Dad, I want to tell you about the composition of the fourth grade.

In study, work or life, when it comes to writing, everyone is certainly familiar with it. Writing needs a complete text structure, and it is necessary to avoid an endless composition. Then the question comes, how to write an excellent composition? The following is arranged by my father. I want to tell you the composition of the fourth grade, hoping to help you.

Dad, I want to tell you the fourth grade composition 1 Dad, you are a house, sheltering us from the wind and rain; Dad, you are a happy gift, which brings us many surprises and joys; Dad, you are the sunshine, shining and warming me; Dad, you are a sharp axe. Give up all my bad habits. Dad, I have a lot to say to you in my heart. Although I don't have a palace-like mansion, I have a warm and happy home.

Dad, whenever I see sweat on your weather-beaten face, I can imagine how hard your work is. Go to work no matter how tired you are. When it's windy and rainy, you always go to work against the wind and rain. Your hands are getting rough. Sometimes your hand will get hurt at work. I don't know how many times. After the wound is healed, you will leave many scars on your hands. Dad, I want to say one more thing: you have worked hard!

Dad, whenever I fall asleep, you will come to my room, look at me kindly, touch my face with your rough hands and then kiss my forehead. Every time I think about it, tears will slowly roll down.

Dad, whenever I get sick and have a fever, your severity will be full of heartache and pain. You hold my little hand with warm big hands and look at me with nervous eyes. Every time I recover, I will secretly swear in my heart: I will never get sick again!

Dad, this love you gave me is like a fire, igniting the hope of the soul; This love is like a shade, covering the hot sun; This love is like rain and dew, nourishing the seedlings. Dad, I want to say to you: in my heart, you will always be the best father in the world!

Dad, I want to tell you that when the stars have blinked in a daze, they want to have a rest; The moon is lying down, ready to sleep. I should be lying in bed, but I still have a lot of ideas, because today, I heard grandma tell a story about your childhood:

You knew how to respect your elders when you were still in kindergarten. Once, you were reluctant to eat fish in kindergarten, and you thought of grandma. So, I secretly put the fish in my pocket and braved the cold snowstorm for several days to bring the "fish" home step by step. When you get home, your face has been flushed by the wind. When you took out the "fish" in front of the whole family, the disappointing guy had already been crushed into "fish fillets" The whole family laughed their heads off, and grandma laughed the happiest and shed tears of happiness.

Dad, your respect for your elders is a true portrayal of my life's study and the best portrayal of the quality of China people. I will learn from you and let the traditional virtues of the Chinese nation be carried forward in our generation.

Dad, you are not only filial to your elders, but also good to me. Although you are very busy at work and can't do anything outside of work for almost a second, you still care about me so much. I remember once, in the middle of the night, I suddenly had a high fever. You picked me up and ran to the hospital without saying anything. However, even the nearest hospital has a long way to go. When I got to the hospital, your shortness of breath echoed in my ears for a long time.

Dad, you care so much about me that I can't repay you all my life. I can only study hard, finish my homework carefully, try to get into a good middle school, and give you and your mother the most satisfactory return with the best grades in the last year of primary school. Dad, I also want to tell you that you are almost 40 years old, so you must pay attention to your health no matter how busy you are at work. I am growing up slowly, and I will create the future by my own efforts. You and mom don't have to worry too much about me. You should have a good rest, be happy and live a happy life. This is what I want most.

Dad, I want to tell you Grade 4 Composition 3 Dad: I know you are strict with me for my own good, but you always compare me with others, which makes me very uncomfortable.

Once you sent me to learn the piano. I heard that others played it skillfully, but I played it intermittently. You said fiercely, "I told you to practice more at home, but you didn't listen to me." I wanted to explain to you, but then you said, "What's the use of playing the piano like this? Wasted 1 0,000 yuan. Get familiar with it. " Say that finish, you turn around and leave, don't listen to my explanation, tears in your eyes, feel very wronged. This is my first time to learn this song, while another student has been learning it for a month.

Another time, you helped me correct my Chinese homework. There are many mistakes, and the handwriting is ugly. You called me to the table and angrily yelled at me, "There are so many mistakes, and the handwriting is still so ugly, crooked, big and small." That's ridiculous. Please correct it quickly. " I corrected it and showed it to you, but you still said discontentedly, "Oh, look at what others wrote!" " "Say, you show me your mobile phone. It's a sentence sent by the teacher to your classmates. Very beautiful. " You should learn more from others. Others have many skills that you can't! "I only know how to play, and I have no enthusiasm at all."

Dad, I know you are eager to love your daughter and hope that I can achieve something when I grow up, but can you not compare me with others? I have been listening to you very hard, but you can't see my little progress. I hope you're not too impatient. Please accompany me to grow up and make progress slowly. I will certainly live up to your expectations.

Dad, I want to tell you about the composition of the fourth grade. Dad, in these ten years, I have a lot to say to you. The most important thing is: "Dad, you have worked hard!" " "

You've done too much for this family. Get up early every day to earn money and come back to cook at noon. Have a quick meal and then go out. Sometimes I don't come back until after ten o'clock in the evening, and sometimes I can't attend to lunch. You should not only be busy making a living, but also teach me to write and tell me what not to do. Dad, you have worked hard!

I remember when I was seven years old, I watched TV at home after dinner. At that time, it was already past eight o'clock, and my mother went to Yinchuan for training and didn't go home yet. I have been watching TV because I am too timid to sleep alone. At nine o'clock, ten o'clock, eleven o'clock ... suddenly, I heard the sound of opening the door and thought, you are finally back! So he ran to open the door. I was surprised when I opened the door. You stood outside the door so tired that you could hardly open your eyes. Looking at your old appearance, my tears have been spinning in my eyes.

Another time, you were rarely free. At that time, I was doing my homework, and you were just about to fall asleep, but I said to you, "Dad, help me see how to do this problem?" You must summon up the courage to give me a lesson. You taught me many methods. Just when I started writing, I found you asleep beside me. I'm sorry to see you tired. I really shouldn't have called you out. I should let you have a good rest. I realized how difficult it is to be an adult and how difficult it is.

Dad, you are the first teacher in my life. You taught me to write, you explained many difficult problems to me, and you taught me a lot about being a man. Dad, you have worked hard!

Dad, I want to tell you Grade Four Composition 5 Dear Dad:

Hello!

Dad, do you remember the last time you drank? If you forget, I'll tell you again!

Last time, we went to a wedding reception together. At that time, my aunt got married, you and my uncle sat together, and you drank the wine in the cup after cup. I ran over and told you over and over again, "stop drinking, stop drinking, you have to drive home!" " "However, you and your uncle have always said, nothing, today is your aunt's wedding. What a happy event! Be happy, drink more, drink more, it doesn't matter. "Say, you drank a full cup again. My heart is anxious and angry: why is dad like this? We agreed not to drink too much, but now, dad, how many drinks have you had? You don't keep your word, huh! Besides, neither my mother nor I can drive a battery car. How can we go back in the future? What to do, what to do, hey-

After 9 o'clock, the wedding finally ended. You staggered out of your seat as if you would fall to the ground the next second. You can walk unsteadily, but you still insist on driving. My mother and I tried everything to stop you, but you still insisted on doing so. Along the way, you ride your car, I sit in the front and my mother sits in the back. You drive like crazy, as if you were racing with others and overtaking several motorcycles in a row. My mother and I were scared out of our wits, but you hummed a ditty all the way, speeding up, and almost hit someone several times. I was really worried and accidentally threw us all off the bus.

When I got home, I was still absent-minded, immersed in that terrible experience just now, and you have vomited all over the floor, which smells terrible. Mom just cleaned up that pile of things, and you threw up again. After a while, you stopped vomiting and went to bed and fell asleep, which made me and my mother miserable!

Dad, bad drinking will not only harm your health, but also affect people around you. Dad, I hope you can quit this bad habit and stop drinking!

hope

Good health!

Dad, I want to tell you that I have a lot to say to you in my heart. I am honored that I have a loving father, and I am proud that I have a warm home, although it is not as luxurious as a palace.

When I was a child, I always thought my father was a symbol of severity. My father cut off all my bad habits like a sharp axe. For example, when I write a composition, my head is low and my waist is not straight. Please ask my father to correct me. You know I like reading, so you bought me all kinds of books, including story books and composition books. My writing level is getting better and better because of reading story books. I know you asked me to keep a diary to improve my writing. As long as you bring me back from a trip, let me write a composition about the trip, no less than 500 words. You still want me to copy two pages of good words and sentences every day. Now I know more and more words, and I can apply them to my composition. You bought a learning machine for me to learn, and soon you knew that computers could learn, so you bought another computer. Dad, you work hard for my study. I want to say, "Thank you, Dad."

Dad, unlike other people's parents, you seldom play for your children. As long as I finish my homework when I want to play, I can play. You don't watch TV because you are afraid of my myopia. Dad, I want to say, "that's very kind of you."

Every time I see sweat on your weather-beaten face, I can imagine how hard you are working. Go to work no matter how tired you are. When it's windy and rainy, you always go to work against the wind and rain. Your hands are getting rough. Sometimes your hand has been hurt at work. I don't know how many times. After the injury, you left many scars on your hands, but I like my father's fatigue. I'll give you a back rub. Your hands are rough. I will give you a massage. Dad, I want to say, "You have worked hard."

Dad, this love you gave me is like a fire, igniting the hope of the soul; This love is like a shade, blocking the hot sun; This love is like rain and dew, nourishing the seedlings; This love is like a street lamp, illuminating our way forward. Dad, I want to say to you: "You will always be the best father in my heart!" " "

Dad, I want to tell you that dad is you, and you gave me confidence in studying, courage in life, motivation for a better future, anger and strong motivation. But, dad, for your health and safety, I want to tell you-don't drink any more. Since the Spring Festival, we have found that you have an ear problem and need an operation. The cause of the disease is that you drink too much wine. In recent years, you kept it from us, thinking that the disease could last for one year, two years and three years. You just told us because you really can't stand it, but, dad, you can't stand it. Early treatment is a point, otherwise it will cause you great disaster. If I knew you, I would have told me earlier, otherwise it wouldn't have caused such a big problem.

Do you know that?/You know what? How worried I was about you when you were in surgery. I think in class. I didn't listen to a word in class and didn't play after class. I've been thinking: has dad finished the operation? How is dad now? One question after another is flying in my mind, my heart is burning, and there is a trace of worry on my face for fear that something will happen to my father. I frowned. When I got home, my grandmother said you were all right. When my eyes lit up, it was like grass getting water, like bees getting pollen, like a bright lamp, and my heart finally changed from worry to rest assured. However, before long, something similar happened again. After you left the hospital, the doctor said you couldn't drink for six months. My mother told me that we will supervise you together and won't let you drink! It won't be long before you can't help it. At night, I watch you pour your cup with your cup. I quickly ran over, holding your hand in one hand, looking into your eyes and saying,&; Qut can't drink &; qut。 Dad smiled at me. Qut, it's okay to drink less &; qut。 In a few months, you will have another operation. I really hope you don't make mistakes again and cherish your health. Dad, stop drinking.

Dad, I want to tell you that people say that maternal love is great, but I think fatherly love is even greater.

I remember once, when I was doing my homework at home, I felt hot and sleepy, and my hand with a pen became weak. You saw it when you were sitting reading. You came over and touched my forehead and said, "Gee, it's really hot. Probably a fever. " As he spoke, he ran anxiously with a thermometer, took my temperature and said, "Sure enough, I have a fever, 39 degrees!" " "You are like a cat on hot bricks. Let me put on thick clothes and drink more water ... because of your careful care, my cold is much better. Before going to bed, you take a cup of soaked medicine, bring a spoon full of medicine to my mouth and slowly pour it into my mouth. In a flash, I felt a warm current flowing all over my body, and your concern with a little anxious eyes made me unforgettable. I still feel a little uncomfortable when I sleep at night, so I can't sleep when I fall down on the bed. And you, dad, sat by my bed silently guarding me and giving me a massage, saying that this would relieve my illness. But I don't know your hard work and fatigue. You need to drink water when you are thirsty, and you need to add a quilt when you are too cold. But you still insist on not sleeping, for fear that my temperature will rise again at night. After a while, I was awakened by thirst again. When I quietly opened my eyes, you were already sitting by my bed, with your hand on my quilt and falling asleep. Looking at your tired appearance, I can't bear to wake you up anymore. ...

Dad, you took good care of me when I was sick; It was you who took pains to take care of me when I was sick; When I was sick, you took care of me all night. Dad, you have worked hard!

Dad, I want to tell you that dad is here and I want to say I'm sorry. Every time I yell at you, I always refuse to talk to you. And dad, you are so kind and smile at me, but I always ignore it.

I remember that time, I yelled at you just because you didn't cook my favorite food. My mother sitting in the room heard my tone towards you and couldn't bear it. She came out and said, "Do you have a sense of proportion? He is your father. " Even so, my willful expectation has not been put down, and I will answer you: "He doesn't love me at all. Is he still my father?" He doesn't deserve it "At this moment, my mother slapped me in the face and my heart was broken. Dad couldn't stand it anymore and said, "What are you doing? Why did the child hit her when she was so young? Really! "This time, you touched my face and asked me if it hurt. I pushed your hand away with my hand and ran out. It was raining cats and dogs, and my weak body was torn to pieces by the rain.

At this time, you come after me. I ran faster when I saw you coming. Suddenly a car rushed in front of me and thought I was coming. You threw me aside recklessly, but you were hit by a car. At that moment, I was really awake, completely awake. A few days later, you almost recovered, but because of the car accident, you lost your legs because of me. Although I regretted it at that time, I kept it in my heart and didn't say it.

Today, I want to take the opportunity of writing a composition to say to my father, "Dad, I'm sorry. It was my fault before, and I won't be so capricious again. Dad, I love you!" " "

Dad, I want to tell you the fourth grade composition 10 Dear Dad:

Hello!

Father's Day is coming, and I want to talk to you from the heart.

Dad, I want to tell you that I appreciate your strict demands on me. Once upon a time, you were a tiger in my eyes. Whenever I don't listen, whenever I dawdle on my homework, I'm afraid that you will stare at me severely and scold me with a high-pitched voice. I used to hope that your company would work overtime and that you would mind my own business, but today I want to say to you, "Thank you, Dad, your strictness made me get good grades, and your strict requirements made me get certificates and medals!" " Every night, as long as you have time, you always teach me to read words again and again, tell me the text word by word, and help me analyze math problems. You also contributed to the successful promotion to the Olympic Mathematical Contest this time. For the erhu I practiced since I was a child, you tirelessly urged and inspired me. In front of certificates and awards, I saw a little tear in your eyes.

Dad, I want to tell you that I appreciate your concern for my life. It's cold, you help me cover the quilt at night; When it is hot, you help me repel mosquitoes. You can cook many dishes that I like, especially the "Zhang's noodle fish" that makes my mouth water. After I wolfed down, you happily "shared" my leftovers.

Dad, I want to say thank you for teaching me to be a man and do things. I admire you, you are the man in my heart. A few days ago, a student at school got mumps. In order to disinfect the classroom, the teacher asked the students who could take the induction cooker. At that time, many students raised their hands and said they would bring them. When I got home, I told you about it, and you readily agreed that you should be honest. As a result, I was the only one who brought the induction cooker the next day. The teacher praised me for keeping my word and having a heart to serve my classmates collectively. Dad, you let me establish prestige in front of my classmates and set an example of honesty and trustworthiness for them.

Dad, you are my "first teacher", my "guide" and my "bosom friend"!

Father's Day is coming. I sincerely wish you health and happiness forever!

I am here to convey

Salute!

Your son Zhang Keji

20 12 may 23rd

Dad, I want to tell you the fourth grade composition 1 1 Dad, I have a lot of heartfelt words to tell you. Today, I will open my heart and speak freely!

Dad, you don't care much about me in my study. My mother is checking my homework, occasionally, when my mother is not at home. I know, you are very busy at work, so you can't put all your thoughts on your work. You should also check my math homework when you come back this afternoon!

Dad, you must not be fascinated by the "game demon". I don't mind playing games occasionally, but it doesn't mean that I can't shout without dinner! Last time we all finished eating, you were still playing games, and your mother came to call you, and you still thought she was wordy. Finally, you finish playing that game before eating. There is not much food, and the food is cold. You also blame us for eating all the food and not leaving it for you. Then, I take my meal back to my dormitory and play games.

Dad, can you be gentle? The last time our family was eating, somehow my tears came out. Suddenly, you have a "volcanic eruption" and your face begins to turn from sunny to cloudy to red. Then you pulled me aside and began to "thunder and lightning", which made me cry. I know you have a lot of trouble at work. But please don't bring your troubles at work home! Now you have made great progress in this respect!

Dad, whenever I encounter difficulties, you are always the most anxious, do you remember? That time, I accidentally fell into the sewer. Fortunately, several pipes caught me and didn't fall. My blood flowed out of my head ... I vaguely saw you pick me up quickly and run to the nearby hospital. You hold me and go upstairs to the brain department. You were in such a hurry that you ran so fast that you almost didn't trip. Looking at your anxious face, tears welled up in my eyes.

Dad, I still have a lot to say to you. I hope you can get rid of these shortcomings!

Dad, I want to tell you, Dad, that you gave me comfort when I was sad, courage when I was afraid, and encouragement when I failed. Dad, I want to say to you: "I love you!" " "You always treat my study meticulously. Because I sometimes do my homework a little slowly, so you read my homework carefully every day and set a time for each item. As soon as I exceed the time, you take my homework severely. No matter how much I cry, you just won't let me finish the rest so that I can learn a lesson. In order to finish my homework, I write as soon as I get home every day, trying to do it quickly and well.

After a long time, I can write faster. In fact, I have long wanted to thank you. Every time I make progress, it is your persistence that makes me grow rapidly. Dad, you are still very patient. I remember when I was a child, I couldn't jump rope well. Seeing that other children can jump twenty or thirty times, I can only jump five or six times. Looking at the progress of my companions, I was so anxious that I cried. You know, just training me to jump rope every night. I danced badly at first, far worse than usual. I thought you would criticize me, but I was wrong. You just calmly came over with a glass of water and gently said to me, "Never mind, practice hard!" " "After listening to your words, I am full of strength and confidence, and I began to practice again. After practicing day after day, I can finally dance more skillfully. Dad, thank you for your patience and making me happy. Dad, that's very kind of you.

I remember going to summer camp in the third grade. The first night, I was homesick and tossed and turned in bed. I couldn't sleep, so I called you secretly. When I talk to you, my voice is in tears. You comforted me on the other end of the phone, "Don't be afraid, it will pass in a while!" " I wiped my tears and promised to reassure you. In the next few days, whenever I feel homesick, I will think of my father's words and my sadness will gradually disappear. Dad, thank you for your warm words to make me happy. Dad, you have done so much for me. I will live up to your expectations and try to be a useful person to society!

Dad, I want to tell you about the fourth grade composition 13. First of all, I think you are a good father on the whole. Willing to catch cricket with me in summer and take me to exercise in the big sun, which an ordinary father can't do. But sometimes, you are not so patient and gentle with me.

I remember that it was the third grade last semester, and my mother was checking my basic daily exercises. Because the knowledge I learned at that time was not difficult, plus the topic that was easy to explode, I had a well-thought-out plan. But at this time, you inserted a sentence: "Even if this kind of topic is wrong, you have to play' du chestnuts'." Hearing this, I felt a tingle all over. I quickly grabbed my exercise book, read the questions I could work out carefully several times, and checked them three or five times-I don't want to be beaten by you, you know, no one likes to be beaten.

I checked it several times and found no mistakes before I put my heart back in my stomach. My mother started reading my homework, so you just stared. At this time, although I knew there would be no mistake, I was still very nervous, as if there were butterflies flying in my stomach. Because where you stand, as long as you raise your hand and slap in the face, you will be a "chestnut" when you fall together. Just then, my mother gave a cry. My heart "swish" a cold, cold sweat is almost dripping out. Suddenly, there was a "shout" in the back of my head, followed by a "Mao", which made me grin and saw a golden flower in front of me. You were about to call again when my mother said, "Oh, wrong. This question is correct. " I am very wronged. As soon as my nose is sour, tears will swirl in my eyes, thinking: Why did you hit me? Why did you hit me? After a while, I will definitely say "I'm sorry". I went to get justice, but you still ignored me. This is unfair than Dou E! Looking back, you also looked a little worried, smiled awkwardly and said, "Well, I'm sorry. Why don't you hit me in the future? " Hearing this, I couldn't laugh either, and said, "Dad, how dare I hit you? I did it seriously, but you gave it to me. How can this be justified? "

Dad, I want to say to you: please be more gentle and patient with me, and don't always use corporal punishment to solve problems.

Dad, I want to tell you that dad is like a mountain, but no matter how big the mountain is, there will be a gentle side, that is, fatherly love.

My father works in other places and travels a lot. It will take two weeks to see him, so I cherish my days with him.

When I was in the first grade, my father came back to see me less often than before. Every day after school, I lie on the balcony window and look at the crowded street outside to see if there is my father. Mother sees it in her eyes and hurts in her heart. I was afraid that I would think my father would be ill, so I called him and asked him to come to see me often.

Soon after, I saw my father in the street and jumped for joy. He walked slowly, his expression was still so serious and his body was still so tall and straight.

"Knock, knock!" Dad's back! My face is full of joy. The sadness and yearning of the last few days are gone forever! I threw myself into my father's arms with excitement. He picked me up, kissed me and asked me, "Do you miss my father?" "think!" I am happy to say. At this time, I was surprised to find my father's face pale and lifeless. I am sad. At that time, I didn't know how to speak. I can only express it by crying. I shed tears impudently, releasing all the feelings buried in my heart these days.

A day later, my father quietly left while I was sleeping. When I woke up, I found that he was gone and cried again. Until now, I have always wanted to say to my father, "Would you please come back and see me often?"

General comments:

This composition describes how the young author misses his father who works in other places. The young author is eager for it, but he didn't say much to his father in his article. The topic of the composition is "Dad, I want to tell you", and the content of the composition does not meet the requirements of the topic. The composition sentences are fluent and clear.

Dad, I want to tell you about the fourth grade composition 15. Dad, in my heart, you are a dedicated construction engineer. As long as the company gives the order, you will run to the project site without hesitation. Our father and daughter get together less and leave more. In the long river of memory, my mother and I have been carrying big bags and small bags, shuttling through the vast sea of people, rushing on the train from south to north, and visiting relatives at your work place. Dad, actually, I miss you very much. I hope I can live with my father every day like other children.

I remember one day before my 1 1 birthday, the sweet phone rang. You whispered on the phone for a while, put the phone down and said shyly to me, "The unit leader wants me to work in Xisha Islands tomorrow and come back once every three months." As soon as my voice fell, my mouth pursed and my eyes tilted, I said to you, "next week is my birthday, but you will be away for three months." I have grown up, so you just spent a birthday with me. Now I am eleven years old. Do you still stand me up this year? " "This is what the job needs." You replied. I muttered and ran back to the house, thinking: bad leaders, what a nuisance, what kind of work is needed, there are so many people in the company, why can't my dad go and others go? The more I think about it, the more embarrassed I am.

Today is my birthday. When my mother took me to a restaurant for my birthday, I saw many children having a good time with their father. Then I thought of you, dad, and I wanted to say to you, "I wish you could spend more birthdays with me, even for a while!" "

And when I caught a cold and had a fever, I saw my mother as busy as a cat on hot bricks for me. How I wish you could help my mother! When my mother took me shopping, I saw a very interesting thing. My classmates were playing! But mom just won't buy it for me. I believe you will buy it for me, right?

I know dad, you often leave us to work in other places, for this family, for me and my mother.

Finally, I sincerely say to you: "Dad, come back soon!" " ! I miss you. "