550 words: The War between Naughty and Lobster.

Title: The War between Scampy and Lobster

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This essay is a 550-word essay about the third grade of primary school. The title is "The War between Scampy and Lobster". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. "Naughty" is a black and white puppy that my grandfather just brought from a friend's house. Because it often drags my shoes around so that I can't find them, I named it "Scampy". I brought lobster from my aunt's house and kept it in a fish tank. It is dark red, very beautiful and my baby. I went home from school the day before yesterday, and I went to see my lobster. The lobster is not in my nest, so I'll go and find it. I found lobster and naughty in a corner of the garden. You stare at me, and I stare at you as if to eat each other. I saw naughty sniffing lobsters. The lobster immediately caught Scampy with sharp pliers. "Scampy" flashed by and caught the lobster with his claws. The lobster stood up and clamped the naughty paw with pliers. After several battles, the outcome is inseparable. Suddenly, I saw the lobster attack, and the naughty paw was bitten by the lobster and shed a little blood. The naughty boy screamed with pain and ran away with his tail between his legs. My lobster is really amazing!

Teacher's comment: The author introduces Scampy and Lobster first, so that readers can have a preliminary understanding of them. Then the little author tells interesting stories between them, which fully shows their cuteness and fun. The little author described the scene of their fight as particularly interesting, and described their movements and expressions in detail. For example, "I found lobster and naughty in a corner of the garden, and you stared at me, and I stared at you as if to eat each other." This detail is well described. This article is interesting, well-structured and vivid. If only there were no clerical errors!

"Naughty is a black and white puppy that my grandfather just brought from a friend's house." The word "meet" was changed to "alternate". Change "as if to eat each other" to "as if to eat each other". The word "de" in "Naughty" was changed to "de". (Master China: Teacher Wang) 2010-5-2418: 58: 00