Describe the shape of a rabbit.

A docile lamb, a crowing rooster, a watchdog, an agile and lively white rabbit, a bird that can sing, a pigeon that can report news … So, how can we truly describe them? First of all, you must be familiar with them and observe them carefully. Only by careful observation can we describe it in detail. When observing, you can generally look at it from the aspects of appearance characteristics, activities and living habits. When writing, you should describe the observation results selectively, emphatically and methodically. Specifically, the description of small animals should pay attention to the following two points:

First, describe the appearance and activities.

To describe a small animal, we must first describe its appearance and carefully look at its head, tail, coat color, limbs, shape, characteristics and color. If you write a paragraph about puppies:

1 "On Sunday, I came back from my grandmother's house. On the bus, I saw an elder sister carrying a cute little black dog and a purple bag. The little black dog has a pair of triangular ears like fur on his head, which droops down gently, which is very interesting. Two round black eyes kept looking around. The round black nose looks like a fluffy ball. Mouth tightly closed, silent, more like a quiet boy!

I really like this little black dog lying in the bag. "

This exercise was written by a grade one pupil. Although the article is short, it is very comprehensive: time, place, description of animals, and love for yourself. All metaphors and embellishments are vivid and appropriate.

Then look at its life habits, how small animals eat, how to play, how to sleep, carefully observe and describe in detail. For example:

gosling

"Oh, oh, the goose is hatched! The gosling is out of its shell! " I clapped my hands and shouted happily, I like goslings best.

These newly hatched goslings are dripping with water and their fur is not good-looking, but their red feet interest me.

The next day, I let these little guys out to feed. Their hair is dry, golden and soft. Although their feet are still too soft to stand up, they are all very lively. When they put down the ground, they jumped on the ground like wrestling. How funny!

When the gosling sleeps, its small neck becomes shorter and its head covers it like velvet. They wake up easily, with light footsteps, open their eyes to see, and then go to sleep without sound.

More than ten days later, I just opened the lid of the goose cage and they were about to rush out. A gosling stood on another gosling and jumped out! Their hair began to turn white and their feet were not soft. I ran for food. I put some rice on the plate first, with two big leaves in my hand. Their mouths are sipping rice, but their eyes are fixed on my leaves. Vegetable leaves seem more delicious than rice. A gosling jumped up, took a sip and fell down! Make me laugh.

These little guys are very human. As soon as I got home, they ran around my feet, very affectionate. I often chat with them, and sometimes they will answer! Therefore, I regard geese as my friends.

The article vividly shows the hatching, eating, sleeping and temperament of goslings. The language is lively, clear, vivid and childlike, and there is affection between the author and Goose between the lines.

The description of small animals focuses on static description, describing the activities of small animals and focusing on dynamic description. According to the orderly observation and description from static to dynamic, small animals can be written clearly, meticulously and touching.

Please read the following composition:

monkey

I like monkeys best. I'm afraid they are the cleverest animals. When we approached them, a monkey stared at us with bright eyes. It looks strange: the small nose is concave, the upturned mouth squeaks, and the hair is not only bright but also black and yellow. Small ears stand upright, and two small claws scratch the scalp from time to time, which makes people laugh. I took out a piece of bread and threw it. Unexpectedly, it did not answer. It just touched it with its claws first, then shrank back and looked at me with its eyes. After a while, he grabbed the bread and wolfed it down. After eating, he looked at me imploringly, put his paw to what I wanted to eat, and I threw him another piece of candy. It quickly peeled off the candy paper and put it in its mouth to chew. After reading this composition, the cute image of the little monkey will be vividly displayed in front of us. Therefore, this touching effect is the result of careful observation and detailed description by young authors from two aspects: static appearance and dynamic living habits.

When describing the appearance, the composition first summarizes the overall impression with the phrase "looks very strange", and then describes its concave nose, protruding mouth, black and yellow coat color and scratching claws in turn. After reading this, we will definitely have a good impression on the little monkey. Then he changed a pen and wrote about the little monkey eating bread. The author threw it a piece of bread. The little monkey first "missed", just "felt it with his claws" and looked at me with his eyes. Finally, his step-by-step description of "wolfing down" is detailed and concrete, which has a touching effect and truly shows people the cuteness of the little monkey.

We use an outline to express the idea of this composition: Monkey: 1. Appearance: 1, summary-looks weird; 2, idiosyncratic-nose, small mouth, trade color, ears; Second, living habits: grab bread.

By reading the original text and the outline, you can better understand the thinking and writing order of this article. You can learn the methods of observation and layout from it.

Second, you should write your love in your composition.

Writing is to write your own heart by hand. Write your emotions. We love small animals, and when describing them, we should also use a pen to fuse our favorite feelings between the lines. Let readers feel our affection as soon as they read the text.

There are also various ways to express feelings: sometimes the appearance and shape of small animals are described in detail, and their feelings are integrated into them; Sometimes express feelings directly with concise sentences; Sometimes these two methods can be used interchangeably. The writing is flexible and eclectic.

Please read the following composition:

Frog preys

I like frogs very much. In summer, I often go to the pond to see frogs.

Frogs like to hide in the grass and bark occasionally. The happiest time for them to call is after the heavy rain. Whenever one barks at this time, the next one will bark with it. Dozens or even hundreds of frogs croak non-stop, and the sound can spread to miles away, much like a magnificent symphony!

Frogs are chubby, and some are seven or eight centimeters long. They are dressed in yellow-green or dark green clothes, showing their white bellies. Their heads are wide and flat, like a triangle. Its head has a pair of big round eyes, a big mouth and a small nose.

Frogs like to eat small insects. It's interesting to watch them hunt. One day, I squatted quietly behind the big tree by the pond and observed it carefully. A frog squatted on the ground, with his mouth open and his face upturned, waiting for something. Suddenly, a bug flew over and saw the frog suddenly jump up, hook its tongue and fall to the ground again. The bug disappeared, and the frog returned to its original appearance and waited patiently.

Frogs are really experts in catching insects. Listen to the farmer's uncle: you calculate that a frog can kill at least 10 thousand pests a year. Really our good friends!

This composition is about "frog's prey", which is slightly different from the previous article "monkey": this composition summarizes the center of the full text with the sentence "I like frogs very much", and then writes the frog's singing, appearance and insect catching scene in turn. The context is clear and the paragraphs are clear.

So, how does the author of this composition express his feelings?

At the beginning of the article, I first used the phrase "I love frogs very much" to express the author's feelings and his love. Then I used "often" to see frogs in the pond, which shows the author's "love" for frogs. When he heard the frog cry, the author thought it was like "a magnificent symphony!" " "There are not many sentences, but the frog's cry is loud and beautiful, from which we also feel how deep the author's feelings for frogs are! Why does the author have such deep feelings for frogs? Because frogs can catch at least "10 thousand pests" a year, this is also the reason why the author loves frogs. Finally, the author said with emotion: "Frog" is really our good friend. At the end, the pen is powerful and the emotional expression is true.

"Although there are rules to follow, there is no fixed method." There is no way to write about small animals. Only by mastering a basic writing method and using it flexibly can we truly and vividly describe our favorite small animals.

Description of small animals should also pay attention to:

1. Focus. Describing a small animal is like writing a composition with other contents. It is impossible to cover everything, and it will go on like a "running account", so we must highlight the key points. Some can focus on the appearance of small animals, and some can focus on the habits of small animals. No matter how you write, you should grasp the typical, highlight the key points and describe them in detail.

2. Describe it in detail. To describe any kind of small animal, we should describe it in detail and portray it in detail. No matter how you write about your appearance or your living habits, you can't just draw a few strokes and summarize them. Especially when describing the living habits of small animals, we should pay attention to the accurate use of verbs, reproduce the activities of small animals, and give people the feeling of "things in front of us"

3. Be organized. Describing small animals is the same as writing other compositions. You can't write one sentence east and one sentence west, which is lack of discipline. Think about what to say first, then think about what to say, and then think about what to say before you start writing. How to connect sentences and how to connect levels. How to start, how to end, and how to combine the whole article. Think about this before you start writing, so that the article can be organized and structured.

Beautiful sentences

Rabbit's ears are big and long. As long as it hears a slight sound, it will "swish" and turn around deftly, looking for the place where the sound comes, until the sound is gone, it will return to normal.

When the rabbits were full, they ran around the sand in groups of three, rolling around like little snowballs.

Xiaohua Mall's head is round, and he has a pair of small, pointed ears. His big green eyes stare like two small green lights.

The big ears of kitten Mimi stand on end all day. Wherever there is sound, turn there immediately, just like a radar with special performance.

The cat has black spots on a white background. From a distance, it looks like a mass of white cotton with a few drops of ink on it.

The kitten has a herringbone mouth under its nose and six white beards on both sides, often one by one, which is quite impressive. A cat's beard is very hard. Like a steel needle, it can measure the size of a hole.

The long tail of the little black cat swings from side to side like a small whip.

Kittens have bright and flexible eyes, and their black pupils will change: they wake up in the morning like a jujube pit; At noon, it becomes a thin line; At night, it will turn into two green light bulbs, round and bright.

Xiaohua Mall got up in the morning and stretched himself, then sat up, licked a little spit on the tip of the tongue with his two front paws, washed his face like a human, and licked his fur with his tongue until he got a little light.

The little dog was covered with golden fur and shiny as if it had just been oiled.

This innocent and lovely poodle has a small black tail that swings like a ball.

That little black dog, with shiny black hair, is as shiny and smooth as black satin; Snow-white claws, like four plum blossoms; That little upturned tail is always swinging leisurely.

Black dog doesn't growl or bark, like a warrior with great status, dignified and sophisticated, squatting there motionless, correcting the long hair on his chest.

The dog's bark is not as weak as the cat's Mimi, nor as horrible as the tiger's bark, but full of gas, which makes people sound magnificent and crisp.

This big fat pig has a round ass and a big belly. Because of too much fat, it has to walk slowly, like a gentleman with a big shelf.

When the pig eats, its ears flap like a big fan, its head twitches and its eyes stare at the food.

After eating, the pig obediently walked into the circle, lying lazily, humming twice from time to time, looking satisfied. This horse, with black hair and red hair, is shiny and shiny, as if it had just jumped out of the oil tank.

This bordeaux horse, with its long mane, runs like a hoof without touching the ground.

Every part of this big horse is so well coordinated, and every muscle shows strength, which makes people feel so soft and fit at first sight.

In an instant, "a thousand miles of snow" rose smoothly into the air, flew over the deep ditch like gliding, landed gently on the other side and continued to run forward.

The little donkey is so cute, with black eyes going round and round, like a deer.

"Gung-da, gung-da, gung-da ..." The hoofbeat of the donkey was even and monotonous, like the weight of a wall clock swinging. The mule lifted its head back, and the red tassel on the leather halter looked like the brilliant red cockscomb in the autumn rain.

These cows are black and white, as if wearing cotton-padded jackets.

The cow's eyes are as big as two bells, and its two horns are bright in blue, especially its yellow hair, which is as bright as silk.

Black cow has a violent temperament, eyes as big as table tennis, red as flames, and two sharp horns on his head, as sharp as blades.

Snow-white sheep are scattered on the green grassland like flowers, clouds and holy Hada.

Sheep wandering on the grassland are like piles of rolling silver.

The snowstorm became more and more fierce, and the sheep rolled like cotton balls.

Camels from other peaks slowly move forward in the lonely smoke of the desert, sailing in the sea like boats, braving the wind and waves. Camels have double eyelashes. When the wind blows into Shi 'an, the double eyelashes are like guards, blocking the sand from blowing into the eyes.

Sunbird's mouth is very strange, like an awl, sharp and long, slightly curved.

The sun came out and shone on the feather of a bird named Huang Chengcheng. It turned golden all over, just like the mythical golden-winged bird. In the forest, the noise of birds seems to be playing a never-ending movement, and even the trembling leaves seem to be singing.

Goldfinches sing, jump and sometimes beat time, like a group of tireless children, adding more interest to this quiet villa.

Birds in this forest have various colors and tones. Listen, tenors, alto, coarse voiced and fine voiced singers of all genres and tones hold singing competitions here.

Peacock's small head looks like a few jade flowers, and the unfolded color screen looks like a huge feather fan with black rings, black, green and yellow, like countless big eyes.

I saw a peacock wagging its tail loudly. That beautiful tail is like a colorful fan in the fairy's hand, spreading slowly, and like a bright pearl sprinkled on it, which is very beautiful.

Peacock flies like a beautiful green colorful cloud, floating on the top of the mountain.

I saw the peacock's long feathers dragging behind its tail straighten up and form a circle, like a colorful umbrella and a round satin.

Pride is like a peacock, like a green gauze gongshan, and those eye spots on the tail feathers reflect brilliance, like countless small mirrors.

There are surprisingly many peacocks there. Roadside and the wild, in groups of three or five, like a beautiful woman dragging a long emerald skirt, not avoiding people wandering around at all.

The swans paddled the lake with pink soles and swam forward. There are ripples on the lake. From a distance, it is like a white sailboat swaying in the water, and it is like a white cloud in the sky reflected on the water.

The white swan paddles on the green lake with its red flippers and swings like a model boat.

Swan's white porcelain-smooth feathers, without a trace of impurities, will roll down as a whole like a mass of thick ink, without touching a bit.

A pair of snow-white swans are floating on the water, like two giant Bai Lianhua.

On the lake, when swans spread their wide wings, they beat the water with their wings, just like a ship with leaves and sails. On the wide lake, flocks of white swans are wandering leisurely, like white sheep floating in the wind.

The lake is calm, the water is clear to the bottom, the mountains and rivers blend, and the whiteness seems to be in a fairyland.

Swan sometimes holds its neck high and looks like a general; Sometimes it's more elegant than a fairy to raise your neck and bow your head.

When the crane spreads its beautiful wings and dances, its slender legs and graceful dancing are like outstanding "ballet masters".

The red-crowned crane flying in the air, like a budding reed flower, landed gently and slowly in the swamp.

Crane is a born dancer. Their heads are bright red, their necks are slender, their feathers are white, their legs are slender, they are really beautiful, their manners are chic and their spirits are elegant.

The red-crowned crane has a bright red crown on its snow-white head, like a dazzling ruby embedded in a platinum crown.

Cranes always stand high, look around with their necks straight, and often stand for a long time. Therefore, people often use "stand out from the crowd" and "full moon crane" to describe the graceful gesture of looking around in drama and dance.

During long-distance flight, cranes often form a "V" shape or a "Y" shape. From a distance, you are on cloud nine, showing a relaxed and natural charm.

A flock of wild ducks are dark and bright on the water, and their feathers float like clusters of garlands in the afterglow of the sunset.

These wild ducks have golden heads, sparkling eyes and a circle of gray feathers around their necks, just like every wild duck wears a pearl collar.

Wild ducks float leisurely, fall into the bottom of the water for a while, and stand on the waves for a while, like children on swings.

There are several wild ducks cruising on the lake in the distance, just like a small warship controlled by radio, which is heroic and magnificent.

The brightly colored pheasant, with its head held high, came out of the grass nest like a proud general.

The golden rooster's feathers are colorful and shiny, just like wearing a luxurious big dress.

The golden rooster stands in the sun with open wings, just like the phoenix rising in the sun, all over Jin Liang and Jin Liang, which is very beautiful.

Golden Rooster has a well-proportioned figure and vigorous feet. Huang Guan has a golden "collar" around his neck and a golden shawl over his shoulders.

The male mandarin duck has gorgeous feathers, a brown back, a white belly, a crest on the top of her head and long white eyebrows behind her eyes, as if she had just put on makeup.

In the reed pond, mandarin ducks often stretch their necks and spread their wings to beat the water. Pairs of colorful and dazzling mandarin ducks play, chase and paddle side by side in the water, and sometimes make a low and gentle cry of "goo-goo-goo-goo", as if lovers are whispering.

The body structure of geese is very similar to that of ships, with webbed feet, like two paddles. The flat mouth has a serrated gap, which is convenient for cutting off the tender leaves and young stems of plants and washing away the roots and seeds of aquatic plants.

A flock of geese cooed and flew south, forming a word "person" for a while and a word "one" for a while. Rows of geese, like a victorious team, spread their wings and fly south, echoing each other and marching forward.

The geese flapped their wings in the glow and flew leisurely out of the grass. They lined up and flew into the sky, like soldiers going to war, shouting and singing, and their voices were full of the belief of winning.

The geese form a neat herringbone, and their goal is to fly forward in quick march. They shouted loudly in the sky, as if solemnly announcing that their team was neat and clear-cut.

Kingfisher's head feathers are like olive headscarves, embroidered with emerald patterns, her back feathers are like light green spring clothes, and her belly feathers are like auburn shirts.

A kingfisher suddenly flew out of the willows, skimming over the water and flying to another bush. Its beautiful feathers stole everyone's eyes.

Teaching preparation:

1. Students observe small animals before class. 2. The teacher searches for information about animals.

Emphasis and difficulty in teaching: guide students to grasp the characteristics of animals and write. Show the video of Animal World first and introduce a new lesson.

1, Question: Are animals in the animal world interesting? What animals are there and what do they look like?

Summary: The students introduced so many small animals in the video. Now let's talk about the animals we saw before class.

Second, make a request to speak. Say whatever animals you like, and grasp the characteristics of animals to make the words smooth and coherent.

Third, students voluntarily combine and practice oral English in groups. Students who like the same kind of small animals voluntarily form a group to talk about what kind of small animals they like, and then talk about its shape. Each group recommends members and talks about their favorite animals. (1) Tell me about animals. What are the characteristics of eyes and ears?

Second, examples lead the way and guide writing. Click on the courseware: ① Squirrel is a beautiful little animal. Its delicate little face is embedded with a pair of shiny little eyes. A set of taupe hair, as smooth as oil. A big furry tail always sticks up and looks very beautiful. (Note: Write the beautiful appearance of the squirrel first, and then write the beautiful appearance in the order of head, body and tail. A black feather, smooth and beautiful, a pair of handsome and light wings and a pair of scissors-like tails make up such a lively and lovely swallow. (Note: Dotted words make swallows look vivid. )

Please adopt it in time! Thank you (Haneda Gates)