I'm writing a novel now, but there are some problems. I hope you can help me. How to describe the kiss in the novel?

Take an hour and describe the story you want to write in one sentence.

Take another hour to expand into a paragraph, including the beginning of the story, the main conflict and the end.

Write an outline for each chapter.

Take some time to expand the outline of each chapter into a paragraph. Except the last chapter, every chapter should end in conflict. The last chapter concludes the book.

Spend a day or two describing the main characters on one page, and then describing other characters on half a page.

Next, it takes a week to expand the story outline from one page to four pages.

Spend another week making a detailed list of everything these people and others should know about them.

List all the scenes you want to add to the story in the table.

Start writing your novel with wordpad.

Now, you can begin to appreciate the draft of your first novel.

1. The procedure of novel creation

The ideas here are supplemented one by one, that is to say, you must have a background setting before you can collect data, then you can write a detailed analysis of the characters, then you can write an outline of the content with the first three elements, and then you can write the content and modify it.

1. background settings

2. Carry out "data collection" according to "background settings"

3. Use "data collection+background setting" to do "character analysis (setting)"

4. Write a "story outline" of "character analysis+data collection+background setting"

5. Set up "story outline+character analysis+data collection+background setting" to do "content writing"

6. Revise according to "content writing+story outline+character analysis+data collection+background setting"

Second, the basic principles of story development

1. time series

In other words, in the development of the novel, the timeline should let readers know clearly, let readers know the progress of your story and where it went, even if you want to go back, you should also indicate the time and let people know where it has gone now. If the timeline is chaotic, it is like you are telling a story, but it is not continuous. Let the listener combine what you say. I don't think many people want to understand this story.

2. The order of development (the concept of generalized space)

In other words, in the development of novels, the concept of space should be clearly expressed, so that people can feel how the picture happens. Don't write it so that readers can't concretize events and spaces. It is reasonable to describe actions, scenes and characters. If you have a special idea, be sure to explain it, such as space description …

3. Center (central idea)

That is, the main axis, that is, the theme of this work, can not be violated. If your spindle follows your protagonist, the protagonist will be inconsistent and her spindle will be destroyed. By analogy, every spindle has its central idea, which can't be destroyed in novels unless you have special reasons.

4. Logic

Fiction must be consistent, and the above three points must be based on the premise of logic. The logic here does not refer to the logic of daily life, but the logic given to the novel by the author. In other words, don't be inconsistent.

Basic conditions and limitations of the development of Sanqi story

1. Time and space constraints

Time is the background, even if your time is jumping, there must be a system for the role to follow; And space is to follow the proposed concept of space.

2. Restrictions on expression media

First, you must determine your medium of expression.

For example: the Internet.

The performance medium on the network is a computer, and the display interface of the computer is a screen. Limited by the characteristics of the screen, articles left on the network must consider this layer, pay attention to clear segmentation, and consider the length of each article.

Second, the restrictions of readers.

You must consider the readership of your works and who you want to read what you write, so as to control the literary level and taste level of your works and meet a readership. Take Dream of Red Mansions and Journey to the West as examples. Because some people have different tastes (hobbies) and tastes (reading viewpoints), some people prefer A Dream of Red Mansions, and some people prefer The Journey to the West. This is the limitation of readers.

Third, the author's skill.

Some people's works are well conceived and have a large structure, but their skill (pen power) is insufficient. Being unable to express his ideas clearly will have the opposite effect, making people unwilling to read or unable to understand his works. In other words, when the author conceives a story, he must consider where it can be expressed. The story conceived in this way will be highly completed.

3. Emotional influence

Emotional effect, that is to say, giving people emotional feelings. As far as the author can influence the intensity of emotions when reading, this is the emotional effect.

4. Illusion effect

The illusion effect is simply the visualization of scenery and people. That is, whether the hero created by the author, the world and actions he lives in can give readers a clear concept.

4. Talk about several forms of novels from the author's point of view.

There are traditional ones. The first person. The third person. Script form

Notebook novel. Diary and stream of consciousness. Magic realism and other forms.

But in short, there are only two views:

1. First person

2. The third person

Of course, you can also mix one person or three people.

The Structure of "Five-year Plan" Novels

1. area structure

There are five parts in the plot structure. Got it. A painful sharp turn. Conflict [note 1]. crisis

To explain clearly, I take this process as an example.

A man was walking on the road and found something (discovery)

Then when you want to pick up that thing, someone picks it up first (a sharp turn)

Then that person's psychology will be sad (painful)

Two people quarreled about that.

Then the other person will hit you (crisis)

Diagram structure and other connections:

A. the influence of characters on the plot structure

For example, the conflict between two people's personalities, or the crisis between two people's careers (such as the thief in Akagawa and the husband and wife of the criminal police), in fact, almost all the characters can't do without the plot, because each character's characteristics are different. Once they meet, some plots will inevitably happen, which is the influence of the characters on the plot structure.

B. the influence of ideas on plot structure

If the author wants the reader to know something, he must design the plot. For example, a writer wants everyone to know that powerful power may not solve the sadness of anything, so he has to design a plot, and then the story will change because of this episode. This is the influence of thoughts on the plot structure.

C. the influence of language plot structure

Pun is the most common usage, for example, goodbye is usually a greeting, which means leaving, but it also means meeting again, and then you can have a relationship; You can also use language features to assist the plot, such as listening to the wrong words, then doing something you don't need to do, and then pulling out a long story. This is the influence of language on the plot structure.

D. the relationship between rhythm and plot structure

After you make up the story, the story will have the right length, which is the most suitable length for the story. If you write the length more succinctly, the rhythm will be faster, on the contrary, if you write more carefully, the rhythm will be slower.

For example, a man kissing a woman's hand at a dance can be written in the following way.

Normal: Yokeland looked at the girl in front of her, gently took her hand and kissed her.

Quick version: Yokeland kissed the girl's hand.

Adagio: Yokeland looked at the girl in front of her, then quickly looked at the female surname in the ballroom out of the corner of her eye, and confirmed that the girl standing in front of her was the most beautiful one, so she gently held her jade hand, then raised it 30 cm and lowered her head. Gave her a deep kiss.

E. the influence of landscape on plot structure

You can use some special scenery to increase the tension of the plot. Gotham in Batman, for example, adds a lot of plots to it.

Note1; There are the following kinds of conflicts

1. Personal, psychological and physical habits

2. Society, others. Group. Man-made legal habits. system

3. Nature, such as science,

2. People

To express a character's character through the reaction to an event, we must first determine the character's characteristics and personality, and then infer the character's life with personality. Then, use these to determine her development and ending in the novel.

The relationship between characters and others:

A. Plot: The arrangement of the plot can change the character of the character, for example, there is a character who is afraid of death. It is necessary to be well designed by the author's plot, so that he can become a brave man by mistake, and then gradually change his personality because of this identity to match the development of this story and his professional identity.

B. thoughts: thoughts can change people.

C. language: everyone has his own speaking characteristics.

D. rhythm: the use of rhythm can enhance the impression of characters. For example, every time a person comes out, he is fast-paced, and the tension he gives will increase.

E. scenery: the description of scenery is used to make people feel. For example, when a person comes out, he always focuses on describing the scenery with cold feelings. Over time, this person will give a cold impression.

Step 3 think

It is what you want people to know, in other words, the ideas and behavior patterns that determine the color of the story.

4. Language

Language, in a narrow sense, is dialogue, and in a broad sense, it is the style of a work.

5. rhythm

Rhythm refers to the rhythm distribution of a work, which is tense and slow.

Relationship between rhythm and other events:

A. change the rhythm as time goes by.

B. influence the rhythm according to the tension in people's conversation or the sense of meaning in words.

C. For example, write a tense scene. Will make an ordinary conversation more tense. For example, two people, playing chess on the flat ground and playing chess on the cliff, will give people different feelings!

6. Scenery

The first is to move the viewpoint.

Simply put, it is the writer's point of view, and it can also be said that it is the switch of readers.

Example: write a house from a distance, then slowly draw closer, pull out the house, see the window, and look in from the window. There are two people quarreling in it. After quarreling, one goes out and the other stays.

At this time, there are two choices. One is to write that person out and follow her point of view; One is the one written and kept, but of course it can also be reversed in the direction described at the beginning.

The second is spatial perspective.

It captures the scenery from six angles, namely, from a distance, a close-up view, looking up, a bird's eye view, looking forward and looking back, thus causing the condensation or expansion of space and the transformation of angles, and using the three-distance method (horizontal, far and high) to concretize the scenery in the writer's mind.