Think of a composition topic based on the topic of "Having a good mood". It's novel! ! !

On mood? Gain insights

Having a good mood can turn inferiority into self-confidence;

Having a good mood can turn small things into greatness;

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Having a good mood can turn sadness into joy;

Having a good mood can turn decay into magic...

——Inscription

The stars in the sky suddenly became eclipsed because of the bright moon; the grass on the ground bowed its head and sighed because of the towering trees; the trickling stream cried alone because of the vast sea; the lonely ugly duckling I feel secretly sad because of those beautiful white swans...Is life really so sad? No, I don't believe it! Stars can shine brighter than the moon, small grass can grow into towering trees, streams can merge into the sea, and ugly ducklings can turn into white swans... Please look at the world around you with a good mood, and you will find that " Plum blossoms have their own charm of plum blossoms, and red apricots have their own beauty of red apricots.”

It can be seen that the key to turning inferiority into self-confidence and smallness into greatness lies in whether you have a good mood.

The story of Liang Shanbo and Zhu Yingtai moved the world and made us cry. The story is tear-jerking and the ending is depressing. When people are immersed in the tragedy of Butterfly Lovers, who can truly understand the essence of this story. Can tears be shed to save the life of Butterfly Lovers? No, I don't believe it! Please read this love classic with a good mood, and you will find that the ending is so beautiful, and you will inevitably sigh, "If the love lasted for a long time, how could it last forever?"

It can be seen that the key to turning sadness into joy lies in whether you have a good mood.

For the famous writer Helen Keller, God not only failed to favor this girl, but also made her suffer in many ways - deafness, blindness, and unable to speak. Faced with such a fate, will she give up her pursuit of life? No, I don't believe it! Although the misfortunes in life cast a thick shadow on her life, her "selfless happiness" also created her iron will. Please face life with a good mood, and your life will be full of miracles.

It can be seen that the key to turning decay into magic lies in whether you have a good mood.

Please have a good mood and let it accompany you through every minute of your life; please have a good mood and let it help you deal with every setback in life; please have a In a good mood, let you live your wonderful life under the bright starry sky!

Comments:

This is an excellent and successful examination essay. The excellence lies in its exquisite conception, and its success comes from the author's unique perception of life and his strong ability to control language.

Exquisitely conceived and rigorously structured. The opening chapter adopts the form of an epigraph, which hints at the main theme of the article. The main part is composed of three levels. The content of each level echoes the inscription part one by one. The three levels are all divided into independent sections with concise short sentences, which not only summarizes the content of this level, but also creates structural symmetry between the levels. beautiful.

The content is substantial and the insights are unique. Although the material is not new, the author's unique perception of life makes this article permeated with an optimistic and uplifting tone, especially the new interpretation of Butterfly Lovers, which is even more refreshing.

The language is fluent and the writing is vivid. The brilliance of the language of this article lies in the three groups of "three". The three sets of parallelism add a bit of momentum to the article; the three sets of question intervals appear repeatedly and promote the development of the plot; the three sets of "I don't believe it" are categorical and clearly express the author's point of view.

(Shen Pei, Liyang City)

Go on the road with a good mood

I don’t have gems or wealth in my bag, I only go on the road with a good mood.

——Inscription

I stopped eating and threw chopsticks. I drew my sword and looked around at a loss.

After the "second model" came down, I felt terrible. When the teacher took a long time to report my name from high score to low score, I heard the teacher's helplessness. I was originally ranked in the top 20 in the class, but suddenly I slipped to 32nd. I was really confused.

I suddenly felt scared. Looking at the teacher's eyes, I felt ashamed; looking at my mother's frowning eyebrows, my heart ached. I know that the threshold for higher education is very high, and I also know what it means to me not to be able to cross this threshold, and what it means to such an ordinary working-class family. Every time I think of this, tears can't help but flow...

I am about to cross the Yellow River and the ice-blocked rivers, and I am about to climb the Taihang Mountains covered with snow.

The countdown on the blackboard became more and more dazzling, and I knew it might be a threat to me. After dinner, my father called me to his side and stroked my head with his big rough hands. He didn’t say a word, but I knew that his touch contained too much. I didn’t shed tears. I knew that the man had tears. No flick, only I can save myself. That night, I wrote a blood letter. From then on, I reviewed like crazy, worked hard to memorize Chinese, English, politics, and worked hard on science questions. However, one blow after another made me doubt the idiom "God rewards those who work hard". That night, I was walking on the road and cried sadly. Is God going to kill me?

There will be times when the wind blows and the waves break, and the cloud sails are hung directly to help the sea.

I am still studying hard, and I am blind to what is happening outside the window. But a teacher's conversation changed me. Only then did I realize that my heart was actually too utilitarian. Is my study career just about crossing thresholds again and again? As long as I work hard and do my best, no matter what the outcome is, isn't a perfect process also great?

I feel calm! I want to go on the road with a peaceful heart!

I recited "The Road Is Difficult", and the ill-fated Li Bai appeared before my eyes, and I seemed to hear his warning.

Now I am sitting in the examination room, and my father is standing outside the school gate. I know that my father can understand my heart, and I will try my best, no matter what the result is. I swear by my good mood.

Comments:

The idea of ??this article is novel and the theme is far-reaching. The inscription "I have no gems or wealth in my luggage, I only go on the road with a good mood" not only closely follows the topic, but also provides a reference for what follows. The unfolding of the content sets the emotional tone. The structure of this article is ingeniously arranged. It adopts the form of parallel subtitles and cleverly selects verses from Li Bai's "The Road is Difficult". Every two sentences are used as a subtitle to organize the material from three aspects. The structure is clear, the connection is natural, smooth, and rich. Artistic and lyrical, with brilliant literary talent. At the same time, the quoted poems are very consistent with the written content and are seamless. They respectively describe the author's thoughts of "depression and hesitation", "disappointment and confusion", and "positive optimism", and also describe the author's profound mental journey and changes in mood. The process was detailed and real, as if it flowed naturally from the bottom of my heart and came naturally, leaving a deep impression on people. The article is narrated in a eloquent and light manner, which makes people feel heart-stirring. They lament how difficult things are in the world, how difficult life is, and the greatness of family ties and the sincerity of understanding. It makes the young author's heart beat for the change of mood, the broadness of mind, and the optimism of feelings. This article is clean and tidy, the writing is beautiful, the writing is smooth, and it is done in one go. There are no traces of chiseling, and it is natural. The language is unpretentious, fresh and natural, yet concise and steady, sparkling with wisdom everywhere and permeating the philosophy of life. The closing theme is to "go on the road with a calm heart" and "swear with a good mood". The beginning and end are rounded off, giving people a sense of perfection. The article is swaying, full of ups and downs, and full of emotions. After reading the full text, your heart will be filled with ups and downs and endless aftertaste.

My heart is bigger than the sky

In the sky of history, slash and burn, chaos begins, wind and thunder rise, watch the emergence of heroes throughout the ages! Let the long river of history clear away the turbidity and present the truth in front of us, telling us that the heart is bigger than the sky, and telling the five thousand souls of China to govern the country...——Inscription

The mosquitoes that once complained about the buzzing , but forgot the rejuvenating willows; I once complained about the hot summer, but forgot the floating water; I once complained about the remaining flowers in front of the window, but forgot the golden waves of wheat┅┅ Could it be that the pace of time is so fast, let us Forgot to change the angle! Oh, it’s because we don’t have a good mood and can’t experience life with our heart!

"Look up to the sky and laugh loudly and go out. How can we be from Penghao?" Li Taibai, you really live up to your reputation as a poet. "How can the name of Long Live the Eternal Life be washed away by the loneliness and death?

"Poet, you want to enter the vast wilderness, dreaming of crossing the land of nothingness, but you have neither wings nor ladder to heaven. There are many worries and many obstacles, but you, poet, "There is a bird path in Taibai in the west, which can cross the top of Emei! "In the strong wind, you blew Taibai's heart to the treetops, and in Shu Road, you withered Taibai's beauty, but it was a pity that the white hair was three thousand feet long and the beauty was beautiful for a moment. Poet, your heart is bigger than the sky! In "Avoid tigers in the morning, avoid long snakes in the evening" The scene of "King Chen had a banquet in the old days and drank wine for thousands of people to enjoy"!

Su Dongpo, I know you are dissatisfied with "The green sun is shining with light clouds, and the red apricot branches are bright." "Spring is coming", I know you want to sing "Go to the East", and you want to "ask the blue sky with wine"! Wutai Poetry Case, your career has been bumpy since then, and you have been poor all your life, but you have set a bold and bold example! "I hope you will live a long life and travel thousands of miles*** moon! "You sing life and history in hardship. Ah! Beautiful mood! Your heart is bigger than the sky!

Ren Changxia, I hope you will shine with the sun and the moon like the morning glow. I know that your life will be noble and elegant. The female police chief is famous in the north and south! She is willing to be a public servant of the people; she is willing to be a pioneer in fighting crime! When you are in office, you always face the sky and success with a smile, and your heart is as big as the sky! !

The beautiful mood has been sublimated in history, and it has become a heart as big as the sky! It may be expressed as the passion of a thousand riders in Pinggang, shooting tigers; It may be expressed as the splendor of the West Lake with light makeup and heavy makeup; or it may be expressed as the agility of beads in the heart of a lotus; or it may be expressed as the charm of flowers making shadows when the clouds break through the moon; or it may be expressed as the solemn and stirring spirit of the ancient country; or it may be expressed as knocking on thorn trees. Ask about the easygoing and peaceful approach of the savages┅┅

The heart is bigger than the sky, which is why China has five thousand cultures, the Shenzhou rises, the red flag flies, and the bones of Qinchuan, the soul of the Chinese nation┅┅ ! Good mood!

Comment:

If clear intention and prominent purpose are the prerequisites for an excellent composition, then the biggest highlight of this article is the beauty of language. The author skillfully uses rhetoric, such as directly or indirectly quoting many ancient poems and sentences, such as "Thousands of Horsemen on Ping Gang", "Drawing the Bow to Shoot the Tiger", "Manshoes and Bamboo Staff", "Whispering and Walking", "Light Makeup and Heavy Duty" The alternative quotations such as "wiping" and "the heart of the lotus is like a pearl" are so natural, which shows the author's profound cultural heritage and spiritual wisdom; such as "I once complained... I once complained... I once complained..." The parallel sentences use images and concrete , emotional things, to express a thought-provoking philosophy - look at the problem from another angle, "Ah! Good mood! My heart is bigger than the sky! "The parallelism at the end of the paragraph not only exaggerates the atmosphere, but also closely follows the topic and highlights the main theme.

As an examination essay, the author can cite scriptures so flexibly, showing the candidates' extensive accumulation and enhancing the content of the article. The eloquence makes the article soaring, which is very valuable. The ambition emerging from the idea is inspiring.