She always smiles when I walk up to her with a garbage bag. How to describe it?

Characters are the soul of the article, but the common characters in students' exercises are often one-sided, neither personalized nor vivid. For example, the appearance we often see is always "a small (or big) mouth and a pair of modest eyes", the mother is always "her loving eyes" and the father is always "he looks at me sternly". Moreover, there is always a problem in narrative: it is often just a blind pursuit of writing something completely, while ignoring vivid, concrete and nuanced details. What is the detailed description? Detail description refers to the description of some small behaviors or subtle things of the characters, and some people regard the description of the natural environment and social environment that is not noticed as detail description. It focuses on subtlety, but it is an important means to portray characters, promote the development of events and set off the theme of the article. It is an indispensable part of excellent narrative and literary works. Some people say that a typical detailed description may be more useful than a big general description. This statement makes sense. Life is always made up of ordinary things, and people's character is mostly reflected in the subtle details. Details are like human cells. Without them, people will lose their lives. Without details, people will lose their flesh and blood. Detail description covers a wide range, such as the description of characters' language, movements and demeanor, as well as the scene description of characters' activities. 1. Description of language details: Kong Yiji is "more than enough", "A scholar stealing a book is not stealing." Mr. Almost is "almost, almost" to everything, a detail with vivid scenery and vivid characters. 2. Description of operation details: "... Black people grab lanterns, tear off paper covers, wrap steamed buns and plug old bolts; I grabbed the foreign money in one hand, squeezed it, and turned to leave. "(Lu Xun's Medicine) The author uses verbs such as" grasping "and" pinching "to describe Uncle Kang's action of withdrawing money, accurately describes his proficiency in collecting and counting money, and vividly depicts Uncle Kang's ugly face, which is fierce, greedy and used to extortion. "Ah Q wants to draw a circle, but the hand holding the pen just shakes. So the man spread the paper on the ground for him, and Ah Q fell down and drew a circle with all his strength. Afraid of being laughed at, he decided to draw a circle, but the hateful pen was not only heavy but also disobedient. I almost closed it with a shake, but I shrugged my shoulders and painted it like a melon seed ... "(Lu Xun's The True Story of Ah Q) This behavior detail specifically, vividly and vividly reflects Ah Q's personality characteristics-until recently, I still insisted on the" spiritual victory method "of self-deception. When people read this detailed description, who doesn't think Ah Q is ridiculous, sad and pitiful, and how can they not "mourn his misfortune and anger him?" "The woman's fingers trembling, thought Mei Wei cut her hand. She put a finger in her mouth and took a drag. "(Sun Li's Lotus Lake) The author accurately, meticulously and vividly wrote the rich, complex and subtle emotional world and its subtle psychological changes after the aquatic sister-in-law learned that her husband would go to the big army tomorrow. The image of a young woman who cares about her husband and is considerate to him, but deeply understands the righteousness and takes care of the overall situation. 3. Description of portrait details: "Wear rain boots and umbrellas, and be sure to wear warm cotton-padded clothes". (Chekhov's The Man in the Condom) With this exaggerated language and comic sketch, the author reveals all kinds of tangible condoms, voluntary psychology and conformism in Rykov. This unique portrait description is humorous, funny, ironic and very impressive. Another example is a portrait in Kong Yiji: "He is tall, with a pale face, scars between wrinkles and a messy white beard. Although wearing a gown, it is dirty and torn. It seems that it has not been washed for more than ten years. " This description captures the typical details of "robes". Wearing a gown is a symbol of literati in the imperial examination era, while Kong Yiji's gown is "dirty and torn". The image of a poor and pedantic feudal intellectual appeared before our eyes, which shows that the feudal imperial examination fooled and persecuted intellectuals. 4. Description of the scene details: A description in "Medicine": "Old Shuan also looked over there, only seeing the backs of a bunch of people; They all stretched out very long, as if many ducks were held up by invisible hands. It was quiet for a while, as if there was some movement, which made people tremble. Bang, they all backed away, dispersed to the place where Old Bolt stood, and almost knocked him down. " This passage is about the killing of revolutionary Yu Xia, and those bored people are craning their necks to appreciate it, just like a group of "ducks", lifelike, and a metaphor shows the numbness and unconsciousness of the people. "Sour plum soup drips down the table like a slow night leak-one drop, one drop ... one more, two more ... one year, one hundred years. What a long and silent moment. Qiao Qi stood with her head in her arms, and suddenly turned around and went upstairs, carrying her skirt. She was impatient and in a hurry, stumbling and stumbling, and kept bumping into the dark green powder wall, and the green coat of the Buddha was stained with a large piece of pale ash. ....................................................................................................................................................... The upper corner of the ........................... glass window faintly reflected the shadow of a policeman shrinking in the alley, swinging his arm and strolling over, and a rickshaw quietly ran over the policeman. The child tucked the robe into his trousers and kicked the ball all the way over the edge of the glass. The green postman rode a bicycle and copied it on the policeman. "(Zhang Ailing's" The Golden Lock ") describes the complex feelings of Qiao Qi's sadness, despair, flustered and hard to give up. Lee Joon once said, "There is no work of art without details. True detail description is an important means to shape characters and achieve typicality. " Therefore, in the article, in order to make the characters more vivid and the works more appealing, we should learn to describe the details, so that writers can see the true colors of people and the scenery can give people real feelings. 1, true point-in line with the logic of life. Details come from life, and detailed descriptions must truly reproduce life. This "truth" is not necessarily a fact that once existed, but it must be a fact that will exist. Some students wrote that my father, a fisherman, came back from fishing in the sea and was in a hurry to "sharpen his knife in the sea" and prepare to make fish soup for me. The author intended to show his father's sincerity, but this detail was distorted. The sea water is salty, and it will rust when splashed on the knife. It leads to a great discount on fatherly love and even doubts its authenticity. This example tells us that we must observe life carefully. Respect the reality of objective life and never imagine it out of thin air. This is the basis for the correct use of detail description. 2, unique point-pay attention to the personality of the characters. Detail description serves to shape the characters and express the theme, so we should choose the details that can best express the theme and the characters, especially the small moves unique to the characters. For example, the article "Agreement" writes that children will meet two old people who can't speak and have difficulty in moving. The author doesn't write about old people greeting each other, hugging each other warmly, and talking with them in detail, because these details are common in people who can move freely and don't belong to dying old people. The article wrote: "The children are constantly detailing the recent situation of their father's illness. But the two old people didn't say a word, and their four hands were tightly held together. From meeting to breaking up, they have been squatting for a long time. " "Four hands clasped together", with highly personalized details, vividly shows the deep feelings between the elderly who have difficulty in moving and speaking, and arouses readers' infinite association and emotion. 3. Be careful-leave vivid fragments. Since detail description plays an irreplaceable role in characters, plots and themes, we should not downplay it in writing, but elaborate it in detail to convey its charm. Only in this way, the details can be deeply rooted in people's hearts and play the greatest role. Taking the details of "crouching down to pick up the paper" on a piece of white paper as an example, the author not only ignored the sentence "Han Lin hastily picked up the white paper on the ground", but showed the whole process of "crouching down", "picking up", "flapping and blowing", "stretching" and "picking up" in detail, vividly reappearing the movements of the characters and receiving my humble opinion. A good detail description must be useful, true and typical. It must express the mental outlook of the characters and deepen the theme of the article. It must conform to the personality characteristics of the characters and the reality of real life, and should best highlight the personality characteristics of the characters. In our daily study and life, we should pay more attention, observe more, think more and ponder more: what are the details, what are the details, and what details are used to express typical personality and psychology. Only thick accumulation can thin hair; Only habits can be natural, details can be used seamlessly, and articles can be natural and vivid. Details are the notes of a magnificent movement, a sentence of a masterpiece, a spray in a huge wave, and a stone on a high mountain in Wan Ren. A drop of water can reflect the brilliance of the sun. Appreciate the details, examine the details, and you will find that small details have infinite charm. Ideas and Reference Topic: So what is the description of the details? The so-called details are tiny links (one of many interrelated things) or plots (changes and processes of things); Description is to describe and imitate the specific (detailed) state of things. In short, detail description is a delicate description of the basic unit of things, such as the subtle description of people's every move, the specific links of things' development and the tiny objects in the environment. The main function of detail description is to portray characters and shape their images. Vivid details are like human cells. Without them, people will lose their lives. Without details, the characters lose their flesh and blood. The type of detail description. Detailed description of character type 1. Description of language details: In Gui Youguang's Ling Xuan Zhi, the old woman recalled her mother's story: every time she said Yu Yue, "Somewhere, my mother is here." Yu added, "Your sister is crying in my arms; Mother locked the door with her finger and said,' My son is cold and hungry', and I responded from outside the board ... "In retrospect, the language is vivid, and it is no wonder that" the words are not finished, and the tears are still unfinished ".Readers will naturally be moved by the warm friendship here. 2 action details description: ... The black man grabbed the lantern, tore off the paper cover, wrapped the steamed bread and stuffed the old bolt; Grab the foreign currency in one hand, pinch it, and turn around and leave. (Lu Xun's medicine) The author describes Uncle Kang's action of withdrawing money, and uses verbs such as "grab", "pull" and "jam" to accurately describe the rudeness and fierceness of his action. Verbs such as "grasping" and "pinching" reflect his proficiency in collecting and counting money, and vividly depict Uncle Kang's greedy and extortionate face. (3) Description of expression details: For example, in an expression in Kong Yiji, they went on to say, "Why can't you even get half a scholar?" Kong Yiji immediately a face of depression, face was full of gray. Kong Yiji deeply cherished the secret pain of losing the imperial examination. Unfortunately, this dull pain was poked by others, and his poor self-esteem fell. The expression here vividly depicts the spasm and struggle when his inner pain is punctured. Second, the specific link of the development of things In Mr. Lu Xun's "The True Story of Ah Q", there is a detailed description of the pre-punishment of Ah Q: "When it was time to draw a circle, as soon as the hand holding the pen shook, the man laid the paper on the ground, and Ah Q fell down and tried to draw a circle. Afraid of being laughed at, he decided to draw a circle, but the damn pen was not only heavy, but also disobedient. It just shook and almost closed, but shrugged its shoulders and turned into a melon seed. " This behavior link concretely, vividly and vividly reflects Ah Q's personality characteristics-until now, he still abides by the "spiritual victory law" of self-deception. When people read the detailed description of this link, who doesn't think Ah Q is ridiculous, sad and pitiful, and who can't have the psychology of "grieving and resenting his misfortune"? Who can't further ponder the people's bad habits? 3. Small objects in the environment There is a passage in a novel: plows, hoes and other agricultural tools are piled up in the barn, neatly leaning against the earth wall, just like the shape of a row of people. Rust smells from them. This is my barn, a dark and unfathomable space. Grandma's spinning wheel is still hanging in mid-air, and thin cobwebs are formed around the wheels and leaves. Romance regards the spinning wheel as a giant spider, always looking down on people's heads. As the sunshine on enough paper fades, all the sundry farm tools disappear, leaving only a vague outline. You look like a row of people. It's getting dark The desire for romance strikes again. He ran to the door and pushed open the wooden door desperately. He heard the crash of two big locks, and the door was locked by his father and could not be pushed open. "Let me out. I won't steal buns to eat! " This passage sets up an environmental space, which is an unfathomable barn. In this environmental space, the author did not use pen power on average, but grabbed a tiny object: grandma's spinning wheel. Why only write about the existence of spinning wheels? From the text, we can easily find that this is to set off the romantic inner anxiety and great helplessness of the protagonist. Skills of detail description Since detail description is very important, how to describe it? I think we can proceed from the following angles. Rhetorical methods: In order to impress readers, we often use colorful methods to enhance the expression effect in detail description. Writers often use exaggeration, metaphor and repetition. This rhetorical device embodies the author's ability of association and imagination. For example, there is such a description in Lu Xun's Medicine: "Old Shuan also looked over there and saw only a group of people's backs and necks stretched out very long, as if many ducks were pinched by invisible hands and lifted up." This detail vividly describes a group of numb and unconscious people watching the executioner kill the revolutionaries coldly. Vivid metaphor, when their compatriots were killed, people were indifferent, just like watching a street farce that had nothing to do with themselves, which made people feel sad and angry. Moreover, the author's strong resentment, grief for his misfortune and anger at his indisputable burning feelings are also vividly expressed through this detail. Punctuation: Lu Xun's novel "Hometown" created a typical image of a simple farmer who was deeply exploited and oppressed-moistening the soil. In the description of language details of the leap soil, the novel skillfully uses punctuation marks to show the changes of the leap soil in the past 20 years. There are six sentences, including nine ellipses, and two places are particularly impressive: (1) Seeing "I", "Runtu" became respectful and clearly shouted "Sir!" "(2) When I asked him about his situation," he just shook his head and said,' It's hard. The sixth child will help, but he is always hungry ... it is not peaceful ... money is needed everywhere, there are no rules ... and the harvest is not good' ". The first sentence says, "Sir! "Destroyed their simple friendship in the past and the emotional communication between them", and a sad and thick barrier appeared. "An ellipsis truly and delicately shows the regrettable contradictions, painful psychology and sad changes. The second sentence is obviously about the social roots of the personality change of Runtu. The ellipsis indicates that his voice is low and intermittent, and he has the pain of not telling the truth. It is "shortage, cruelty, soldiers, bandits, officials and gentry" that tortured him into a "puppet" and made him go to the abyss of numbness and dullness. In this ellipsis, the blood and tears soaked in the leap soil contain countless bitterness and sadness of life. ③ Word selection: Flaubert, a great literary master, said when teaching his student Mo Bosang, "No matter what you describe, there is only one most appropriate noun to explain it; There is only one most suitable verb to give it movement; There is only one most appropriate adjective to distinguish its nature. You must keep thinking until you find the right nouns, verbs and adjectives. You can't be satisfied with the sameness, you can't escape the difficulties, you can perfunctory with specious sentences. "It is the responsibility of every author to choose the most appropriate words. However, the words often used in detail description are expressive verbs and adjectives that describe situations and states. Sun Li wrote in Lotus Lake: When I heard that my husband was going to the team, the woman's finger shook and thought that Mei Wei had cut her hand. She put a finger in her mouth and took a drag. The author accurately, meticulously and vividly wrote the rich, complicated and subtle emotional world and its subtle psychological changes after Shuisao learned that her husband was going to be a soldier tomorrow. The image of a young woman who cares about her husband and is considerate to him, but deeply understands the righteousness and takes care of the overall situation. ④ Use props: We will never forget the coat worn by Leo ChuMilov in Chekhov's novel The Chameleon. The novel describes the military coat four times, which is a "prop" carefully designed by the author to express the inner world of the characters. At the beginning of the novel, "Inspector Ralph wears a new military coat ... and walks across the market square". The new military coat clearly shows that he has just come to power, and this dress has undoubtedly become a tool for him to show off and scare people. When he wanted to punish the "bastard" who let the dog run around, he heard that "this seems to be General Xi Gallov's dog" and immediately changed his face: "General Xi Gallov! Yelinder, help me take off my coat. "Later, when he said that he would punish the dog owner, he suddenly heard that the dog belonged to the general's family, and he changed again:" Oh! ..... Brother shouted, put on your coat for me ... It seems windy ... "Here, the coat was" taken off "and" put on ",vividly depicting Ralph's embarrassing situation of covering up his guilty conscience and timidity, bullying his superiors and bullying his subordinates. The last time he wrote a coat was at the end of the novel. When he was sure it was the general's dog and scolded the jeweler, he "wrapped his coat tightly, then crossed the market square and left". The chameleon returned to his swagger. This repetitive description vividly depicts the character of the czar's lackeys. Note that details are required 1. Select typical details. Typical details should be representative and general, which can deeply reflect the theme. 2. Careful observation of the details of things When describing people, we must grasp the different personality characteristics of the characters. Because everyone's personality is different, the way of speaking and doing things will be different. What we have to do is to observe and accumulate carefully. When describing scenery and objects with detail description, we should grasp the characteristics and changes of scenery. 3. Obeying the center needs detailed description, which is a way to see the big from the small. Although the details are light in weight, they are large in capacity. When we choose the details, we should start with the details, see the big from the small, and let the small details reflect people's ideological situation and social outlook. 4. To reflect the truth, the so-called truth means that the description of details can accurately and vividly reflect the characteristics of people in real life. By reflecting the general and the whole picture individually, the essence is revealed through phenomena. For example, Zhu Ziqing's description of his father's struggling movements when climbing the platform in "The Back", such as climbing, shrinking, leaning and other verbs, highlights the double psychological burden of his father regardless of family changes and his own closure and gives me selfless love. This kind of love is so subtle and profound that every reader is moved by it. In short, although the details are very small, its role should not be underestimated. Good detail description can make the characters different and enhance the authenticity, vividness and appeal of the content. Detail description is a small link in the scene, without which there would be no scene; It is a bright pearl in the plot. Without it, the plot will not be coherent and glamorous.