Zhenglian: Join forces with Jicui and Duiyun

Old pines and green trees, stacked stones and clouds. Look up the words "Jicui" and "Duiyun" respectively engraved on the archways on the north and south sides of Yong'an Temple Bridge (formerly known as Taiye Bridge, also known as Duiyun Jicui Bridge). The curved ruler-shaped Yong'an Temple Bridge connects Tuancheng and Qionghua Island. "Jicui" refers to the green pines and cypresses planted in Tuancheng during the Jin Dynasty and which remain to this day. "Duiyun" refers to the white Taihu stones on the island and the white clouds in the sky that complement each other. (Qionghua Island is an artificial island. There are a large number of Taihu stones stacked on the island, so that the loess is almost exposed. From a distance, it looks like it is filled with white clouds.)

The spring scenery is full of greenery. The chirping of birds in the flower stream has entered the pile of clouds. The chirping of birds has entered the pile of clouds. 2009-11-15 21:25:32 Supplement: In midsummer, greenery accumulates outside the cliffs, and clouds pile up on the snowy ground in the early sunshine.

The water leans against the mountains, accumulates greenery, boats carry boats, and piles of clouds 2009-11-14 17:27:07 Supplement: Surrounded by mountains on three sides, the cloudy and clear windows accumulate greenery One side faces the sea, and the waves and clouds in the morning and evening 2009-11-14 17:55:51 Supplement: Sorry, the "waves and clouds" are opposite to the original poster. Try again: Take a leisurely trip to Qiongdao, stroll around the Yao Di and Shiduiyun 2009-11-14 23:28:10 Supplement: I also have the guts to express my opinion and consult with the poster and article gentleman: According to "Ruo Erzi" The words are enough to express the meaning

There is no need to make up four words

This is the principle of the number of words used in writing couplets." Original sentence: First couplet: Once upon a time, there were green trees. Second couplet: Just like the past, can clouds pile up? The abbreviation is as follows: Once upon a time, there were green trees (ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping, ping). Instead of trying to accommodate the four words "as usual" and "once upon a time" is indeed a bit wordy, can we use "once" versus "still" instead? Simple and straightforward? 2009-11-14 23:40:16 Supplement: First line: The old trees and withered vines once accumulated greenery (廻仄平平平廄平平仄仄) Second line: The ancient west wind road is as cloudy as ever (平平仄仄仄平任仄平平) Part 1 The sentence contains the connotation of "the hero dies in his twilight years"

It is in sharp contrast with the sentence "still the same person" in the next sentence. From the perspective of onlookers, the old tree withered vines and the ancient west wind road come from the same poem. The impression of "heartbroken man" is lingering, so it is difficult to understand it as it is. 2009-11-14 23:50:12 Supplement: Mr. Wen Zhang is an expert in couplets. Please don’t laugh at my humble opinion.

The article leads the way

Hui Ci Hongci

I am so honored. I returned here recently

I learned that I can now follow the title Asking about the attached picture

Makes the question colorful

That's good. It's polite

Let's mention the couplet again. The number of words in the couplet is limited

That's why It is better to be brief and not redundant. If two words are enough to express the idea

There is no need to add four words

This is the principle of the number of words used in writing couplets. If you are bold, omit the original sentence

Without losing the original meaning

For the public’s reference. Original sentence: Once upon a time, there were piles of green (flat, flat, flat, flat, flat), just like clouds piled up in the past ( flat, flat, flat, flat). It can be omitted as: How could there ever be green ( flat, flat, flat) 廄) Still piled up clouds (平廄平平) Please give the Fang family more advice. 2009-11-13 02:10:15 Supplement: Thank you Wenwenjun for your generous points. A large copy of the article in the world!! My brother's own couplet: Lin Shen The meaning of the sentence "The smoke accumulates green" is taken from the first sentence of "Bodhisattva Man": The plain forest is full of smoke like weaving (it is said to be written by Li Bai). I feel that "weave" is better than the other "accumulation": The forest is deep, the smoke is weaving and the green is just loyal to the original scenery and appearance< /p>

No changes will be made to the question. 2009-11-13 17:27:58 Supplement: Mr. Wen is thoughtful

Carefully consider each sentence word for word

Never cheat. . Those who write and view the couplets each have their own arms

Few words but profound meaning

Infinite space. 2009-11-16 02:53:07 Supplement: Reply to Mr. aututer: If you click The original meaning of the first couplet of the article

I think "once" is not a bad idea for "still"; the synonym "yezeng" (廄平) is also compatible. 2009-11-16 03:23:58 Supplement: Thank you all Lianyou spent a lot of time and gave you wonderful sentences; and thanks to three people who generously sponsored points. The "best answer" selected

is just the personal preference of the questioner

Fish and Bear It’s just a matter of choice between the palms of your hands. The things around us

can also trigger inspiration

as a subject for writing couplets

to add a little spice to life.

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Answer only after you think about it! 2009-11-12 19:13:42 Supplement: First line: Once upon a time the old trees and withered vines Second couplet of Jicui: The ancient west wind road is still as cloudy as ever. "The sky is clear and the sand is clear? Autumn Thoughts" Withered vines, old trees and dim crows, small bridges and flowing water, people's houses, the old west wind wind and thin horses. The sun sets in the west, and the heartbroken people are at the end of the world. 2009-11-12 20:28:24 Supplement: Slightly modified: ? First line: The old trees and withered vines once accumulated green (廻仄平平仄平平仄仄) Second line: The ancient west wind road is still covered with clouds (平平任仄仄平仄) 廄平平) 2009-11-13 09:26:41 Supplement: Mr. Taikoo Ren is too polite

Reunion of old friends

No need to meet outside! I absolutely agree with Mr. "The number of words in a couplet" Limited

That’s why it’s better to keep it simple than to add too much.” However, "once upon a time" and "when" actually have a slight difference in meaning.

The former means "it has been tried but the glory is no longer"; while the latter means "it has never been tried" ”. Old trees and dead vines

They were green before they became crippled

Described as "ever"

That means I have never tried it

Gai is inconsistent with the facts. This little brother also thought about this before the next sentence

In the end, the word "He Zeng" was abandoned. "As before" and "still" are synonymous

But in order to accommodate the four-character word "once upon a time" in the previous sentence

we can only choose the former as a match. It's just my humble opinion! 2009-11-13 09:50:03 Supplement: Besides

"Once upon a time" has a hidden meaning of loneliness

The previous sentence contains the couplet "Heroes grow late" Meaning

It is in sharp contrast to the sentence "Still the same as before" in the following sentence.

Applying Yu Xin's "Ode to a Dead Tree"

I think of the end of the poem saying "A tree is like this

How can a person be embarrassed?"