The Chinese composition in senior three is accurate in conception.

1. See whether the idea is correct from the establishment of the article center, and focus on whether the article center is prominent. When the marking teacher sees your article, he can feel that your article has a clear center, and this center has been implemented on a specific topic, forming his own writing center, and can make this center run through all the materials. At the same time, the opinions and opinions expressed in the article are penetrating, revealing beyond the ordinary, with clear emotions and firm attitudes, so the conception of your article may enter a class of volumes. (2) to see whether the central understanding of the article is accurate, profound and thoughtful. Writing is like a man, and man's greatness lies in his thoughts. Mediocre composition refers to the composition with empty content and no thoughts. When an article has thoughts, it has flesh and blood life and "spirit". The idea is to see if you have your own unique understanding and analysis of the topic. 2. From the common misunderstandings of conception, the common misunderstandings of whether the conception is correct and concentrated are: ① Deviating from the meaning of the question. ② There are deviations in cognition and emotion. For example, in the composition of Shandong Volume in 21, if we talk about the dark side of life in the composition, all kinds of injustice in society will certainly hold back the "shadow", but don't forget the dialectical relationship in the materials and "light". This is not only a partial problem, but also a cognitive problem. Only see the "shadow", but not the mainstream of "light". (3) scattered ideas, multi-clue, multi-center, lack of centralized consciousness and key consciousness. (4) the idea is old and general, lacking originality and profundity. These misunderstandings are often "minefields" in the composition idea, which can't be touched easily. This is also a warning to us. What are the requirements for how to make the idea correct and focused? From the basic level, it is correct and centralized; From the development level, it is profound and novel. Let's talk about correct and concentrated ideas first. The so-called correct intention means that the intention should conform to the cognitive law of objective things, have a correct value orientation and a healthy emotional attitude. In addition, it must be in line with the meaning of the question, not off topic, not off topic. The so-called concentration of ideas means focusing on viewpoints. An article can only put forward one viewpoint and solve a problem. If it is too broad, it will be excessive; if it is too large, it will be empty. How to make the idea correct and concentrated? (1) attack one of the "points", excluding the rest. No matter what kind of proposition, it will give candidates a broad space for conception, and they can often conceive from multiple angles, but the key is to choose a "precious" "point" that is explosive. In fact, this "point" is in the material, introduction, topic or title of the composition test. Material composition, if lyrical material (such as poetry), each image is an angle and a "point"; For narrative materials (such as fables, stories and real life phenomena), the combination of one person, one thing, one scene and one thing and their relationship is an angle and a "point"; If it is argumentative materials (such as aphorisms, aphorisms, grouping of judgments, etc.), each point of view and its opposite are different angles. We can explore "quality" according to "image" and "cause" according to fruit; The internal philosophy can be analyzed according to the contradictory and dialectical relations in the materials. For example, the essay topic of Shandong Volume in 21 is an argumentative material composition, and the material is Tolstoy's famous saying full of philosophy. The point of conception is located in the dialectical relationship between "light" and "shadow" Propositional composition, generally speaking, the title itself or the key words in the title contain ambiguity. There are original meaning, extended meaning, figurative meaning and symbolic meaning. Then, from the macro point of view, every sense has a big conception category, and from the micro point of view, every category has many small angles or "points". For example, in the composition of Beijing Volume in 211, three students have their own opinions, and the teacher's summary is accurate in place. When formulating ideas, they can be conceived from each student's point of view: according to what A Sheng said, it can be conceived as "success comes from strength"; According to the theory of second student, it can be conceived as "competition is conducive to balanced development"; According to Bing Sheng's theory, it can be defined as "advocating fairness and honesty and abandoning fraud". (2) add words skillfully to make things small. "Big topic" refers to a broad and open topic, such as "common sense", "witness", "difficult problem", "early" and "them", which can be narrowed by adding modifiers. You can add modifiers in front of the title, head words in the back, and both before and after. For example, in 29, the essay title of Guangdong Volume can be preceded by "life", "medicine", "nature", "science", "culture", "philosophy", "safety" and "morality", and followed by "characteristics", "significance", "advantages and disadvantages" and "development". In this way, adding modifiers and headwords layer by layer makes the scope of conception smaller and smaller, more and more concentrated and clear. (3) the virtual is real, and the real is virtual. "Virtual topic" refers to a relatively abstract topic, which is generally put forward from the philosophical, rational and spiritual levels, such as "between roles", "symbol of Beijing", "witness" and "thinking about the sky". The "real topic" is generally put forward from the aspects of people, things, things and scenery, such as "standing on tiptoe", "there is a saying that is often spoken", "face" and "light". What is empty is real, that is, taking a specific person, thing, thing and scene as the carrier, and interpreting abstract propositions with real objects or events. For example, in 29, the essay titled "Witness" in Shandong Volume was bigger and more illusory, and it could be specifically named "Witness to the pain of history" like an excellent essay in that year. Taking this as the starting point, the Yuanmingyuan, Auschwitz concentration camp, Normandy landing and other materials were selected to demonstrate the center of "Witness to scars and blood is not only for remembering, but also a warning to future generations", with a clear, concentrated and far-reaching intention. What is real is empty, which means that the conception is from real to empty, from individual to general, and through the image, it goes deep into the essence and writes the symbolic meaning of this kind of topic at the ideological or spiritual level. For example, in 29, the essay title of Hunan Volume "Stand on tiptoe" is not only a topic with a small angle, but also a very concrete topic. "Tiptoe" is a specific action, which has a strong directivity. Maybe people who stand on tiptoe want to see higher and farther, or want to reach something higher; Maybe dancing, and so on. These are the concrete meanings. But when writing, we should draw more abstract connotations from these concrete meanings. For example, "standing on tiptoe" shows a struggle against the status quo, a struggle that never gives up, and a pursuit of success and Excellence ... In short, "standing on tiptoe" contains a desire to make progress, a courage to work hard and a spirit of unremitting exploration. This is a method of thinking that combines concrete actions with abstract philosophy of life, and then turns reality into fiction. Using this method, it is naturally easy to guide the article deeply. Some topics can be real or virtual, and ideas can be changed from real to virtual. For example, in the essay titled "Taste Fashion" in Jiangsu in 29, an essay in the examination room was written as follows: at the beginning, taste the fashion of clothes in life, from jeans to Pierre Cardin suits and crocodile T-shirts, and realize the trend of chasing fashion to life; Then closely contact with life, read "youth", and then realize that "youth" is not only chasing the trend of life, but also pursuing the truth, goodness and beauty of life, and truth, goodness and beauty are the eternal "fashion" in life and times. The article goes from the real to the virtual, from the outside to the inside, and goes deep at all levels, which is called a wonderful article in the examination room. 　

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teaching purpose of "three thoughts and ideas method":

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2. explain the college entrance examination composition quickly and accurately? Some people say that there is no way in the world, and more people will have a way. Some people say that there is no way in the world, and more people will have a way. Some people say that there is a road in the world, and if there are more people walking, there will be no road. Some people say that there is a road in the world, and if there are more people walking, there will be no road. Others said ... Please write an article on "People and Road". Please write an article on "People and Road". Requirements: ① Self-determination. 2 Style is not limited except poetry. 3 Analysis of no less than 8 words. A figurative question: Road → Wide and straight features: abstract thought: broad road of life, abstract thought: broad road of life, It is the flat conception of the broad road: conception: how to correctly face success or prosperity analysis. Two figurative questions: figurative questions: road → characteristics bumpy abstract thought: there are always setbacks on the road of life. Abstract thought: conception: conception: facing setbacks with a peaceful mind. Analysis of three figurative questions: reaching the same destination, figurative questions: road → characteristics reaching the same destination, there are straight roads and curved roads. However, detours waste a lot of time in abstract thinking: if you don't pay attention to learning lessons in life, it is easy to take detours. Abstract thinking: If you don't pay attention to learning lessons in life, you should try to avoid detours in life. Intention: You should try to avoid detours in life, and learn from other people's experiences and lessons. The abstract topic is figurative thinking. In the 27 Beijing college entrance examination, the composition topic "Rainy wet clothes are invisible, idle flowers fall to the ground and listen to silence" is the Tang poetry. Some people say that this is a beautiful artistic conception of praising spring; Some people say that this is a quiet realm of life; Say this is a quiet realm of life; Some people say that this is a lonely situation where people sigh and spend idle time unknown; The lonely situation where the rain is idle and the flowers are unknown; Some people say that not seeing, not hearing and not speaking does not mean doing nothing; Others say that sound does not mean doing nothing; Others say that this kind of artistic conception is no longer suitable for today's world ... Please write an article based on the experience of reading these two poems. Requirements: Self-made topics are self-defined, and the style is not limited except poetry. The full text is not less than 8 words. The full text is not less than 8 words. Analysis and analysis of test questions An abstract question: Rain and wet clothes are invisible, idle flowers fall to the ground and listen to the silent abstract question: Rain and wet clothes are invisible, figurative thinking: ordinary workers → characteristics: figurative thinking: ordinary workers → characteristics: obscurity and dedication: Although many ordinary workers are unknown, they are willing to make their own ideas: Although many ordinary workers are unknown, they make contributions in their posts. They are also worthy of respect and analysis. Two abstract questions: drizzle and wet clothes are invisible, abstract questions: drizzle and wet clothes are invisible, idle flowers fall to the ground and listen to silent figurative thinking: winners → characteristics: figurative thinking: winners → characteristics: enduring loneliness and loneliness: successful people throughout the ages, many people endure loneliness and loneliness, conception: successful people throughout the ages, many people endure loneliness and loneliness, However, their spiritual world is not alone. Three abstract questions are analyzed: the drizzle and wet clothes are invisible, the abstract questions: the drizzle and wet clothes are invisible, and the idle flowers fall to the ground to listen to the silent figurative thinking: the figurative thinking: the realm of being a man is bleak and peaceful: the pursuit of dullness, peace of mind, and the intention: the pursuit of dullness and peace of mind, It's a very high life realm relationship topic. Dialectical thinking about believing in yourself and listening to others' opinions in 24 is a kind of self-confidence. Thinking about yourself first is a kind of self-confidence. Thinking about yourself first is a kind of self-confidence, but blindly believing in yourself will become arrogant and you may stumble. Believe in yourself, you will become arrogant and you may stumble. Think again about B listening to other people's opinions. Think again about B: "Listening to other people's opinions" can make you know more about things and things, but blindly listening to other people's opinions without your own ideas will become a parrot. Your own thoughts will become a parrot. Dialectical thinking: if you listen to others' opinions on the basis of believing in yourself, you will achieve better results; If you don't listen to other people's opinions, you will achieve better results; I can't listen to other people's opinions, and it may be because I don't believe in myself. Maybe it's because you don't believe in yourself. Intention: Being good at listening to others' opinions is a sign of self-confidence. Intention: Being good at listening to others' opinions is a sign of self-confidence. Self-confidence is not about not listening to others' opinions, not listening to others' opinions, but being brave in listening to others' opinions. Read the following poem and write a composition as required: Star (Lei Shuyan) Lei Shuyan) People who look up at the starry sky always think that the starry sky is a gem, crystal clear and flawless. Those who fly up to the star know that there is dust and debris, and the requirements are as complicated as those on the earth: write an article according to your association or sentiment. Note: Association or sentiment should be related to the meaning of the whole poem, and the style is not limited except poems and songs, not less than 8 words. There is no limit to the style outside the song, not less than 8 words. Read the following text and write the composition as required. Everything is endless in transmission, and human beings are endless in transmission. Technical experience can be passed on, and thoughts and feelings can be passed on ... Please write an article of not less than 8 words on the topic of "passing on". Articles with less than 8 words. "Walking" and "stopping" in the composition of college entrance examination in Sichuan Province in 26 are common phenomena in life, and their connotations are very rich, which can cause us to associate and think about various feelings of nature, society, history and life. Please write an article of not less than 8 words on the topic of "going" and "stopping". An article of no less than 8 words. Test analysis? Analyze a figurative problem: the characteristic star is far away from us and feels beautiful. Abstract thought: distance and beauty: does distance produce beauty? Analysis of two concrete problems: the actual situation of characteristics is dust and stone slag. Thought: Essence: Learn to see the essence through the phenomenon of things? Analysis of three figurative problems: the stars in the ideal are beautiful, but they are poor in reality. Abstract thinking: Ideal and reality: Don't idealize reality, learn to adjust your mentality and face reality? Analysis of an abstract topic: conveying concrete thoughts: conveying tenacious spirit: from ancient times to the present, countless great men have passed on their tenacious spirit and inspired future generations. Analysis 2 abstract topic: Conveying concrete thoughts: Conveying love: One person's kindness can influence more people, and it is a kind of transmission of love. ? Analysis of three abstract questions: conveying concrete thoughts: conveying traditional culture: classic traditional culture needs us to convey and develop. Think about it first. Think about it first. A: "Walking" refers to people's walking, and it can also refer to the development of things and social progress. Think again B: Think again B: What does "stop" mean? It means stopping, stopping progress and development. Dialectical thinking: What is the relationship between "walking" and "stopping"? Walking is inseparable from stopping, and stopping is for better walking. The two complement each other. As far as society is concerned, the relationship can be understood as the development and regulation of open source and throttling. Intention: Intention: 1 You need to keep walking on the road of life, and you can't stop chasing. You can't blindly pursue rapid progress, but learn to stop at the right time. It is the right way to learn to stop and go, relax one by one. The homework topic is to write a composition of not less than 8 words with the title of "Shoulder", and to write a composition of not less than 8 words with the title of "Shoulder of Poetry", and the style is not limited except poetry and songs. Read the following text and write a composition of Tang poetry as required: "A leaf falls and you know the autumn of the world." Song poem says: "The Tang poem says:" You can know the autumn of the world when a leaf falls. " Song shiyun