Excellent essay on prejudice

Part 1

Prejudice against foxes

People say that foxes are very cunning, but I don’t think so.

I think foxes are very smart. Although in many stories, foxes are described as bad guys, in life, they help people a lot. They rarely do anything sneaky, they eat everything. There are many harmful animals such as rats, and sometimes they catch chickens, which actually helps people. They eat some old, weak, sick and disabled chickens, and the remaining chickens run away, which means they are healthy chickens. Foxes also help them exercise. If foxes are not allowed to eat chickens, the sick chickens will not be disposed of, which may cause some infectious diseases such as influenza, make more chickens sick, and may even endanger humans. The fox ate the sick chicken, making it less likely that the disease would occur. We humans still hunt and kill foxes and use their fur to make clothes. Is it because their fur is beautiful? Compared with human behavior, foxes only steal some things, so humans have to kill them. Isn’t that right? What's worse, more cruel?

Please don’t have such prejudice against foxes anymore. They have helped us and are our friends. Our task is not to kill them, but to protect them!

●Comments on the composition:

1. The cunning of foxes is common in fables. This is the need for literary creation. The fox plays the villain in the story. This does not mean that people Prejudice against foxes. 2. The discussion about the fox stealing the chicken in the article expresses the author's unique opinions and makes sense. At the same time, it expresses the author's awareness of animal protection. 3. The writing language is fluent and the analysis and reasoning are good.

Part 2

Teacher’s Prejudice

In our class, the teacher always has some prejudice against Qiao Ce, the “bad student” in our class. He is often criticized because he does not listen carefully in class and his grades are low.

I remember one time, Yang Jiani’s shuttlecock was accidentally kicked to the door by Liu Jinyu in class. They tried many methods but could not win. Just when they were extremely anxious, they heard a voice from behind saying: "Let me help you." They turned around and saw Qiao Ce dancing and using Holding the shuttlecock in hand, the shuttlecock fell to the ground with a "pop" sound. Yang Jiani and the others were very grateful.

Another time, class monitor Qi Xinyue went to the teacher’s office to move the exercise books of the whole class. She was weak, so she couldn’t move such heavy things. Qiao Ce, who was standing aside, saw it and ran over quickly. He moved more than 30 books by himself and let Qi Xinyue take the rest. Qi Xinyue glanced at Qiao Ce gratefully.

Yes, poor study does not mean bad moral character. Although Qiao Ce in our class is not doing well at present, he is still studying hard and often helps others! So the teacher should not be biased against him.

●Comments on the essay:

The author has his own opinions on the fact that the teacher often criticizes a poor student in the class. He gives examples in the essay to show that although this poor student has current grades, Not ideal, but his moral character is not bad. The teacher should not be biased against him. The young author's views are correct, and he can speak with facts and put forward his own opinions to the teacher frankly, which is very valuable. The composition sentences are smooth, the narrative is clear, and the writing style is simple.

Part 3

Teacher’s “Prejudice”

A burst of “ding-ding-ding-ding” bells broke the laughter during class, and the students quickly returned to their respective seats. I saw Teacher Shi from the English class walking into the classroom as usual holding the teaching materials and saying with a smile: "Students, I have good news to tell you. March and April are the 'English Festival' of our school. This 'English Festival' we The task of the fifth grade group is to sing an English song for each class. The requirement is a full English version of the singing competition. The principal will also be present during the competition. This is a good opportunity for the class to win honors and for everyone to show off their talents. I hope Let’s all use our spare time to prepare well.”

Wow, that’s great. The class was buzzing with discussion. What song should we sing? Which song to choose? ...Some people suggested choosing the song "baby", while others suggested choosing the song "let it go"... Everyone expressed their own ideas.

At this time, Teacher Shi saw that everyone was discussing enthusiastically but could not decide for a while, so he handed over the matter to the monitor and asked the monitor to organize the singing competition after class. Which song to choose? Who participates? ...Then the normal class started, but I guess everyone can no longer concentrate on the lecture. Their minds are immersed in the singing competition, and all the content in the class has been forgotten. .

I finally looked forward to the end of get out of class when the bell rang. I saw a few girls gathered together and started whispering about the singing competition. They mainly wondered why the teacher always handed over these activities in the class to the monitor. Be responsible and don't give others such opportunities. Alas, I actually think so in my heart. The monitor is indeed very good and her academic performance is also very good, but singing is not her specialty. If I have such an opportunity, I will definitely organize it better than her... Facts have proved that the monitor I chose an English song that was nice but not suitable for group singing, and there were many lyrics in it that no one knew.

Hey, why do teachers always leave everything in the class to those students they consider to be good, without giving others a chance? Isn't this prejudice?

●Comments on the composition:

The author is good at narrative, using the narrative and progress of events to promote the development of events, and the content is relatively specific. However, the views and opinions expressed by the author in the article are questionable. The fact that the teacher leaves the selection of English songs and organization of competitions to the class monitor does not mean that he is biased against other students. Because the monitor is the class cadre, it is natural to do more work, and other students can also play their part by actively participating. When organizing the competition, the monitor must also rely on the entire class to do a good job. Without the active participation of the entire class, the monitor cannot complete this work alone.