Revision of sick sentences and etiology

Modifying a sick sentence refers to modifying a sentence with the language of the sick sentence, so that it does not change its original intention and the sentence is more fluent. How can we find the reason more conveniently? The following is the modification and etiology of the sick sentences I compiled, welcome to enjoy.

Modify the sick sentence and etiology 1

First of all, inconsistency

The boat sailed on the rough (calm) water against the breeze.

The sun didn't show up all day this Sunday morning. (deleted in the morning)

Second, improper use of words.

With the help of my classmates, I improved my mistakes and improved my academic performance.

The students stared at the blackboard.

Third, the lack of ingredients.

I heard that there would be an essay contest, and (everyone) signed up one after another.

We should form the habit of loving cleanliness and stressing hygiene from an early age.

Fourth, repetition.

In the national anthem, the five-star red flag slowly rises. (Remove one group slowly)

I corrected all the incorrect typos in my exercise book. (There are typos, and the incorrect ones are deleted. )

Five, improper word order

At the class meeting, the students discussed and listened to the monitor's speech. (Listen and discuss)

The river is reflected in the clouds and looks whiter. (Cloud and River Exchange)

6. inappropriate related words

As long as you read and write more, you can learn Chinese well.

In spite of the bad weather, we always get to school on time.

Seven, the concept is unclear

All the students are (almost) here, only three students are absent.

There are many toys in the children's shop, including cars, dolls, doll pictorial and so on. (Doll Pictorial is not a toy and should be deleted)

② Divided into 8 types:

1, the composition is incomplete (usually the subject

2, redundant repetition

3. Incorrect word order

4. Improper collocation (we can obviously feel the habitual collocation)

5. The meaning is unclear (sometimes the theme of changing concepts is confusing to read)

6, illogical inconsistency

7. Improper use of words (some idioms misuse and abuse literal meaning)

8, praise or blame is unknown

Modification of Ill Sentences and Reasons II

4 1 ()A In the era when Ji Kang lived, with his background and irreconcilable personality, disaster was inevitable.

B, the officer tied his wife's hands with a rope with tears in his eyes, and it took a whole day to drag her up the mountain from the snow.

Several debt collectors came to the mall management department, and manager Zhao sent a deputy manager and his assistant to receive them.

D The association intends to erect a giant bronze statue of the Yellow Emperor with a height of about 65,438+00 meters at the Mausoleum of the Yellow Emperor on the eve of the Double Ninth Festival this year.

42 () A.On February 8, 2008 18, the last batch of Cuban refugees stranded in Panama were repatriated to the Guantanamo base of the US military stationed in Cuba.

B, for a long time, the society has always regarded the enrollment rate as a hard indicator to evaluate schools and teachers, although the central government has always opposed it.

C, the ball game is about to start, and the audience is scrambling to file in.

D, Jia Dao in the Tang Dynasty? The monk pushed the moon down the door? Right? Push? Knock? The story of Wang Anshi in Song Dynasty? Spring Breeze and Green Jiang Nanan? Right? Green? We are all familiar with the tempering of words.

My train of thought is interrupted from time to time by the cries of vendors outside the window.

B. With the increase of exchanges between countries in the world year by year, the number of workers and expatriates exported by countries is also increasing, which makes the remittance worldwide increase sharply.

On his way to the airport, the foreigner found three diamond rings missing in his hotel room.

D, we are brothers, how can we leave our disabled brother to watch a wonderful performance?

44 ()A, the two of them? "The second diagnosis? The disparity in grades is so great that everyone finds it difficult to understand.

B. The deadline for the proposal of the current National People's Congress is before 6 pm on the closing day of the Congress.

C. The headmaster invited a famous astronomer to teach the students the difficult problems in their study.

D. Fax communication can quickly and accurately transmit words and charts to distant places through wired or wireless communication lines as they are.

45 ()A In Shuidonggou, a primitive cultural site, a bone cone made of slightly ground ostrich egg perforated ornaments and bone blocks was found, which is the bud of grinding technology and is of great significance in the history of human production and development.

B, Rebecca went to Shenzhen after graduation. According to her, she just wants to earn a lot of money to prove her value.

C. With the increase of exchanges between countries in the world year by year, the number of workers and expatriates exported by countries is also increasing, which makes the remittance worldwide increase sharply.

D. Fenglong Mountain, also known as Longfei Mountain, is located 22km away from downtown Shijiazhuang. It was recorded as early as the Warring States Period in history, and it has been a famous mountain in Hebei since the Han and Tang Dynasties.

46 ()A, improve the national debt market, mainly in the scale, duration, method, interest rate, paperless degree of national debt issuance reform, realize the national debt market network.

B. When creating Li Qingzhao, the author delicately rendered and expressed Li Qingzhao's thoughts and feelings in different environments, such as Yan Er's wedding, divorce and worrying about the country.

C, an important cause of environmental pollution, is due to the loss and waste of resources and energy.

D this way of defining the rights and obligations of all parties in the enterprise by means of contracts and articles of association is undoubtedly the basic guarantee for employees to exercise their democratic rights.

47 ()A, some writers' cultural essays have been trying to re-examine the history puzzled by various politics with the eyes of modern people.

B. The novel Wandering published by People's Literature Publishing House is written by a Mauritian Chinese writer who has lived abroad for more than 20 years.

C, counter-revolutionaries conspiracy activities should be exposed, and can expose him.

D, stop and regulate the behavior of power consumption has become an urgent issue in the anti-corruption struggle.

48( )A, party member and Ji Ruizhi, the daughter of the famous patriotic general Ji Hongchang, gave us a vivid report.

B, father left, but earnest words echoed in in my heart forever.

After the thunderstorm, the dark clouds gradually dispersed, the air was fresh and moist, and the setting sun was slanting. A curved rainbow appeared in the western sky, decorating the world like a fairy mirror.

D. you don't need a special phone to use the 300 phone. If you can remember your card number and password, you don't need to carry a 300 card with you, so it's more convenient than a magnetic card.

49 ()A, science and engineering universities learn basic courses first, then professional basic courses, and then professional courses, and acquire more systematic basic theoretical knowledge through step-by-step learning.

B, the girls' clothes on the grassland are as bright and moving as white clouds.

Researchers at the Institute of Science and Technology are developing biosensors to detect microorganisms that cause food poisoning.

D, we don't deny that the novel "Medicine" does not reveal hope, but this hope is very slim.

50 ()A, knowledge economics, mainly studies the relationship between knowledge and economic development, and explores how to realize the law of economic development and wealth increase by relying on the progress of knowledge.

B, this ending, subtle and natural, makes readers feel sudden, calm and lingering.

C. The good news that the British model reported that the team had arrived in Shanghai for self-defense counterattack brought everyone's thoughts back to the fiery border post and recalled the scene of condolences there at that time.

D. The number of participating institutions and entries in this "Challenge Cup" competition has been significantly improved.

5 1 ()A Wherever the Oriental Song and Dance Troupe went, it was warmly welcomed by the masses.

B, British and French imperialist Coalition forces burned and looted the world-famous Yuanmingyuan.

C, the prison staff seriously educate juvenile offenders, so that they can deepen their understanding of the problem and improve their consciousness.

D, people are not sages, and mistakes are inevitable.

52 ((a), facing the urgent challenge of township enterprises re-entering, Qianjiang Motorcycle Factory successfully played the initiative card of integration.

B, is it? Why not go to dance school, no matter what age? Repeated public singing; Teasing and poking fun at life has become the fashion of some popular novels.

C TV series The Story of the Editorial Department is a very popular TV series. Although it shows some small things, it is intriguing.

D at first only provided dens for criminals, and later went into battle in person, abducting women in the name of selling insulation materials.

Three years later, when the reporter drove here again, a magnificent petrochemical new city had stood in front of people.

B, this is just one of the patients he cured. In his consultation room full of banners and tens of thousands of letters, cured cases are at your fingertips.

C after years of hard study, superb medical skills and outstanding achievements, Li Yunjie has attracted the attention of medical circles at home and abroad.

D, make up some at will? Anecdote? In order to meet the needs of some readers, the publishing house made money, but what kind of social effects can those books have?

54 ()A, not too stressed? Department power? More departments cooperate with each other.

B, don't have a meeting if you can go deep into the grassroots and solve the problem directly.

C, in view of the defects of Jin Ping Mei Hua Ci, it was banned soon after publication, and only a few critics studied it, and it is still a book that is not suitable for public release.

D, is it? Beijingers? Skull fossils, if not in? World War II? Mysterious disappearance, its scientific research value will be fully reflected in many disciplines.

55 ()A, he has no desire for fame in his poems. When he has feelings in life, he resorts to pen and ink and never pretends. Everything is true, frank and natural.

B, I don't know once upon a time, more and more articles recalling the past appeared in newspapers and magazines, lamenting the indifference between people in modern life.

C. The Municipal Party Committee took effective measures to correct the wrong practices of some units exposed by the masses that violated the accounting system.

The outstanding artistic feature of the text is the delicate psychological description, which shows the ideological character of the characters in the fierce contradictions and conflicts.

answer

1、D(A？ Impossible? Change to? Are you sure? . b？ With rope? Put it in? Tears? After that. c？ His assistant? There is ambiguity. )

2.A(B change? With what? For what? Release? . c？ Documents? what's up One by one? , what else? Fight for the top? Contradiction d, remove the last one? Right? . )

3、B(A？ Put it in from time to time? Is it? Before. C is irrational. D is ambiguous. )

4、D(A？ Disparity? With what? Big? Say it again. B remove it? Before? . c？ Teaching? Not appropriate. )

5、B(A？ Jewelry? Bone cone? what's up Germination? The subject and object don't match. c？ Export expatriates? Verb and object don't match. d？ Located? Change to? Distance? , remove it? Place? . )

6、A(B？ Delicate rendering? Without proper revision, it is impossible for the author to express Li Qingzhao's feelings C remove? Because? . d？ Is that clear? After adding? Clinic? . )

7. Delete A(B)? The hand of the author? . The subjects of the first sentence and the second sentence of C are not uniform. D is used here? Norm? Not appropriate. )

8、D(A？ Excellent * * * produced in party member? The modified object is not clear. b？ Voice and smile? Echo? Not worthy. c？ The setting sun is slanting? There is no rainbow in the west. )

9. What I learned after C (a) is inconsistent with what I learned before. b？ Baiyun? Improper decoration. D negates too much and says irony. )

10、A(B？ Suddenly, Youyou died? The meaning is not clear. c？ Memory loss theme. d？ Works? Improve? Improper collocation. )

1 1, d (a subject? No matter where you go. Not appropriate. b？ Robbery? Release? Burn? Before. C change? Yourself? For what? They? . )

12, B(A will? Are you online? In front? Change to? What time? What time? . c？ Among them? Change to? Edit. d？ Nominally? Change to? Signboard? . )

53.A(B) Can't the cured cases be in the outpatient department? Is it easy? . c？ Li Yunjie? Before? Manufacturing? . d？ Work? Verbs and objects are not collocated properly. )

14、D(A？ Some? Release? Emphasize? After that. B remove it? what's up . Replace the first sentence of c with? Self-defect? ,? Only a few critics study it? Move to the end of the sentence. )

15、A(B？ Books and magazines? Say it again. c？ Wrong way? The attribute of is ambiguous. Sentence D is a mixture of words, which is changed into a delicate psychological description to express the characters' ideological character and make them excited. )