience.

I was very moved and serious when I chewed it carefully, so I wrote it down, wrote it down, treasured it and commented on it alone. Then, you will find that the real beauty is to shine in the details.

Comments: The three fragments and three details are really due to her careful consideration. She found that such clever and exquisite expression and beautiful language style are highly compatible with the described object and the atmosphere constructed by the author, which should be an ideal "aestheticism" of the author. Details, after all, are details. The key is "fineness" and whether the elements are "dynamic" or "dynamic".

But if you want to "touch" yourself and others, you have to rely on the power of description. The little author did a great job.

(Yan Huayin) Did you see the second one? Did you hear that? Maybe you are so bored that you do "head-on" exercise with your toes and stones, and you are absent-minded and don't pay attention at all. Maybe you are crafting a beautiful lie, a successful prologue, and then cleverly avoiding asking your parents how you did in the exam when they opened the door.

Maybe you are listening to the vulgar jokes about your future husband's garlic nose on your mobile phone. Or you have a heavy new year's goods in one hand and a lot of couplets in the other. What a mess is blocking the sight of both sides.

Or did you just glance contemptuously, speed up your steps, and roll your nose like a cannon ... At this time, the wind blew and the snow began to fall one by one. I noticed this pause, and if I didn't shout, I let it sink.

5. About the "details" composition, 800 words of life, details are everywhere. The fastening and loosening of a button on a suit, whoever hangs up first and sits left and right, all show a kind of grace and self-restraint. Similarly, the details in the narrative text, with a little dyeing, can also shine with exquisite beauty.

First of all, use details to describe and enrich the theme.

Mr. Lu Xun once commented on the details: "Looking closely at a carved aperture and a painting foundation, though small, the income is clearer, and then it is extended to all, and it feels more and more practical." If the details can be processed and refined according to the needs of the theme, the significance will be more abundant. For example, as written in Medicine, human blood steamed bread changed from bright red to black, and finally, "there was a white gas in the burnt skin, and the white gas dispersed, which was two halves of white flour steamed bread". It not only implies the process of Yu Xia from being killed to being eaten, but also implies the profound meaning that the revolutionary's blood was wasted because of the ignorance and numbness of the masses.

For another example, in Kong Yiji, the hotel owner repeatedly said "Kong Yiji still owes nineteen dollars". This language detail not only shows the low position of Confucius in people's minds, but also vividly depicts the social world at that time.

Secondly, the characters are portrayed through detailed description.

A successful detailed description, like a wonderful close-up, can play a role in amplification and expansion, and can

Show the most essential part of the character's spiritual world and highlight the character's soul. For example, in The Biography of Were Su Wu, it was repeatedly written that Su Wu was holding a "scepter":

"Holding festivals to send Xiongnu envoys", "Pasting sheep on the Han Festival" and "lying down, reeds fall down".

The Han Festival, originally an ordinary thing, has become the indomitable spiritual symbol of Su Wu after careful description and repeated rendering by the author.

Another example is Liu Qing's History of Entrepreneurship, which describes the details of Liang Shengbao paying for noodle soup:

He burped, took off the pin in his cotton-padded jacket pocket and took out a small red cloth bag. He carefully opened the red cloth bag and a layer of written paper on the dining table, then took out the pieced together RMB, took out a five-cent ticket and paid for the noodle soup.

A series of action details here show Liang Shengbao's cautious character, supplemented by "pin", "red bag" and "manuscript paper" can better show his frugality and carefulness.

Others, such as language details, the voice of "master" in "Hometown" evokes the hierarchical concept in his mind; Dress details, Kong Yiji's tattered gown shows his shabby and lofty; Looking closely at the details, Liu Hezhen revealed her inner kindness and sincerity with a smile.

Third, promote the development of the plot with the help of detailed description.

As we all know, public security personnel never let go of a clue when solving a case; Because from these details, you can often make a major breakthrough. As long as it is thrown properly, pebbles can also stir up a thousand waves. For example, the detail of "cold" in "Chen Huansheng goes to town" is carefully constructed by the author. Just think, if Chen doesn't catch a cold, it's hard to see Secretary Wu. Without secretary Wu, how can he live in a high-class room for five yuan a night? Without a superior room, how can Chen Can have a series of boring performances? How can he go back and show off to the villagers? Throughout the whole article, the detail of "cold" naturally sent Chen Huansheng lying on the bench in the station to the senior room, which not only showed the personality of the characters, but also made the story develop unexpectedly and even changed the fate of the characters.

Of course, don't add details at will. It needs careful excavation and design to shine brilliantly.

6. Unforgettable details 800 words Unforgettable details

Trivia in life, as time goes by. Only the details are unforgettable. Think of someone? The first thing that comes to mind is the details that impress me. Although distance separates us, there are still memories between me and her.

For nine years, I have never been alone, because she walks silently, and we will be together no matter where. Now, the reality has blocked her from me, just like this sentence: "All things must come to an end". She and I chose different schools, so we have to use the word "go our separate ways" to describe us. For the past nine years, our relationship has been an illusion. Naturally, the details I noticed about her will be different ... that's her ear! It's huge. Very beautiful. The title reminds me of my exploration … pursuit … pursuit of the details that touched her!

She is a girl who never gives up. Innocence and kindness are her character. She will make no progress in her studies and surpass her competitors' competitiveness. She doesn't like people touching her ears if they want to touch them on purpose. Even for a moment, she will make trouble with you and get angry (including me, of course). Therefore, her ears became the details of her in my memory.

Innocent-she likes children very much. I remember her taking a child to play. I looked around and exclaimed, "Whose child is so dirty?" (Thinking) There is no room for a little dirty in her eyes at ordinary times. Can she play so hard with a child? It's incredible. Look again, what is the child doing? Huh? It's like playing with her ears. Look at her. She wasn't angry, but she smiled so happily, really. At that moment, I thought she was so innocent!

She, the pair of ears that impressed me the most, I hope you can listen to my inner desire for you and call on you to be happy, happy and happy every day! I tell you, every moment is the beginning of staring at those ears from memory, and no one can replace it. This is my detail that belongs to you. Believe. Our friendship is not only based on the heart, but also on the details you gave me. Those beautiful ears!

The memory of the moment is still those beautiful ears, I think, the memory of the soul. Memories, from that moment on, in late autumn, falling leaves, sad and cool memories ... I am my dearest friend!

7. Ask for a detailed explanation of the 800-word composition ―― The golden key to make the characters alive is the soul of the article. The common characters in students' exercises are often thousands of people, which are neither personalized nor vivid. The whole article looks dry, boring and lacking in appeal.

If you read these works carefully, you will find a common problem: you often just pursue writing something completely, ignoring vivid, concrete and nuanced details. Detail description has a wide range and various functions, but it mainly depicts characters and shapes their images.

Vivid details are like human cells. Without them, people will lose their lives, characters will lose their flesh and blood, and there are no details. Writer Lee Joon said: "In revealing a character's personality characteristics, a detail sometimes plays the same role as a plot or a scene."

As the saying goes, "the spirit is seen in the nuances." The creation of literary masters attaches great importance to the description of details.

In Lu Xun's The True Story of Ah Q, the first sentence of Ah Q was described in detail: "When it was time to draw a circle, the hand just shook with a pen, and the man spread the paper on the ground, and Ah Q fell down and tried to draw a circle. Afraid of being laughed at, he decided to draw a circle, but the damn pen was not only heavy, but also disobedient. It just shook and almost closed, but shrugged its shoulders and turned into a melon seed. "

The details of this behavior concretely, vividly and vividly reflect Ah Q's personality characteristics ―― he stuck to the "spiritual victory law" of self-deception until his death. When people read this detailed description, who can not think that Ah Q is ridiculous, pathetic and pitiful? How can we not "mourn its misfortune and anger it" and then think deeply about the national inferiority? Not only China writers, but also foreign writers.

For example, Balzac's Eugénie.