How to record events in literary writing?

Clear the six elements of narrative writing:

Character, time, place, beginning, development, climax

Narrative compositions are mainly narrative, showing what happened at the event venue , competitions and other things, reflecting the author's attitude and views on these matters.

Who to write about

(

Object of the composition

)

: Things that happened at event venues, competitions, etc. .

What to write

(

Purpose of composition

)

: Reflective writing

The author’s attitude and views on these matters.

How to write: Explain the purpose of the composition through one or several things.

Writing method: Narrate the event, and also carry out effective portrait, language, psychology, action and detailed description of the event

Note: During the writing process, you must always be connected with the attitudes and opinions of the things you write about.

1. Explain clearly the time, place, person, cause, process and result of the event, that is, the six elements.

An event is always inseparable from these six elements. Only by writing these aspects clearly can readers understand the ins and outs of the event.

2. Choose events around the center of the composition, and choose events as materials that best express the central idea of ??the composition.

There are many new, interesting and exciting things in life. .

Therefore,

we should observe more and

think more about the things we encounter in life.

The material selection should be novel.

Things that often appear in other people’s compositions should be written less or not at all.

The composition written in this way will be attractive.

There is

freshness.

3.

The main part of the incident must be written in detail.

Everything has a cause,

a process of process and result.

Only if

write this process clearly,

Only in this way can the impression given to readers be complete and profound.

It is very important to use effective portraits,

language,

psychology

, actions, and details in the incident. Importantly, the composition written in this way is vivid. The focus should be highlighted and the details should be appropriate.

Do not write anything irrelevant to the topic.

How to write a good narrative?

1. The six elements of narrative must be clear:

Character, time, place, beginning, development, climax

These elements must be included in the article Whether it is a narrative about a person or a narrative about an event, it is required to make good use of the six elements when writing to express the thoughts and emotions you want to express.

1

,

Characters are an important part of narratives that express the author’s emotions.

Even narratives that write about events must rely on Characters are used to express the theme

so it is particularly important to describe the characters in the work.

The main methods of character description are as follows:

①Action description: Let the characters express themselves. The action of writing characters should be carried out with the development of plot and the unfolding of conflicts.

We can use examples from familiar texts or refer to excerpts from some novels to deepen our understanding of the role of action description

:

a

a

p>

,

"Medicine" writes about the executioner Uncle Kang, mainly using action descriptions to portray his gangster and reactionary character.

Example: Lao Shuan hurriedly took out the foreign money and wanted to hand it to him tremblingly, but he didn't dare to pick it up.

The man became anxious and shouted:

"

What are you afraid of? Why don't you take it?

"

Lao Chuan was still hesitant, so the black man grabbed the lantern, pulled off the paper cover, wrapped the buns,

stuffed them with Lao Shuan;

grabbed them with one hand Overseas money,

pinch it,

turn away.

Humming and saying,

"

This old guy

..."

(Greedy side)

"

Lao Shuan is just busy. If his son

..."

The hunchbacked fifth young master has not finished speaking yet , suddenly broke into a man with a sinister face.

Wearing a black cloth shirt,

buttons scattered,

with a wide black shirt Colorful belt,

tied randomly around the waist.

As soon as he entered the door,

he shouted to Lao Shuan

......

(Rogue image)

b

Similar action descriptions are also fully reflected in Lu Xun's Kong Yiji, which is what we are familiar with

"

出九

Wen Daqian

”

One sentence.

A simple verb contains so many connotations! This is also a typical example of abbreviated characters.

②Portrait description:

We can review what Lu Xun said about how to draw eyes. His wife Xianglin has three places where her eyes speak.

And reveal the description of his life experience and inner emotions.

Let’s change the order of descriptions in the text and experience the unique charm of portrait description in chronological order:

First arrived in Lu Town

Around twenty-six years old Seven, his face is sallow, but his cheeks are still red. His appearance is still upright, his hands and feet are strong, but he just follows his eyes.

The second time I arrived in Lu Town

I still wore a white tie on my head, a black skirt, a blue jacket, and a moon-white vest. My face was green and yellow, but my cheeks were already sluggish

The color disappeared, there were some tears on the corners of his eyes, and his eyes were not as energetic as before.

Three Arrivals in Lu Town

The gray hair of five years ago is now completely white, completely unlike a person in his forties; his face is very thin,

yellow with black,

and the previous sad look has disappeared,

as if it were carved on wood;

only the eyes occasionally round,

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It can also mean

She is a living creature.

The three descriptions all reflect the characters’ life situations at different stages,

“

The eyes are the windows to the soul

”

p>

, that’s quite right.

The portrait description does not seek physical resemblance but spiritual resemblance, and does not seek to be comprehensive in description, but only seeks to highlight the character's identity and personality.

Example:

"

Always smiles and has a gentle attitude

"

Appears repeatedly in " In the article "In Memory of Mr. Liu Hezhen", it was used to create a beautiful image of Liu Hezhen

and to expose the shameless lies of the Duan government.

“

He has a thick black beard,

his eyes are bright, and

his head is full of stubborn clusters standing straight up. The upturned hair seems to express his disharmony with the real society.

”

In the college entrance examination in 1990

, the essay required candidates to write a description of a pair of twin sisters. This essay

When writing characters, if we only pay attention to their

“

similarity

”

It's appropriate,

should strengthen their

"

different

"

side

Description,

For example,

You can write that one of them always has two shallow dimples on his face,

one has a small mouth It always sticks up;

One

one’s hair is smooth, and the other’s hair is tied into a small braid and sticks up high

…

③Language description:

We must grasp the character’s identity and personality through language,

which is what we call

"

Personalization of language description

"

We will definitely remember the greedy miser,

His wealth is as important as his life,

"

That's just like wiping his own neck

"

's inner monologue

I am afraid it is something that people will never forget.

When we describe the character’s language, we should grasp the character’s identity, status, age, and personality when writing, otherwise it will be

p>

Very dissonant. The language must be appropriate.

Jiao Dajue in "A Dream of Red Mansions" cannot express what Lin Daiyu said.

④Psychological description: direct. Reveal the inner world of the characters, but the method of psychological description can be divided into direct description and indirect description

There are roughly the following types:

a

. Direct description of psychology is often expressed as "××

thinks

" "

He feels

..."

b

, movements and expressions describe psychology. Like him

"

lugging something as heavy as lead leg.

""

The mother touched the cold skin of the box with her hand, leaned her elbow

on it, and looked at everyone with satisfaction.

”

c

, environment writes psychology. For example,

“

Every time the door is opened, There was a cloud-like cold air blowing on his face, which made him feel very refreshed, so she inhaled the cold air deeply.

"

d

, inner monologue writing psychology.

"

Is it over?

”

The mother asked herself. But then she replied tremblingly:

“

It’s probably not bad

Bar

..."

e

, write about psychology through hallucinations, and you can also write about psychology through dreams.

"Blessing" Ending: All the doubts from the day to the first night were swept away by the air of blessing.

I just felt that the saints in heaven and earth were enjoying the sweet cigarettes.

p>

They all staggered drunkenly in the air,

Preparing to give

the people of Lu Town infinite happiness

In "Lychee Honey". The description of the author turning into a bee also falls into this category.

2

Time and place provide life scenes for character activities and plot development. At the same time, time also plays a role in structuring the article.

Generally, narrative writing should be written according to time. According to time division, there can be several methods such as narration, flashback, interlude, supplementary narration, and flat narration

Generally, writing is written in chronological order, but in order to highlight the ending, flashbacks can be used, which can set up suspense.

Narrations and supplementary narrations often play a role in expanding the content of the article and enriching the expression of the article.

Pingxu was used in "For the Sixty-one Class Brothers" that I have studied.

3

,

Plot.

The plot is the specific development of the complete content of a narrative.

It generally consists of a beginning,

development,

climax,

end.

Individual works can There is a prologue and an epilogue.

As the focus of writing,

"

Development

"

Part and

"

Climax

"

The part needs special attention, and the shining point of an article is often reflected in

there.

The conception of the plot should follow the reality of life, and should have

"

the rationality of life

"

. The so-called

"

The rationality of life

"

means that the content of writing

should conform to Life is practical,

but we don’t have to be too rigid,

learn from Mr. Lu Xun’s

“

Mix all kinds of things,

Combining a

”

method

will make the article more substantial.

The conception of the plot will directly determine the quality of an article, especially narratives about events. Of course, narratives about people should also reflect the characters through an event

character. This should be considered when designing the structure.

Although composition is not a literary creation, the use of literary expression techniques is indispensable in it. Narratives should be good at borrowing some expression techniques when writing about people or events. Of course, this is also based on life.

"

Reality

"

is a concept based on.

"

Writing seems to be like looking at the mountains but not the plains

"

How can we write a work with twists and turns?

①Suspense is like plot: The writing should be good at breaking through the dull plot development direction, and the narrative should be good at designing suspense for the display of character

. For example, write a short article:

Example: Photography

She has always been smart, but this time she was stumped. Several foreigners wanted to take photos of her and asked her to maintain the same posture as before: carrying vegetables on her shoulders

basket,

bending over to pick vegetable peelings from the ground,

Rotten leaves.

The vegetables are home-grown,

we picked them and sold them out,

picked up the leftover vegetable leaves and fed them to the pigs,

What's new about this? No photo taken? We peasant women don’t understand foreigners’ customs and habits, so don’t offend them.

Don’t offend them.

Give me a photo? We

we don’t lack food and clothing. If we take it, wouldn’t it be embarrassing and ugly?

Yes. She turned her body, changed her angle, and quickly assumed the previous posture. But when the foreigners saw it, they shrugged their shoulders almost at the same time and squeezed out the crowd of onlookers.

It turns out that she cleverly used the placard behind her

"

In public places, consciously pay attention to hygiene

"

②Twists and turns method:

If you write a classmate to practice writing and then submit the article, this tentative content can be used to write out the twists and turns.

The idea is as follows:

③Break through the conventional method:

Remembering a good thing or writing about a person doing good deeds, we can break through the cliché of writing about good people and good deeds. First, seek change.

Please write a composition that breaks the rules based on the scenarios provided below:

The icy and snowy road in winter, early morning, Xiaofang going to school, and the old woman buying tofu.

④Europe? Henry's writing style:

Subey's

6

several attempts to commit crimes did not allow him to spend the winter in prison as he wished, but he decided to change his life. At this time,

the policeman put his hand on his shoulder.

⑤Small climax method:

"The Necklace"

There are many types and methods of plot conception, and they also depend on the specific content of the writing.

2. Some issues that need to be paid attention to when writing narratives:

1

,

The structured article must have a clue that governs the whole text.

Clues combine all the content in the article,

making the article form an organic collective

.

There are various contents that can be used as clues, and there are many examples in the articles I have studied:

①Objects are clues:

"Medicine"

(

Human Blood Steamed Buns

)

"A Bowl of Yangchun Noodles"

②Emotions are clues:

"In Memory of Mr. Liu Hezhen"

(

Sorrowful and Angry Feelings

)

③One thing is a clue :

"For the Sixty-one Class Brothers"

(

Searching and delivering special medicines

)

④One sentence is a clue:

"For Premier Zhou Entrustment"

(

Cotton is my life, nothing else

......)

⑤Travel clues: This method is commonly used in general travel prose.

2

. It must have the characteristics of a complex narrative and fully reflect the characteristics of combining narrative, argumentation and lyricism. An excellent

article should There is a certain depth, and this depth is realized through discussion and lyricism.

Narrative is the main mode of expression in narratives. Argumentation and lyricism sublimate the article on the basis of narrative and play the role of clarifying

the main idea. In narrative articles, various expression methods such as narrative, discussion, lyricism, and description are often used comprehensively to make the article more literary and artistic.

The six landscape paintings described in Mao Dun's "Landscape Talk" seem to be natural landscapes, but in order to highlight human activities, there are five sentences of discussion behind the six paintings. Sentences of nature,

These sentences deepen the theme of the article very well,

reveal the greatness of human beings layer by layer, and finally conclude that the liberated areas The conclusion is that the army and the people are the greatest of the great.

The expression of description must not be ignored, especially since the environment has various functions, and its functions should be realized through clever description of the environment.

The functions of environmental description generally include:

① Set off the atmosphere

② Set off the mood

③ Set off the character

④Promote plot development

⑤Point out the main idea

3

、

It is necessary to comprehensively mobilize a variety of writing techniques,

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From the portrayal of the image,

to the use of language, certain literary expression skills

should be reflected. Several expression techniques can be used in a work. Let's take "Life Portraits" as an example to talk about the application of writing techniques.

There are many things in life that can give us a sense of freshness. Every day, some things happen around us, and some of them

are unforgettable in our lives. .

Please write a narrative article with the title

"Life Portraits"

with no less than

words

700

words.

①No matter what writing technique is used, it should be based on

“

Truth

”

.

②There are many forms of writing,

"

Photography

"

Don't just write about one thing or one person , should be noted

"

face

"

, through

"

Face

”

Reflects the universality

of things.

a

. Drawing on the subtitle form of "For the Sixty-one Class Brothers", it can be divided into several fragments, such as for writing

"

Mother

The true love

"

, we can use it

"

Pear core tastes better than pear flesh

”

“

Don’t cry, child

”

"

Mother, you are old

"

Three subtitles

Writing makes the article more concrete Independence is organically unified on the clue of

"

Motherly Love

"

.

b

, diary style, the most optimized carrier for writing real life records.

A classmate wrote this sentence about his attitude towards life: There will be touching everywhere in life, as long as there is touching

accompanying,

None of us are alone,

In this case,

life does not only belong to ourselves,

but to everyone who cares about us

One person.

Every touch is true,

Every touch is love,

Every touch is indispensable in life Sound

symbols, and what reason do we have for not treating life well?

c

, suspenseful opening. To reveal but also hide, pay attention to the word "

skillful

"

.

Example:

"

I am his biological son, he is not my biological father.

"

When I was young, I often said this to myself sadly.

At that time, I hated my father. I didn’t know why he didn’t give me a penny as pocket money. I didn’t know why I quarreled with my friends.

The one who cried in the end was always the one who cried. Me, I don’t know why I did a little thing wrong, why my mother always tried every means to hide it from me,

I don’t know why I couldn’t even give a compliment from my biological father, even a gentle smile Don’t even dare to ask for it?

d

. Capture the interest of life and add a little salt to the composition to make it more readable.

Example: Early one morning

3:10

A bell suddenly rang loudly in the dormitory building, and all the students woke up from their dreams and agreed to buy real estate

p>

生

"

Why are you so sleepy today

"

until someone exclaimed

"

It was only three o'clock

"

Everyone fell asleep and the dormitory building resumed

calm.

"

Oh! I wonder if the recent erratic weather has caused the school bell to catch a cold?

"

e

Philosophical penetration makes the article full of profound meanings.

Example: Life is a movie, a movie in which there is no protagonist but everyone is the protagonist; life is a piece of music, everyone is a beating note. The music will not sound good to anyone; life is also a game of chess, in which everyone is a chess piece.

Although each chess piece has a different position, they are all playing their own role.

Example: Life Portraits

Someone said:

“

Going to the senior year of high school is like going to the mountain of swords

In addition to dealing with endless homework every day, you also have to endure psychological torture

”

But there are also People say:

“

The senior year of high school is the most fulfilling and magnificent year in life. All ideals may be realized after this year of hard work

.

”

How is the senior year of high school? Is it bitter or tired? Is it fulfillment or pleasure? The life footage below shows you

a busy and stressful day of a senior high school student.

Scene 1:

"

Get up! Get up!

"

It's quite like the Chinese lyrics in Mom Amidst the shouts, I reluctantly got up from the bed.

"

Didn't

wake up

"

This is probably the first time every high school student wakes up. One feeling, and

"

Sleep deficiency

"

It is probably a common problem among high school students, one

Array

"

Charge

"

I finally got out. My mother must have breathed a sigh of relief at this time. When I got to the bicycle, I found that I didn't have the keys

with me. Go back and get it? It's too late. I had to fight

"

神牛

"

to go to school. It seems that in this world, not only high school seniors wake up early, but there are also

people who are running for life and sitting on

"

Sacred Cows

”

I really feel a sense of satisfaction.

Scene 2:

This is the quietest time in the classroom,

continuous

"

coughing

”

It all turned into noise.

After a morning of teacher's

"

Knowledge instillation

"

Students all need

"

Lie down at the table and relax

"

, and there is a sticker on the door glass

"

Do not disturb during nap time

”

, quite a bit

“

Sacred and inviolable

guilty

"

. I lay on the table

"

Imagination

"

I was admitted to the military academy, put on a military uniform, and taught and classmates They congratulated me,

I saluted them seriously as a military salute,

but I used my left hand.

It was an angry cry from the chemistry teacher

"

Class

"

Put

I was saved from embarrassment.

Scene 3: After dinner, my pent-up nerves really needed a short break. Walking along the Yonglu with my friends, I looked at the dancing figures on the playground and felt envious. A boy walked past me and said to himself:

"

When I was in my third year of high school, I had not

played football yet.

""

Then he is not as good as me,

"

I thought to myself,

"

I also played football once and helped others pick up balls.

"

I am secretly happy,

"

The sunset is infinitely good, but it is almost dusk.

"

My friend waxed poetic about the falling moon, the melancholy in his heart written on his face.

"

The sun sets in the west, That's for

tomorrow's sunrise, just like our current struggle is for July's harvest!

""

In this way, it's up to you

...""

But Dexi

The sun is infinitely good, so why stay melancholy until dusk.

”

We looked at each other and smiled.

“

Bell

……

Bell

..."

The bell for evening self-study rang.

Comments: Finally, candidates are reminded that narratives of notes should be carefully tailored so that The details should be appropriate, two or three things,

Don’t use words equally

Attachment: The silent ending

The dazzling sunshine, surge. Entering the car window added an inexplicable annoyance to people.

On the floor of the car, there was a mess of water stains, and there was a book lying on it, with the cover curling up.

One said:

“

I give you the book, but if you don’t pick it up, who will be blamed if it falls?

"

One said:

"

You let go before I even picked it up, weird

Me?

”

The two sentences were repeatedly repeated on the lips of the two people.

Looking sideways, turning around, raising their necks, until they stood up, everyone in the carriage All the attention was focused to one point, and even the people who were shouting and playing poker just now held their breaths and stared with eyebrows.

"

After watching the show, everyone’s journey will no longer be lonely!

”

I don’t know

who shouted wildly. My fellow compatriots, are you too bored?

The flight attendants selling books and the young people buying books refused to give in in full view, but no one could say anything. The woman’s eyebrows were still upright and her almond-shaped eyes were wide-open; the man’s veins were still bulging. Tiger eyes glared.

Suddenly, a little girl appeared from the seat. She stretched out a pair of white hands from the sleeves of her white dress and picked up what fell on the floor.

The book on the table,

wiped the stain on the back cover with a handkerchief,

flattened the warped book,

put the book back on the seat. /p>

She carefully took out the same book she had just bought from her handbag and handed it to the young man who bought the book.

The two parties in the dispute coincided with each other. Startled, the young man looked a little embarrassed and hesitated for a moment, but he still reached out and took the book.

Suddenly, a pure world settled in the carriage, and people only saw the white dress. There were no words in the car.

The sun was still bright outside, but it was as soft and colorful as early spring.

[

Brief review.

]

The article is exquisite, without rhetoric, and interprets a pure and true feeling in the world in a tense atmosphere, which is natural and

fresh.

What is even more valuable is that the author can combine a variety of description methods in a short article:

portrait,

action,

Language descriptions complement each other

and

direct descriptions are set off by side effects,

and the environment at the beginning and end of the article is highlighted.

"

The silent ending

"

I received it within reason

"

At this time, silence is better than sound

”

The effect.