Writing a composition should be grounded

1. The composition should be grounded at the beginning, and the original meaning is "connected with the land". The catchword "grounding gas" is figurative, meaning close to real life and reflecting true feelings. Literary and artistic works should be grounded, and students' compositions should also be grounded. Only "grounded gas" articles can attract readers, impress readers and be deeply loved and welcomed by readers.

Nowadays, many students' compositions are not "grounded", often meaningless, empty and preaching, full of lies, lacking true feelings, and boring to read.

People can't help asking: Why is it difficult for students' compositions to be grounded in a prosperous and pluralistic modern society? I think the main reasons are as follows.

First, lack of real experience and understanding of life.

Influenced by the pressure of entering a higher school, many students live a "three-point-one-line" life, with narrow vision, few contact surfaces, numb feelings and rigid thinking shielding the eyes of wisdom.

Second, it is influenced by social and cultural atmosphere.

With the development of society, many people are eager for quick success and instant benefit, impetuous and uneasy, so their works are shoddy. This kind of work is published in newspapers and on the internet, which has a bad influence on students who are not deeply involved in the world. Some students blindly imitate, over time, leading to the prevalence of falsehood.

The third is influenced by the teacher's guidance.

Many teachers ask students to ensure stability and be cautious and innovative when guiding composition, especially when writing for exams. In order to achieve this goal, teachers spend a lot of time teaching students some fixed writing patterns. Imagine, how can a composition written according to the same pattern be different?

Fourth, it was misled by composition evaluation.

The scoring standard of college entrance examination is the vane of students' writing, and students will write in strict accordance with the scoring standard when writing. In fact, there are many good, spiritual and individual compositions among students, but these compositions may not meet the so-called requirements, or they may not get high marks, so students have to follow the excellent compositions in the eyes of teachers.

Then, how should students' compositions be grounded? I think we can work hard in the following aspects.

First, pay attention to observe life and think about life with your heart.

Life is the source of writing. We should be conscientious, open our eyes, observe the people and things around us attentively, see everything in society from the normal life where learning is useless, and understand the track of the times. Look for the sunshine of life in the ordinary, and feel the vitality of life in the whisper.

Second, I write my heart and express my temperament.

When writing, you should dare to open your heart, give your true inner voice, express your true demands, feelings and thoughts, and avoid pretending to be ill.

The third is to dare to innovate boldly.

The French writer Balzac said: "The first person who compares a woman to a flower is a genius, the second person who compares a woman to a flower is a mediocre person, and the third person who compares a woman to a flower is a fool." Writing is about innovation, seeing what people don't see and seeing what people don't do. We should always be curious about life. Ordinary scenery, ordinary things, ordinary things, ordinary people, we all look at them with extraordinary eyes, and we will get a poetic feeling and harvest. An innovative composition, even if it looks a little immature, is much better than a composition that is parrot-learned.

Trees can flourish, flowers can bloom, people can be healthy, and composition can be thought-provoking. Let's go into the society, go deep into life, express our true feelings and write more and better "grounded gas" compositions!

2. An 800-word composition on grounding gas is urgently needed. Some people say that youth is beautiful, but it is short-lived. In my opinion, youth is the flower season of flying dreams and pursuing ideals.

Youth, in this beautiful season, we strive to pursue our goals in life and strive for our ideals. In life, we feel all kinds of pressures and our parents miss us very much.

We were sixteen or seventeen years old. For example, collecting specimens together,

16, 17 years old, we are sometimes taciturn and depressed. We often sit alone in front of the window, looking at the tall buildings and the blue sky, alone in a daze, thinking about our past, but even if your youth is not so brilliant, there is no need to regret it. The poet Byron said, "It is not a pity to lose the wasted years." So when you realize this, youth is also glowing. This light does not exist for your pride, but for you to follow your way forward; It exists not for your enjoyment, but to add strength to your struggle. Therefore, there is no "regret" in the dictionary of youth!

Youth is short and wisdom is infinite. Seize the time to learn knowledge is the best way to seize youth. Hugo said, "Ah! Spring is a year of youth! Youth is the spring of life! " Since we can't keep spring, let's sow it quickly!

Life is sixteen or seventeen years old, what a wonderful time! Let's all cherish it. When you are young, don't let it die in a daze and ignorance. Work towards your ideal and be the best you can be.

3. An essay with a little grounding gas "500 words grounding gas" is to widely contact the ordinary life of ordinary people, integrate into the broadest masses of the people, and reflect the wishes, demands and interests of ordinary people at the bottom. Make use of people's living habits, language, etc. Instead of being divorced from the actual needs and real wishes of the masses and floating on the surface, we should be down-to-earth and deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, that is, follow the laws of nature rather than act blindly. Used to describe some officials and celebrities who are friendly to the public.

The composition should also pay attention to ordinary people and express their sufferings. Only in this way can the composition be integrated into the society, grasp the mainstream of the society, and achieve "seeing the big from the small".

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1. Pay attention to migrant workers

He is a migrant worker, helping me decorate my home. My parents said he was precocious. Age is really as old as his name. His eyes are wrinkled and cracked like chrysanthemums, which makes me seem to hear the sound of wrinkles on his face. When working, his thin body is always bent, his black hands are struggling to move the wood, and the green tendons under his arms are pulling a pair of clenched hands like branches.

What is written here is what I see: the appearance and movements of an old man are a bit like the leap soil written by Lu Xun. If there is no compassion, if there is no grounding gas, there will be no such description.

Pay attention to cleaners

My eyes fell on a pair of young people on the bench. A man and a woman are sitting in a chair, eating and chatting. The young woman bowed her head and peeled the pear, and her long skin fell to the ground. The young man had a bag of melon seeds in his hand, and the melon seeds were thrown all over the floor. At this time, the off-duty cleaner happened to pass by here. Seeing this behind the scenes, the cleaning lady who had taken off her old work clothes said to the man and woman, "Comrade, please throw the melon seeds into the dustbin." The man and woman looked at the aunt from top to bottom, and a sarcastic smile appeared on her face: "Your father is the mayor, so let you mind your own business?" Aunt cleaner didn't get angry, but said quietly, "Yes, I sweep the floor. This job is very ordinary, but think about it, how dirty the city will become if everyone does it like you! " The two men were not moved by menstruation's words at all. Instead, I stood up and glared at my aunt and left without looking back.

Here, not only cleaners are written, but also a pair of young people are compared, thus highlighting some people's indifference to cleaners and their awareness of taking the overall situation into account and understanding the overall situation.

3. Pay attention to the people around you

I came to a clinic, and the doctor who happened to see me was known by my father. He examined me with a thermometer and found that I had a little fever. Better hang a bottle of salt water, I agreed. When I was going to get the medicine, I found that I was in a hurry to go out and forgot to bring my money. I suddenly became like an ant on hot bricks. The doctor seemed to read my mind and said, "Don't you have any money? I'll lend it to you and ask your father to pay me back later. " I suddenly became a "smile through tears", holding that 100 yuan, feeling heavy, because it is not just 100 yuan, but also a true feeling.

The doctor my father knew offered to lend me money to see a doctor, which is reasonable and worth writing about. We should also pay attention to people around us, including people we are not familiar with.

Pay attention to strangers

Suddenly, I tripped over something and almost fell. I looked down and saw that it was a sewer cement slab. I shouted discontentedly, "Who moved the cement slab and didn't put it back?" Too wicked! " But thinking of the blind man next to me, I quickly reminded him: "Uncle, you go this way, be careful to trip." He just took a step, then stopped, broke my hand, put the crutch aside, squatted down and groped, and said, "Someone will pass by here, maybe they will trip." After a while, he touched the concrete slab, touched the open space next to it, and carefully moved to cover it.

The behavior of the blind uncle made me ashamed. It is a good way to set off his noble behavior through "I".

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The grounded composition is to truly express our real life, pay attention to the most ordinary people, and don't always stare at "big things" and "ancients".

4. Read the following text and write a short composition as required. This year's Tianjin college entrance examination Chinese composition topic is a clever combination of tradition and modernity, limitation and openness, and it is an active exploration of the college entrance examination composition proposition.

There is "learning and knowing" in The Doctrine of the Mean, and the introduction quotes teacher Han Yu's theory. The topic is based on the current classics, with rich historical and cultural connotations and distinctive flavor of the times.

This topic is elegant and heavy, close to students' life. In the era of knowledge economy and information explosion, let candidates talk about their feelings about diversified ways of seeking knowledge. They can contact their own reality, choose the right starting point, have something to say and feel.

The new curriculum teaching concept emphasizes respecting students' subjectivity and paying attention to students' personalized ideological and emotional experience. The topic better reflects this requirement. This topic leaves a lot of writing space for candidates. If we start from the thinking process, we can talk about "knowing by thinking" and "knowing by doubt". From the perspective of life experience, we can talk about "knowing it with pleasure" and "knowing it with frustration"; From the way of seeking knowledge, we can talk about "reading and learning" and "network learning"; From the perspective of the relationship between knowledge and practice, we can talk about "knowing by doing" and "knowing by using", and so on.

This topic belongs to semi-propositional composition, which is innovative in form, not only retains the framework of traditional propositional composition, but also reflects moderate autonomy and openness. It is a bright topic in the composition of college entrance examination. The position of the test center examines the writing ability of students.

5. Chinese teaching is grounded, and writing a composition can reduce the number of innocent children. When writing a composition, they lie and even indulge in the illusion created by fictional stories.

Such abuse obviously plays a "bad" role in shaping citizens' personality and cultivating their individuality. At present, more than 80% of children can't write a composition, which is related to "more routines and less experience" in composition teaching.

There are three reasons why students' compositions are false: first, teachers teach them this way. Homogenization of content, modeling of techniques, seeking stability and equality, and refusing to innovate, there are as many routines to follow as there are "model essays".

Second, this is required by the examination rules. This is like the relationship between exam-oriented education and the baton of college entrance examination. What kind of test composition requirements there are, naturally there will be what kind of student composition pattern.

In students' compositions, poetry and whimsy are often stifled by "common sense". Personalized language attempts are obscured by the "sameness" of large class teaching, and the result is a thousand words.

Third, students lack life experience, but they have to write some tall topics. "Nothing to say" is the most reasonable normal. The composition questions that have remained unchanged for decades must be properly balanced, like a duck to water, not to mention that primary school students, even high school students, can only be so "crowded".

A high school Chinese teacher who participated in marking the college entrance examination felt that "Tao Yuanming, Su Shi and Sima Qian" basically "lived once" in the college entrance examination every year. In the words of some students, what is the reason that "these three people are called the' Big Three in Routine', but they can solve all problems involving ideals, goals, mentality and responsibilities"?

What's strange about students becoming porters of "good words, good sentences and good articles"? "Articles are written for time, and poems are written for things." It is absurd and understandable that students who live by indirect experience leave papers everywhere in their compositions.

Some people say that children lie by writing a composition first. People's collective lying or collective affectation in their compositions obviously hurt not only the "talent" in the literary sense.

Children's composition routines are very deep, so we must set up ideas for solving problems. Let Chinese teaching be more relevant, make humanities education more true, good and beautiful, make quality education pay more attention to value and process, and make primary school students' "routine composition" really have medicine.

6. Primary school graduation essays should be grounded, like the family level of sixth-grade primary school students. Whenever my mother's voice comes over the phone, I can't help thinking of it.

I remember it was summer vacation. My mother often didn't have time to stay at home with me because of her busy work, so she called home several times a day to take care of me, but it made me feel very annoyed. Ding, the phone rang again. It must be my mother again. It's really annoying I called twice in one morning. No one told me to do more math problems, but told me to stop playing computer, watch less TV and exercise my eyes more.

The telephone is like a remote control, guiding me to the east and the west. "Alas," I sighed and continued to endure the annoying * * *.

"Ding, Ding", the phone keeps ringing. I really want to throw it on the ground at once. This makes me very uneasy. I picked up the mat and covered the phone tightly. The mobile phone immediately became much smaller and the room was much quieter.

But after a while, I feel that I can't cover it. Suddenly, I had a good idea-unplug the telephone line.

The room suddenly quieted down, and I smiled proudly: "Ha ha ha, I am so smart!" " "I opened the extracurricular books and wandered freely in the kingdom of books. Suddenly I heard a quick knock at the door: "Dangdang, mom is back, open the door quickly!" " "Oh, it's mom. I plugged in the telephone line and opened the door in a hurry.

I saw my mother panting, the whole dress was soaked and sweat dripped down. "Are you all right?" Mother asked anxiously.

"Nothing, what's the matter?" "It's okay, it's okay. I hope you are all right. "

Mom turned around and ran back to the unit like a gust of wind. Looking at my mother's distant back, I seem to understand a lot. In fact, my mother's call is to love and care for me in her unique way.

At this time, I really hope that the phone will ring again, because I know that at the other end of the phone line, there are parents who love me. I remember it was a snowy winter, and the whole land became extremely cold.

In the morning, I opened my hazy eyes and saw my grandmother calling me by the bed, urging me to get up quickly. I was reluctant to leave the warm bed and kept yawning. After freshening up, I came to the table to have breakfast.

I sat at the table and looked at the delicious breakfast in front of me, but I didn't even move my chopsticks. I just sat there staring at the breakfast on the table, talking endlessly, complaining to myself, "If you eat these every morning, you won't change your taste!" " Grandma saw that I looked depressed and asked a few questions with concern.

Who knows, I suddenly launched an "attack" and kicked off the stool. At this time, I seemed to be out of control, venting all my dissatisfaction on my grandmother, blaming her for cooking badly, why not change my taste ... After "unreasonable", I threw my chopsticks on the ground and sat on the sofa with a pout, panting. Grandma didn't say anything, just put down the chopsticks gently and stopped eating.

I see. Grandma is unhappy. Afterwards, I felt guilty.

Grandma worked hard to cook for me, but I was so picky. I want to admit my mistake in front of grandma, but I don't have the courage. On this day, I came to the classroom with an anxious mood, and I always felt a little sorry.

I dare not face up to the eyes of teachers and classmates, because I am afraid that they will find this "secret", so I keep my head down and keep silent, and the scene at that time always comes to my mind. I remember that the teacher told us to respect the old and love the young, to be filial to our parents and to respect our elders, but I was … so ashamed that I couldn't hold my head any longer, and felt that the days passed so slowly.

The bell rang and I trudged to the door. I looked up and saw a stool and a pair of slippers standing at the door as before. My grandmother used to do this so as not to waste my time. Now, I have a "cold war" with my grandmother, but she is still doing it silently, and I am even more ashamed. I put on my slippers and went into the house. The room is empty and there is no one in sight. Grandpa, grandma, dad and mom are not at home, but there is a "delicious" table on the table. The delicious food attracted me and I couldn't sit still. This table of different flavors of food makes my mouth water. I "ransacked" it willy-nilly and patted it with satisfaction.

When I opened the door, I was surprised to find that my "garbage dump"-my desk was cleaned and the desk lamp was adjusted to the right brightness. There is a cup of soaked chrysanthemum tea on the table, and the aroma is overflowing. The quilt is also spread on the bed, and my favorite doll is placed on my pillow ... Seeing this, my heart was moved infinitely. I walked by quietly. Suddenly, I found a note under my pillow: "Today, we are not at home. Don't watch it too late at night."

It's cold, put on your clothes, don't catch cold ... "Seeing this scene, I couldn't help it any longer. I cried in bed. I deeply feel that love, sometimes silent, silent love can make everyone's heart warm, and this warmth will last forever even under the pressure of winter. Everyone has a teacher, and of course I am no exception. Among all the teachers, my teacher, Mr Li Hongchun, impressed me the most.

Miss Li is our math teacher and our head teacher. She is serious and humorous. Miss Li is an optimistic teacher. When she is serious, her eyes are wide open and her tone suddenly becomes harsh, but most of the time we see her humorous side. Although Miss Li wears glasses, we can still see the "signal" in her eyes.

In a math class, everyone is listening to Teacher Li carefully. Suddenly, Miss Li found that a classmate slipped the number, and a warning "signal" appeared in her eyes immediately, as if to say, "Please don't slip the number again, this classmate". E799BE5BAA6E4B893E5B19E313361303033 The student found that the atmosphere was wrong and sat down immediately. We burst into laughter and praised Li Lao.

7. Look at the following text. According to the requirements, the composition "machine" must be lost, and "skill" is better. Seeing this topic, we might as well look at the explanations of these two debates first. The phrase "one skill in hand, no worries about food and clothing" means that if you practice one skill, you will have a worry-free life. This is a summary of people's life experience since ancient times. Even if there are thousands of dollars, it is better to have a skill. This is what we call vocational and technical education and professional skills learning today. It is very difficult to achieve "one skill in hand". Whether it is technical study or practical operation, we not only need to learn to be calm in mind, but also need patience and perseverance, which requires long-term accumulation. And "one machine in hand, I have everything in the world" means that with a mobile phone, we can give people a life. It is not limited to the functions of communication and taking photos in the past. You can play games, watch movies, watch the news, pay in buy buy, buy stocks, book tickets at any time, make money in micro stores, read books and study courses at any time. As long as you like, as long as there is a network, it is more like a super small computer, powerful and omnipotent. The so-called "mobile phones play all over the world" means that these two statements have their own backgrounds, their own directions and are not contradictory. What's more, I always think that technology is the foundation of how to change in any era. However, why is there a debate today that "one skill is not as good as one in hand"? Perhaps this is related to the superficial understanding of social phenomena. In reality, more and more low-headed people are immersed in the network world and wandering in the ocean of information. Having a machine in my hand has really brought convenience to many people, even because I opened a micro-store in the WeChat business and played live games, which brought profits and income. People who don't have "one skill" in the traditional sense can also expand the channels of success and realize their self-worth. That is, you can make a living and even achieve some success without learning any skills. You can't deny the convenience and gains brought by "one machine in hand", but I think this is the existence of "one skill" behind "one machine". Opening a micro-store to do WeChat business requires sales technology, good contacts, not only technical support products, but also intimate grounding service. Playing live games requires a certain level of strength. Can you have no skills? Otherwise, it is a flash in the pan; If you want to play with stocks and trade to make money, without professional technical support, you will inevitably draw water with a sieve. When you think about it carefully, the prevalence of the concept of "one machine in hand, I have everything in the world" reflects people's impetuous mentality in the face of complicated information and the rapid development of the network economy. It's easy to become famous early. These ideas are very unfavorable to the growth of young people. It is hard to imagine the future of the country and the nation if we indulge in the vast ocean of information and neglect the solid, once-popular network celebrities and belittle down-to-earth workers. In the past two years, the state called for "building a great country craftsman and cultivating the craftsman spirit in the new era", which may be based on practical problems. The craftsman spirit in the information age has its brand-new connotation and demand: how to make quality better and pay more attention to individual experience? How to make the technology more grounded and the division of labor more detailed? How to make products enter thousands of households in a more humanized and convenient way? Cultivating great country craftsmen in the information age is the key to national rejuvenation. Therefore, in the era of one machine, the demand for technology has not been diluted, but higher requirements have been put forward for "one skill". Whether it's skills or machines, in the final analysis, it's still a human problem. Without perseverance, a skill is empty talk; Without enterprising spirit, the machine in hand is decoration. In the new era, I hope we can't lose our "machine" and our "skills" are better.

Today, my parents and I went to Tianwai Village to play. There are so many people!

We took many photos there. One of them was taken by a blooming red cherry tree. Flowers match beautiful women! Mother secretly picked one for me and held it in her hand. How beautiful! I had a whim. I picked a green leaf at random, put the flower in the center of the leaf, and then put it in a flowing stream, watching the stream flow across the bridge with a little red color and to the foot of the mountain. We climbed many steps, tired and thirsty, and finally reached a pool. We set foot on a stone road and reached the other side carefully, where there was a deep pool. My father told me that this is the Black Dragon Pool. Dad also said that there are many small fish, shrimp and tadpoles here! I jumped up with a high salary. I like tadpoles best, so I asked my parents to help me catch tadpoles. It took a lot of effort to catch two little tadpoles. They are all black, with big heads and long tails. They are so cute. Then I saw two hives flowing in the water. I said strangely, "Dad, come and see, there are two beehives here." Dad came over, took a leisurely look and said, "Don't be afraid of children, this is a frog's egg." Ah! I shouted in horror. I observed it carefully and it was really interesting. They are all in the same room, closely connected, and the sticky little room is like many small bubbles. Much cuter than those big-headed guys. Dad also caught some small fish, shrimp and many colored stones for my company.

Although I am very tired and thirsty today, I am very happy, very happy and let me know a lot about tadpoles.