Improper collocation of ill sentence types

Modifying a sick sentence means modifying a sentence with a sick sentence so that it does not change its original intention and the sentence is more fluent. What are the improper sentence types? The following is the improper collocation of the types of sick sentences I have compiled. Welcome to reading.

Improper sentence collocation 1 1. With the global temperature rising, the frequency and intensity of extreme meteorological events such as hurricanes, floods and droughts are increasing, and climate warming has become a challenge that all mankind must face together.

? Extreme weather events? Lack of ingredients after that? What happened? Cause improper collocation.

Walking along the path, the wind brings a fragrant smell. Looking around, I saw a Chimonanthus praecox sticking out of the high wall, releasing its fragrance.

Verbs and objects don't match properly, see? With what? Xiangxiang? Can't match, the last sentence should be changed to? Looking around, I saw a Chimonanthus praecox sticking out of the high wall. Where does the fragrance come from? .

When a strong typhoon hit the coastal city, the howling wind roared down with dense raindrops. An hour later, the water in some areas was as deep as 60 cm, and the traffic was once paralyzed.

? The wind is blowing? Improper use.

4. Chinese classroom is actually a miniature social verbal communication field, where students learn the verbal communication skills and literacy they need to enter the broad society in the future. ? Study? With what? Literacy? Improper collocation.

A few days ago, the National Autonomous University of Mexico held a seminar on influenza A virus (H 1N 1). Some experts believe that Mexico is about to enter a hot summer, which may help reduce the spread of influenza virus.

Improper collocation, will it? A little lower? Change to? Reduce? ;

6. The recent performance of the Suns is not satisfactory. The poor defense problem has not improved, and they have lost the game again and again, even against the weaker Warriors.

? Problem improvement? Improper collocation, competition? Predicate is missing before, add? Because of what? ;

7. Since June last year, Mr. Liao and two friends from Jinjiang District of Chengdu have visited the disaster-stricken area of send warm many times. So far, they have visited more than 20 communities and nearly 400 families, with a journey of more than 3,000 kilometers.

Improper collocation, visiting? With what? More than three kilometers from Qian Qian? Unable to match.

8. In this dialogue work, the author expounds the publicity of human ideal spirit concealed by modernity, such as respecting life, fearing nature, persisting in faith, and distinguishing between love and hate.

? Clarify the propaganda? Verbs and objects are not collocated properly.

9. Buckwheat has the functions of reducing capillary fragility, improving microcirculation and enhancing immunity, and can be used for adjuvant treatment of hypertension, hyperlipidemia, coronary heart disease, stroke and other diseases. ?

Mismatch, right? Increase? Change to? Enhance? , release? A stroke? Hello? Seizure. Remove;

10. In addition to her work in the class and student union, Wang Yu also undertook the work of the school radio station. The music continues to play? 、? English corner? Admirably, the host of the column did not affect his academic performance.

? Improper collocation and inconsistent subjects, should it be? Do you accept? Change to? As what? , are you there? Really? Thousands? These jobs? ;

1 1. The sun charcoal carving is exquisite in craftsmanship, colored with pure natural pigments, with elegant, fashionable and individual artistic enjoyment, and can absorb toxic and harmful gases. It is an environmentally-friendly work of art. ..

? Have the artistic enjoyment of elegance, fashion and individuality? Improper collocation, ok? Really? Change to? Give it to people?

12. Has the county seriously implemented it? Every village? One of the eight practical projects planned by the whole province, by the end of 10, the problem of rural people's difficulty in listening to radio and watching TV was first solved in the whole province. ?

? Implement one of the eight practical things? This is also a mismatch, but it may be? Implement? Change to? Do it well? ;

13. With what? A journey of harmony? The global relay of the Beijing Olympic torch has aroused the patriotic enthusiasm of the people of all ethnic groups in China, and has also attracted great attention from people all over the world.

Mismatch, right? Attraction? Change to? Because of what? ;

14.d. Learning methods may vary from person to person, but good learning attitude such as hard work and reasonable time arrangement are necessary for every student who wants to succeed.

Should it be put if it is not properly matched? Reasonable time schedule? Change to? The ability to arrange time reasonably? .

15. Birds are jumping in the green forest, the green leaves on the trees are wrapped around vines, and the flickering Shan Lan fog attracts my whole heart.

? The whole mind is attracted by the past? Improper collocation, ok? Mind? Change to? Heart? ,? Shan Lan? With what? Fog? repeat

Improper sentence collocation 2 1. People's living standards are constantly improving. (? Level? With what? Improve? Improper collocation of subject and predicate)

His revolutionary spirit always comes to my eyes. (? Spirit? With what? Emerge? Can't form a subject-predicate relationship. Is it okay? Spirit? Change to? Image? )

3. Due to the strengthening of ecological environment monitoring in the production process, the pollution-free vegetables produced by the base every year are not only supplied to the main markets in this province, but also sold to Henan, Hebei and other provinces. Production cannot be supplied, but pollution-free vegetables should be supplied. In addition, the first sentence is the premise, and there is no corresponding result sentence behind it, which is a residual sentence.

In the early morning, students who participated in long-distance running galloped on the expressway. (people can't? Gallop? , changed to? Run? )

Every time I recall a period of life with him day and night, his amiable voice, smiling face and good embroidery instruction will reappear in front of me. (? Teaching? And then what? Appear? Can improper subject-predicate relationship be removed? Persuasive teaching. ? Better add more? Ring in my ear again? Form a subject-predicate relationship with it)

6. He works hard and treats people sincerely. In life and work, he really shaped great personality strength with his own actions, moving and guiding people around him. (? Molded great personality strength? Improper collocation)

7. He arranged the content, time and attendees of the on-site meeting in a unified way, as well as the problems that should be paid attention to in the meeting. (can't? Arranged the problems that should be paid attention to in the meeting? )

8. Shanghai Science and Technology Development Center has gathered a group of professional teams who are enthusiastic about science and technology development services and good at management. (? Gather? What should it be? Talent? Instead of. Team? )

After the sports meeting, he officially retired from his career as an athlete. (? Quit your career? Improper collocation of verbs and objects)

10. The students watched and listened to the report of Laoshan hero with admiration. (In the joint predicate? Gaze? Can't be with someone? Report? Match, can be deleted)

1 1. The novel Song of Youth vividly depicts the heroic deeds of Lu Jiachuan, Jiang Hua and Lin Hong in party member. (? Shape? With what? Deeds? You won't construct an object relationship, will you? Deeds? Change to? Image? )

12. The problem of children's education is a complicated process, far from being effective in one or two sentences. (? Education for children? Change to? Educate children? )

13. Two parallel lines with shorter rules are always two unreachable endpoints. The meanings of subject and object in the judgment sentence do not belong to the same category, which leads to improper collocation of subject and object. In this case? Two parallel lines are endpoints? Obviously inappropriate, but? Endpoint? Change to? Straight line? Wait a minute. )

14. The last day of work is the most stressful, enjoyable and meaningful day for students. (? Labor? Can't be? One day? , delete? Labor? )

15. Farmers' private plots that meet the policy requirements are a kind of legal labor. (Improper collocation of subject and object)

16. At five or six o'clock in the morning, thousands of people stood on both sides of the street leading to the airport. ("crowd" is a whole noun, and it can no longer be limited by "thousands". The word "crowd" can be changed to "people")

17. We have carefully studied the suggestions of the staff. And humbly ask for expert advice. As an adverbial, "earnest" cannot modify and restrict "research", but it can be changed to "seriousness" and "caution". )

18. The car is driving on a wide highway. (Modifier does not match the headword)

19. It is urgent to take various measures to improve and train workers' modern technical level to accelerate the development of manufacturing industry. ( ? Cultivate? With what? Level? Improper collocation. )

20. Shanghai Concert Hall was carefully built? May day? At the party, what was dedicated to the audience was a cultural feast with famous artists and famous songs. (? Famous artists gather together? ,? A collection of famous songs Subject-predicate mismatch. Interchangeable as? Celebrity gathering? ; ? Collection of famous songs)

2 1. Biological invasion refers to those species that originally did not belong to an ecosystem, but were introduced into the ecosystem in some way, and then settled, spread and broke out. What is the backbone? Biological invasion is a species? Obvious mistake, theme? Biological invasion? Are you seeing someone? Species? Improper collocation, can you put it? Species? Remove, in? Those? Join later? Species? . )

22. In 2003, the United States adjusted its visa policy and stipulated that the application time for applying for a visa for studying abroad should be three months to two weeks before the start of school. (improper collocation, can't say? Time is running out? , can I delete it? What is the application time? Or delete? Continue? . )

23. Two important archaeological discoveries made by Jia Lanpo, an early paleoanthropologist, and National Cultural Heritage Administration recently showed that Yongding River is a natural corridor. The route of ancient human movement? . (? Two major archaeological discoveries? ,? Moderator? With what? Did you find it? Improper collocation. )

24. The investment environment, service quality and the quality of government officials are all important guarantees for the healthy development of regional economy. One side and two sides don't correspond. )