Appropriate expression questions

The following is a snippet of a congratulatory letter intended to be sent by the city’s education bureau to a school’s debate team after it won the provincial middle school student debate competition. There are five inappropriate wordings in it. Please find and modify them.

I was shocked to hear that your school defeated its opponents and won the championship in the first provincial middle school student debate competition. It showed the good spirit of our city’s middle school students and won honors for our city! I would like to extend my sincere congratulations to you. At the same time, we must use this competition as a new starting point to fully implement quality education, stay true to our original aspirations in the new journey, and make persistent efforts to contribute to the development of our city's education industry.

Answers ① "Surprised" is changed to "pleased to hear"; ② "Your school" is changed to "Your school"; ③ "Beat the opponent" is changed to "Victory the opponent"; ④ "Must" is changed to "Hope"; ⑤ "Contribution" is changed to "Compose a new chapter"

Explain this question in detail to test the appropriateness of students' language expression. To answer this type of question, you must first clarify the requirements of the question. For example, in this question, "The following is a fragment of the congratulatory letter that the city's education bureau plans to send to a school's debate team after it wins the provincial middle school student debate championship. There are five inappropriate wordings in it. Please "Find and revise", candidates should pay attention to the occasions when language is used, the objects used and the relationship between objects. "Shocking news" generally refers to bad things, mostly referring to "bad news" or "bad news", which is inconsistent with the occasion of "congratulatory letter"; "your school" is used improperly, and "gui" is generally used when referring to things related to the other party; "beating the opponent" Improper use, the tone is too strong, it can be changed to "defeat the opponent"; "must" means certain, necessary, the tone is too strong, it can be changed to "hope"; "add bricks and tiles" is inappropriate, "add bricks and tiles" refers to the constant effort when building a house Adding bricks and tiles to the ground is a metaphor for doing some work, putting in a little effort, and using it more for yourself. It is used here in the congratulatory letter from the Education Bureau to the school. If it is not used appropriately, it should be changed to "compose a new chapter."

20. There are many irregularities or inappropriate uses in the following letter. Please find five and correct them.

Dear Mr. ×××:

The submitted "Beautiful Jade Creates Smoke" has been received. I have read it again and again, and I deeply admire it. Your profound knowledge of ancient poetry and unique interpretation methods have helped me a lot in my poetry creation, and I am ashamed of myself. According to your request, I have taken the liberty to correct a few places here. I am sending it back with this letter for your reference.

Best wishes

Good winter!

Mr.××

December 12, 2018

Answer ① The title "Dear Mr. The top box ③ "Send" should be changed to "Send" ④ "Look over" should be changed to "Read" ⑤ "Some" should be changed to "Moda" ⑥ "Ya Zheng" should be changed to "Correct".

Analysis

Detailed explanation of this question tests students’ ability to express themselves appropriately. Appropriate language includes question-appropriateness and style-appropriateness. Issue-appropriateness mainly needs to meet the special requirements of special issues. Style-appropriateness should pay attention to the identity, environment, dignity, subject and object of the speaker, as well as the use of "humility" and "respect". This question mainly assesses the appropriateness of language style. In this question, the question stem has pointed out that the passage is a "letter", and that "there are many irregularities or inappropriate uses in this letter" and it is required to "find and make corrections". After reading this letter carefully, you can find that: ① In the letter format requirements, the title must be written in top case, so the title "Dear Mr. "Must be in top form; ③"Send to submit" is a humble word, and the word "Send to submit" refers to showing the letter to the other party respectfully. To put it bluntly, sending a submission means "sending it to". This is a letter sent to you by someone else. The expression is inappropriate and should be changed to "sent"; ④ "Look over", read it once (mostly used to express review), generally used by subordinates to ask their superiors to read things or articles they have sent, etc., which belongs to Honorific words. Here it means that when you read articles sent by others, the expression is inappropriate and should be changed to "read"; ⑤ "a little", a little; a little. When used here, the attitude is not modest enough and the expression is inappropriate, so it should be changed to "Moda"; ⑥ "Ya Zheng" means respectful speech. When giving one's poems, calligraphy, paintings, etc. to others, it means asking for the other person's advice. Here, it is said that one has modified someone else's article, which is inappropriate and should be changed to "correction".

20. The following is part of the text message sent by a middle school to Professor Zhang who is about to come to the school to give a lecture on teaching reform. There are five expression errors in it. Please find and modify it.

(5 points) I heard that Mr. Xi will come to our school to give a lecture on teaching reform soon. On behalf of all the teachers and students in the school, I would like to express my warm congratulations! Listening to Mr. Wang's report will make our middle school teachers' teaching goals more lofty, their teaching concepts more advanced, and their teaching methods more diverse. I sincerely hope that you will do your best to make this lecture a complete success!

Change hearing to happy news; congratulations to welcome; listen to listen; lofty to clear; humble efforts to Full strength.

20. The following is a fragment of a report given by a college student who was invited back to his high school alma mater. There are five inappropriate language in it. Please find and correct it. (5 points)

It is a great honor to go back to my alma mater to report on my study and life. In the school history museum, I saw many alumni with successful careers listed in the school history. I was very envious and very ashamed. I am a bad student and have sent some of my paintings to my alma mater. Please keep them. There are many mentors here today, and I don’t have time to thank them all. I will definitely find another time to visit them and teach them in person. There may be something inappropriate in my speech, please report it.

20. Reference examples: ① "忝 Lie" is changed to "honor"; ② "bad" is changed to "not talented", "not sycophantic" or "unworthy"; ③ "to teach" is changed to "listen to"; ④ "maybe" is changed to "inevitable" ; ⑤ "Report" is changed to "Criticize and correct".

20. Below is a fragment of the first draft of an announcement from a certain school. There are five things in it that do not meet the requirements of written style. Please find and revise them. (5 points)

The sewers in our school’s student dormitories are often blocked. The Logistics Office carefully investigated the cause and found that the pipe was old and needed to be replaced. The school plans to start construction on July 15. The construction period is during the summer vacation. For safety reasons, all students are asked not to stay on campus during the summer vacation. I hope everyone will cooperate.

"Block" is changed to "block"; "pipe" is changed to "pipeline"; "replace" is changed to "replace"; "plan" is changed to "plan"; "encounter" Change to "positive value".

20. The following is the main content of an invitation letter. There are five inappropriate things in it. Please find and correct them.

The 4th "Challenge Cup" Middle School Student Model United Nations Conference is planned to be held at the Wangfujing Hotel in Beijing from October 5th to 7th, 2018. During the conference, the organizing committee will take time to hold a forum and invite well-known experts to the scene to discuss with parents the issues of cultivating international talents in the context of globalization.

You are sincerely invited to read this letter and register for the conference with your children. We will do our best to provide services and look forward to your child's wonderful performance being favored by the judges.

Answers (1) Replace "spend time" with "grand" (2) Replace "listen" with "visit in person" (3) Replace "read" with "read" (4) Replace " Change "Dingli" to "Effortless" or "Strong" (5) Change "Love" to "Love" or "Favor"

Analysis

Detailed explanation: This question tests language expression The ability to be decent. There are generally two types of language appropriateness. One is stylistic appropriateness, that is, the article or discourse must conform to the requirements of the style, which is mainly reflected in the special format and language requirements of the style. For example, classical Chinese words are generally not used in spoken language. First, the style of language is appropriate, paying attention to the identity and occasion of the speaker, which is mainly reflected in the appropriate use of words of praise and humility, and the appropriate use of humble words. This question mainly tests humility, status, and the decency of host and guest. For example, "to spare time" means to ask others to take time out to participate in the activity. It is used here in "organizing committee", which is inappropriate for the subject and object of the language. "忝 Lie" is inappropriately humble. "Strengthening" other people's help to oneself is the wrong target here. "Cui Ai" refers to appreciation and care from above and below. It is also used as a word of respect to mean that others appreciate and care for oneself.

20. The following is a broadcast script from a campus radio station. There are five inappropriate expressions in it. Please find and modify it. (5 points)

"The Biography of the Heroes of Luliang" (a novel) is written by the famous Chinese writers Ma Feng and Xirong. There are as many as 80 chapters in the book, all of which are true portrayals of Luliang's life history. In order to improve students' reading appreciation ability, the school radio station will broadcast a special program to interpret this novel for everyone. A hotline will be opened at that time, and teacher Wang Hong will provide students with relevant questions. stay tuned!

20. ① "The novel "The Biography of the Heroes of Lu Liang")" was changed to "The novel "The Biography of the Heroes of Lu Liang""; ② "Department" was changed to "is"; ③ "The whole book ***80 chapters" was changed to "The whole book* **80 replies"; ④ "All", delete it, or change it to "all"; ⑤ "Inquiry" is changed to "Answer".

(1 point for each place)

Analysis: The paragraph given in this question is a broadcast script, and the content in brackets cannot be read out, so the brackets should be removed and replaced with "The Biography of Luliang Heroes" (a novel) "" was changed to "The Novel "The Biography of the Heroes of Luliang""; the broadcast script needs to be colloquial and easy to understand. "Xi" is a written language and has the characteristics of classical Chinese, so it should be changed to "Yes"; for the same reason, "***80 chapters in the book" "So many" should be changed to "***80 chapters in the whole book"; "all" can easily be misheard as "same but not", causing ambiguity, so it can be changed to "all" or deleted; "for inquiries" is a respectful term, addressing others Inquiries about yourself are inappropriate when answering questions for classmates. You can change them to "answers."

21. Among the following sentences, the most appropriate one is ()

A. He is a poor orphan. He was taken care of by my parents when he was a child, so he often comes to visit us now.

B. Teacher Yang is still writing non-stop in his seventies. As his students, we feel both proud and ashamed.

C. I have just finished this article. Both the views and the writing are not mature enough. Please feel free to give me some advice.

D. Due to the serious traffic jam on the road, when I arrived at the appointed place, the other party had been waiting for me for a long time.

Answer C

Analysis

This question tests students’ ability to analyze whether oral expressions are reasonable. Oral expression is a common language test question. When communicating with others, the language should be tactful. Polite expressions reflect a person's quality and identity, and are conducive to mutual communication. Therefore, when communicating, you must speak politely and appropriately. Item A, "Thank you", is a term of honor, used to praise other people's help to oneself, and cannot be used for oneself; item B, "high foot", originally means a good horse, a fine horse, but also refers to a talented person, and is often used as an honorific term to address other people's students. , cannot be used for oneself; item C is correct; item D "wait respectfully" means to wait respectfully. Respectfully, it is used for oneself to wait for others, but cannot be used for others. So choose C.

1. I would like to thank you for your many sincere invitations. I will definitely attend the banquet on time tomorrow. ("Thank you but not sensitively" means refusal due to lack of ability. It should be changed to "Respect is worse than obeying orders")

2. Li Hua made an oath at the class meeting. After ten years of studying hard in a cold window, how can he become more like a scumbag? , you will gallop in the examination room and win the championship in Toad Palace! (The word "horse teeth only increase" is a self-effacing word, which means that one has grown older but has not achieved much in studies or career.)

3. The editor said to the author: "I have read your novel, and I have corrected the shortcomings in it." (Correction)

4. Today is Uncle She's seventieth birthday. I prepared a gift for him in advance to express my feelings. I hope he likes it. (For outsiders, the family name is changed to uncle)

5. I happily accepted the specialties you sent me. ("Xiao Na" is to ask others to accept your gifts. It is used here to accept gifts from others, which is inappropriate.)

6. You asked me to search for a special medicine for heart disease in the local area. We will definitely help you, please rest assured. ("Help me with all my strength" is an honorific term, referring to others' great help to me. It cannot refer to my own help to others. It can be changed to "do my best".)

7. I will give the trustee's favor to A gift for you, I believe you will like it. ("Huizi" is a respectful term, referring to the other party's gift of property, etc. It is used here to give gifts to others. It is inappropriate and can be changed to "Jingli".)

8. We specially invite experts We will give a lecture titled "Healthy Campus, Prevent Trouble Before It Happens". Students are welcome to attend. ("Patron" is a respectful term, "Guang" means "to add luster", and "Gu" means "to visit". "Patron" means: "(You) come to make (me) more glorious." Originally it was The honorific used by the host when visiting guests was later used as a polite greeting in stores or service industries. In this question, "patronize" is changed to "attend")

9. Yes. We will hire well-known writers to carefully select the manuscripts submitted by everyone and select the best ones for publication. (Masterpiece)

10. Many students came to the scene and participated in the "I have a date with poetry" activity organized by the school poetry club. (Coming)

11. We sincerely invite you to serve as our consultant. It will be a great honor for us if you can be accepted. (Yes?)

12. A student returned to his alma mater after graduation, saw his former class teacher, and said excitedly: "Teacher, I have admired you for a long time.

How are you? "(Long time no see)

13. When the host said goodbye to the guest, the guest said: "Please stay and come back to visit another day. ” (below)

14. As a student of a professor, you don’t think about academic progress. You are really a wall of shame! (“A wall of shame” means that you feel ashamed to be in the teacher’s school. “忝”, It means that you feel guilty for insulting others. It is inappropriate to speak modestly about others.)

15. Wang Xin has high goals and is down-to-earth. He is enthusiastic about helping others regardless of gains and losses. I admire him and become friends with him. ("Favor", in ancient times, black eyes were called "green eyes", and "favor" means to value someone, which means to be valued and receive preferential treatment. Generally speaking, it means that the other person values ??you, such as "more "I am favored by others." It is inappropriate to say that I value others.)

16. After graduating from high school, he gave me his carefully summarized notes. I was very touched and determined to benefit from it. ("Huicun" , please keep it. It is mostly used when giving photos, books, etc. It is inappropriate to say in the sentence)

17. I have been grateful for your education for many years. It is worth it. On this festive occasion, I wish you a happy holiday! (Yes)

18. We sincerely invite you to attend the meeting and provide serious guidance for our activities ("providing serious guidance" is not appropriate. , it is not appropriate to make such a request to the invitees.)

19. The following specific content of the invitation is inappropriate: The Youth League Committee of our school has decided to hold the "I Love the Motherland" lecture on the 18th of this month. You are. A well-known speaker who is very knowledgeable about speeches. We sincerely invite you to attend the conference and provide careful guidance for our activities. (No specific time and location are available)

20. Mr. His masterpiece "Golden Autumn is No Longer Far Away" has been published, and this issue will be corrected for readers ("Just corrected" is a request for correction, which is the wrong object.)

21. Teacher Yu has just retired and received the call. A letter from student Xiao Wang wrote: "Now that you have left me, your voice and appearance are still in my heart. I will remember your teachings, study hard, and strive to be admitted to a key university." " ("Yinrong Wanzai" is mostly used when a loved one has passed away.)

22. Teacher's Day is coming. Xiao Wang called the teacher to express his intention to visit. The teacher said: "Welcome to disturb you. "(Tao Nuo: polite words, excuses, mostly refers to being entertained and expressing gratitude.)

23. Xiao Wang stood up and said: "What Professor Chen just said is just to attract others. What I will say next can only be regarded as The dog's tail continues the mink. " (It is a humble word to offer advice)

24. We are happy from the bottom of our hearts to see that you are still so strong at the age of 95. We wish you a long life. ("Longevity" contains five more years. It means "year", and it is inappropriate to use it on a 95-year-old man.)

25. An invitation: "I am moving to a new house tomorrow. In order to thank you for your congratulations, I have prepared this at home. Bojiu..." ("house" is changed to "home" or "humble house")

26. CNR News Broadcast Draft: Multiple heavy rains recently caused roads in the Lugu Lake Scenic Area to be blocked... and stranded We hope to return to Lijiang tomorrow ("Hope" is changed to "Hopefully" (homophones cannot appear in the broadcast)

27. I am very happy to receive the invitation to the conference. It is difficult to attend the conference due to my recent physical discomfort. , I now ask my students to go on my behalf. I deeply regret that I cannot attend the meeting in person. (Change "students" to "students".)

28. Although I have graduated for many years, I am still a student. I miss my teacher. ("Miss" is changed to "Thank you")

29. As soon as I sat down at my aunt's house, she had something to do and I had to read some books and watch TV. . ("Excuse me" is changed to "Leave".)

30. The following is a self-recommendation letter written by a college student to a university professor. There are five inappropriate expressions in it. Please find and modify it. :

My name is Liu Yunting. My foolish brother Liu Fengting is your former student. He appreciates your character and knowledge very much, which makes me admire you for a long time. I hope you will be lucky enough to accept me as your disciple.

I have purchased all of your works, and now I am sending you an essay. Please read it. Thank you very much!

Answer: ① Foolish brother → Family brother? ② Appreciate it → admire it very much? ③ Delete " "Fortunately"? ④Huicun→Collect? ⑤Read→Advice

Detailed analysis of the test questions: This question tests the ability to express appropriately in language. When answering this type of questions, you should rely on the context, identify the target, and pay attention to adapting to the occasion. , grasp the language style and judge carefully. ① "Foolish Brother" is a self-effacing term for those of the same generation who are younger than oneself. The way he refers to his elder brother in the materials is incorrect and should be changed to "brother from the family". ② "Appreciating" means recognizing the value of other people's talents or works and giving high attention or praise. It is mostly used between seniors and their descendants, leaders and subordinates, and masters and students. In the material, it is inappropriate to use "I admire the teacher very much" instead. ③ "Lucky" means lucky and lucky. The material said that the professor was "lucky" to have him as his apprentice, which was inappropriate and should be deleted. ④ "Huicun" is an honorific word, meaning please keep it. It is often used as an inscription when giving photos, books, etc. to others. The material refers to a collection of the professor's works, which is inappropriate and can be changed to "collection". ⑤ "Reading" is a respectful term for reading other people's works or letters. In the materials, it is used to refer to professors reading their own articles, which is inappropriate and should be changed to "teaching".

20. The following is a first draft of a broadcast draft for the school radio station. There are five inaccuracies in it. Please find and modify it. (5 points)

Students: Hello everyone! Welcome to the campus radio. Today’s theme is “Being courteous to the world”. Chinese civilization has been in existence for more than five thousand years, and China has always enjoyed the reputation of "a land of etiquette". As a new generation of young people, we must learn etiquette, know etiquette, observe etiquette, and do not do things that violate etiquette.

20. ① Change "listen" to "listen"? ② Change "today" to "today"? ③ Change "over" to "over" ④ "Su Xiang" to "Su You"? ⑤ "Reputation" is changed to "title"

20. Below is a fragment of the first draft of a notice from a certain school’s student union. There are five inappropriate things in it. Please find and correct them. (5 points)

According to the work plan of the Student Union, a student union work meeting is scheduled to be held in the multi-functional hall on the fourth floor of the school complex building after the third class this Thursday afternoon. I hope everyone will tell each other that they have to come after seeing the notice; and please ask for leave from the class teacher in advance and patronize on time. The Student Union will strictly monitor attendance and notify those who do not attend the meeting without any reason.

20. (5 points) ① "Plan" is changed to "plan" or "arrangement"; ② "Say something" is changed to "inform"; ③ "Not come" is changed to "absent"; ④ "Patron" is changed to "attend" ” (or “participate in” or “attend the meeting”); ⑤ “At that time” is changed to “by then”. (1 point each)

20. The following is a part of the cover letter written by a graduate of a normal university to a middle school. There are five inappropriate places in it, please find and correct them. (5 points)

I have a correct learning attitude, hard work, and excellent grades. I received eight overall evaluations during college, including six firsts. I have a wide range of hobbies and have made great achievements in literature, sports, art, etc. I have good language expression and interpersonal communication skills. I play very harmoniously with my classmates and am deeply loved by teachers and students. If I can teach in your school, I will work hard, be dedicated to my job, and contribute to the development of your school.

20. (5 points)

① Including winning; ② Having made great achievements and achieving excellent results; ③ Playing with each other; ④ Adoring and loving;

⑤ Ask for advice? Teach (1 point for each correct answer) )

20． There are many irregularities or inappropriate uses in the following letter. Please find five and correct them. (5 points)

Dear Mr. ×××:

The submitted "Beautiful Jade Creates Smoke" has been received. I have read it again and again, and I deeply admire it. Your profound knowledge of ancient poetry and unique interpretation methods have helped me a lot in my poetry creation, and I am ashamed of myself. According to your request, I have taken the liberty to correct a few places here. I am sending it back with this letter for your reference.

Best wishes

Good winter!

Mr. ××

December 12, 2018

① The title of "Dear Mr. ③ "Send" should be changed to "Send" ④ "Look over" should be changed to "Read" ⑤ "Slightly" should be changed to "A lot" ⑥ "Elegance" should be changed to "Correction" (all errors and corrections are available to the other party) 1 point, any answer is 5 points)

20. Below is a snippet from a text message someone sent to a friend. There are five inappropriate uses of words in it. Please find and correct them. (5 points)

I learned last night that my mother was seriously ill and was hospitalized, in urgent need of surgery, and had insufficient funds. I miss you very much. I am grateful to ××× for sending you 5,000 yuan to do my best. Please accept it. I will definitely visit the hospital when I have free time in the future. I wish the old man a speedy recovery!

?20. "My mother" is changed to "Your Majesty" (or "Lingci"); "Funds" is changed to "Expenses"; "Thanks" is changed to "Please"< /p>

(or "Excuse me"); "accept" is changed to "accept"; "come" is changed to "go".

Students and disciples (other people’s students and one’s own students) ? Visiting, coming and coming (others and oneself) ? Favoring means loving and attaching importance Wall work) Huicun? Condescending, vain? (respectful words)? Night clothes and food? (diligence in government affairs)?