Letter from home Hu Kai read the answer.

1. From the economic situation, what kind of family do you think Uncle Yan's family is? Where do you see it?

a: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

a: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ What's stuck in his heart?

a: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Finally, Uncle Yan asked Ju to change the letter from home into just six words. Why? Try to make an analysis.

a: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Try to talk about your views from two aspects.

a: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ As can be seen from the following narrative description: Ju wrote a letter by digging out two pieces of draft paper from her schoolbag and using a ballpoint pen with a split pen; The money that Ju's brother wants needs to be collected before it can be sent. Last year's debt was just paid off; Ju was reluctant to use the pen awarded by the school; Relief clothes were distributed at home; After writing three letters, there is no paper.

2. Ju's brother's letter is very short. He only says that he needs money, and he doesn't go home for the New Year. He doesn't ask anything about his family, his parents and his sister. It can be seen that his family is weak and indifferent to his family and family situation.

3. The son's indifference to his family makes him unacceptable.

4. This reflects their deep affection, and I hope Ju's brother can share their happiness and study with peace of mind. Uncle Yan expressed dissatisfaction with his son's indifference in this way.

5. (1) The writing method of comparison is used. For example, the contrast between indifferent short messages and long letters full of affection; The comparison between the excitement before opening the letter and the disappointment after opening it.

(2) express the emotions of the characters through language, action and manner. For example, chrysanthemum jumped into the door like a sparrow and shouted, "letter from brother." Uncle Yan took the letter and handed it to Ju: "Open it quickly and read it." Ju Niang got the message, put her hands under her apron and smiled.

(3) Describe expressions through details. For example, "Ju carefully opened the letter and took out a thin piece of paper." "Carefully" means that Ju takes the letter very seriously; "A thin piece of paper" means that there is very little content in the letter. Another example is "a red little hand holding a ballpoint pen with a cracked pen" and "a cracked pen", which shows that the family is not rich and very frugal.

(4) The language is implicit and intriguing. There is not a word in the whole article that clearly shows the author's point of view, but the critical attitude towards Ju's brother is contained between the lines. Both the beginning and the end emphasize "a thin piece of paper", suggesting that Ju's brother is weak in affection. The second letter is changed to six words, which is even more intriguing, and Uncle Yan's dissatisfaction is contained in it.

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① This article organizes materials around the plot changes of things and the emotional changes of family members to "letters from home". Please follow the following tips to finish combing the plot and emotions of the article.

(1). Plot change: receiving a letter from my son-()-discussing and replying-()

(2). Emotional change: joy-()-enthusiasm-()

(2). What kind of inner world can we get a glimpse of my son from a letter with less than 3 words?

③. Please point out a detailed description in the article and tell its function.

Answer:

1. (1) Rewrite the letter from my son. (2) Disappointed and dissatisfied.

2. Selfishly forget the care of his family, and don't care about others, so it's difficult to stay at home.

3. You can try this and analyze it from three details: (1) My sister is holding a ballpoint pen with a cracked pen. (2) It is not enough for my father to drain the wine. (3) Get relief clothes.

By describing the details of my sister holding a ball-point pen with a cracked pen, we can see the hardships of her life, and also show the strength of holding the pen through the word "holding", showing the image of a hard-working and earnest student.