How to write an essay for materials

1. How to write a material composition

"My First Choice" Material Composition

On a summer night, sitting on the quiet grass and looking up Looking up, everything is so beautiful, the stars are shining, smiling at the brightest star. At this time, the Moon Fairy swayed her beautiful and elegant dance skirt and floated towards me quietly. Before I knew it, she was sitting next to me and said to me in a sweet voice: "Nice to meet you. Your innocent smile touched me. I want to give you a gift. I have money and health here. .Career.Hope..."After hearing this, I want each one, but since I can only choose one, I will face a choice, and it will be the first time in my life. After a long time, a breeze blew by, and I said decisively: Hope! "

After hearing this, the Moon Fairy was very happy. With a wave of her floating hand, I seemed to have magical power. The fairy finally flew away with a smile. From then on, I had hope. < /p>

The first choice, the first feeling: the first time the sacred fire is lit, that is the burning of hope; the first time the seeds are sown, that is the sprouting of hope; the desert is covered with an oasis, and the sky is falling It has become a thoroughfare, and fertility has replaced poverty. These are all hopes that are blooming. It seems that my choice is not wrong, because this bud is about to bloom into a flame.

Legend: Every one. Girls come to this world full of fragrance with the blessing of a flower, so they have beautiful faces and pure hearts like dewdrops, so their choices should be perfect, right?

Hope is like the brilliant blooming flowers in spring. In the morning, accompanied by the song of dawn. Singing to wake up, full of vitality, exuding countless wonderful longings, blessings and prayers. . In this bright sunshine, it is choice that gives me hope, and hope that gives me a better tomorrow.

Hope can make the budding buds bloom into flames and the slim streams. It can make the young seedlings grow into giant pine trees and make my tomorrow brighter and brighter. Whose contribution is this?

Everyone will inevitably encounter setbacks in life, but at this time, don’t panic or be afraid. The only thing we can do is to be strong. At the very least, we still have a lovely choice, you! And a kind choice! It gives me hope and makes me thrive in the future. I firmly believe that my first choice - hope, will be more brilliant in the days to come! . How to write a material composition

1. Careful observation.

Careful observation is the golden key to improving your writing skills. Only through careful observation can you discover the hidden gems in the mineral deposits of life phenomena. Jade, grab the shining treasure in the mud.

2. Read more. Reading widely is a prerequisite for improving your composition.

To write good articles, you must read more. Reading. “Reading thousands of volumes, writing is like having a spirit. ”

“I have read three hundred Tang poems by heart, and can recite them even if I can’t compose them.” "We emphasize the need to read more, to read selectively, and more importantly, to read in and understand the structure, technique, and language features of the articles you read," etc.

When I read, study, and accumulate knowledge, I usually use the speed reading method. The speed reading mentioned here is not simply reading at a fast speed, but is essentially different from skimming, skipping, and scanning. Speed ??reading is a scientific and efficient reading and learning method.

Speed ??reading is not only reflected in the efficiency of reading speed, but also the efficiency of understanding: it has a very good effect on grasping the context and key points of article paragraphs, and helps us organize, analyze and summarize the article. After mastering speed reading memory, you can increase your reading efficiency many times. It is of great help whether it is accumulation of reading materials or learning. Especially for high school students who are tight on time, it is very necessary to practice and improve.

For specific exercises, please refer to "Elite Special Whole Brain Speed ??Reading and Memory Training". I use this one myself.

Reading is very important for a person's growth, especially for middle school students. It is very necessary to strengthen extracurricular reading. Reading has a major role in nourishing people's hearts, improving self-cultivation, and developing a good habit of reading throughout their lives. In terms of benefits, from a small perspective, reading for middle school students can increase their knowledge and improve their Chinese literacy, especially for writing, which cannot be underestimated.

3. Practice writing frequently. Regular practice of writing is the key to improving your composition skills.

If you want to get into composition and make continuous progress, it is more important to practice more. The proverb goes well: "It is better to read ten articles than to write one."

This tells the truth that the practice of writing can produce true knowledge. Keeping a diary is an effective way to practice writing. If you keep writing a diary every day, you will have a solid foundation for future compositions. 3. How to write an essay based on materials

Whenever I see the exquisite little wooden boat hidden in the drawer, I think of Chen Ming. When we were in the first grade of elementary school, Chen Ming and I were classmates. Our families are very close to each other. Every day we go to school together, go home, and review our lessons together. We became inseparable good friends until fourth grade.

One day, an unpleasant thing happened. After the two of us reviewed our homework, we took out the small wooden boat we made in the ship model group to play with. I saw that the one he made was very delicate, so I held it in my hand, turned it over and looked at it, and couldn't bear to put it down. Unexpectedly, I missed it, and with a "pop", the small wooden boat fell to the ground and broke. When he saw it, he became anxious and cried, asking me to compensate. I argued, "I didn't mean it." He said angrily, "You were not careful, so you have to pay for it!" He also pushed me hard. I stepped back and stepped on the small wooden boat, crushing it. This time, Chen Ming became even more angry. He picked up my little wooden boat, threw it to the ground, crushed it to pieces with his feet, grabbed my schoolbag, turned around, and left without looking back. Looking at the small wooden boat that was trampled by him, I was so angry that I couldn't speak. Our friendship fell apart.

A few months passed in the blink of an eye. One day when I came home from school, I was walking in front and he was walking behind. I looked back at him secretly and saw that he was holding something in his right hand pocket, which was bulging. Suddenly, he caught up with me in a few steps and took out an exquisite little wooden boat from his trouser pocket. I looked at him in surprise. His face turned red and he said excitedly: "It was my fault that time. I shouldn't have stepped on your boat. My family will move tomorrow, so I made this boat for you as a souvenir!" Then, he put the small wooden boat into my hand. Thinking about what happened that day, it was originally my fault. I looked into his passionate eyes and couldn't say a word, I just held his hand tightly. Chen Ming moved to other places with his parents. After that day, we never saw each other again. I hid the little wooden boat he gave me in the drawer. As soon as I saw this exquisite wooden boat, I seemed to see Chen Ming standing in front of me. 4. How to write a composition based on materials

Composing based on materials means that the writer provides certain materials (including text or other language forms) to the writer, and requires the writer to formulate a composition according to the connotation of the materials. The materials provided mainly include the following types:

1 Describe a relatively complete incident;

2 Quote a complete story;

3 Quote a paragraph News reports or news;

4 Famous aphorisms (one sentence or paragraph or several sentences and paragraphs) closely related to the writer's moral cultivation or a certain aspect of study and life;

5 A theme A clear and profound statement;

6. One or more lyrical paragraphs that highlight a central point;

7. One or several combinations that reveal an ugly phenomenon in social life. The resulting comics...

To write a composition based on the material, you must understand the material. Since the material itself contains profound truths and "becomes the writer's intention", then understanding the material is the key to writing a good composition, and reviewing the topic becomes reviewing the material. Generally speaking, the textual surface of the material is not difficult to understand. The problem is whether you can accurately analyze the profound truth expressed in the material, and then determine your correct attitude towards this truth.

Must be "consistent".

The consistency mentioned here refers to two aspects. One is that the theme determined by the writer should be consistent with the intention of the material, and the other is that the materials selected by the writer should be consistent with the theme. Only in this way can you feel something after reading it.

We must make a big problem out of a small problem and make a big deal out of a small problem. The philosophies contained in the materials given by the proposer are all major principles. It is difficult for the writer to explain these major principles in a comprehensive and profound manner. Therefore, it is necessary to connect the social life that one is familiar with with the major principles, so as to reduce the big topic to the smaller one; However, this does not allow writers to analyze problems superficially and simply. On the contrary, what is required to write for materials is to start from life practice, discover big principles from small things and problems, and explain big principles, that is, the analysis of problems should be profound. Something a little sharper, that's making a mountain out of a molehill. The "big topic" in "big topic turns small" refers to the big principle; the "small topic" in "small topic makes big" refers to the writing topic.

Must grasp the "requirements". "Composition based on materials" all put forward specific requirements, such as the content, style, title, word count, etc. of the composition. Writers must grasp these requirements when writing essays. 5. How to write a material composition

1. Choose a good angle and establish the topic first.

First, read the material carefully and summarize the writeable perspective. From what "that person" said in the material, the following perspectives can be summarized: 1. Let the wings of your soul fly, 2. Don't rely on other people's gifts, 3. Don't complain about God's injustice, 4. God is fair.

From the same wings, different animals have different uses, the following views can be summarized: 5. The road is made by people, 6. Destiny is in one's own hands. You can also use the theme "Eagle, Ostrich, and Penguin" to talk about the perspectives of adapting to the environment and surviving and developing in a harsh environment to achieve success.

Then choose the most relevant content that you are familiar with from many angles to write, so that you will feel comfortable writing it. Classmate Ji Min's composition "Fly with the Wings of the Soul" has a striking, clear and vivid title.

2. The structural arrangement must be reasonable. The structure of a material composition should consist of at least three parts.

That is, summarize the arguments from the reading materials, analyze the arguments in conjunction with reality, and summarize the full text to emphasize the points. The reading part should be concise and clear, and avoid copying the original text.

The practical part is the focus of the full text and should be written in detail. The final part summarizes the full text, which should reflect the material and the title of the article, and should be concise and comprehensive.

3. Use rhetorical language to be beautiful. A good article should not only have correct ideas and reasonable structure, but also have beautiful language.

Using more metaphors in the article will make the article more vivid and charming. Use personification more often in articles to make the language lively, interesting, and full of energy.

Using parallelism in articles will make the article more powerful. The use of rhetoric and careful choice of words and sentences in an article will add a lot of bright colors to the article.

4. The text must be contagious. As the saying goes: A person is like a person.

A person's kindness, cruelty, humility, arrogance, elegance, and rudeness will all be reflected in his articles. Do you want your articles to impress people with kindness, humility, and elegance? Then don't write questions that are vicious, arrogant, or rude into your article.

After reading a neatly written and fluent composition, one will think that the author is a serious, responsible and meticulous person. The marking teacher will always be arrogant and give a few extra points.

It is natural to give an article a cold reception or even be criticized for an article with lots of typos and illegible handwriting. Whether the text is contagious and whether the copying is neat is also a very important part of the exam composition.

High school entrance examination compositions can be divided into two categories: one is proposition composition, which includes full proposition composition and semi-proposition composition; the other is composition based on materials, which includes topic composition, reading composition and picture composition ( Topics, articles and pictures are all materials). The characteristic of composition based on materials is that candidates first read the materials and then write their own composition based on the materials.

Composition based on materials has been the highlight of composition in the high school entrance examination in previous years, so it is the focus of composition review; in previous years, candidates tended to digress when doing this type of composition, so it is also a difficulty in composition review. Once the key and difficult points are broken through, other types of compositions will be easier to solve.

How to write a good composition for the material? The first step is to accurately grasp the gist of the material.

This is the most critical step in writing this type of essay.

In previous years, candidates tended to go off-topic when writing this type of essay because they did not accurately grasp the main theme of the material. So, how to accurately grasp the gist of the material? Here are some easy-to-master methods.

1. Pay attention to the title of the material (article) (if there is a title). For some articles, the title is the topic of the article.

2. Pay attention to the beginning of the material (article). In some articles, the center of the article is highlighted at the beginning. 3. Pay attention to the end of the material (article). More articles will have questions at the end.

4. Pay attention to the lyrical sentences in the materials (articles). Authors often use argumentative and lyrical sentences to highlight the center of the article.

For example, there is a composition material for the high school entrance examination. It first writes the story of two calligraphers. One strives to be like the ancients with each stroke, while the other strives to be natural with each stroke. The last paragraph of the material is: "Mr. Qi Baishi said: 'Those who learn from me will live, and those who are like me will die.'

'If you cannot get out of the framework of your predecessors, you will naturally not have your own world." This paragraph Words are discussions.

Considering this discussion in conjunction with the story, it is not difficult to see the theme of the material: dare to innovate. 4. Pay attention to the requirements or prompts behind the materials.

For example, in a high school entrance examination essay question, it first attaches the original text and then makes a request: "After reading the article "One Tree Three Lessons", we have been inspired a lot. Please explain one aspect of it ( Such as success and failure, temptation, opportunity...), write your own topic, choose your own style, and write an article of no less than 600 words. ”

After reading the materials carefully, it is not difficult to find out the requirements. , the three meanings in the material: "success and failure", "temptation", and "opportunity" are the three scopes of writing, and the composition can be based on one of these aspects. 5. Pay attention to the logical relationship between the content in the material.

Some materials, especially pictures, do not contain questions or prompts. It is up to the candidates to grasp the gist of the materials based on the relationship between the content of the materials. For example, look at the essay question "Donkey Eating Sketches".

There are five scenes in the picture: 1. Two donkeys with the same rope go to eat grass in opposite directions; 2. Both donkeys are pulled by the rope; 3. Two donkeys They came together to discuss; 4. The two donkeys walked to the left together and ate grass; 5. The two donkeys walked to the right together and ate grass. From the two donkeys in the front having no access to grass to the two donkeys in the back having access to grass, it is easy to see the theme of the picture: division leads to failure, unity leads to success.

The second step is to select relevant materials to compose based on the theme of the materials. This is much the same as writing other types of essays.

The difference is that the selected material can be the given material or other materials other than the given material; the two can be used alone or in combination. But no matter where the materials are chosen, the theme cannot deviate from the gist of the materials given.

For example, the full score essay "More help makes life better" is based on the theme of the given materials: "People live in society and need to help each other, support each other, and cooperate together. If you are blindly selfish If there is no profit, the society will lose its cohesion and the warmth between people will be lost."

The article contains content other than three raw materials: a man with a broken hand carries a man with a broken leg; some people in hell are miserable if they don’t help each other and cannot eat the porridge, while some people are happy if they help each other and eat the porridge; The antelopes helped each other to escape the fate of all death. These three contents include real life, legends and stories, and Chinese textbooks. Although they come from different sources, they all closely follow the "mutual aid" of the given materials. 6. How to write a material composition

In recent years, material composition questions have been favored by high school entrance examination question makers all over the country. This is a type of question that the question maker only gives some text or picture materials and requires the test takers to follow the given text. Or write essay questions based on the content of pictures or pictures. It has various examination angles. Some require candidates to compose based on the material, some require candidates to rewrite the material, or continue to write the material, or expand the material. Some require candidates to write a review based on the material, and some require candidates to focus on the "phenomenon" in the material. Write a short review. The most common one is composition based on materials. To write this type of composition well, students should start from the following aspects: 1. Understand the materials and explore the spiritual essence of the materials. This is a prerequisite for material-based composition writing. To understand the material is to choose the right angle, grasp the essentials and key words, and figure out the ins and outs of things based on repeated reading.

There is a sentence in the essay question of Hebei Province's high school entrance examination materials in 2004, "When the young eagle is old enough." The three words "big enough" are the key words. It is the direct reason why the mother eagle throws the young eagle out. If you don't pay attention, When it comes to these three words, the actions of Mother Eagle are incomprehensible. After grasping these, we need to understand the material as a whole, analyze the material, think in connection with the results, see the clues in the process of exploring the reasons, grasp the essence, and discover an emotion embodied in the material from between the lines of the material. A tendency, an intention, an idea or a principle, thus grasping the center of the material. Of course, in the process of exploring its spiritual essence, we must adopt a realistic attitude, be more objective and less subjective, and avoid making a fuss only on points that interest or are familiar with. 2. See the requirements clearly and grasp the meaning of the question. The requirements for material composition are the rules for candidates to write good compositions. If the relevant requirements are not accurately grasped or understood thoroughly, it will have an impact on the review and writing. Just like reading the materials, you must savor it word by word and sentence by sentence, grasp its essence and Write accordingly. 3. Determine the angle, seek differences and innovate. First of all, everyone’s understanding of the material and writing ability are different, so you should choose the easiest to write, the best to grasp, something to say, something to write about, and something to express your feelings according to your actual situation. Start from an angle, start from a small place, start from a small place, and see the big from the small. Secondly, we must also pay attention to seeking differences and innovation. Because everyone is writing about the same material, if you want to avoid falling out of the norm, you must rely on innovation and innovation. Otherwise, it will be like a thousand people and a thousand words agree. We should make breakthroughs from those aspects that are not valued by others and are valuable, and write about the purpose that others have not written, so as to give people a refreshing feeling. For example, the material composition of Qiandongnan Prefecture in 2006 gave the story of a duel between boxing champion Ali and Fraser. Ali won because of his persistence, but Fraser lost the victory that originally belonged to him because of giving up. The truth reflected in this material is very obvious, that is, "persistence is victory", but this is a cliché idea. One candidate talked about the formation and significance of victory from the three aspects of "dream, persistence, and transcendence", like this The idea brings a whole new feeling to readers. 4. Clever conception and careful layout. The famous esthetician Mr. Chao Wen once said, "Structure is to creation what operational deployment is to battle. It is a key to success or failure." Because the materials are the same, the topics proposed are also generally similar. "New" depends on "new" ideas. The "new" structure must have a careful layout. According to the determined style of writing, the structure of the composition can be arranged in the following ways: If it is written as a narrative, a "vertical structure" can be used ( Beginning, development, ***, ending) and "horizontal structure" (that is, selecting different materials from different aspects and narrating them separately, and there is a parallel relationship between the materials. For example, a candidate in Nanjing wrote about "Thinking about Soil". When composing, write from the three aspects of "earthly accomplished soil, strong and majestic soil, and versatile soil" to express your respect for soil. The structure is very compact and coherent. If you write it as an argumentative essay, you can press " to ask questions (" Introduction) - Analyze the problem (thesis) - Solve the problem (conclusion)" mode, or make slight adjustments to write. If written as an explanatory text, you can use a "characteristic structure" (i.e. what, how, object characteristics ) and "sequential characteristics" (spatial orientation order, temporal order, logical order). After mastering the writing skills of material composition, coupled with daily thinking and practice, I believe that students will definitely achieve good results in writing material composition for the high school entrance examination.