Grasp the characteristics of the landscape and write a composition 400.

1. Write a scenic spot and grasp the scenic features. 400 words Dongshan Lake is one of the top ten scenic spots in Guangzhou. I came to Dongshan Lake this time and witnessed the beautiful style of Dongshan Lake Park.

As soon as I entered the gate of Dongshan Lake, I saw many flowers and trees around this big stone, on which were written three conspicuous red characters "Dongshan Lake". When the wind blows, flowers and plants sway, just like a girl dancing hand in hand with a handsome boy. How beautiful! Then I came to the famous Jiuqu Bridge.

Jiuqu Bridge is named after nine right angles, and each corner has an identical pillar. People are shuttling back and forth in the upper reaches of Jiuqu Bridge: some are taking pictures; Some stand on the bridge and look into the distance; Others close their eyes and feel the fresh air.

Under the zigzag bridge, the lake is as green as jasper and as quiet as a mirror. Cruise ships and boats glided slowly across the lake, leaving almost no trace.

After crossing the zigzag bridge, we came to the island. The island is surrounded by trees, flowers and pleasant scenery.

Say tree! Every tree is flourishing; Say flowers! Every flower is colorful, emitting charming fragrance from time to time, attracting bees to collect honey here, and butterflies to dance here. Dongshan Lake is full of beautiful scenery, which really deserves its reputation.

2. A 400-word composition describing the landscape features. 1. "Ding" should be combined with "Dynamic". People often observe and describe the scenery in a "fixed point" position, which is far from enough.

The scenery is colorful and changeable. Even if you express the same thing, your position and angle are different, and your appearance and effect are different. With the change of observation points, completely different scenery will come before us, and various scenes will appear before us.

Therefore, it is necessary to combine fixed-point observation with mobile observation. How to describe the scenery by changing the scene? First of all, we should explain the changes of observation points clearly, so that readers can know where they were observed.

Secondly, when explaining observation points, we should describe the most distinctive scenery from different angles in a certain order. For example, the article "Winter in Jinan" written by Lao She describes the unique beauty of Jinan in winter at different observation points, from fixed point to scenery change, that is, from the city to the mountain village outside the city after snow.

Writing about the city from different angles means overlooking Jinan from the sun and writing about the mountain scenery under the light snow from the perspective of looking up. This highlights the overall sense of Jinan's beautiful scenery and vividly reproduces the characteristics of Jinan's "warm sunshine" in winter.

Second, "virtual" should be combined with "real". A "real" scene refers to a scene that can be seen and touched, that is, a realistic scene that can be perceived. The "virtual" scene refers to the scene that does not appear, that is, the scene of association and imagination.

Inspire the association with the present scene to highlight the past scene and the future scene, or stimulate the imagination to create a new scene and jointly describe the scenes in different time and space fields. This is the method of coexistence of reality and reality. Describing the scenery with the combination of reality and reality can make the described scenery more vivid, make the work full of three-dimensional sense and reach a far-reaching realm at the same time.

Therefore, in "real writing", we should properly "virtual writing". For example, there is such a scene description in the article "In the Rain": "The ticking road, like a glittering ribbon, floats gently in the green shade in early summer.

Passing vehicles are like boats shuttling in the water waves. The author links "roads" and "vehicles" with "ribbons" and "ships" to make the scenery described more vivid.

Another example: Zhu Ziqing's article "Spring", from the orchard full of fruits and flowers, thought of "as if the trees were full of peaches, Xinger and pears". This change from reality to nothingness recreates a new picture, which makes the scenery more magical and beautiful, and also makes the realm of the article dig deeper.

Third, "dynamic" should be combined with "static". Static and dynamic scenes exist objectively. Mountains, flowers, trees and buildings are often in a static state in our usual observation, while scattered clouds, flowers, leaves and grass swaying in the wind and rain are in a state of activity and change.

When we observe a scene, we should pay attention to its static and dynamic. If you only write static scenes, it is easy to make the article dull, while if you only write dynamic scenes, it may lose stability.

When writing, we should combine the two, that is, there is movement in stillness and stillness in movement, and the two contrast and set off each other, so that the scenery will be lively and the articles written will be interesting. For example, there is an article entitled "Evening". The little author wrote about the hilltops, trees and the sea-looking pavilion shrouded by the sunset glow. They are "static", but the clouds floating across Wanghaige are "moving". They "look like people for a while, dogs for a while, bordeaux horses for a while, and cocks with crowing necks for a while."

Fourth, "thickness" should be combined with "lightness". Su Dongpo once wrote in a poem: "If you want to compare the West Lake to the West, light makeup is always appropriate." This aesthetic concept tells us that the description of scenery should not be "rich" or "light", but appropriate and appropriate.

"Dense" means that a part of the scene is carefully carved, while "light" means that it is understated, that is, the characteristics of the scene are outlined in simple and plain language. How to make "thick" and "light" appropriate? "Coarse" is by no means a waste of pen and ink, and "light" is by no means a few strokes. It should be chosen according to the needs of the theme.

For those scenes that are closely related to the theme or the emotion to be expressed, we should splash ink, that is, mobilize a variety of sensory organs to observe, and strive to describe them from the aspects of nature, shape, size, color, sound and taste, so as to make them vivid, concrete and vivid. What is indirectly related to the theme should be sketched in light ink to make it concise and vivid.

For example, in Zhu Ziqing's prose "Spring", the author first grasped the characteristics of spring mountain, spring water and spring day, and outlined the outline of spring scenery vividly. As a result, the pictures of spring grass, spring flowers, spring breeze, spring rain and welcoming spring are heavily smeared.

When painting the spring breeze, in order to highlight the warmth, fragrance and sweetness of the spring breeze, first, write "like a mother's hand touching you" with the help of the sense of touch, then write "the smell of newly dug soil", "the smell of grass" and "the fragrance of flowers" with the help of the sense of smell, and finally write the songs of birds "crisp", "dancing" and shepherds "cheerful" with the help of the sense of hearing. In this way, in many ways, the invisible and colorless spring breeze is written with sound and taste, concrete and vivid, wonderful and touching.

(Suiling Education Information Network) 5. It is objective that "scenery" should be combined with "emotion", but if "scenery" can't be branded with "emotion" naturally, such scenery is just a pale and beautiful "body" and it is difficult to achieve the touching purpose. In fact, the process of describing scenery itself is the process of writing subjective feelings. As Wang Guowei said, "All scenery words are sentimental words."

Scenery and emotion are closely related. Emotion is carried by the landscape, and the landscape is immersed in emotion. Emotion is the soul and scenery is the carrier. This requires the organic integration of scenery and emotion. Only when describing the objective scenery can we integrate our emotions and other emotions into the works, so that readers can have a * * *.

So how to find a good "in-laws' home" for emotional expression and make it reach the realm of scene blending? The key is to choose a good scene, and the characteristics of the selected scene must have some similarities or similarities with the theme of the author's expression of feelings. As the saying goes, "bright scenery writes happiness, dark scenery writes sadness." For example, in the fifth paragraph of Hometown, Lu Xun described his hometown like this: "The broken stems of many hay on corrugated cardboard shake when the wind blows." ....

3. Observe a scene around you, grasp the characteristics of the scene, write an exercise and write about the winter of the scene.

Winter is coming! Winter is like a clean little girl, all white, and even the curtains have changed from gold to white. Wearing a white velvet hat, white velvet trousers and a pair of white leather boots in winter is like a lovely white velvet ball. With chubby little hands, she directed snowflakes to fly to the earth to clean up the dirt there. Snowflakes obediently obey the command of winter, dancing their beautiful hexagonal bodies and falling on the earth. In a short time, the earth was white and turned into a snowy world.

Looking at the changes on earth in winter, I smiled happily. Two dimples appeared on his chubby little face. She clapped her hands skipping like a happy little pompon, and then rolled off the stage.

White clean curtains also close with the departure of winter.

Just when the four magical actors showed their magical powers in spring, summer, autumn and winter, the footsteps of Time Old Man also moved quickly. The winter performance ended, a year passed and a new year ushered in. The scenery on the earth is constantly changing with the changes of spring, summer, autumn and winter.

Day after day, year after year, four magical magicians are performing their own programs on the big stage of nature. ...

I hope I can help you! ! !

4. Common scenery, grasp the characteristics of scenery, and write a composition to write about the dynamic and static snow scene in winter.

There are four seasons in a year, and each season has different scenery. I like the magnificent scenery when it snows in winter best. In winter, people seem to have come to an elegant and quiet realm of heavy snow and a crystal clear fairy tale world. The fragrance of pine and the ice fragrance of snow give people a cool and shining comfort. Everything is filtering, everything is sublimating, and even my heart is purifying and becoming pure and beautiful.

The snow at dusk, deeply cut, seems to be inextricably linked with emotions, and it is as turbulent as sea water, which can drown everything, and there is a sense of * * * like uncovering the head and tail. Snowflakes are colorful and crystal clear, like soldiers in battle, wearing silver armor, and like pieces of white sails sailing. ...

The scenery in the snow is magnificent, and there is no difference between heaven and earth. I can only see a piece of silver, as if the whole world is decorated with silver.

After the snow, the world is decorated with continuous white snow, with lush foliage and jade. This is a gratifying scene of heavy snow.

I love snow, I love snow scenes, and I love winter more. Winter is the ring of the soul. Although winter is very cold, it has incomparable warmth and hope.

Winter snow

This winter, it snowed for more than ten days. Snow keeps changing magic, and then like a beautiful jade butterfly, like a dandelion blown by the wind, like catkins dancing with the wind, like a small white flower presented by an angel, it flutters and falls gently with the north wind. For a while, it's like sprinkling salt, which is specially drilled into the necks of passers-by. It's cool. One minute it's like goose feathers, and overnight it turns the earth white.

"Like a strong wind in spring, it blows at night and blows open the petals of 10 thousand pear trees." This is a surprise that adults get from snowflakes. When the snow fell from the tree, a "snow rain" came crashing down.

The thick snow on the short holly trees on the roadside looks like waves from a distance. For passers-by, this is a surprise.

White, thick, soft blanket, this is the surprise that snowflakes bring to children. In a short time, a series of graffiti-like footprints were left on the snow, and snowmen with different expressions piled on the snow were gifts from children to snowflakes. Ice Lane is a toy given by Snowflake to children, and happy laughter is a gift given by children to Snowflake. The children thanked the snowflakes and kept cheering and jumping in the snow. Some open their hands to catch the flying snowflakes, while others open their mouths and stick out their tongues to taste the snowflakes. My friends and I forgot the cold, made a snowman and had a snowball fight together. How happy we are! Happy laughter echoed in the winter world.

Snow in winter brings endless happiness to children and unspeakable surprises to adults.

As soon as I get home, I like autumn leaves, especially maple leaves. It is wrapped in a fiery red coat, just like a beautiful lady, petite and lovely. Pick one in front of me, and the burning torch will fill my heart. I held it carefully. Wow, its body is like a baby's little hand. The handle is like a stem pulse. With the deep red blood flowing all over its body, patches of maple leaf forest, from a distance, seem to be a large burning fire, swaying from side to side under the wind. Du Mu wrote well, "Stop and sit and love maple leaves late, and frost leaves are red in February." Now, I finally realize the artistic conception of this poem. These fiery red maple leaves make people feel warm, although it is in autumn when the wind blows gently. I picked it up and studied it carefully. Small leaves are shaking in the wind, like a delicate fan, constantly flapping. The stems and veins are as smooth as weaving. A gust of autumn wind blew and the leaves fell one after another. Some dance like butterflies, some spread their wings like birds, and some dance like dancers. The ground was golden, like a carpet, and they creaked when they walked up. I .. "I looked at the tree and the tree looked at me. If the sky is blue and the red leaves are like fish. " I recited this essay when I was walking in the Woods in my hometown. At this time, a maple leaf floated to my composition book. I lifted it and observed this "autumn leaf" quietly. I saw this maple leaf burning like a flame and blooming quietly in this season's autumn like a flower. The shapes of maple leaves are very different. Like a baby's little hand, tender and soft. Its rhizome is very small and not prominent. It's not easy to see Chu clearly! Suddenly, a gust of wind blew away the maple leaf in my hand. "Maple leaves are saying goodbye to me!" You see, it dances in the wind, as if to say, "Goodbye! Friends. " In this way, it slowly drifted away. I couldn't bear to go home, so I continued to look for the footprints of autumn. "ouch! "Somehow, I was stung by something. Looking back, it was a tree. This tree is colorful, so I picked a leaf and looked at it. I see it is half red and half green. It's the middle part, and the color changes gradually. It was painted by the girl in autumn. It is red and green, and only girls in autumn can draw it. It's a bird's little feet, rubbing east and west, and the color is so harmonious; It was born by Mother Earth. She bulged her belly and gave birth to this red and green elf. Mother Earth is so proud and great. I held it carefully in my hand for fear of being stabbed by its jagged horns. In the sun, it is so dazzling. " What leaf is this? "I can't help but ask curiously." This is a serrated leaf, "my father replied with a smile." After careful observation, I found that the rhizome of this sawtooth leaf is very different from that of maple leaf. The roots of serrated leaves are like a letter "S" with a letter "L" in the middle, which keeps the leaves in good order. The more I look at this leaf, the more I like it, as if I forgot the "bad things" it had done and immersed myself in it. Because I kept the autumn leaves, it silently sprinkled sunshine and water on the trees and withered, adding fertility and nutrition to the soil. I love autumn, and I love this unknown devotee-leaves even more.

6. Campus is a place we are very familiar with; Campus, where we study together, campus, where we are classmates; Campus is the place where we live together; Campus is our second home. It shines on us like a fiery red sun and moistens us like a spring rain. Let's never forget the important task on our shoulders. "Treat people with humility and kindness, and live a virtuous life" is an eye-catching slogan, which will always be printed in everyone's heart. Yes, this is the philosophy of our school. As soon as we stepped into the gate, a playground appeared in front of us. There are basketball stands on the left and right sides of the playground. Not afraid of hardship, not afraid of fatigue, guarding our campus day and night. Banyan trees are planted around the playground. Every summer, you will see some students enjoying the cool under the tree, some reading books and some playing games under the tree ... In the middle of the playground, there is a sacred flag-raising platform, and the bright five-star red flag flutters on the flagpole of the flag-raising platform, which looks so peaceful. Every Monday, all the teachers and students come to the playground to attend the solemn flag-raising ceremony. With the national anthem, Ran Ran raised the national flag rhythmically, which was respected by teachers and students. Go up the stairs on the left, and you will find a small garden next to the stairs. At this time, you can't help looking to the right: there is a small garden on the right, which is not big, but it has a different flavor. In spring, wild flowers are in full bloom and green everywhere, butterflies are dancing on the grass, and hardworking bees are collecting honey; In summer, don't mention how green the grass is here Sheep will drool when they see it! In autumn, the only tree in this garden, the leaves on the tree turn yellow, like yellow butterflies flying leisurely from the branches; In winter, it is snowy here, as if the world has turned white. So, three steps and two steps came to the paradise of learning, quietly listening to the sound of reading, as if you were there; Now take a closer look at the students' concentration, and they are all full of energy. Their voices resounded throughout the campus, decorating the beautiful campus and adding icing on the cake to the campus with infinite scenery. In Longhua Sixth Primary School, the atmosphere of learning is everywhere, and poetry and painting are everywhere ... This is the campus that bears countless joys and dreams, tears and sadness in my primary school for one year. Every tree, every step, every street here. How can you not look forward to the future? .