Please ask an English expert to review these slogans

I understand what you want, to convey your core concepts and values ??in a clear and concise manner in the form of a title on your website or in your company's promotional materials.

In general, the person on the first floor did point out part of the problem, although his answer was a bit confusing; that is, there should be no confusion about the parts of speech under the three main items. Take the first paragraph as an example

Our Style: Our "style"

(1) Serious, efficient and faithful.

They are all adjectives (serious) , efficient, loyal)

(2) Innocent, aboveboard and principled.

Same, but

1. I don’t know the word innocent for you What you want to express is usually not used to describe a company

2. Above board is not a word, but a phrase, which belongs to the category of idiom.

3. Principled It is extremely rare to express principle + d participle form abroad.

(3) Diligently, earnestly and ambitiously.

They are all adverbs (seriously/sincerely/ambitiously) and the direction of guidance is not consistent

(4)Never make any excuses.

The others are all words or phrases, so this sub-item seems abrupt.

The remaining two main items generally have a similar problem of "it is not very clear what you want to express"

Our Spirit: Our "idea" (or "Faith")

Honest and reliable.

Honest and reliable

Hard-working and economical.

Diligent? And "economical?" (meaning your charges are not too high?)

Modest and cautious.

Modest and cautious

Creative and imaginative.< /p>

Creative and "imaginative?"

Our Values: The first three of our "values?" are more like "slogans", and the last one is not a sentence and is incompatible with them. .

Unity is strength.

Make a little progress everyday.

Be certain and never take anything for granted.

Quality assurance and health assurance.

(What is the concept of "health assurance"? Such a term is rarely seen abroad)

In addition, there are too many words used, and some of the meanings also overlap. Cumbersome and not concise enough.

I'm sorry that I have to speak out for your own good, and I hope it can help you find your way again.

After making adjustments, if you are still unsure, you can always ask my team for help directly, and I will be happy to help you again.

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