A 400-word essay about my deskmate

A composition about my deskmate (1)

My deskmate is a boy who doesn’t like to pack his schoolbag or protect his books, but he studies very well.

He doesn’t like packing his schoolbag very much. One day, we were in class at school, and the teacher asked us to do math problems in the exercise books. My deskmate looked around in his schoolbag, but couldn't find the exercise book or pencil case. So he started to borrow it from me, but there was no way he could let us be at the same table? So I lent it to my deskmate. The third period was music class. The music teacher asked us to take out our books, but my deskmate didn’t bring them. I asked my deskmate: "Why don’t you bring anything with you?" He replied: "I didn’t pack my schoolbag last night." He said, "Next time, please pack your schoolbag properly!" After that, I watched it with him. But the next day, my deskmate forgot to bring the book again. I said, "Did you pack your schoolbag last night? Why didn't you bring it with you?" He replied, "I forgot." I couldn't bear it, so I went to look at my deskmate's schoolbag, and saw that it was all messed up. ! There is useless paper everywhere, and I carry all the books I will use tomorrow but not today’s. It’s really unbearable!

Not only did he not pack his schoolbag, he also did not protect the books. One day, we were in Chinese class, and we took out the textbooks. I looked at the Chinese books at my desk. There was no page that was not dog-eared. Some pages were missing corners, and there were creases everywhere, even the book cover. Not included. I asked my deskmate: "My deskmate, why are your books so broken?" He replied: "Every book I read is like this. They are all for learning knowledge anyway. What does it matter whether the book is broken or not?" Said: "We should take good care of the books!" My deskmate ignored me, which made me very angry.

My deskmate studies very well. One time, the teacher was about to hand out Chinese papers. I was very nervous and thought to myself: What score will I get this time? The paper started to be handed out. When the paper was handed to me, I saw that the score was 95 points. Then I looked at the wrong questions. Many of them were caused by carelessness. I looked at my deskmate's paper again, and I actually got 100 points. I really can't believe that his handwriting is so neat, far better than mine. I thought to myself: Hey, boy, not bad!

My deskmate is a classmate who doesn’t like to pack his schoolbag or protect his books, but he studies very well. I hope that my classmates can get rid of their bad habits, and I also hope that I can study as well as my classmates without being careless! Deskmates, let’s work hard together!

Instructor’s comment: The young author caught the characteristics of his deskmate who doesn’t like to pack schoolbags and protect books, but learns well in three aspects. Through specific examples, he wrote about the characteristics of the characters. come out. The structure is clear, the connections are tight, the transitions are natural, and the characters have distinctive personalities.

Writing a composition about my deskmate (2)

My deskmate is a girl who is helpful, loves to fight against injustice, beautiful, and studies well.

Let’s talk about her willingness to help others first! I remember one time, I accidentally slipped and fell. She saw me and immediately took me to the infirmary. I said thank you several times!

She also loves to fight against injustice. Once after class, we went out to play together. She accidentally discovered that an older brother was bullying a younger brother, so she walked over and asked, "What's wrong, little brother?" The younger brother told her exactly what happened, and she said to the older brother: " You can't blame him! He didn't mean it." The elder brother was speechless and had to leave in despair.

She is also very beautiful. She has a pair of bright big eyes, a small cherry mouth and a slender figure. All the male classmates in the class like her very much. She also has a pair of "useless" hands, because she always sleeps lazily on the bed at home and does no work at all, so her hands are white and tender. Very beautiful.

She also studies very well and gets perfect marks every time in her exams. If there is a classmate in our class who cannot solve the problem, she will explain it to her classmates wholeheartedly and carefully. One time, a question in math class was very difficult. After class, we all went out to play, and she was still thinking in the classroom.

Because I was thirsty, I went back to class to drink water, and she said to me: "I know how to solve that problem!" In class, she told the teacher how to solve that problem, and the teacher said: "This The method is simple and convenient. Everyone wants me to learn from her in the future!" We all looked at her approvingly.

My deskmate is really a helpful, resolute, beautiful, and good-learning girl. I like her, and I want to learn from her and be a good classmate like her.

Teacher’s comment: The young author grasped the four characteristics of his deskmate: being helpful, loving to fight against injustice, beautiful, and good at learning, and wrote out the characteristics of the characters through specific examples. The structure is clear and the characters have distinct personalities.