The upper line has the ambition to join the army and serve the country. The lower line has the youthful dream of building a strong army. The dream of building a strong army has come true. The upper li

The upper line has the ambition to join the army and serve the country. The lower line has the youthful dream of building a strong army. The dream of building a strong army has come true. The upper line has the hot military camp and sets the ambition of the swans. The lower line has built its power through training in Qixiala.

First line: Ambition to join the army and serve the country with lofty ambitions

Second line: The dream of youth and the dream of a strong army come true

Horizontal line: Money flows through the years

First line: The fiery military camp establishes the ambition of the swans

Second line: Qixia La training creates a mighty world

Horizontal comment: Youth has no regrets

Your two The concept of the sub-couple is very good, but it is slightly flawed. For example, in the first couplet, both the upper and lower couplets have the word "military", which is inappropriate. In the second couplet, "Qixia" does not match "Fire"; "Jian" does not match "Zhi" either. Let me revise it for you:

First line: Join the army and serve the country with high aspirations

Second line: Youthful dreams of meritorious service and dreams come true

Horizontal line: Years Flowing Gold

First couplet: The fiery military camp sets the ambition of the swan

Second couplet: Hard work builds a mighty body

Horizontal comment: Youth has no regrets