Why do people listen to me and tell me that they think my logic is poor? How can you tell?

There should be a sequence in speaking. For example, when you tell someone something, you always say who it is first, and then where it is. Besides, if you use four sentences to express the meaning that could have been expressed in two sentences, and others still don't understand it, then you are really poor in logic. In fact, when we speak, we should all have a whole idea in our minds. We should think about what to say next and what its purpose is in one sentence. Of course, we usually say a lot of things casually, which is a habitual expression. Besides, even if we are joking, we are sometimes particular. I hope that through these words, you can get to know something. Good luck!