70 words in an easy day's English composition ... urgent ~

I had a relaxing day. After breakfast, my friends and I played tennis. We had a good time. After lunch, I went shopping with my parents. Then I play chess with my brother. That's very interesting. After dinner, I was watching TV. The TV program was very interesting. This is my relaxing day. What about you?

I had a relaxing day. After breakfast, I played tennis with my friends. We had a good time. After lunch, I went shopping with my parents. Then I play chess with my brother. Very interesting. After dinner, I watch TV. This TV program is very interesting. It's a relaxing day for me. What about you?

I wrote it myself, I hope to adopt it!

Finally, I wish my parents academic progress! ! ! ! !