Materials that can be used to write a composition

1. Materials that can be used to write "Zhu Yuanzhang Cowherd Reading" Zhu Yuanzhang, who was born in Cowherd, never even went to a private school since he was a child, but he was brilliant and thirsty, and eventually became the founding emperor of the Ming Dynasty.

"Liu Gongquan became famous for his arrogance." Liu Gongquan showed great talent in calligraphy since he was a child, and calligraphy is well-known. He's a little proud of it, too.

One day, however, he met an old man with no hands and found that the handwriting written by the old man with his feet was better than his. Since then, he has always kept in mind "guard against arrogance and rashness", diligently practiced calligraphy and studied modestly, and finally became a generation of calligraphy masters.

In the Western Han Dynasty, there was a particularly learned man named Kuang Heng. When Kuang Heng was a child, his family was poor. In order to study, he dug through the wall of his neighbor's illiteracy, and finally touched his neighbor's illiteracy by stealing some candle light. With everyone's help, Kuang Heng learned something. During the Han and Yuan Dynasties, he served as a doctor, and was recommended by Shi Gao, a general of Fu and Che Qi, and moved to be a doctor.

The story "Studying Hard in Qu Yuan's Cave" tells that Qu Yuan hid in the cave to read the Book of Songs despite the opposition of his elders and the wind and rain when he was a child. For three years, he familiarized himself with 305 Poems of the Book of Songs, and gained rich nutrition from these folk songs, eventually becoming a great poet.

"Wang studied calligraphy hard" Wang was quick-witted since childhood, but his calligraphy was not satisfactory. So, he made up his mind to practice calligraphy well.

Finally, under the guidance of Uncle Yin Bao, he finally realized the true meaning of calligraphy and became a great calligrapher and writer. Wang Xizhi, known as the "Book Sage" by later generations, was a dull child when he was young, and he took his beloved gosling for a stroll every day.

Wang Xizhi practiced hard every day, but was called a dead word by his teacher, Mrs. Wei. Wang Xizhi is very upset. Inspired by the goose, Wang Xizhi wrote the golden word "zhi" in his study, but he ate the steamed bread with ink by mistake, leaving a story of Wang Xizhi eating ink. Fan Zhongyan's Broken Porridge Fan Zhongyan grew up in a poor family. In order to study, he scrimped and saved.

Finally, his thirst for knowledge moved the temple elders, who sent him to Du Nan College to study. Fan Zhongyan still insists on simple living habits and does not accept gifts from rich children to sharpen his will.

After studying hard, he finally became a great writer. Che Yin was born in Nanping (now Hubei Public Security Bureau) in Jin Dynasty. He comes from a poor family, but he studies very hard. The story of Bao's reading has become a much-told story in history, inspiring generations of literati.

How is Xingpu's reading? You will understand from the interesting story we will tell you. Zhang Sanfeng created Tai Chi. Zhang Sanfeng, whose real name is Quan Yi, also known as Strategist, Sanfeng and Yuanyuanzi, was born in Yizhou, Liaodong (now southwest of Zhangwu, Liaoning). Because of his untidiness, he was named "Tongwei Xianshi" when Yingzong was in the Ming Dynasty.

The legendary story about him was widely circulated among the people at that time, and even regarded as a fairy. We all know about Tai Ji Chuan, right? Tai Ji Chuan's greatest feature is to combine rigidity with softness! Do you know exactly how Zhang Sanfeng created Tai Ji Chuan? This movie is about this story.

Zhuge Liang Feed the Chicken Zhuge Liang was born in Yang Du County, Langya County, Xuzhou in the Eastern Han Dynasty. He is a famous politician and strategist in the history of China. If you have read The Romance of the Three Kingdoms, you will definitely not forget Zhuge Liang.

Zhuge Liang's wisdom has been praised by later generations, and many people even regard him as the embodiment of wisdom. But you know, some stories that happened when Zhuge Liang was a child at school are very interesting! Xuanzang was a monk in the Tang Dynasty. In order to obtain the original Buddhist scriptures, Xuanzang left Chang 'an in August of the third year of Zhenguan, trudged to Wan Li and finally arrived in India. It lasted 17 years, and he wrote The Tale of the Western Regions of Datang, which made great contributions to Buddhism, human progress and world civilization.

Wen Tianxiang, a famous national hero in the late Southern Song Dynasty, had a hard life as a teenager, so he had the opportunity to study with the help of good people. Once, Wen Tianxiang was mistaken for a thief by a rich classmate. He argued that others were not allowed to trample on his dignity and finally proved his innocence. And through this incident, he further established Wen Tianxiang's ambition to be the top scholar.

Chen Ping was famous in the Western Han Dynasty. When he was young, his family was poor and he lived alone with his brother. In order to maintain his father's orders, he showed off his family background and studied behind closed doors, but his eldest sister-in-law did not allow him. In order to eliminate the contradiction between brother and sister, he endured humiliation again and again. With the intensification of his eldest sister-in-law, he finally ran away from home and wanted to travel around the world. Finally, an old man came here and taught for free. After he finished his studies, he assisted Liu Bang and achieved great success.

Yue Fei, the national hero of Yue, was born in troubled times, and his family was poor since childhood. With the support of his neighbors, he learned martial arts from Zhou Tong, a famous Shaanxi teacher. During this period, he witnessed the broken mountains and rivers and the displacement of the people, sprouted the ambition of learning to be an official and overcame complacency. Under the careful instruction of the famous teacher Zhou Tong, he eventually became a Yue family thief, and led Wang Gui, Tang Xian and other partners to join the patriotic torrent of resisting gold and saving the country.

Beethoven, a great composer who struggled to grow up, couldn't go to school because of his poor family when he was a child. 17 years old suffered from typhoid fever and smallpox, followed by lung disease, arthritis, yellow fever and conjunctivitis. At the age of 26, he was unfortunately deaf and his love was frustrated. In this case, Beethoven vowed to "take life by the throat". In the tenacious struggle with life, his will prevailed. In his career of music creation, his whole life.

2. The materials that can be used for writing have not been destroyed. Why is it home?

Yue Fei, a national hero at the end of the Northern Song Dynasty, made a great wish of "returning my rivers and mountains" in the turbulent era of gold invasion. He fought in battle all his life and died in battle. When Yue Fei led the army to defeat the Jin Army repeatedly and made great achievements, someone offered a beautiful woman as comfort. Yue Fei said, "Is the general happy?" Song Gaozong wants to build a mansion and a family for him to praise his brilliant exploits. He also said that he would politely decline. "How can we go home before the Golden Army is destroyed?" Yue Fei was determined to win all his life, and finally left an eternal reputation.

Analysis: Life is short, what is the most important? Some people choose to eat, drink and be merry, others choose to be comfortable, but Yue Fei chooses to give up the ego for his ideal ambition and the happiness of more people.

Topic: "The Value of Life" and "Happiness and Pursuit"

Tong Dizhou's new wife.

1930, Tong Dizhou just got married. In order to further his studies, he resolutely bid farewell to his wife and went to Belgium to study. They firmly believe: "If the two relationships are long-lasting, it will be a matter of time!" This walk is four years. His wife is raising children at home, and has saved part of her meager salary and sent it to Tong Dizhou, which is almost poor abroad. He couldn't help crying. Four years later, Tong returned to China, where they explored the mysteries of biology side by side.

Analysis: People who seek knowledge sometimes get close to ruthless people; Seemingly ruthless, it is the most affectionate.

Topic: "Love and Ruthlessness" and "Pursuit"

Li Ning won the gold medal in the injured competition.

Li Ning, who won three consecutive gold medals in the Olympic Games, took part in the competition with an injury. 1In May, 984, serious injuries made him give up the national gymnastics competition held in Nanchang. As the Olympic Games approached, his pain improved a little, so he took part in the training. After going to Los Angeles, one day, when he was doing parallel bars, he rolled over and pulled his arm backwards, he pulled his chest muscle and hurt his shoulder, which led to convulsions and clenched his fist. But without telling the coach, he secretly vowed: "Fight, even if my shoulder is broken after the game, I will admit it!" " "In this way, Li Ning won three gold medals not only by virtue of his physical strength and skills, but also by virtue of his strong will.

Analysis: Gold medal is important, and spirit is more important than gold medal. It is this fighting spirit that moves people most on the court.

Topic: "The heaviest gold medal" and "The spirit is priceless"

Don't stop until you get what you want

Hou Linbao, a language master, has only been in primary school for three years. Because of his diligence, his artistic level has reached perfection and he has become a famous language expert. Once, in order to buy the joke book "The Waves" of Amin Dynasty that he wanted to buy, he went to all the old book stalls in Beijing and didn't buy it. Only later did he know that Beijing Library had this book. It was winter, and he braved the heavy wind and snow and went to the library to copy books for 18 days in a row. A book with 65,438+10,000 words was finally copied by him. It is with the strong perseverance of "never give up until you reach your goal" that Hou became a master of cross talk.

Analysis: The language master Hou tells us this truth with actions: If you want to achieve something, you must be diligent and studious, and you must persevere.

Topics: "Laughter comes from diligence" and "Learning makes genius"

Practice writing with your elbow.

After graduating from Shanghai Art Institute, Pan Jinhui, a contemporary painter, returned to his hometown to sell paintings for a living. He practices painting hard in a bad environment, often for more than ten hours. In the evening, he practiced painting under kerosene lamps and found the best way to cure drowsiness. Whenever painting is out of control at night, he puts his arm on the lampshade, and the glass cover of the hot kerosene lamp makes a "scowl". The sharp pain dispelled his drowsiness and made him pull himself together and continue painting. Over time, he left several black scars on his left elbow. He studied painting hard and finally succeeded. His fish painting style is unique and unique, which is well-known at home and abroad.

Analysis: Learning requires both methods and perseverance. Anyone who wants to be opportunistic cannot succeed.

Theme: "hard work" and "the rule of success"

3. Materials that can be used to write "Zhu Yuanzhang Niu Lang Reading" Zhu Yuanzhang, who was born in Niu Lang, never even went to a private school since he was a child, but he was brilliant and thirsty for knowledge, and eventually became the founding emperor of the Ming Dynasty.

"Liu Gongquan became famous for his arrogance." Liu Gongquan showed great talent in calligraphy since he was a child, and calligraphy is well-known. He's a little proud of it, too.

One day, however, he met an old man with no hands and found that the handwriting written by the old man with his feet was better than his. Since then, he has always kept in mind "guard against arrogance and rashness", diligently practiced calligraphy and studied modestly, and finally became a generation of calligraphy masters.

In the Western Han Dynasty, there was a particularly learned man named Kuang Heng. When Kuang Heng was a child, his family was poor. In order to study, he dug through the wall of his neighbor's illiteracy, and finally touched his neighbor's illiteracy by stealing some candle light. With everyone's help, Kuang Heng learned something. During the Han and Yuan Dynasties, he served as a doctor, and was recommended by Shi Gao, a general of Fu and Che Qi, and moved to be a doctor.

The story "Studying Hard in Qu Yuan's Cave" tells that Qu Yuan hid in the cave to read the Book of Songs despite the opposition of his elders and the wind and rain when he was a child. For three years, he familiarized himself with 305 Poems of the Book of Songs, and gained rich nutrition from these folk songs, eventually becoming a great poet.

"Wang studied calligraphy hard" Wang was quick-witted since childhood, but his calligraphy was not satisfactory. So, he made up his mind to practice calligraphy well.

Finally, under the guidance of Uncle Yin Bao, he finally realized the true meaning of calligraphy and became a great calligrapher and writer. Wang Xizhi, known as the "Book Sage" by later generations, was a dull child when he was young, and he took his beloved gosling for a stroll every day.

Wang Xizhi practiced hard every day, but was called a dead word by his teacher, Mrs. Wei. Wang Xizhi is very upset. Inspired by the goose, Wang Xizhi wrote the golden word "zhi" in his study, but he ate the steamed bread with ink by mistake, leaving a story of Wang Xizhi eating ink. Fan Zhongyan's Broken Porridge Fan Zhongyan grew up in a poor family. In order to study, he scrimped and saved.

Finally, his thirst for knowledge moved the temple elders, who sent him to Du Nan College to study. Fan Zhongyan still insists on simple living habits and does not accept gifts from rich children to sharpen his will.

After studying hard, he finally became a great writer. Che Yin was born in Nanping (now Hubei Public Security Bureau) in Jin Dynasty. He comes from a poor family, but he studies very hard. The story of Bao's reading has become a much-told story in history, inspiring generations of literati.

How is Xingpu's reading? You will understand from the interesting story we will tell you. Zhang Sanfeng created Tai Chi. Zhang Sanfeng, whose real name is Quan Yi, also known as Strategist, Sanfeng and Yuanyuanzi, was born in Yizhou, Liaodong (now southwest of Zhangwu, Liaoning). Because of his untidiness, he was named "Tongwei Xianshi" when Yingzong was in the Ming Dynasty.

The legendary story about him was widely circulated among the people at that time, and even regarded as a fairy. We all know about Tai Ji Chuan, right? Tai Ji Chuan's greatest feature is to combine rigidity with softness! Do you know exactly how Zhang Sanfeng created Tai Ji Chuan? This movie is about this story.

Zhuge Liang Feed the Chicken Zhuge Liang was born in Yang Du County, Langya County, Xuzhou in the Eastern Han Dynasty. He is a famous politician and strategist in the history of China. If you have read The Romance of the Three Kingdoms, you will definitely not forget Zhuge Liang.

Zhuge Liang's wisdom has been praised by later generations, and many people even regard him as the embodiment of wisdom. But you know, some stories that happened when Zhuge Liang was a child at school are very interesting! Xuanzang was a monk in the Tang Dynasty. In order to obtain the original Buddhist scriptures, Xuanzang left Chang 'an in August of the third year of Zhenguan, trudged to Wan Li and finally arrived in India. It lasted 17 years, and he wrote The Tale of the Western Regions of Datang, which made great contributions to Buddhism, human progress and world civilization.

Wen Tianxiang, a famous national hero in the late Southern Song Dynasty, had a hard life as a teenager, so he had the opportunity to study with the help of good people. Once, Wen Tianxiang was mistaken for a thief by a rich classmate. He argued that others were not allowed to trample on his dignity and finally proved his innocence. And through this incident, he further established Wen Tianxiang's ambition to be the top scholar.

Chen Ping was famous in the Western Han Dynasty. When he was young, his family was poor and he lived alone with his brother. In order to maintain his father's orders, he showed off his family background and studied behind closed doors, but his eldest sister-in-law did not allow him. In order to eliminate the contradiction between brother and sister, he endured humiliation again and again. With the intensification of his eldest sister-in-law, he finally ran away from home and wanted to travel around the world. Finally, an old man came here and taught for free. After he finished his studies, he assisted Liu Bang and achieved great success.

Yue Fei, the national hero of Yue, was born in troubled times, and his family was poor since childhood. With the support of his neighbors, he learned martial arts from Zhou Tong, a famous Shaanxi teacher. During this period, he witnessed the broken mountains and rivers and the displacement of the people, sprouted the ambition of learning to be an official and overcame complacency. Under the careful instruction of the famous teacher Zhou Tong, he eventually became a Yue family thief, and led Wang Gui, Tang Xian and other partners to join the patriotic torrent of resisting gold and saving the country.

Beethoven, a great composer who struggled to grow up, couldn't go to school because of his poor family when he was a child. 17 years old suffered from typhoid fever and smallpox, followed by lung disease, arthritis, yellow fever and conjunctivitis. At the age of 26, he was unfortunately deaf and his love was frustrated. In this case, Beethoven vowed to "take life by the throat". In the tenacious struggle with life, his will prevailed. In his career of music creation, his whole life.

4. Ask for the materials that can be used in the college entrance examination composition (celebrity deeds). I suggest you buy a composition book. In this way, it is endless and will miss something.

The composition book will be comprehensive and organized. There are both examples and model essays.

(My composition book catalogue alone has 18 pages = = I'm exhausted after typing, not to mention I can't write it down. ) The materials should not be old, but the latest ones, such as Einstein and Li Shizhen, have said that there is nothing new, so everyone should pay attention to the news and so on. Speaking of materials, on the one hand, writing skills are very important! Go and have a look, it will help you. New material for college entrance examination composition: 0 1, China cultural events inventory, walking. Inadvertently, our 08 will become history. This year, we have experienced too much, with joy and sorrow, or immersed in pain, or excited in front of honor.

When we look back, we find that in the past year, there were always more or less events that affected us and made us last as long as new and unforgettable. After reading the top ten cultural events in China counted by Mr. Liu Hongbo, I couldn't help copying a title myself and expressing my views on Mr. Liu Hongbo's inventory.

First, the rich list of writers in 2008 Keywords: the rich list caused a sensation in literature. Responsibility Mo: The third release of the rich list of writers in 2008 caused a sensation again. Let's not discuss how this ranking is made. Judging from the importance of headlines published by major media, the rich list is leading a cultural storm. People not only sigh, but also criticize it. More people are wondering, and more people are asking: China. What responsibility should the current literati bear for the development of literature? It seems that scholars still have a long way to go. In people's eyes, writers seem to have become synonymous with poverty. In my impression, it seems that all the literati in the past dynasties lived in extreme poverty. How many literati who used to make a living by selling articles and words make us feel that success is rare after all.

In today's society, we can still hear and see that many outstanding literati live in poverty. The release of the rich list in 2008 has caused us to think more: how to develop our literature in the new era? Where is China's literary outlet? Second, Yu tearful Keywords: Personality after the death of Bodhisattva: China in 2008, 5. 12 was an extremely painful day. In just a few seconds, the lives of tens of thousands of compatriots were swallowed up instantly. 5. 12 Wenchuan shocked the whole land of China and the hearts of hundreds of millions of people in China. This spring has become a little cold, so cold that we tore our hearts apart.

However, Yu was criticized by the cultural circles for publishing a blog post on June 5 to comfort the victims who lost their loved ones, such as "He will become a bodhisattva after death". Of course, there are no fewer voices. Supporters think that Yu "once again shows the personality level of excellent intellectuals", while opponents think that Yu dances on the dead. Indeed, it is understandable that Yu wrote an article mourning his compatriots. At that moment of national disaster, he needed the call of literati and the power of words to unite Chinese descendants. The affected compatriots need not only material help, but also spiritual support.

However, Yu's behavior vividly taught China literati a lesson: As a leading figure in literature, how to choose the right time and place and make the right remarks so as not to mislead the public. Third, Wang Zhao Shan Gui Key words: Be a ghost, but also be happy: On June 6, Qilu Evening News published "Ode to Grave Robbery" by Wang Zhaoshan, vice chairman of Shandong Writers Association, which quickly spread all over the world.

The full text is as follows: "Jiang? The self-report under the ruins "What's to complain about avoiding natural disasters and deaths?"? Chairman's call, Prime Minister's call, the party's patriotism and love, sound into the ruins. 1.3 billion people are happy when they cry and do ghosts.

The Silver Eagle Chariot saves the calf, Uncle Zuo Jun, the right police aunt, the national love, and it is enough to experience death. I just hope there is a screen in front of the grave, watch the Olympics together and cheer together. "

Chairman Wang's "Being a Ghost Makes You Happy" was really shocking and was quickly dubbed "ghostwriting". We can't help asking: will a person feel happy when he dies in an earthquake? Life is precious because it only comes once. If a person's life is gone, will he still look forward to a TV screen in front of the grave, waving the flag for the athletes in China? This irresponsible and indifferent style of writing once again angered netizens and demanded that Wang Zhaoshan be expelled from the writers association. Wang Zhaoshan's irresponsibility caused us to think more. When Yu's blog post storm has not stopped, it has once again triggered a big discussion about what responsibilities literati should bear to literature and the public.

Fourth, the curtain call of Xie Jin Keywords: Xie Jin has time, but Xie Jin has no time: furong town, herders, the legend of Tian Yunshan, garlands under the mountain, etc. Xie Lao's works made countless audiences cry. On June 10, 2008, Xie Lao died in his hometown of Shangyu, Zhejiang, at the age of 85. Xie Lao's departure is a great loss for China Film Festival.

Some people say that if we divide the 20th century into two halves and name some cultural figures in China who have the greatest influence in the second half of 50 years, then even if we narrow the list to a minimum, it is bound to be grateful for the old virtues. In the 20th century, movies were undoubtedly a cultural power station. When an excellent film is staged, it often becomes a national festival, and Xie Lao is the person in charge of this festival.

There is a famous saying that has been circulated by people: "Xie Jin has an era, but Xie Jin has no era." This is the basis for the living Xie Jin to win respect, and it is also the reason why the dead Xie Jin attracts people's infinite nostalgia.

Just before Xie Lao's bones were cold, a well-known "big mouth" in the entertainment circle began to bombard Xie Lao and boasted in his blog that he had mastered some unknown "inside stories" about Xie Lao. After the shelling incident, Ren Qian, director of the Media Organization Management Department of the State Administration of Radio, Film and Television, denounced Dazui on behalf of the government. Dazui not only refused to admit his mistake, but also wrote in his blog that he would sue the State Administration of Radio, Film and Television. The shameless ugly face of this "big mouth" ignited a big discussion on professional ethics among netizens and the media, which made us think for a long time: What kind of era has this era become? Xie Lao's departure.

5. Write a composition with the following materials. Read the following materials and write a composition as required.

(1) Scientists have found that there is an ozone hole over the Arctic, and strong ultraviolet rays may kill all life.

(2) According to a statistic, our world is a world of chemically synthesized substances. You see, "eating" chemical additives, "wearing" chemical fibers, "using" synthetic plastics, "chemistry" and "synthesis" are all over the world: chemical pesticides, chemical foods, synthetic fertilizers, synthetic resins ... and the products of industrial civilization such as television and automobiles are simply a bunch of "chemistry" and "synthesis".

(3) On the desolate beaches of the Neil Islands, there are scattered gull remains, eggs that cannot be hatched and abandoned gull nests everywhere; On Anholt Island in Kategat, the bodies of seals are floating around. ...

Please write an article on the topic of "Earth Home".

Thinking guidance

For the future world, mankind is full of longing and hope. However, serious environmental problems have been put on the agenda. The materials given in the title show students three thrilling pictures and sound the alarm for the future of mankind. The materials provided require students to distinguish the similarities and differences of the materials, dig out the meanings contained in the materials, capture the connection points between the three materials, reveal the similarities and differences of different events, use divergent thinking from multiple angles and levels, draw inferences from others, flexibly use arguments, put forward creative ideas from the short stories that happened around them, and combine them with real life. You can also set out from the material itself and elaborate your unique opinions.

model essay

Earth home

Seen from the moon, the earth where we live is a round sphere, dressed in beautiful blue clothes, which of course accounts for seven tenths of the world's oceans. As we all know, the ocean is the cradle of life. In that deep and vast underwater world, thousands of creatures live, and they live and multiply freely. Because of their existence, our home will be more beautiful.

God gave the earth to human management, and how did humans repay it? Since ancient times, wars have continued, killings have continued, and countless people have been killed. In order to satisfy their own selfish desires, human beings will dig up all the treasures on the earth by any means. To this day, there are still wars, for oil, for land, for ... Is this the so-called "civilized world"?

With the development of industry, the threats faced by nature are increasing day by day, and the mountains of garbage and harmful gases made by human beings are tearing at her all the time. There is a hole in the ozone layer over the Arctic, the global temperature is rising year by year, and the land is swallowed up by the desert day and night ... After all, there is a limit to patience, and nature has begun to punish us. Birds, animals, insects, fish and herbs inexplicably lost their innate nature and aura, went crazy and depressed for no reason, leaving some grotesque offspring. Blind reclamation, deforestation and deforestation have brought floods, landslides, soil erosion, turf vegetation destruction and land desertification: the earth has issued strong protests and warnings to us again and again!

However, human beings are still stubborn, still illegally killing rare animals and developing biochemical weapons. Although there is legal protection at present, there are still many hidden concerns. The desolate beaches of the Neil Islands are littered with the remains of young gulls, eggs that cannot hatch and abandoned gull nests. Holt Island in Catgart Canyon is full of dead seals ... The once beautiful bay has now become a terrible hell. "At sunrise, the river is as red as fire, and in spring, it is as green as blue." In the long run, I'm afraid this kind of scenery can only be seen in dreams.

How can we not feel shocked and confused in the face of the thrilling scenes caused by human beings themselves? How can we not let people have endless troubles?

Today, we should be responsible for everything we do. "You can correct your mistakes, but this is a great kindness." . The earth is the only space for us to live, but we are not the only creatures on the earth. When there are only human beings left on the earth, it will be the day when human beings will perish, so please take care of our earth.

Today, another island will disappear from the horizon; Tomorrow, another species will be extinct from the earth. In the face of the crisis that synthetic chemicals may destroy mankind and the earth, ignorance and callousness only mean waiting for death. What we need is: active, decisive and effective actions arising from anxiety.

Please cherish our beautiful home, or the last drop of water on the earth will be a human tear!

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"Good Home", the article structure is clear and complete, detailed and clear, methodical, able to closely follow the materials, aim at the theme, contact with real life, combine narrative with discussion, give full examples and have a clear point of view. The most prominent advantage of this paper is to closely follow the materials in the topic, draw out opinions and use arguments flexibly. The first paragraph reveals the beauty of our earth home in narrative language. In the second paragraph, with a turn of the pen, a large number of vivid factual arguments are cited, revealing the essence of matter and demonstrating that the present and future of the earth are being eroded. At the end, it is clearly pointed out that it is urgent to protect the earth's environment, and it is the unshirkable responsibility of human beings to call on them to care for their beautiful homes and maintain ecological balance.

6. What is the so-called composition writing material? In layman's terms, it is an example. Write a person, a thing, a scenic spot and an object around a center. LZ, you said it was right to sum up what you wrote in your composition carefully. It would be better if you could summarize the center of the article. It is not important to summarize the center of the article. I'll teach you a trick: ask yourself two questions before writing a composition. 1. Why did you (I) write this article? 2. What points should you (I) highlight or tell others when writing this article? String these words together to form your composition material. However, you must write clearly the time, place, people, time and content in advance, and the answers to your two questions will be more perfect. In a word, you can write a good composition with materials.

7. People say that sugar will burn, so I wonder. I thought: How can white sugar burn? Fried popcorn can't watch others cook for long! At the thought of this, curiosity prompted me to get to the bottom of it. I took two small metal spoons, two spoons of sugar, a lighter and a small spoonful of oil. I asked some friends to explore. I first picked up one of the small metal spoons, poured a spoonful of sugar, picked up a lighter and heated the small metal spoon very hot. Then the sugar melted, and it seemed that I couldn't stand the blazing flame. A little friend cried, "white sugar seems to have turned into water." When the partners saw this phenomenon, their excitement could not be described in words, because the experiment was about to succeed. Then, the spoon turned slightly red and the sugar water boiled. The partners began to talk. After the experiment, some partners said that it must be brown sugar, some said it was not, it should be syrup, and some said that I don't agree with anyone, it should be syrup. My friends burst out laughing at once. Finally, the sugar caught fire and turned into black charcoal. I blew out the fire. Some friends are too timid to touch it for fear of burning their hands. Some friends hold it in their hands and touch it around. Others don't mind. They tasted it and immediately spit it out, saying, "It's terrible." I brought another small metal spoon. I'm surprised. The next day, I came to the science teacher, Miss Wang, and asked, "Yesterday, I did an experiment. The first time I took a spoon, I poured sugar into it, and after heating it with fire, it became black charcoal. " And I did another experiment. I only put a spoonful of oil, but the sugar didn't catch fire and turned into black charcoal. "Teacher Wang said: Because the sugar is heated, the water in the torch is completely drained, leaving only the carbon inside, so it will burn, while the other experiment is not easy to burn because of adding oil." After listening to the teacher Wang, I was deeply moved by the mystery of science.