On the changes of the following poems.

Unfinished: It is already an icy cliff with unique flowers and branches. Mei does not strive for spring, but only reports spring.

Final draft: It is already 100 feet of ice on the cliff, and there are beautiful flowers. Joe doesn't fight for spring, he only reports it.

Analysis:

Although "the flowers are absolutely beautiful" can show the heroic spirit of plum blossoms that are not afraid of cold, the word "independence" has the color of "loneliness" after all. Changing the word "Jude" not only loses this feeling, but also adds a feeling of vitality, perseverance and complacency, which is more coherent with the tone of the previous sentence.

The word "Mei" in the original paragraph is redundant. Because "Mei" is hidden in the upper part, there is no need to say "Mei" in the lower part, and there is a little less implicit beauty. Especially after the change of "Qiao", first, it forms the rhetorical beauty of "thimble" with the suffix "Qiao" in the previous sentence, which is more attractive to read; Second, it not only adds warmth and comfort to the world, but also emphasizes arrogance and rashness, and only hopes for the open feelings of Wanhua Mountain; Thirdly, as the Editor's Guide said, Zi Qiao was repeatedly reused and emphasized to enhance his aesthetic feeling. The preface points out that Qiao Qiao is handsome and reserved by women, but if she confronts with strong cold (or combines with Baizhang ice cliff), she has masculine beauty, or combines with the beauty of both rigidity and softness (similar poems include "dressed in red, extraordinarily enchanting", "beautiful mountains and rivers" and "dashing and heroic five-foot gun"). Therefore, some critics say that Joe is the soul of this word, which can be said to be right.