Junior high school composition 650 words: dad loses weight.

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This composition is a 650-word composition about Grade One. The title is "Dad Lose Weight". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Hey!

Dad is getting fatter and fatter!

You see, he weighs 140 Jin, but his height is only 170 cm, and his stomach sticks out like a big basketball. I advised him to lose weight several times, but it didn't help. It really makes me helpless. Today, my mother went out and bought a grip, saying that my father would practice arm strength and lose weight by the way. I quickly called my dad and said gloomily, "Dad, you are going to be in big trouble!" " "Dad looked at the little grip and said dismissively," Can such a small grip baffle your father and me? "I can do 50 at a time!

No, it's not a problem to do 100 at a time!

""good, good, then do it at once 100. Let's start now. "Since dad has overpromised, he has to agree. I went to the balcony to monitor my dad's grip strength practice. I saw dad holding both ends of the grip with both hands and easily folding the two ends of the grip together. After letting go, the grip immediately returns to its original state. He whistled while doing it, which was very comfortable. I'm counting for my father. When dad hit 50 times, the speed gradually slowed down, the whistle gradually became smaller, the gasp gradually became louder, and his face gradually became red, showing the appearance of hard work. I was idle and bored, so I went to the kitchen and got two chicken legs to eat. While eating, he deliberately said loudly: "Enjoy it!

Delicious!

"Dad saw busy said," don't take it all!

Save one for me!

"I joked:" This is the pit of the long live grandfather-it's not yours!

I'll give you one for your pity's sake. However, you can't eat until you finish eating!

"Dad had to keep doing it." 99, 100!

"Dad threw away the grip and fell to the ground. I wish dad success in losing weight!

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Teacher's comment: This composition describes the process of dad's exercise to lose weight. The description in the composition is very delicate: "I saw dad holding the two ends of the grip with both hands and folding the two ends of the grip together easily. After letting go, the grip immediately recovered. He whistled while doing it, which was very comfortable." "Dad did 50 times, the speed gradually slowed down, the whistle gradually became smaller, and the gasps gradually increased. The dialogue description in the composition is also vivid, in line with the character and identity of the characters, and the language use is also humorous. (Xue Le China: Teacher Rodina) 2009-4-2611:34: 00.