500-word composition in the fifth grade of primary school: my progress and deficiency

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This composition is a 500-word composition about the fifth grade of primary school. The title is My Progress and Shortcomings. Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. I have really gained a lot from my progress and shortcomings this semester!

However, there are also many shortcomings. Let me sum it up myself!

People always like good things. Let's sum up my progress first. I learned to help others under the guidance of my teacher this semester. With the support and trust of my classmates, I live up to expectations and continue to be re-elected as a sports committee member. I am also honored to be elected as the monitor on duty, which is my dream!

For the sake of class hygiene, I keep a good habit of loving work. I won the third prize and the second prize in this year's artistic talent and Hubei Dandelion Piano Competition ... Then, let me talk about my shortcomings!

My biggest shortcoming this semester is being late. Every morning, it takes a lot of time from getting up to eating breakfast. Until the last moment, I hurried to school in a panic. As a result, I became the king of lateness. Sometimes I lie, and sometimes I have a little temper. Sometimes I can't accept criticism from teachers and classmates with an open mind ... hey!

There are already n shortcomings. It seems that I have to change my bad habits!

Teacher's comment: This composition is the author's summary of one semester. The author can correctly look at his own progress and shortcomings and realize that he should correct his own shortcomings. He is a good boy. This composition is complete in structure, clear in level and fluent in language. The author first describes his progress since a semester, then summarizes his shortcomings, and finally expresses his own views that these bad habits should be corrected. It would be better if he could briefly describe his plan. In the first line of the second paragraph, "I am also honored to be elected as the monitor on duty" is changed to "I am also honored to be elected as the monitor on duty". (China famous teacher: Miss Wang) 22: 05: 00, June 7, 2009