2012 New Curriculum Standard College Entrance Examination Chinese Composition, Concept, Details, Off Topic?

New course standard paper: The ship owner asked the painter to paint the ship. After the painter painted the boat, he repaired the holes. Not long after, the ship owner gave the painter a large sum of money. The painter said: "The wages have been paid." The boat owner said, "This is the money to thank you for repairing the leaks." The painter said, "That was done by the way." The boat owner said, "When I learned that my children were sailing on the boat, I knew they would never come back. Now they are back safely. , so I thank you!" In terms of Yu Shiwei's seven qualities of "leadership", this is called carefulness and filling one's position, that is: when you see shortcomings or shortcomings, you must do your duty and do it well even if it is not your responsibility. It also reflects a sense of responsibility. If the candidate is obsessed with small loopholes and shipwrecks, or has no intention of helping to obtain huge wealth, he will definitely miss the point. He should pay attention to the incident of the painter fixing the loophole itself, and explore the meaning behind this behavior and the lessons for human life. To put it in more detail: the so-called "patching up by the way" by the painter is not "unintentional", but a kind of "intention" that does not take the kindness lightly - of course it is related to "kindness", but the focus of this article is Obviously not here. In addition, if the candidate is struggling with technical issues such as why the ship owner did not know which ship was sailing before the ship sailed, I think he should be a managerial talent, but the score of the essay will not be too optimistic. In this way, let's refine some main sentences first :

1. "Fix the loopholes by the way."

2. "That was done by the way."

3. He is a painter, but not a ship repairer.

From the above three points, the word "by the way" is mentioned many times in the article, so the article should start with "little things that are easy to do".

I think the best angle is: "With a little effort" you can write "Thanksgiving" from the perspective of the ship owner

And the proposition "Details determine success or failure" is not bad, and it does not go off topic. But it’s a second-class essay, probably around 45 points.