Descriptive combination of characters

1. Composition describing characters (not less than 500 words) My grandmother is a middle school teacher. She has bright eyes under her black eyebrows. She is not tall and her chubby body is always so busy. Grandma is very serious and responsible for her work, and I admire her very much.

Grandma is over 500 years old and still cares about her students. Students come to her for help, no matter big or small. I remember one night last winter, the cold wind kept blowing. My grandmother and I just fell asleep when we heard a knock at the door. When the door opened, it turned out to be a student. The student said, "teacher, one of our classmates is ill and the teacher is not here." Would you please take a look? " Grandma put on her clothes and left without saying anything. It was not until 4 o'clock in the morning that grandma dragged herself back. Looking at her purple face with cold, I touched her cold hand and asked, "Grandma, are you cold?" Grandma smiled and said, "What does it matter to be cold if you do something for the students?" Grandma's words remain deeply in my memory.

Grandma cares about her students in every way, but she has no time to take care of her health. Every night, grandma prepares lessons until late at night. Sometimes when I wake up and see them, I feel distressed and say to my grandmother, "Grandma, it's time for you to go to bed." Grandma said, "You will go to school tomorrow. I don't prepare lessons carefully. How can I give lectures to students tomorrow? " I don't want to interrupt grandma's thoughts any more, so I nodded helplessly. Looking at her more and more white hair, my eyes are moist. Unconsciously, I fell asleep. In my dream, I saw my grandmother, who was holding flowers in her hand, facing a group of children, with a gratified smile on her face ... In a blink of an eye, I also became a people's teacher, following in her footsteps.

2. Ask for a composition describing the characters. First, grasp the characteristics of the characters to write a composition: give you a model essay:

My grandfather is over 80 years old, with snow-white hair and wrinkled face, but he is full of spirit.

One day, my parents went out, and I couldn't cook myself, so I wanted to go out and buy food. Just as I was leaving, my grandfather came and said to me, "Come to my house for dinner. Grandpa made you something to eat. " I went to play as soon as I got online, but my grandfather quit. His stern appearance made me tremble.

Xuxiaozhuang

[zk 168] Lunch! "I said happily after entering the room.

"Haha, then eat more!" Grandpa said and gave me a big bowl of rice. "Eat more vegetables!"

Look at the way I wolfed down. My grandfather has been laughing.

Grandpa is so considerate to me in life, but not so amiable in study. He sees me every day and asks, "Have you finished your homework? Let me check. " Grandpa won't do it if you play before you finish your homework. His stern appearance made me tremble.

Xuxiaozhuang

3. A diary describing the appearance of a character 1. Lingling is under two years old. She is chubby. On her red face, there is a pair of watery glasses. Long hair is stuck in the air, and pink hair bands jump on her head, like two flying butterflies. What is particularly lovely is her clever mouth. Miss Du seems to be only 30 years old. The corners of the mouth are always closed, and I don't like to talk at ordinary times. As far as I can remember, he seems to be wearing only a semi-new and semi-old blue dress, and his sleeves are always pulled. Whenever class is over, he puts the book under his arm, puts the remaining half piece of chalk in his pocket, lowers his head and walks slowly and step by step to his office. However, in class, he seems to be a different person. He talks a lot in class and reads the text loudly. Sometimes he blushes with excitement. He strode to the front of the platform, waving his arms ... the students' attention was attracted by him. The old man's eyebrows and beard have turned gray, but his face is still purple and looks energetic. He is wearing a brand-new blue cotton-padded jacket and trousers. Eyebrows are thin and oblique; Black with yellow hair tied into two short braids with cotton stripes; Clothes are very old; Pin a hole in the right trouser leg; I go barefoot in spring, summer and autumn. I only wear a pair of shoes when I go up the mountain to collect firewood, but I take them off as soon as I get down the mountain. This is a young man in his thirties. He was wearing a military coat and high boots. He is tall with a square face. He has a mole on his chin, and his eyes are shining in the dark, which makes people feel rough and smart. 6. He has a pair of naughty big eyes, and his eyes are flickering. As long as those two big black gem eyes turn, something will happen. On his dark face, whether it's bulging cheeks, thin lips or slightly tilted nose, you feel funny. 7. The old man is wearing a broken straw hat, and the hair exposed outside the brim is gray. It is black, bright and shiny, as if it were coated with oil. The lower trouser legs are rolled over the knees, and the hairy calves are covered with countless tendons and bumps, which are connected in series by high-rise blood vessels. There are no shoes on the feet, and the old skin on the skirting board is afraid to be one finger thick ... There is a tobacco bag on the waist, strung on the * *, swinging like a pendulum. 8. Like blooming chrysanthemum petals, every wrinkle is filled with a smile. One day, her wife was ill, and the beaded wrinkles deepened, and a knot in one's heart twisted into two eyebrows and locked together. She looked at his wife's portrait, her lips trembled slightly, and tears flowed in the knife-like wrinkles. 9. Her daughter looks like her mother, especially her eyes. White duck eggs are clear and black. Head is head, feet are feet. Hair is slippery, clothes are earned. How to write a description of a good person? The description of people's appearance is an important content of character description. Describing a person's appearance well can often make people vivid and leave a deep impression on readers. People's appearance mainly includes people's appearance, posture, clothing, expression, manner and so on. People's appearance description is also called portrait description, which is a description of people's appearance. We might as well start from the following three aspects. First, the description of appearance should be "accurate". Accuracy refers to accurately describing the appearance of a character, and the image of the character will be true and credible. People's looks are often influenced by identity, occupation, age, education, habits, life experience, family environment, physical condition and other factors. People in different occupations often have different appearances. For example, dancers have thick legs and slender limbs; Weightlifters are often strong; Fishermen, on the other hand, have dark skin and open toes like cattail fans, because they have been walking on the boat for a long time. People's appearance varies obviously with age. Children are innocent and lovely, young people have a boiling passion, middle-aged people are mature and steady, and old people are deaf and blind. All these reflect the natural laws of their lives. Of course, people's different habits often show different characteristics. For example, smokers seem to have no front teeth and sometimes smell tobacco. Non-smokers have white teeth. People with different upbringing can often see it from their appearance. Educated people sit and stand. Educated people speak elegantly and clearly; People who have no education sit and stand, speak rudely and are disorganized ... These must be carefully observed and described in accurate language in order to accurately portray the image of the characters. Second, the description of appearance should be "precise". Precision means carefully selecting the appearance characteristics of characters, focusing on pen and ink description to make the characters accurate and clear. There are no people with exactly the same appearance in the world. We should carefully choose their distinctive features from the appearance of the characters according to the needs of performance, concentrate on pen and ink description, and omit or brush away the others to make the appearance of the characters more accurate and vivid. Sometimes, according to the actual situation of the materials at hand, or for the need of some expression, we can focus on a certain part of the characters. For example, writing that grandpa's hand is hard and cracked is a testimony of hard work. Help me knit toys and be smart. This kind of writing often makes the hardworking and clever grandfather jump to the page. We carefully choose the distinctive appearance of the characters and describe them accurately, so we can often write new ideas. Third, the description of appearance should be "profound". Profound means that the description of the appearance of the characters should reflect the spiritual quality of the characters and write the depth of the characters. When describing the appearance of characters, we should focus on choosing the one that best reflects their ideological quality, mental outlook, personality characteristics and temperament and emotion.

4. A good composition practice teacher who describes characters met her for the first time in the Chinese morning self-study class.

Teacher Huang said, "This teacher Jiang is the new intern teacher in our class ..." Before we finished, we clapped our hands warmly. She walked onto the platform with a smile, wearing a turquoise sweater and a pair of black running pants, simple and generous, neat but dignified.

She gently touched her black-rimmed glasses with her hand and began to introduce her personal "resume": "My name is Jiang, and I am a student of the Political Department of Suzhou University. Well, I am very happy to be an intern in your civilized class. " There was another round of warm applause.

She lowered her head, adjusted her glasses, and then continued to talk, but her face flushed and seemed a little nervous. The first time I talked to her was in the self-study class at noon.

That day, I arrived at school early, and there were several classmates sitting in the classroom. She is talking to Qian Wei. Seeing her, I gave her a smile, and she gave me a shallow smile in return.

I began to do my homework. Just doing it for a while, she came over and sat next to me.

I looked up, her ear-length short hair neat and obedient. Leaving the sea half covered her beautiful eyebrows.

A pair of eyes full of aura gives people a deep feeling. Not really, but it's exquisite. The nose is slightly tilted, which looks a bit playful.

A pair of black-rimmed glasses stands quietly on the bridge of the nose. The thin lips seem to be cracked and the skin appears healthy dark brown. She smiled and asked me, "You used to be the monitor, right?" , "Yes."

I nodded to answer. "Are all your classmates here so early?" She then asked.

"Not before. However, now Miss Huang wants us to study by ourselves at noon.

Because ... ""Oh? What about you? " "Me? I used to finish my homework at noon. "Well, after finishing homework at noon, more private plots can be reclaimed at night.

We were the same at that time. Oh, it's getting late. I won't bother you. "

With that, she went to talk to other students. I found that she always looked me in the eyes when she spoke, which gave me a very kind and warm feeling.

Her eyes are bright, dark and deep. The first time I participated in activities with her was at the class meeting on Saturday.

We had a "teacher-student exchange meeting" that day, and she sat next to me. The students stepped onto the platform one by one, expressed their views and made demands on the teacher.

How is she? He is as meticulous as a primary school student and records the opinions and suggestions put forward by his classmates in detail on a piece of paper. It will be my turn to speak soon. I'm so nervous. She comforted me with gentle eyes and encouraged me.

"Never mind, I know you can do it." She hugged my shoulder and said.

"But ..." Before I finished, the host called me up to speak. Stepping onto the platform and looking at her eyes full of comfort and encouragement, I gushed.

She gave me inspiration, courage and confidence. At the end of the activity, she went to the podium and recited a small poem for us.

She bent her mouth with a smile. A faint smile revealed her lovely two tiger teeth, with a thick smile and a glimmer of light in her eyes.

Although still wearing that suit, it gives people a brand-new feeling. In just a few months, although we didn't know each other very well, she remained deeply in my memory.

I silently bless her in my heart: as long as you live better than me. Comments: The author of this composition used three fragments of communication with the intern teacher: seeing her for the first time, talking to her for the first time, and participating in activities with her for the first time.

Created an image of a female teacher who came to practice in a middle school. The full text is very distinctive in describing the language of female student teachers.

She introduced herself to the class for the first time: "My name is Jiang, and I am a student of the Political Department of Suzhou University. Well, I am very happy to be an intern in your civilized class. " These simple sentences show the generous but nervous characteristics of the intern teacher.

The second time I wrote the language of the intern teacher was a conversation with "I" in the self-study class at noon: "You used to be the monitor, right?" "Well, after finishing homework at noon, more private plots can be reclaimed at night. We were the same at that time.

Oh, it's getting late. I won't bother you. "Portrayed a kind, gentle and considerate image.

The third time I wrote the language of the intern teacher was at the teacher-student exchange meeting. I am nervous when I want to speak. The intern teacher comforted me and encouraged me. "Never mind, I know you can do it."

It gave me confidence, courage and inspiration to speak. Generally speaking, the language description in this composition is quite successful, which is worth learning and using for reference when we study language description.

5. Composition describing characters, my cousin.

I have a naive, lovely, intelligent and lively cousin. He has a pair of big watery eyes, and when he thinks, his black eyes turn straight in his eyes. Cousin can show a pair of white and neat little teeth when she smiles, which is very interesting. I like him very much.

My cousin lives in grandma's house. Once, he told his grandmother that he liked Xiaohua Mall. Grandma loves her cousin and listens to him. He asked me to watch my cousin and buy Xiaohua Mall on the street. Grandma bought a lively and beautiful Xiaohua Mall. My cousin jumped for joy when he saw the lively and lovely Xiaohua Mall, so he ran to grandma's side, played with the lovely Xiaohua Mall, stroked it gently, and hummed beautiful Xiaohua Mall songs in his mouth. Then Xiaohua Mall pawed at his cousin's pants. Grandpa saw it, picked up Xiaohua Mall and threw it away. My cousin burst into tears when he saw it. He said, "Grandpa is bad, but Xiaohua Mall is not sensible. If you want to educate him, how can you throw him away If I am not sensible, will you abandon me? You see how pathetic! " Everyone laughed. Grandpa quickly picked up Xiaohua Mall and said to his cousin, "Yes, the kitten is not sensible. My brother will educate it!"

Another time, my cousin was playing in the house. He didn't listen to his grandmother and insisted on playing with his bike. As a result, he accidentally overturned his bike and pinned his finger. He quickly broke his finger and burst into tears. At this moment, grandma heard crying and ran out of the room. Seeing this, she was angry and funny, so she didn't go to physics and chemistry. He stopped crying for a while and peeked through his fingers to see if grandma paid attention to him. He found that grandma ignored him and went to her to laugh.

How interesting and lovely my cousin is! I like him very much.

Timid me

I am a timid girl. Speaking of my cowardice, there are still many.

I like watching cartoons very much, but I dare not watch them when I encounter terrible scenes. Once I watched Doraemon, there was a big crocodile with a big mouth and sharp teeth, which suddenly came out of the water to eat a little girl. I let out a cry of horror, blindfolded quickly and my heart kept beating. Even when I sleep at night, I dream about that terrible crocodile, so I have to ask my mother to sleep with me until dawn.

Last Teacher's Day, I prepared a beautiful gift for my teacher. Before going to bed at night, I am afraid that I will forget to bring my gift the next day and put it in an obvious place. But the next morning, I was afraid to send it, so I forgot it on purpose. When I arrived at school, I saw many students happily giving gifts to the teacher, and the teacher happily accepted the gifts from their classmates. Seeing this, I regret it very much and envy their bravery. I think I will definitely give my teacher a gift on Teacher's Day next year.

I must get rid of my timidity and become brave!

6. Composition describing characters 600 In the community where I live, there is an ordinary milkman, an uncle in his forties. The uncle's dark skin can be seen at a glance as the result of years of sun exposure. On his serrated face, there are a pair of small and intense eyes. There are three subscribers in our building, two on the fifth floor and one on the sixth floor. The subscriber on the sixth floor is our home. Six floors, this trip up and down, without anything, has exhausted people, not to mention the milkman still holding so many bottles. Moreover, the bottle is round and slippery, and it will break several bottles if you are not careful. When people saw this situation, they put it directly downstairs. This uncle is not like this. Every afternoon at six o'clock, he always delivers the milk to the subscriber's door on time, and then shouts "Here comes the milk!" Winter is coming, and the weather is getting colder and colder. No matter whether it is windy or snowy, at six o'clock every afternoon, there will always be familiar footsteps and loud door calls in the corridor, "Here comes the milk!" In the evening when the cold wind roared, the uncle came to deliver milk again. When I took the bottle, I found that his hands had been crumpled by the ruthless wind, like the skin of an old pine tree. I wonder why I don't wear gloves. No money to buy gloves or too busy to buy gloves? Why don't I give him a pair? The next day, he came to deliver milk again, and I finally couldn't help asking him. He said kindly, "Look, there is a layer of water outside this bottle. If you wear gloves, the bottle will easily slip. " Oh, I see! I sighed in my heart: this milkman wants to.

In the community where I live, there is an ordinary milkman, an uncle in his forties. The uncle's dark skin can be seen at a glance as the result of years of sun exposure. On his serrated face, there are a pair of small and intense eyes. There are three subscribers in our building, two on the fifth floor and one on the sixth floor. The subscriber on the sixth floor is our home. Six floors, this trip up and down, without anything, has exhausted people, not to mention the milkman still holding so many bottles. Moreover, the bottle is round and slippery, and it will break several bottles if you are not careful. When people saw this situation, they put it directly downstairs. This uncle is not like this. Every afternoon at six o'clock, he always delivers the milk to the subscriber's door on time, and then shouts "Here comes the milk!" Winter is coming, and the weather is getting colder and colder. No matter whether it is windy or snowy, at six o'clock every afternoon, there will always be familiar footsteps and loud door calls in the corridor, "Here comes the milk!" In the evening when the cold wind roared, the uncle came to deliver milk again. When I took the bottle, I found that his hands had been crumpled by the ruthless wind, like the skin of an old pine tree. I wonder why I don't wear gloves. No money to buy gloves or too busy to buy gloves? Why don't I give him a pair? The next day, he came to deliver milk again, and I finally couldn't help asking him. He said kindly, "Look, there is a layer of water outside this bottle. If you wear gloves, the bottle will easily slip. " Oh, I see! I sighed in my heart: in order not to break the bottle, the uncle who delivered the milk actually put his head in his hands in the winter, which is really admirable! Mom said this is a kind of professionalism, which is worth learning from each of us. Uncle Milkman, you are the person I admire most.

7. According to Balzac's last date to describe the characters, Eugénie Grandet's novel was completed in September 1833.

However, Balzac complained in his letter to Mrs. Hanska on 1833120 that his Eugénie Grandet was missing 100 pages. Can it be speculated that the first draft of the novel was completed in September, and Balzac is still revising or rewriting it in 1 1 month?

Balzac used to revise or rewrite manuscripts on the proofs of printing houses, sometimes as many as fifteen or sixteen times. He sorted out the proof of a work and gave it to his close friend as a gift for preservation. He said: "This is a proof of my hard work and patient pursuit of perfection."

Eugénie Grandet must have gone through the same twists and turns. However, it is certain that this novel was completed in 18331February, because Balzac was invited to meet Mrs. Hanska's family in Geneva that Christmas. Before he left, he wrote to Mr. Hanski and asked him if he could give the manuscripts of the two recent books, Country Doctor and Eugénie Grandet, to Mrs. Hanska for safekeeping.

1833 is a crucial year for Balzac, both in his creation and in his life. In life, he was secretly engaged to Mrs. Hanska that Christmas; He discovered a secret in his creation.

In September that year, when Eugénie Grandet's first draft was completed, he confidently declared to his sister, "I'm going to rule the European literary world, and I won't lose heart! I only need to work hard for another two years, and I can surpass all those who try to bind my hands and feet and hinder my progress! " His confidence comes from a great idea that he has been brewing for a long time: he wants to combine all the works he has written and will write into a "whole building", which he calls "My Madeleine Cathedral". 1834126 October, in a letter to Mrs. Hanska, he concretized this idea into a grand plan: his "Madeleine" will be composed of three parts: the first part, "custom research", will comprehensively reflect the current social situation-all kinds of fruits produced by society.

..... The second part is "philosophical research" ... to explain the reasons for these feelings and the formation of this life, and to explain the conditions on which society and people depend. ..... After the cause and effect, there must be' analysis and research' ... Because the' cause' has been listed and the' cause' has been analyzed, it is time to discuss the principle.

..... The so-called principle is the author himself. (2) As André Maurois said, Balzac had been exploring in two fields before 1832.

One field is writing philosophical novels, such as The Story of Donkey Skin and Louis Lamber, and the other field is private life scenes. From 1832, he realized the combination of the two.

Steven Zweig believes that the combination of the two lies in his discovery of a secret, that is, "if we can observe contemporary life from a proper perspective, we can also write fresh, vivid and rich works." What matters is not the theme and layout, but the internal motivation ... the motivation is not the style and structure, but the description of the characters. "

In other words, in the past, there stood an observer of real life between the storyteller and the thinker. Now, this observer can load his own thoughts and tell people's stories with concrete life. According to Zweig's analysis, Balzac was the first to succeed in this respect, and the second was Eugénie Grandet.

(1) see Steven Zweig's "Balzac" English translation, new york Viking publishing house 1946. (2) quoted from André Maurois's "Balzac Biography" on page 299, published by People's Literature Publishing House 1993.

(3) See Chapter 10 of the English version of Balzac by Steven Zweig, Balzac Discovers His Secret, published by new york Viking Publishing House 1946. Therefore, when Eugénie Grandet finished, Balzac was entering the mature stage of creation; His conception of "Madeleine Cathedral" is a sign of maturity.

Although it is not his grand plan in the later period of Human Comedy, at least the basic framework of Human Comedy has taken shape. Balzac has since found his real career and vocation: to describe the social customs of19th century truthfully like a historian.

Walking along this road, ten years later, he was finally so proud: "There are four great men in the world: Napoleon, Guy Ye Wei and O 'Connor, and I will be the fourth. The first man once had a great influence on Europe. He created an army! The second one knows the mystery of the earth! Third, become the embodiment of a nation! And I will put the whole society in my mind. "

(1)-"human comedy" preface. Quoted from André Maurois's Balzac Biography, page 36 1.

Perhaps Balzac himself didn't realize the important position of Eugénie Grandet in his whole creation. Balzac, who has always regarded himself as a thinker, always thinks that philosophical novels like Louis Lamber are far more valuable than "well-written bestsellers" (Balzac language) like Eugénie Grandet. But in fact, most of Balzac's philosophical novels, like the thinkers and artists who painstakingly explore the true meaning of the universe described in the book, are often defeated because of their excessive ambitions.

Steven Zweig once said fairly that Balzac's philosophical novels "did not reach the highest level of art, but only as the result of the highest breath." (1) "Louis Lamber died halfway, Grant the old man can live forever".

Indeed, Eugénie Grandet is one of Balzac's representative works, because it has its own aesthetic value. Among Balzac's works, Eugénie Grandet's works with simple structure and complete theme are really rare. If we read this novel as an ordinary novel, we may be frightened by the thirty-page description at the beginning of the novel.

But impatient readers must not skip it, because this long description is very important to the whole novel. Balzac took pains to describe the streets, houses, social conditions and human feelings of Somme, made a detailed historical and social analysis, and made an in-depth introduction to the life experience, family, living pattern and social relations of Old Grandet, all for the sake of being a novelist.

8. If you want to say the most respected teacher in a 600-word composition describing the appearance of a character, it is Mr. Hu Zhe. I thank the sunshine, which brings me warmth; I thank the clear spring, which brings me sweetness; I am even more grateful to my writing teacher, who gave me an encouraging smile. "Hang it all! Nonsense! " As soon as you heard this familiar word, you knew that our writing teacher had come.

My writing teacher's name is Hu Zhe. She is my writing teacher in normal school. He is neither tall nor young, but his hair is half white. He is also very careless about his clothes. He always wears blue cloth all the year round, which is in sharp contrast with other teachers. The most unforgettable thing is that he wears a pair of deep myopia glasses on his broad face and those forever deep eyes behind the glasses. His image is not good-looking, but he loves to laugh. When he smiled, he showed a pair of ugly big teeth, and the wrinkles on his face were folded into arhats. A mantra he often talks about is: "Hang it all".

That time, I don't know whether it was a feeling in my heart or a whim. I wrote an essay "When I am homesick". As a result, I was read by him in front of the whole class. He also said that this is a masterpiece with true feelings and originality, which attracted the envy of his classmates. I don't know which classmate is jealous, and secretly said, "Hum! This is plagiarism! " Unexpectedly, this sentence slipped into his ear. He glared at him and casually threw out a sentence: "Hang it all! Can you help me copy an article? " Then he turned his eyes to me, and the ugly smile on his face came again: "Tell me how you wrote this composition." Looking at the trusting eyes and smile on the teacher's face, I calmly expressed my homesickness since I moved in. The classroom was quiet, the students listened quietly, and the teacher seemed very excited. He kept nodding, and the smile on his face became more brilliant. The two ugly front teeth also involuntarily revealed their mouths. After I finished, he took the lead in applauding me, and kept saying, "True feelings are meaningful!" "It can be said that from then on, I loved writing more, and fell in love with Mr. Hu Zhe's class more. He also paid more attention to my guidance in writing.

Mr Hu Zhe likes to be angry and out of control. As long as his classmates make unforgivable mistakes, he flies into a rage and his voice can be heard for miles. His face flushed, and then he scolded mercilessly loudly: "What's the matter? Don't listen in class, homework is not completed, affecting the mood in class! Go back and think about it yourself! This is outrageous! How dare you! " In the next lecture, his tone was full of severity and his face was tight. But slowly, his voice softened a lot, his face returned to a smile, and his two front teeth could not help showing. He spoke in more detail, and from time to time he whispered, "Do you understand?" We know that it turns out that he is not really angry, but distracting us. So we answered loudly: "I understand!" He smiled more happily.

Writing teacher, I will always remember your sunny smile.