Write a composition by expressing your thoughts directly.

1. How to write a composition about scenery in a straightforward way? Spring has come, flowers are in full bloom and birds are singing. On a sunny day, I went to the campus to look for Mr. Chun's footprints.

I came to wisteria lane first. Wisteria leaves are dense, but you can't hide the delicate wisteria flowers, which is still obvious. A bunch of lavender flowers, looking up, looks like a bunch of grapes, which makes people want to pick a bunch and try it. It must be sweet. Wisteria is very fragrant, because there are too many flowers, so it smells a little suffocating and the fragrance is too strong. Walking through the basketball court, I came to the road to Little Square. There are many flowers, red and white. Although the flowers are red, they are well red; Although the flowers are white, they are pure and noble. Bees are still wandering among the flowers.

Although the green lawn is not as beautiful as wisteria, it is full of vitality. The grass is tall and green, as if green were dyed with pigment. The grass seems to have just taken a bath and is still wet. People want to roll on it or have a good sleep.

Walk through the restaurant on the first floor and come to the "big flower bed" in front of the restaurant. I was walking on a stone road when a spring breeze suddenly exploded. Ah, that's cool! There are azaleas and peonies here. How bright and dazzling they are!

You see, what do you mean by a cluster in the east and a cluster in the west? Take a closer look, oh, it's shepherd's purse! Pinch the leaves open, it smells good! How can I see yellow flowers in that corner? What kind of wild flowers can it be? In my guess, I came to that corner and took a closer look. It turned out to be winter jasmine. Flowers made of pale yellow petals are particularly beautiful against the leaves. A breeze blew and the flowers nodded slightly, as if to say hello to me. Peach trees are sprouting, peach blossoms are blooming, pink and red, and there are many bright colors. The wild flowers in the grass are also conspicuous, and the colors of wild flowers are rich. They seem to think that they are no worse than those delicate flowers, and they also come to the banquet arranged by Miss Chun.

Where is spring? Spring is in children's smiles; Where is spring? Spring is in a beautiful little stamen; Where is spring? Spring is in our beautiful campus.

2. Write an outspoken landscape composition. Spring has come, flowers are blooming and birds are singing happily. On a sunny day, I went to the campus to look for Mr. Chun's footprints.

I came to wisteria lane first. Wisteria leaves are dense, but you can't hide the delicate wisteria flowers, which is still obvious. A bunch of lavender flowers, looking up, looks like a bunch of grapes, which makes people want to pick a bunch and try it. It must be sweet. Wisteria is very fragrant, because there are too many flowers, so it smells a little suffocating and the fragrance is too strong. Walking through the basketball court, I came to the road to Little Square. There are many flowers, red and white. Although the flowers are red, they are well red; Although the flowers are white, they are pure and noble. Bees are still wandering among the flowers.

Although the green lawn is not as beautiful as wisteria, it is full of vitality. The grass is tall and green, as if green were dyed with pigment. The grass seems to have just taken a bath and is still wet. People want to roll on it or have a good sleep.

Walk through the restaurant on the first floor and come to the "big flower bed" in front of the restaurant. I was walking on a stone road when a spring breeze suddenly exploded. Ah, that's cool! There are azaleas and peonies here. How bright and dazzling they are!

You see, what do you mean by a cluster in the east and a cluster in the west? Take a closer look, oh, it's shepherd's purse! Pinch the leaves open, it smells good! How can I see yellow flowers in that corner? What kind of wild flowers can it be? In my guess, I came to that corner and took a closer look. It turned out to be winter jasmine. Flowers made of pale yellow petals are particularly beautiful against the leaves. A breeze blew and the flowers nodded slightly, as if to say hello to me. Peach trees are sprouting, peach blossoms are blooming, pink and red, and there are many bright colors. The wild flowers in the grass are also conspicuous, and the colors of wild flowers are rich. They seem to think that they are no worse than those delicate flowers, and they also come to the banquet arranged by Miss Chun.

Where is spring? Spring is in children's smiles; Where is spring? Spring is in a beautiful little stamen; Where is spring? Spring is in our beautiful campus.

I used a 200-word essay with mixed scenes to express my feelings and sing my heart.

Life full of flavor and songs provides our students with rich writing materials. Many candidates take campus life or family life as their composition materials, and some excellent compositions have also appeared, such as "Time is like a song" and "That time, I tasted tears".

Other excellent compositions in the examination room are good at depicting the inner world and skillfully conveying the rhythm of emotions. This kind of article, because "write my heart with my pen", is more infectious. For example, in the article "A Letter to My Cousin who sings attentively", a little cousin expressed her heartfelt happiness. Her cousin finally came out of the pain of losing her father and was willing to open her heart and sing. She kindly encouraged her cousin to "sing with heart!" Those sorrows, those pains ... are like beads on a Buddhist chain, strung one by one into our years ... "... poetic language, like a song, is comforting my cousin and singing my own heart.

4. Write a paragraph frankly to express your sincere feelings for someone (parents, teachers, classmates, etc.). ) Dad, I love you!

Dad grew up, you gave me a serious impression, I will be very afraid of you! However, I didn't understand your love for me until I grew up. I love your father very much. You spoil me. You spoil me very much. You will try to give me anything I want. When I grow up, I already understand your love for me! I'm not the little baby who holds you in her arms with a slap! You have worked hard to support this family! I have grown up and can support this family with you! Dad, I still have a lot to say to you, but I can't write it! Your love for me is hard to describe, but I summed up five Chinese characters for you, "Dad, I love you! 」

5. Let your imagination fly and express the key points and difficulties of a 500-word composition. Chinese examination syllabus requirements: the correct use of commonly used rhetorical methods.

This requirement can be understood from two aspects: (1) "Common rhetorical methods" focus on "common use". The outline clearly points out that the commonly used rhetorical methods are metaphor, analogy, metonymy, exaggeration, duality, parallelism, rhetorical questions and rhetorical questions.

Other rhetorical methods, such as irony, repetition, pun, synaesthesia, thimble and transposition, are unnecessary. Therefore, when reviewing, we should stick to the "outline" and don't go beyond the scope and waste energy.

(2) "Correct use" means that the college entrance examination examines the examinee's ability of "correct use" rather than distinguishing rhetorical devices. 1.(Hubei Volume of College Entrance Examination in 2008) The school is preparing a special publicity issue for the 2008 Olympic torch relay. Please write a title for this special issue.

Requirements: ① Use antithetical sentences, and the upper and lower sentences contain the words "light * * *" and "convey dreams" respectively; ② The number of words in each sentence is between 15 and 25 words. Previous sentence: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Next sentence: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

There are two phrases in the request: "ignite * * *" and "convey dreams", so you should start with these two phrases when you conceive, and just add words before or after the phrases according to the content. At the same time, we must pay attention to the use of antithetical sentences.

Light the flame of * * * and watch * * * drive Xiangyun to climb Mount Everest and shine on Qian Shan's thousands of waters to convey dreams. May the dream gold and Chang 'e fly across the four seas and five continents in harmony. 2. The picture below shows the wonderful moment of Liu Xuan in the floor exercise competition. Please choose two rhetorical methods from metaphor, analogy, parallelism and duality to describe the picture vividly, with no more than 50 words.

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ This question is a form of image-text conversion, which actually examines the candidates' language rhetoric ability and imagination ability.

To complete this topic, we must first make clear the elements of the picture, secondly grasp the dynamic characteristics of the picture, thirdly understand the meaning of the picture, and fourthly meet all the requirements in the stem. She is like an angel, flying on the five-ring flag; She is like a bolt of lightning, frozen in time and space.

Example 3. Below is a paper-cut painting. Please write a paragraph as one of the characters to show the meaning of "deep affection" in the picture.

Language should be vivid and vivid, and two or more rhetorical methods should be used. The key to analyze this topic lies in how to fully and reasonably express the content of the observed paper-cut picture through rhetorical means.

Pay attention to two aspects. First, carefully observe the paper-cut painting to see how it expresses the theme of "deep affection" between two characters. Pay attention to the appearance and movements of the characters.

The second is to use two or more rhetorical devices to express the theme of "deep affection". The correct use of figures of speech should pay attention to several aspects: understanding common figures of speech, mastering the function of figures of speech, using various figures of speech to enhance literary talent and appeal, and rhetoric expression should be unified in style and strong in logic.

Your warm eyes are like spring breeze, gently encouraging me; Your inculcation is like a drizzle, moistening things silently; Your tall figure is like a big umbrella, always protecting me. Thank you, mom! Example 4. Write a dialogue between leaves and sunshine according to the requirements in brackets.

In the morning, the leaves talk intimately with the sun. Leaf (gratefully) said: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ (in contrast) Sunshine (humbly) said: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

It is difficult to solve the problem by combining expansion with rhetoric. Pay attention to the hints of "gratitude" and "modesty" in the questions, and use your imagination to make the sentences appropriate and vivid.

Leaves: ① You give me new green, warm people and bright the earth with fire-like enthusiasm, and the world is full of colors because of you. Your selfless care, generous dedication and warm care have made my life full of vitality.

Sunshine: ① You are the coat of the earth, not only me, but also the warm spring breeze and drizzle add beauty to you. You are a green gem. Without your texture, it is impossible to shine my brilliance on you.

Difficulty strategy distinguishes confusing rhetorical methods: (1) the difference between metaphor and analogy. The function of metaphor is to turn plain into vivid, abstruse into simple, abstract into concrete, and verbose into concise. The function of metaphor is vivid in color, vivid in image and rich in meaning.

(2) Similarities and differences between metonymy and metonymy ① Similarities: all things are replaced by one thing, and the ontology of things does not appear. ② Difference: the function of metonymy is "representation", that is, it goes without saying that the borrowing body is directly called; The function of metonymy is "metaphor". Although it also has a substitution function, there is always a generation in metaphor.

The basis of metonymy is the correlation of things, that is, there is a certain relationship between borrowing body and ontology; The basis of metonymy is the similarity of things, that is, the vehicle and the ontology are required to be similar in some aspects. Metonymy can become simile or metaphor, but metonymy can't.

The function of metonymy is to replace complexity with simplicity, emptiness with truth, everything with strangeness and feelings with things. (3) The function of exaggeration reveals the essence and gives people enlightenment; Set off the atmosphere and enhance the appeal; Strengthen association and create artistic conception.

(4) The difference between duality and contrast ① The basic feature of contrast is "opposition" and the basic feature of duality is "symmetry". (2) Duality is mainly from the structural form, which requires the structure to be commensurate and the number of words to be equal; In a sense, contrast requires opposite or similar meanings, regardless of structural form.

(3) The "opposition" in duality (for example, "pointing fingers at Leng Mei, bowing down to be a willing ox") is a comparison in meaning, a formal duality, and a rhetorical duality. (5) The difference between parallelism and duality ① Symmetry and parallelism.

Duality is two linguistic units, and parallelism is more than three linguistic units; Duality must be symmetrical, parallelism requires similar structure and less strict number of words. (2) There is a difference between word repetition and avoiding repetition.

Parallelism often takes the same word from each other.

6. Through discussion, express feelings, describe my teacher and write a composition.

He is not tall, his chubby face has a pair of kind eyes that are often narrowed, and his short gray hair shows his loyalty. He has a strong right leg, but his left leg is completely cut off from below the knee and supported by a polished round stick. We don't know when and why this leg was amputated. I only remember one time, when he was talking about the legend that The goddess patching the sky made man, he smiled and said to us, "Nuwa's clay figurine was so tired that he picked up the mud with branches and threw it on the ground, and the mud thrown on the ground became a man. It's just that some people lost their legs and arms because Nu Wa threw too hard. That's when I was dumped by her. " There was a burst of laughter in the classroom, but after laughing, every student felt a sour feeling in his heart, and at the same time he increased his respect for Mr. Liu.

He stands for hours every day and gives us lectures, relying only on his strong right leg and a wooden stick. Speaking of writing on the blackboard, he supported the ground with a wooden stick, left his right leg off the ground, turned his body quickly and turned to the blackboard. After writing thick chalk words, I turned to the podium with crutches as the center. A teacher who is over half a hundred years old doesn't know how many times he has to jump and spin like this a day. And every time he turned around, it caused the students' excited heartbeat.

His lecture was wonderful. The history of the motherland made him proud. Speaking of national heroes of past dynasties, his generous remarks often make us cry with excitement. Speaking of the humiliating years in the modern history of the motherland, he often choked up and made us bow our heads heavily. Later, I was admitted to the history department of the university, which had a lot to do with the influence of Teacher Liu.

He doesn't like written tests, but he likes to ask questions in class and let students tell their own learning experiences. I remember very clearly that if a classmate answered correctly and profoundly, he stood quietly in the corner of the classroom, cocked his head slightly, narrowed his eyes and listened carefully, as if enjoying a wonderful piece of music. Then, I seemed to wake up from drunkenness, breathed a sigh of relief, wrote down my score on the scoreboard with satisfaction, and said kindly and loudly, "Good! Five points! " If a classmate doesn't answer well, he will stare big eyes in surprise, look at his classmates with concern and whisper, "Don't be nervous, think, think and think again." Nod constantly, as if every nod can inject an inspiration into the students. At this time, he was more nervous than the students who were tested. This scene has passed nearly thirty years, but in retrospect, it is still so clear and cordial.

7. Write a composition with short sentences. There should be many topics on the internet.

Here are some things I found for you:

How to evaluate the quality of a composition?

1, ① chronological articles must have a theme, a positive and healthy theme, and try to reflect the reality.

(2) Narration must serve the theme and be fluent.

③ If multiple events can be narrated side by side to serve a certain theme, then the events should be narrated in a certain order. -the basic standard of a good note composition.

2. A successful work must have a proper theme, and the created characters should be representative and skillfully use various methods to depict characters.

3. A successful landscape composition should be deeply immersed in the reader's reading; The article should show the picture described in many aspects, combine dynamic and static, and give people beautiful enjoyment.

4, excellent writing situational composition, always have a little face, point and face combination, highlight the key points, write the atmosphere; Hierarchical and orderly.

5, ① To evaluate an essay, we must first understand the characteristics of prose, that is, "the form is scattered but the spirit is not scattered", that is to say, the freedom of form is unrestricted, but the center of the article is clear.

② Prose can be divided into narrative prose and lyric prose. A, if you encounter a narrative, it depends on whether it reflects the real social life or expresses the author's sense of shame. B, if you encounter lyricism, it depends on whether it expresses the author's feelings and wishes about real life and whether it can impress the readers.

③ Pay attention to the expression of prose. A successful essay should be able to express emotion by taking advantage of the scenery, raising things to express emotion or expressing one's mind directly.

The language must be concise, concise and vivid, with short sentences as the mainstay, instead of long sentences, and more metaphors, antithesis and contrast.

6.① A good expository article can make readers deeply understand all aspects of the explained things after reading it.

② Explanatory methods should be used more in explanatory texts.

③ The language of expository writing must be accurate, concise, popular and vivid.

7. Argumentative writing is an article that focuses on discussion and reasoning. The article should reflect the author's propaganda views, criticize or refute some words and deeds, explain the truth, and achieve the purpose of persuading others. If readers still have questions and are still dissatisfied with the author's point of view after reading it, then this article is not successful enough.

(2) Argument writing should have arguments, arguments and arguments. First, the arguments should be clear and practical. B, the argument should be realistic and can serve the argument. C, demonstration methods should be multi-purpose, in order to achieve the role of serving the demonstration.

8.① A novel should have a complete story. Environmental description shapes typical characters, and images reflect social life.

Novels should be as concise as possible. It is necessary to express the theme around a central idea, what to praise, what to praise, what to oppose and what to criticize, with a clear-cut stand and unambiguous right and wrong.

9. The language of successful poems is concise, beautiful and vivid. Besides rhyming, readers should have room for imagination, and poetry should also have strong lyricism.