Third-grade poetry rewriting composition materials

1. Composition adapted from ancient poetry. In the third grade, I changed Qingpingle Village to a composition, hoping to help * * *

A clear stream gurgles around this small village all year round. Both sides of the stream are covered with green grass and lotus leaves. Lotus leaves are squeezed like big green disks. A breeze blew gently, and the lotus leaves danced. Look, a tall and graceful figure is reflected in the stream. Who's that? It turned out to be a big cypress tree in front of the stream! Next to the cypress tree, a small hut, vines climbed to the roof and made a lot of big pumpkins. Behind the house is a lush pine forest. Have a look, there are also a large area of rice seedlings!

In the room, white-haired grandparents are whispering through wine. Grandpa smiled and said to grandma, "You are getting younger and more beautiful!" " Hearing this, the old woman threw away her coke and said, "Don't talk about it." Did you do something wrong today and come back to please me? "

At this time, the sun is already high in the sky.

The eldest son is very diligent and grows beans in the fields by the stream. The eldest son looked at the newly sprouted seedlings, shook his head and said happily, "This year must be a bumper harvest. In autumn, I want to surprise my parents and younger brothers! "

The second son is sitting under the big cypress tree knitting a chicken coop! While knitting, he thought, when the chicken coop is built, the rooster can move in. This is their safe and comfortable home!

The youngest son was lying on the stream peeling lotus leaves and eating them, muttering, "I want to bring delicious food to my parents and brothers!" " "Look, he is busy!

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This is a rewrite of Country House.

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2. About the composition of ancient poetry I like ancient poetry in the third grade.

When I was young, I was often immersed in the rhythm of ancient poetry. Every night, listening to the ancient poems played by the tape recorder, accompanied by cicadas singing outside the window, a breeze blows, and I feel unprecedented happiness.

Accompanied by ancient poetry, my poetic life has cultivated a strong pastoral. The first ancient poem I can recite is "Chanting Willow".

"Jasper is dressed as a tree and hung with 10,000 green silk tapestries." I asked my father what "green silk tapestries" meant. Father said that the "green silk tapestry" is a wicker hanging down like a ribbon, just like a green bow tied on my sister's head. This is a "green silk tapestry". Oh, I see. I memorized them one by one, read many poems about spring, and said, "The sun is setting, and the flowers and plants are fragrant in the spring breeze. It's beautiful.

Mud melts into swallows, sand warms Yuanyang to sleep. "This poem shows us that the sun shines in spring, the mountains and rivers are beautiful, and the spring breeze brings flowers and plants fragrance. Spring returns to the earth, the soil is soft, swallows fly around to build nests, and Yuanyang falls asleep in the warm sand. This must be a very sweet spring scene! " Miss Huang faces the river in front of the tower, and she is lazy and sleepy in spring. "

This poem is like taking us to Miss Huang's tower, watching the surging river flow eastward, and the worries in our hearts go with it. I feel lazy and sleepy when the spring breeze blows. I understand what people often say: "Spring is sleepy and autumn is lacking." Wang Anshi, a poet in the Song Dynasty, wrote "When will the bright moon shine on me", and Zhu, a poet in the Southern Song Dynasty, wrote "Spring Day". They are also writing about the spring breeze, and the poets have mixed feelings, reflecting the different experiences and social environment of the two poets at that time and feeling the patriotic feelings of the poets.

Ancient poetry not only painted my life green, but also made my soul soar. I have been involved in tang style's poems for thousands of years. Looking at the rolling clouds in the sky and listening to the fishing songs of the sea and sky, I feel the grandeur of the desert beyond the Great Wall. Ancient poetry makes my life colorful! I like ancient poems.

3. Rewrite the poem "Mistakes" into a composition facing mistakes.

"The biggest failure is unconscious failure." This is a sentence that Carlisle said, which inspired me a lot.

I remember it was a morning in the third grade, and it was our turn to be on duty. I want to steal some laziness, and I'm a little late. I walked slowly all the way. It was already 7: 55 when I came to school, and the students were already sitting in the class to make preparations before class. I'm coming to class, and it will start soon. After the teacher came, our team leader immediately told the teacher that I didn't come to sweep the floor today. The teacher asked me not to sweep the floor all day tomorrow morning, and I casually agreed.

The next morning, I finished my step, and it spread to the teacher like wings. The teacher called me into the office and talked for a long time. First of all, I was still standing in the office when suddenly she said, "Why don't you always sweep the floor?" I held my head high without saying a word. "I hope you can correct your mistakes, be a good boy in the teacher's heart and try to be a brand-new yourself." Finally, I was moved by the teacher's poetic language. For the next few days, I went to the duty school on time every day. In order to make up for my previous mistakes, I was responsible for sweeping the floor and taking out the garbage alone. At this moment, the teacher came. When he saw me working so hard, the teacher smiled. He said, "mistakes are inevitable, but don't repeat them." I nodded in agreement.

I looked at the teacher's smile and felt sweeter than eating honey. I was so happy that I secretly made up my mind to get rid of my laziness and set a good example for the students.

We should be brave enough to face our mistakes; Mistakes are a compulsory course in life, and only when you understand them can you mature. I hope everyone can face and overcome mistakes like me and be a good boy who dares to face mistakes.

4. adapt the ancient poetry of the third year and the next semester into a short story about children fishing.

A child with unkempt hair and immature face is learning to fish by the river. He is sitting sideways in the grass, and his shadow is set off by weeds. Hearing the voice of passers-by, the child waved, afraid to disturb the fish and dare not respond to passers-by.

One day, it was sunny and sunny. What a good day for fishing! But Gao Wa's father never wanted Gao Wa to go fishing. After breakfast, my father went on business trip. The puppy was so happy that he took out his father's fishing rod, fishing line and fishing line and ran excitedly to the river.

There are many adults fishing by the river! Baby dog is also ready to go fishing, but she thinks, "Oh, no, I can't fish yet!" " ""You can learn from adults! " "But what if they are joking!" Gao Wa suddenly saw a big stone covered with tall weeds. The big stone is covered with moss. Gao Wa thought, I can go fishing there! So the dog doll sat on the big stone, and the tall weeds covered most of his body.

Doug Wei saw how adult fish caught fish from weeds. They threw the line, and Dogway threw the line together. But the dog's line can't be thrown far He threw it again and again, again and again, and the line was always by the river! But not discouraged, he picked up the fishing line again, hung up the earthworm and tried his best to suck the milk. This throw is really far away.

The dog sat on the stone and looked at his fishing rod quietly. After a while, several small bubbles appeared beside the fishing line. Is this a bubble spit by fish? The baby dog was fascinated. Suddenly, Daowei heard a voice. He looked up and saw an uncle on the road shouting to him, "Little brother, how to get to Liangjiacun?"

Isn't Liangjia Village nearby! Afraid that he would scare the fish away as soon as he made a noise, the dog pretended not to hear and looked down at his fishing rod.

A few seconds later, the sound came again, and it was at least ten times higher than before. "Little brother, tell me quickly, I'm in a hurry!" "

Doug Wei thought to himself, "You are in a hurry, and I am in a hurry! Uncle, please don't ask me, ask someone else! My fish are almost scared away by you! " Dao Wei waved to his uncle, ignored him and continued to look at his fishing rod.

5. The composition rewrites the ancient poem "The Return of the Native" [The composition rewrites the ancient poem "The Return of the Native"] At sunset, a long field path is covered with green crops at a glance, and the composition rewrites the ancient poem "The Return of the Native".

I'm finally back! He Zhangzhi said excitedly that a little boy came up to him and asked him, Grandpa, where are you from? He Zhangzhi replied with a smile: My hometown is here. I went to Dongcheng when I was young, and I didn't come back until I was old. The boy asked again, so, grandpa, are you going back to Dongcheng? He said: no, no, I will live here in the future and never go back to Dongcheng. Grandpa, how long have you been in Dongcheng? He said to Zhang Zhi: Almost 40 years. The little boy said: 40 years! He Zhangzhi said: I have been thinking about my hometown every day for 40 years. Today I finally came back. Grandpa, you must be tired after such a long walk. Come to my house and have a rest, will you? He said to him: Ha ha, yes, the composition "Writing and Rewriting Ancient Poetry" in the fourth grade of primary school is a hometown couplet. The little boy added, you must have many interesting stories, right? Tell me, will you? All right! He said to Zhang Zhi.

They walked and laughed and disappeared into the beautiful sunset. ...

Fourth grade of dehui city Experimental Primary School: Liu Silin

6. Story materials compiled by ancient poetry in the third grade 1: At the end of the Qin Dynasty, there was chaos in the world.

After years of fighting, Liu Bang came from behind, defeated Xiang Yu and won the world. But a few days later, Ying Bu, the king of Huainan, rebelled and the military situation was extremely prosperous. Liu bang had to go out personally.

On the way back to the victorious dynasty, Liu Bang returned to his hometown Pei County and spent more than ten days catching up with his former friends and neighbors. Once at a lively banquet, thinking of the safety of the world, Liu Bang sang sadly: The wind rises in Yunfei, and Jia Wei returns to the sea.

Andrew, soldiers are always looking! "The wind is surging" is a metaphor for the chaos in the world, and sometimes it refers to touching the scene. (Excerpted from "Han Shu O Gao Di Ji") Material 2: Gong Zizhen, born in Renhe, Zhejiang (now Hangzhou) in the late Qianlong period of the Qing Dynasty.

During Gong Zizhen's period, the Qing Dynasty began to decline rapidly, the rich and the poor were divided, and social problems and crises continued. Gong Zizhen advocates that immigrants should open up wasteland in Xinjiang, develop the western economy and consolidate the border defense (proposal on setting up a western region brigade). Write to Lin Zexu, hoping to ban opium.

In the 19th year of Daoguang, on the eve of the Opium War, Gong Zizhen had to leave Beijing for the south because he offended Zhang Mu, the minister of military affairs. When Gong Zizhen passed by Zhenjiang in the south, he saw a sea of people in the street, which was very lively: people were carrying the Jade Emperor, Fengshen and Raytheon to worship devoutly.

At this time, someone recognized Gong Zizhen. A Taoist priest immediately asked Gong Zizhen to write a eulogy. Gong Zizhen wrote: "Kyushu is furious, and thousands of horses learn from sadness; I advise God to cheer up and not stick to certain norms to belittle more people.

It's sad that China is alive only by thunderous changes. I hope God will cheer up again, don't stick to the rules and give us useful talents. )

"eclectic" means not limited to one specification or way. (From Jihai Miscellaneous Poems) Material 3: After a long and arduous struggle, Li Longji, Emperor Xuanzong of the Tang Dynasty, with the assistance of a large number of good ministers and sages such as Yao Chong and Song Jing, created a prosperous period of 30 years in the first century-the world was peaceful, the people were happy, and they came to Korea from all directions.

However, after entering the Tianbao period, Emperor Xuanzong of the Tang Dynasty began to be content with pleasure, regardless of state affairs, and reused treacherous officials such as Li and Yang. At the same time, because of his great ambition, he was keen on the policy of expanding the territory and militarising the army, and the Tang Dynasty set up our time and stationed heavy troops in the border areas. Later, the number of our army and border guards increased.

By the first year of Tianbao, our envoys had increased to 10, and our army had increased to 490,000. The huge number of troops consumes a lot of financial and material resources of the country, and there are hidden concerns in society. Du Fu was deeply worried about the fate of the country when he saw the recruits of "Until the Dust Settles Outside Chang 'an Bridge" going to the front line and his parents and wife "running after you, crying and pulling your sleeve". He wrote: the bow should be used as strength and the arrow as length; Shooters should shoot horses, and leaders should catch their leaders.

There is a limit to killing people, and all countries have national boundaries. If you can invade the mausoleum, how can you kill more? However, because people speak softly, no one listens to him.

A few years later, the "An Shi Rebellion" broke out, and the Tang Dynasty almost collapsed, and the Tang Dynasty went into decline. "Catch the thief first, catch the king first" is to catch the key first.

(Excerpted from the sixth part of Frontier Fortress) Material 4: In the thirteenth year of Jian 'an of Emperor Xian of Han Dynasty, Sun Quan and Liu Bei joined hands to defeat the powerful Cao Cao in Chibi by fire attack, which laid a tripartite confrontation situation among the three countries. More than 600 years later, Du Mu of the Tang Dynasty, walking on this ancient battlefield, has not felt the tension of the coming war.

The poet lamented that time played tricks on people and wrote this poem "Red Cliff": If you don't want to sell sand and iron, you should learn from the past. If Dongfeng doesn't go with Zhou Lang, the copper finches on the Second Bridge will sell well in spring.

"Breaking the halberd and sinking the sand" describes a disastrous failure. (From Du Mu's Red Cliff) Material 5: Lu You (A.D.1125-1210), a patriotic poet in the Southern Song Dynasty.

Lu You was repeatedly attacked by the pacifists because he insisted on resisting gold. In 1 166, 42-year-old Lu You was dismissed from office.

Having no choice but to serve the country, Lu You returned to his hometown of Yin Shan (now Shaoxing, Zhejiang) full of grief and indignation. He shut himself up at home reading all day, often sitting alone in the blue light until late at night.

In April of the following year, gongs and drums were drummed everywhere in the countryside to prepare for the Spring Festival Society (the day to worship the land god), and there was a happy atmosphere. Lu You suddenly wanted to visit the Western Hills twenty miles away.

So he set off with a cane. Walking, the mountain road gradually circled.

After walking for more than an hour, the crowd gradually became scarce. When he climbed a slope and looked around, the mountain in front was heavy and the road was broken, as if he could not walk any further.

Lu you is interested and refuses to look back. He walked dozens of steps along the hillside and turned the corner of the mountain. Suddenly, an empty valley appeared not far ahead, and a small village was hidden in the green Liu Honghua, just like the legendary Peach Blossom Garden. Lu You was very happy and walked into this small village. Villagers with simple clothes and pure temperament entertain guests with their own wine.

With this unforgettable experience and feeling, Lu You cheered up again. I wrote "A Tour of Shanxi Village": Don't laugh at the farmers' wine, leave enough chickens and dolphins in good years.

There is no way to go because of the winding water flow in the mountains, and a mountain village suddenly appears in the willow-green flower bay. The day of playing flute and drums is approaching, and the villagers are still dressed simply.

In the future, if you can go out in the moonlight, I will knock on your door at any time with my cane. "The future is bright" means that the stalemate has suddenly turned for the better.

(From Lu You's poem "Traveling to Shanxi Village") Material 6: Liu Yuxi (772-842), a poet in the Tang Dynasty. Influenced by Wang's "Yongzhen Innovation", he was demoted to Sima of Langzhou (Changzhou, Hunan) in 805.

Nine years later, Liu Yuxi, who was in his forties, was recalled to Chang 'an. I heard that the thousands of peach blossoms in Xuanduguan were beautiful, so I went to watch them with my friends and wrote a poem entitled "Wandering in Xuanduguan": "The world of mortals is full of flowers, and people can't help but return when they see them.

There are thousands of peach trees in the Xuanmiao Temple, all of which were planted after I was exiled to Beijing. "Because of this poem, he was demoted to Bozhou (Zunyi, Guizhou) as a secretariat, later changed to Lianzhou (Lianxian, Guangdong) as a secretariat, and transferred to Kuikui (Fengjie, Sichuan) and Hezhou (Hexian, Anhui), and later was dismissed.

Fourteen years later, Liu Yuxi was recalled to Chang 'an again. At that time, the excitement in Du Xuan was gone: thousands of peach blossoms were gone, only a few cauliflowers on the moss were swaying in the spring breeze.

The poet was filled with emotion and wrote the first poem "Visit Du Xuanguan again": "A hundred acres of courtyards are half covered with moss, and peach blossoms are all in bloom. Where does Taoism return? Liu Lang came again today! " "Former willow waves" means that people will come again after they leave.

Material 7: Qian Kang and Miracle were both monks in the Tang Dynasty. When Miracle was in Daolin Temple in Xiangxi, Qian Kang called on him.

The master said, "My master associates with people who write poems.

7. Beyond the mountain, from poetry to composition, more than 500 words are over there.

Li Wei is a rural child, and his hometown is a small mountain village surrounded by mountains. Li Wei was curious from an early age: What's over there?

Once, Li Lan asked his mother, "Mom, what do you think is over there?" Mom was cooking at that time and said, "It's the sea." "What's the sea like, Mom?" Li Lan asked again. "Oh, I don't know. Go out quickly and don't disturb mom's cooking. " Li Lan's mother said impatiently. What is the sea like? It is a mystery in Li Lan's mind, and the price of the answer starts from the third grade. When Li Lan knew that this beautiful place was the sea he wanted, he made up his mind to climb the highest mountain and see the beautiful sea tomorrow. That night, Li Lan stayed up all night excited, and he had been looking forward to the morning. I don't know how long it took, but it was slightly brighter. Li Lan quickly put on his shoes and ran outside, finally reaching the foot of the mountain. Li Lan took a deep breath. Looking forward to climbing to the top of the mountain, Li Wei stumbled all the way, because it was not bright enough to see the stones on the mountain and the trees hurt. But when Li Wei saw the other side of the mountain, Li Wei froze, because the other side of the mountain was still a mountain. Li Wei couldn't figure out why mom lied to her. Li Wei turned around in disappointment, just took a step, then squatted down and cried.

Li Wei learned from his teacher that if he wants to see the sea, he must study hard and rush out of one mountain after another. Since then, Li Wei has studied hard and achieved excellent results. Ten years later, Li Wei was admitted to a university in a coastal city. When the admission notice was sent to Li Wei, Li Wei knew that he could see the sea he loved. The first thing Li Wei did when he got there was to look at the sea. When Li Wei walked on the warm beach,

Don't doubt, as long as you have this belief and work hard for it, the sea is beyond the mountain!