The process of dreaming when writing a composition

Let me tell you gently. Let me tell you gently that when you see a blind man on the roadside, you should greet him and help him cross the road, because the world needs kindness. Let me tell you gently that when your friend is devastated by setbacks in life, you should open your heart to listen to his words and give him the motivation and hope to rise, because then things will get better, because the world needs sincerity. Let me tell you gently that when you see a piece of waste paper lying on the floor in a clean classroom, you should not hesitate to pick it up and throw it into the wastebasket, because the world needs beauty. The elegant willows, the quiet bluegrass, the Jing Ya of bamboos and the seduction of roses are all kinds of customs endowed by nature, and the truth, goodness and beauty of people's hearts are also the spiritual stars given to us by the creator. In life, we should abandon those false, ugly and evil, and take our soul star to illuminate others and ourselves. This is our innate responsibility. When we do our duty, we may feel that the road ahead is long and endless, and we may feel exhausted, but when the duty is completed, please look back and you will find that the process is so charming. The sunshine is always after the storm. When you finish your responsibilities, you will feel unprecedented happiness and unique relief. A rainbow is slowly hanging in your heart, and you will find that life is so colorful. The responsibility of spring is to make everything germinate, the responsibility of summer is to make everything struggle, the responsibility of autumn scenery is to make everything think, and the responsibility of Winter Snow is to make everything wait for a revived spring. Then, let me tell you gently that your responsibility is to hold high the star of your heart, hold high the truth, goodness and beauty of people's hearts, and make the world full of blessings of love and prayers. Let me tell you gently, tell you how to fulfill your responsibilities, how to make your life more brilliant, more brilliant, and make your life more regretless! Let me tell you gently, tell you ... This is an excellent examination composition. Around the topic of "responsibility", candidates strung together the full text with "Let me tell you gently", starting with the need for "truth, goodness and beauty" in life, and then connecting with various natural and life phenomena, expressing their thoughts and feelings of daring to take on the responsibility of life in order to "make life more brilliant, more brilliant and more regretless", with rich content and true feelings. The language of this paper is more prominent, the full-text sentences are fluent, the meaning is coherent, and it is as natural and cordial as flowing water. It shows the author's high language level and expression skills. The full text has distinct levels, clear thinking and rigorous structure, and was rated as a perfect composition. (Sun Fukun)

(This content comes from the original address of the dictionary: /zxzuowen154369) 2. Write a Chinese composition on the topic of classicality that accompanied me to sleep

Write with my left hand, hold a book with my right hand, and walk gently in the forest path. Occasionally, a sweet-scented osmanthus, which lives in seclusion with the breath of autumn, quietly falls and stops between pages. I can't help but wake up. It turns out that Miss Qiu has settled in nature with her rich baby! I love nature, so I unconsciously put down the half-finished Nalan Ci. Touch the laurel petals and savor the taste of autumn. Look, sweet-scented osmanthus flowers are snuggling in the arms of mother tree, listening to the cool voice of the wind. Do you smell it? What's the smell, hiding a little sweetness, a little ink, and a fascinating mystery? Looking around, my eyes were fixed on the book on the stone chair-Nalan Ci. Since when do books attract me? I don't remember when I first studied. However, the first time I was deeply attracted by the book is quite clear. It was some distant days: after kindergarten, my grandmother hugged me and sat on the side of this path. Holding a little yellow book in her hand, she turned it over to me page after page with her cocoon-covered fingers. At that time, I looked at black and white people, paintings, grandma read, telling one touching fairy tale after another; Listening to this Oriole-like voice, as if what you said really appeared in front of you, scene after scene. Perhaps, at that time, the book had an indissoluble bond with me. That is, after that, I often dragged my grandmother here, moved a small chair, leaned on her and pestered her to tell me stories. After that, I have learned a few words, and my grandmother's story can no longer meet my needs. So I began to read some books with pinyin by myself. Starting from fairy tales, I speak like a mouse, reading word by word, with colorful paintings on the side. In the third and fourth grades of primary school, I pestered my parents to buy myself various books. Up to now, books have become an indispensable part of my life.

I love reading. Once upon a time, I was in a sea of books. "How the Steel was Tempered" gave me a heart that reversed in adversity, and I had to admire Paul's heroism. "Stars in Spring Water" let me see another style, and the words written by Bing Xin exude a different beauty; The Romance of the Three Kingdoms takes me through the ancient and modern times, with thirty-six plans and scheming, and how Luo Guanzhong is full of talents.

Meng Jiao loves his mother deeply, and once said, "but how much love has the inch-long grass, did you get three spring rays?" ; Tao Yuanming loves chrysanthemums alone, and with "picking chrysanthemums under the hedge, you can see Nanshan leisurely." This leisure; Ma Zhiyuan left home for many years, homesick, and wrote "The sun sets, heartbroken people are at the end of the world." The book may be omnipotent. It has brought me a full view of Kyushu and witnessed the long historical road of the world, which has benefited me all my life!

After the memory surged, everything was calm. I was still standing under the osmanthus tree, staring at the "Nalan Ci" and staring at the unchanged page "Advise Iraq to get drunk at the red window, but it's too late." How beautiful and tragic is the story of Nalan Xingde! It's getting heavier, heavier and heavier. A wisp of book fragrance is dancing and rippling forever in my soul dream, and it is getting stronger and stronger, far surpassing Chou-heung. Well, I'd better "smell" and "enjoy" books! 3. Ask for the composition titled "Dream of xxx"

Once upon a time, there was such a leisurely time.

In the summer night, it's quiet: the crescent moon quietly climbs to the top of the peach tree in the back hill, and smiles in the dark green leaves! What is she laughing at? Maybe Peach Tree told her something funny! Maybe the fish made some jokes again! The wind came softly, covered the moon with a dark cloud coat, and hurried away like a trip, and the smile in the sky became deeper and deeper. I love such a quiet smile, because it looks like my mother, and my mother loves to laugh like this.

when I think about my mother, I think of some odds and ends of childhood. Summer nights are much more pleasant than daytime. Families and neighbors often go out for a walk, and when they get together, they talk about crops and children ... We E79FA5E98193E59B9e7ad943133333963437, children of all sizes, are less restrained, so they laugh and chase, and sometimes they go together to steal other people's fruits and pick mulberries by the river in the moonlight.

I'm one of them. I'm often tired after eating fruit. I don't care if everyone calls me a wet blanket. I just nest in my mother's arms, look at the Milky Way full of stories, and fall asleep to my mother's songs. While my mother gently fanned the cattail leaf fan in one hand and gently shook my body in the other.

In summer, I don't sleep deeply. I often open my eyes when the show is over. My mother walks back with me in her arms and releases a hand to pinch my nose, saying, "Little slacker, why are you awake?" Then kiss me a few more times and see if I am confused and bend my mouth. If I say a few more pleasing words, my mother's smile will spread to my eyebrows and I won't make any noise, but I don't know how beautiful it is, so that I just stare at it until I fall asleep.

The month became more and more blurred. I walked back to my room, opened the curtains, and fell asleep in this moonlight. 4. The essay on the topic of brilliant heart flowers and taking with me < P > I never abandon a seed and always keep it-I keep the illusion that one day it will become a forest for my mother, but some of it scattered on the soil is blown away by the wind, and I don't know where to go. We are always collecting it every year, hoping that it will sprout a mother! If you see a lush forest in your dream, don't be surprised that he dreams for no reason. This is collected by your beloved daughter, asking him to sprout and blossom, and the result is a piece of my love for you! Imitating Bing Xin's Paper Boat —— Ideal and Pursuit I never give up a piece of paper, but always keep it, folding it into boats and floating on the sea.

Some of them were blown to the beach by the wind, but I was not discouraged, and they were still stacked-stacked, hoping that a boat could reach the place I designated for it. Disappointment will eventually lead to success. As long as you go forward bravely, you will definitely reach your destination. 5. How to write a story composition < P > 1. Process decomposition < P > Children like to write the story process in a big and long paragraph when they write a narrative, and the article becomes a three-stage mode of distinctive narrative writing. It is difficult for such a model to get high marks, and it is difficult for the process to be clearly and concretely presented to readers. Three-stage mode is not desirable and should be avoided. The ingenious way to solve the three-stage model is process decomposition, that is, to decompose a complex process into three or four stages in a certain logical order. The logical order of this process decomposition mainly has the following three kinds:

1. One method is to divide things into three or four stages according to the development order, that is, the cause, the course, * * * and the ending

2. According to the time-lapse order, that is, the first, middle and last three stages.

3, according to the location of the transfer to the section, the location conversion is another section.

after a complex process is decomposed into three or four stages, what we need to do is to write down each stage clearly and lay the foundation for concreteness.

For example, the text "The Back" divides the cause, process and ending of father's farewell into four stages and writes 2-6 5 paragraphs.

1. It's hard to remember my father's back.

2. Explain the family situation when the father and son parted this time, and render a sad atmosphere for writing "the back".

3. Reasons for farewell.

4. Careful care of my father before farewell.

5. Farewell process: after entering the station to buy a ticket and getting on the bus.

6. Farewell * *: After getting on the bus, my father

7. After seeing off, I miss my father's back.

enter the station to get on the bus, get on the bus and sit in the seat. My father buys oranges for me and says goodbye after buying them.

The whole process of my father buying oranges for me was described in detail.

The Last Lesson was written in chronological order. Narrating according to the three consecutive time sequences before class (on the way to school)-during class-after class

From Baicao Garden to three pools mirroring the moon is written in the order of changing places, first writing about Baicao Paradise as a child, and then writing about three pools mirroring the moon as a teenager. The change of two places constitutes the growth process of a teenager.

Second, the details are appropriate

After the process is decomposed, we should pay attention to the details of each stage of the process. Narrative should be focused, and some important processes and scenes should be described in detail to highlight the theme.

1), the occurrence and result of things should be briefly written, and the development process of things should be written in detail.

For example, the whole process of my father buying oranges for me is described in Back. It depicts a touching image of a loving father, expresses sincere and deep affection between father and son, and expresses the author's deep yearning for his father.

2), several things, important events should be described in detail.

For example, * * * described seven things: ① Teacher Cai pretended to be angry; ② Teach us to dance after class; ③ Take us to observe bees; (4) teach us to read poetry; ⑤ Our attachment to teachers; ⑥ Correctly handle the disputes between me and my classmates; 7. Go to the teacher in your sleep. These seven little things are written in detail in the last two and slightly in the first five. This arrangement, from in-class to out-of-class, from in-school to out-of-school, can show the deepening of the feelings between teachers and students, even if the structure of the article is dense and alternating.

3), the surface should be abbreviated, and the point should be written in detail. The content of

surface is often to render the atmosphere and explain the background. Point is the portrayal of key figures, which is the focus of the article and directly reflects the central idea. 6. "process" of Chinese composition

process is better than ending

By working hard to realize their dreams, this ending is of course beautiful, and many people will be immersed in this beauty, so they often ignore another more beautiful thing, that is, the process of working hard to realize their dreams, which is actually the most beautiful. (Get into the topic quickly at the beginning)

When the thick darkness enveloped the earth, the first light bulb lit up the whole world like a morning star. But all we see is a simple light bulb. Indeed, Edison is also happy that he can bring light to mankind. I believe what makes him feel better is the complexity and difficulty in the process of inventing the light bulb. With his wisdom and strength, he knocked on the doors of knowledge and climbed the peak of science step by step ... I believe this process can make Edison more intoxicated!

Indeed, many people have worked hard to realize their dreams. When dreams come true, people can really be immersed in happiness. But as long as we look back and take a look at every footprint and every drop of sweat on the way to realize our dreams, you will find that it is these footprints and sweat that moisten the opening of the flower of dreams. You will feel how meaningful and fulfilling this process is!

Chen Jingrun, a famous mathematician in China, keeps climbing the peak of science. When he picks the jewel in the crown of mathematics-Goldbach conjecture, I think what makes him feel more beautiful is that he travels day and night in the kingdom of mathematics and devotes himself to studying the process of mathematics, because he can swim in his favorite subject field and bloom the flowers of dreams with smart wisdom and hard sweat!

In fact, we realized our dream, which brought us only a moment of happiness, and the process of realizing our dream was even more memorable-sour, sweet, bitter and spicy.

In our daily life, there are also many people around us who only pursue the ending without paying attention to the process. Just like in learning, some students only pay attention to grades, but don't appreciate the sweat process of getting good grades at all, or hope to get something for nothing, or indulge in happiness blindly, and most of them end in failure. Therefore, the ending is not the most beautiful, but the process of working hard to realize your dreams is the most beautiful.

Although the process of working hard to realize our dreams is arduous, even painful, there is also great happiness in the pain, because it allows us to exert our intelligence and wisdom supernormally in the painful tempering, and fully embodies our greatest value ... (Analyze the case and buckle the topic)

Therefore, the process of working hard to realize our dreams is the most beautiful! 7. The blue sky accompanied me to sleep.